Comments on community poems by Parisab

• AWESTRUCK (Bobby O) Sublime description of your muse today-Great notice to her details, even...
  July 9th, 2023 12:44
• Twin Sisters (Kurt Philip Behm) Mystic quatrains of protest and doubt Truly admired this amalgam
  July 9th, 2023 12:24
• Prayers In Perils (Orchidee) Good write and spiritually uplifting as always
  July 8th, 2023 01:24
• ELIMINATE, ACCUMULATE , CELEBRATE (Bobby O) This trilogy is very special with rich and implicit meaning.
  July 8th, 2023 01:22
• What’s my niche? (EvenwheniLie) And now that’s a rap and grabbed my attention-on a different note I...
  July 6th, 2023 20:40
• Crazy bastard with a Gun (EvenwheniLie) It must have been hard practice to write this while imagining the...
  July 6th, 2023 00:47
• \"He Loves Me Not\" (Inkerbell) Great patience with the nuances of love and nature-good write …
  July 4th, 2023 15:55
• This is I (Parisab) LOL, knock em sideways, vs out, which would have been underwhelming-thanks...
  July 4th, 2023 08:38
• \"Crimson Symphony: A Ode to the Red Sunset\" (Ethan Mikel StAmour) I like your commitment to the meter and the rhyme in this piece-thanks for...
  July 4th, 2023 01:13
• When One is No Longer (Neville) I found the iteration of the word indeed very interesting in this...
  July 4th, 2023 01:08
• A powerful Stranger (Hollow Enigma) The mirror reflects us, doubled by cracks Me and the witch wink, as the...
  July 4th, 2023 00:43
• Let the soul glow (Poetic Dan) Capturing the soul of childhood and the joy and wonder they inspire…...
  July 3rd, 2023 10:49
• A New Beginning ! (Sangee) Nature described vividly with panache…
  July 3rd, 2023 10:39
• Only You Quench my Thirst (Parisab) Cheers to the bruises that yielded to the right blend to savor at...
  July 3rd, 2023 03:23
• Lush II (Eugene S.) I stumbled upon this-the last stanza is especially charming! Artistic and...
  July 2nd, 2023 00:14
• Pomegranate (Parisab) Thank you for your reaction with the senses and your sophisticated...
  July 1st, 2023 17:23
• Jazz State Of Mind (Garth Rakumakoe) I’m a “jazz child” and I won’t apologize…thank you for the...
  July 1st, 2023 16:19
• Only You Quench my Thirst (Parisab) Salute! May it quench your soul….
  July 1st, 2023 15:20
• Belligerent Bullies On The School Bus (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I like the reference to the Lost Boys of the Peter Pan-Alas some never...
  July 1st, 2023 01:07
• When the Limelight Sucks (Neville) Are channeling Taylor Swift? I’m sure that she is lost cause for fame-or...
  July 1st, 2023 01:04
• SAM COOKE STILL NO. 1 (Bobby O) Thank you for being a serious patron of his memory-All I know is that he...
  July 1st, 2023 00:16
• Last like Jesus (Tayama) He needs no proof to exist and his love is unconditional, even if in...
  June 30th, 2023 21:52
• When Enough Is Enough (Amber D. Petty Patrick) ‘Because now is all I know’ a great read to decide when enough is...
  June 30th, 2023 21:31
• Where is my cat? (Ok Waleed) Did you name your cat after Erica Badu? I hope that you found her…
  June 30th, 2023 21:28
• Marking The Secrets (Kurt Philip Behm) Absence of love bears hate… Such alarming content told so succinctly and...
  June 26th, 2023 21:26
• The Neighbor (CaitlinKCarter) I see the dark character described in a comical manner, skillfully. Fun...
  June 26th, 2023 21:17
• G.R.O.E.L.A.(Groela) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) FUNtastic !
  June 25th, 2023 13:39
• Longing for a Lasting Peace (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla) Beauty can grow from ashes in your powerful poetry…
  June 25th, 2023 12:16
• Midlife Rap (Parisab) So glad you visited and gave a shout out…I knew I could count on your...
  June 25th, 2023 02:14
• I KNEW IT WOULD BE NEVER (Bobby O) This robot is artificial since your intelligence is not-‘design function...
  June 25th, 2023 01:49
• Ferry man (Peto) I truly enjoy the contrast between the tone and the content! Tender it...
  June 25th, 2023 01:28
• Good Morning (Peter Gates) Great letter to remind us to serenade every dawn…
  June 23rd, 2023 23:48
• No Gardener Required (Neville) This poem is lush in language and succulent in capturing ones imagination....
  June 23rd, 2023 23:34
• Permit (Love-Me-Softly) It’s probably not your driving, but a reaction to their fear and...
  June 20th, 2023 01:45
• The Sins of Us (Parisab) Thank you for your kind attention and great insight!
  June 18th, 2023 23:23
• Haiku # 102 (Olaf Gatermann) Looks in great shape in German, good translation and meaning
  June 18th, 2023 07:54
• Similar Reflections (Mara \"Marzipan\") Good job describing the word figuratively and in literal imagery-
  June 18th, 2023 07:44
• By the Man above (Gary Edward Geraci) I see the humanity and desperation for hope in these most undesired and...
  June 17th, 2023 12:19
• Paths XIV (Eugene S.) using the frailty of the ‘individual within’ as a ‘A foundation on...
  June 17th, 2023 12:02
• Midlife Rap (Parisab) I tried to enter the sacred grounds of this art form with respect and what...
  June 17th, 2023 11:39
• N (Pacifique Niyitanga) Great metaphors portraying the conflict between the “Nasty Nonsense rain...
  June 17th, 2023 11:35
• POSTPARTUM SNEAK ATTACK (Bobby O) Very respectful and empathetic perspective from a third person point of...
  June 16th, 2023 21:36
• Midlife Rap (Parisab) Thanks for reading friend poet and appreciating my sincere attempt…
  June 16th, 2023 09:22
• Legacies Ending In Flames (50 Years Of Hip-Hop) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) We have to keep the flames alive: thanks for giving props to some of the...
  June 16th, 2023 09:14
• Midlife Rap (Parisab) Thanks for the reminder to keep it FUNtastic good friend and poet!
  June 16th, 2023 08:59
• A Daft Update (Orchidee) Light hearted yet scary-makes me want to put on a cat costume:))
  June 16th, 2023 08:57
• Tesla The Golem (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) Each of the characters you create come from a long story-always a fun...
  June 14th, 2023 11:57
• \"The haunted office\" ; 14 June, 2023 (Soman Ragavan) Really interesting concept and presentation!
  June 14th, 2023 11:53
• Azorica (Meheli Chatterjee) I can see your admiration of the world from the eyes of a scientist and...
  June 14th, 2023 11:50
• November 6th 2021 8:30pm (Love-Me-Softly) Thank you for sharing, the tone and the imagery of your poem is also bold...
  June 14th, 2023 11:44
• At Mars Hotel (Pacifique Niyitanga) I like your enigmatic style, please don’t let anyone to force you to...
  June 14th, 2023 11:39
• My Embrace (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Music in reliving our memories: enjoyed the musical and piano references,...
  June 12th, 2023 11:22
• At 10 pm (Pacifique Niyitanga) Few words instructing scenes to come alive: I like the vagueness:...
  June 12th, 2023 10:41
• Ahh! That first cup (Hzugman) Simple pleasures, no more
  June 12th, 2023 10:25
• Love Letter to God (Parisab) Thank you dear sir!
  June 4th, 2023 20:31
• No More Blues for These Tired Eyes (Neville) Your words have the gift of sight, May all your senses be right.
  June 3rd, 2023 00:02
• Justice System Cruelty (Love-Me-Softly) I’m afraid the Truth and the law may overlap but are not the same-I hope...
  June 2nd, 2023 07:19
• Forever Losses (Parisab) Thank you LB for never forgetting! Great to see your return and your...
  June 2nd, 2023 07:07
• Forever Losses (Parisab) Thank you for connecting with this poem’s emotions. I appreciate the...
  May 27th, 2023 22:23
• SUDDENLY AWKWARD (Bobby O) Writing about past impressions, like looking for footprints on the...
  May 26th, 2023 20:49
• Forever Losses (Parisab) I am grateful for your attention and acknowledgement of our veterans. I am...
  May 26th, 2023 15:07
• Forever Losses (Parisab) I will do so, sir-my father was a vet and so are some of my patients who...
  May 26th, 2023 12:42
• A Call for Ears (Rohan Regi) “A mind turning deaf to its own voice” great description of the...
  May 25th, 2023 02:01
• Shyless Rose (Fay Slimm.) And those shy roses have the sharpest thorns-my grand dame roses in the...
  May 25th, 2023 01:55
• On Memorial Day (Peter Gates) Deserving words for the heroes of the past and the future. Great read.
  May 25th, 2023 01:28
• FACING HARD TRUTH (Bobby O) Great and brave write-using intellectualized terms to serve one’s...
  May 21st, 2023 01:54
• BLACK DYNAMITE (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I find the genre so appealing-the black independent movies made light (and...
  May 21st, 2023 01:46
• Love Potion No.19 (Parisab) Thank you and Stay thirsty poet friend…
  May 21st, 2023 01:36
• Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain (Parisab) Thank you for the close read poet friend-The texts gathered the final days...
  May 21st, 2023 01:31
• Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain (Parisab) Thank you for your attention to the poem, as well as your investment...
  May 20th, 2023 21:48
• Woke (Neville) The poem was engaging and I actually wished for the sun coming out in the...
  May 20th, 2023 17:48
• Embracing Life\'s Dance (Muhammad Nasrullah Khan) Beautiful job describing life to a woman in a creative way…
  May 20th, 2023 17:44
• Sins to Pardon (Sorenbarrett) Beautiful twist to an ancient story…
  May 20th, 2023 17:41
• iv. (Verona) So true!
  May 20th, 2023 17:39
• Miraculous (Gary Edward Geraci) Beautiful spin to a sacred story…
  May 20th, 2023 17:38
• The Most Valuable Treasure (J.Edse) I can sense the attention to detail and connecting it to the mystery of...
  May 20th, 2023 17:37
• Just Around The Corner (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla) The poem never stops dreaming and hoping, even under unpleasant and dire...
  May 16th, 2023 13:10
• Adventure at the Airport (Reflections Corporate Training Hub) You immerse the reader into the adventure-good inspiration for those who...
  May 16th, 2023 13:06
• CLICHE’ NO LONGER (Bobby O) ‘When again love visits,Thank God that glorious day This story then...
  May 16th, 2023 01:54
• Redefining (Fay Slimm.) Both the background and foreground are “unruffled” and calming-the...
  May 16th, 2023 01:42
• Mantis Praying (Neville) For sure women can also be violent and dangerous, but interestingly in...
  May 15th, 2023 02:01
• 3 NERDS WALKED INTO A V BAR (Bobby O) You taught them in the true southern gentlemanly fashion, sir.
  May 12th, 2023 14:10
• Hannah the Hellion (MendedFences27) Captivating narrative poetry which normally doesn’t sustain my...
  May 12th, 2023 14:05
• The bane to my existence (Eldian_Devil137) There is maturity in the words of silence. Your poem is received loud and...
  May 12th, 2023 11:12
• Uplifting Utterance (Orchidee) Joyous!
  May 12th, 2023 03:02
• Love Potion No.19 (Parisab) Thank you for your great power of observation and your elevated expertise...
  May 12th, 2023 01:54
• Bye Bye By Abby Rose wise (Abby1234) You will continue to write great poetry: if you keep your mind...
  May 11th, 2023 14:29
• New Deal (Kurt Philip Behm) ‘This roiling morbid funk’ describes the texture of this great poem-I...
  May 11th, 2023 14:19
• The Sins of Us (Parisab) Thank you. I’m looking forward to the literary exchange.
  May 11th, 2023 01:04
• Still Some Way to Go (Neville) I see this as complete, you responded and chose the direction of your...
  May 10th, 2023 14:10
• Camber Powered (Fay Slimm.) ‘Monotone minds by your own alchemic bosom’ I see you are enjoying...
  May 10th, 2023 11:27
• How Rare is This Love? (Accidental Poet) Your first love described…Thank you for sharing.
  May 10th, 2023 11:18
• Time Sojourned (Kurt Philip Behm) Moving freely through different ways of art, from lyrics to rhyme-It’s a...
  May 10th, 2023 11:15
• Fields (Joakim Bergen) Beautiful appreciation of the field of nature!
  May 10th, 2023 11:13
• FAITH (Bobby O) As once said first stanza is gifted by God
  May 10th, 2023 11:08
• 300 (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I also invite you to search for the images of Palace of Xerxes in...
  May 10th, 2023 03:14
• 300 (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Well written poem about a movie poet friend, but Speaking of Hollywood,...
  May 10th, 2023 02:55
• Practical Pursuits (Orchidee) “The God of peace sanctify you Spirit, soul, and body too” These...
  May 10th, 2023 00:23
• Eine Idylle (Olaf Gatermann) Thank you for the English translation, as the poet should translate their...
  May 10th, 2023 00:08
• Treading The Path Of Life (Bella Shepard) Let there be light! Great descriptive build up-I wonder if you find Mary...
  May 7th, 2023 15:36