Comments on community poems by Elsie
- Goodbye to the Cider Drinker (Elsie)
Thank you. This was harder to read than to write.....
January 22nd, 2018 14:41
- Why Can\'t I Slay the Dragon? (Elsie)
Thank you Tepo, I wrote this a long time ago. It wasn\'t until my daughter...
January 22nd, 2018 13:16
- Law of my Mind (FredPeyer)
Yes I often have an awesome thought, (well sometimes) or really good line...
January 7th, 2018 04:59
- Out of Body (FredPeyer)
it reminds me of an OBE I experienced some years ago. Definitely \'freed...
January 6th, 2018 21:50
- I am (FredPeyer)
I am glad orchidee told me what a saguaro is. I am definitely a tree. Love...
January 6th, 2018 21:42
- The last Day of the Year (FredPeyer)
I wish to feel more optimistic - I am sure it will come in time. But...
January 6th, 2018 21:38
- You wanna f**k Tonight? (FredPeyer)
ha ha ha, so funny, love the fact that you weren\'t sure about posting it;...
January 6th, 2018 21:25
- Unfulfilled Dreams (FredPeyer)
Oh my, I am actually crying. I have held myself back for so long yearning...
January 6th, 2018 21:08
- On the Bus (FredPeyer)
This is such an evocative story. Powerful in its simplicity. I am finding...
January 6th, 2018 21:02
- THEY SAY (Louis Gibbs)
Yes, it is, the PERFECT PRESENT. Simple effective writing. Lovely!
January 6th, 2018 20:56
- If you feel that the universe is not responding (Avigail)
This is where I am, sat at home, trying to reconnect after looking after...
January 6th, 2018 20:49
- Goodbye to the Cider Drinker (Elsie)
Thank you for the lovely comments. I have dabbled with poetry all my life,...
January 6th, 2018 10:21
