Comments on community poems by Parisab
- AN ODE OF GRATITUDE (Bobby O)
Sounds like a “serendipitous” breeze is navigating these gentle...
November 17th, 2023 21:46 - Upon Leaving One’s Shadow Behind (Neville)
Mirror, bread, diamond, gifts, are all the generous gifts of this poem....
November 9th, 2023 17:37 - I Want To Save Everyone (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
This poem definitely evokes strong emotions-not much to be foretold with...
November 9th, 2023 17:31 - Phobia (Pacifique Niyitanga)
Great imagery: after breathing so that the “story” of phobia and fear...
November 1st, 2023 20:02 - A Handful of Water (Neville)
Your poem creates one singular moment of beauty and brings attention to...
October 30th, 2023 00:20 - Oswald Garden (The Fife Wanderer)
intricate view of the place you visited in nature and beautifully...
October 30th, 2023 00:11 - Trick or Treat (The Fife Wanderer)
Charming and stylistic poem…
October 28th, 2023 17:21 - The Big Boy Dance (GeekSusie)
I like the tone of strength, accountability, and self reliance. Also that...
October 28th, 2023 17:20 - Will They Remember Me Well? (Thomas W Case)
The words and the pic shows that you are “leaving your legacy”
October 27th, 2023 17:36 - Blood Moon (Parisab)
Thank you for visiting an event from last year and things never went back...
October 27th, 2023 17:34 - Senryu 1 (Teddy.15)
It would be liberating to be as rich as a poet…
October 26th, 2023 19:20 - And All Before Our Awakening (Neville)
Neville it’s reassuring to know that you care so deeply, may you find...
October 26th, 2023 19:17 - The Birth of Art (Thomas W Case)
These words are magically mixed like alchemy…
October 26th, 2023 19:13 - The Ponder Of It All (Garth Rakumakoe)
Pondering is a free luxury until it is not …Very thoughtful words! These...
October 26th, 2023 19:07 - Analog Of The Brain (Thomas W Case)
Loved how you described technical hardware in such a soft manner…My...
October 26th, 2023 01:54
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