Comments on community poems by Parisab

• Cake Walk Of Trees (Sunsetmet) So pretty, you can taste it… Thank you for your enchanting poem,
  August 3rd, 2023 08:03
• A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat (Neville) I just imagined a boy looking at a vintage circus post card…this poem...
  August 3rd, 2023 01:42
• Just a Dream I Had (Teddy.15) He may return to another magical piazza nearby! It must be the Italian...
  August 3rd, 2023 01:37
• Social Media Whore (Parisab) He he, the poem was definitely confrontational-but I’m glad that...
  August 2nd, 2023 22:35
• Social Media Whore (Parisab) Thank you for your read and I’m glad that this was thought provokingly...
  August 2nd, 2023 16:39
• Social Media Whore (Parisab) LOL Thank you!
  August 2nd, 2023 10:23
• Things (Peto) Chivalry in its truest form, in small and grand gestures-Great use of a...
  August 2nd, 2023 10:13
• The Perfect Painting (Teddy.15) You’ve painted another sweet picture! I love that you sound joyous while...
  August 2nd, 2023 02:48
• Awake At Six. (Goldfinch60) Be it ten or twelve I still wake up at six This poem sings like a...
  August 2nd, 2023 01:51
• These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather (Neville) The weather seems hazy and a bit shady-yet you still make it the most...
  August 2nd, 2023 01:48
• Neurodivergent (MommaBear23) ‘As though you are hugging my soul’ We are connected to our children...
  August 1st, 2023 22:35
• Is honesty the best policy in a cruel world? (Shruti14) It’s so good that you’re growing more kind, since niceness means...
  August 1st, 2023 22:07
• Tongue Spillage (Neville) I’ve never heard a masculine brand of annoyances to sound so...
  August 1st, 2023 22:03
• Mad Times of KP and I (Orchidee) How special that your muse changes, but you remain o’ so faithful :)
  August 1st, 2023 21:56
• B.E.A.U.T.Y.(Beauty) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) B R A V O
  August 1st, 2023 21:49
• JULY: A MOSAIC OF OPULENCE (Syed Hassan Aamir) Intricate write which painted an elaborate picture! May I invite you to...
  August 1st, 2023 21:47
• These times (Holly Anne) Great gesture to remind us never to stop caring for our first...
  August 1st, 2023 21:43
• Summer Feast (Parisab) Thank you #hotidris ! Means a lot from an awesome story teller, such as...
  August 1st, 2023 14:32
• QUIXOTE IMPOSSIBLE (Bobby O) “On companions that usually trust me” and then you have the period....
  July 30th, 2023 15:40
• In memory of Sinead O’Connor (L. B. Mek) Such gentle words of compassion for a restless soul at last flown to...
  July 30th, 2023 15:36
• Who Needs Foreplay .. When We Got Poetry (Neville) ‘Part way down and across some hypothetical empty...
  July 30th, 2023 15:30
• The three Eternal Knots of pain (Serene) The emotions in this poem speak of guilt and obligation-each person does...
  July 26th, 2023 21:43
• Only You Quench my Thirst (Parisab) Thank you for your beautiful comment and visiting
  July 26th, 2023 21:24
• Politricking (EvenwheniLie) This poem has my vote!
  July 26th, 2023 09:29
• Bless Me Father (Bobfallon) Amen! Please keep writing to aid an awakening-
  July 26th, 2023 09:24
• Commerce and Conscience (Harristotle) Indeed! Please keep writing on this timely theme-
  July 26th, 2023 09:22
• I Think it Only Fair to Suggest (Neville) Inventive to make the title be your first stanza-like the ambivalence in...
  July 26th, 2023 02:13
• Smooth talker (Peto) Such an in-depth look at your muse with full commitment and...
  July 26th, 2023 02:10
• Free Of Structure (Kurt Philip Behm) ‘-Immortality assuaged’ captivating words as always
  July 26th, 2023 02:05
• One Tree, Many Branches (Pop64) ‘But yet, I am one tree with many branches’ great flow to your words...
  July 25th, 2023 22:44
• Thank you MyPoeticSide (Hzugman) Indeed, a great space with potential…
  July 25th, 2023 22:42
• The Red MG (Bella Shepard) Ain’t that a shame? ‘The house had weathered 60 years’ beautiful...
  July 25th, 2023 22:39
• Redemption (Pincers) Very descriptive of the earthly to divine transformation through
  July 25th, 2023 22:36
• Free Of Structure (Kurt Philip Behm) ‘-Immortality assuaged’ captivating words as always
  July 25th, 2023 20:45
• Lasagna (Bev) Great symbolism and rhythm!
  July 25th, 2023 20:44
• A Witness To Happiness (Mark The Phenomenon) Heart warming words FR-your poem connects with the reader because your...
  July 25th, 2023 20:43
• Seeing Eye (Introverted Sage) Wisdom is truly magical!
  July 23rd, 2023 19:34
• Nekky\'s Story (Joseph C Ogbonna) Heartfelt empathy for victims of violence, which are not only the women...
  July 23rd, 2023 19:33
• TRUE SIMPLE HEART (Bobby O) “Carry nothing you must hide” a sage statement. I also am impressed by...
  July 22nd, 2023 14:14
• Dancing in the Street (Parisab) The pen is much more effective in this battle-thank you for being an...
  July 20th, 2023 02:31
• Apologies (Parisab) I feel better that this poem spoke to you about an important tragedy of...
  July 20th, 2023 02:28
• In the Wake of New Gods (Neville) True description of the inception of technology and what the Apple Store...
  July 20th, 2023 02:17
• Two Ants One Question (Neville) Your poem was purely delightful…
  July 20th, 2023 00:22
• Warm And Tender Love (Garth Rakumakoe) Your poem coneys that as a child you were deeply moved by music and...
  July 20th, 2023 00:18
• Poetess: that most profound, Lioness (L. B. Mek) And I’ll huff and puff: which breaks the glass of the literary...
  July 17th, 2023 22:00
• My son of 2000, My son of now (Parisab) Thanks for the visit and the read-
  July 12th, 2023 21:27
• The Hummingbird Blues (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) Oh such tender dedication to your hummingbird garden-I have planted...
  July 12th, 2023 13:15
• I Remember (Bella Shepard) Very heartfelt, so it was relatable-
  July 12th, 2023 13:11
• Song of Venice Marchant after N.Rimsky-Korsakov (Ksey_Gan) Beautiful Ode to Venice-I believe Anthony Bourdain said that it’s dying...
  July 12th, 2023 13:08
• My Nevada (Teddy.15) All the desperate things we do for love and sometimes with no...
  July 10th, 2023 01:04
• Jazz Liberation (Parisab) Thanks for visiting and yes indeed that’s the jazz spirit!
  July 10th, 2023 00:59
• Today is 26.05 (Imalexx) Good write to convey your shock, the day you lost your relative…
  July 9th, 2023 13:05
• Bebop. (Goldfinch60) ‘Bebop showed that music is freedom’ great appreciation line-In that...
  July 9th, 2023 12:48
• AWESTRUCK (Bobby O) Sublime description of your muse today-Great notice to her details, even...
  July 9th, 2023 12:44
• Twin Sisters (Kurt Philip Behm) Mystic quatrains of protest and doubt Truly admired this amalgam
  July 9th, 2023 12:24
• Prayers In Perils (Orchidee) Good write and spiritually uplifting as always
  July 8th, 2023 01:24
• ELIMINATE, ACCUMULATE , CELEBRATE (Bobby O) This trilogy is very special with rich and implicit meaning.
  July 8th, 2023 01:22
• What’s my niche? (EvenwheniLie) And now that’s a rap and grabbed my attention-on a different note I...
  July 6th, 2023 20:40
• Crazy bastard with a Gun (EvenwheniLie) It must have been hard practice to write this while imagining the...
  July 6th, 2023 00:47
• \"He Loves Me Not\" (Inkerbell) Great patience with the nuances of love and nature-good write …
  July 4th, 2023 15:55
• This is I (Parisab) LOL, knock em sideways, vs out, which would have been underwhelming-thanks...
  July 4th, 2023 08:38
• \"Crimson Symphony: A Ode to the Red Sunset\" (Ethan Mikel StAmour) I like your commitment to the meter and the rhyme in this piece-thanks for...
  July 4th, 2023 01:13
• When One is No Longer (Neville) I found the iteration of the word indeed very interesting in this...
  July 4th, 2023 01:08
• A powerful Stranger (Hollow Enigma) The mirror reflects us, doubled by cracks Me and the witch wink, as the...
  July 4th, 2023 00:43
• Let the soul glow (Poetic Dan) Capturing the soul of childhood and the joy and wonder they inspire…...
  July 3rd, 2023 10:49
• A NEW BEGINNING ! (SJSangeetha) Nature described vividly with panache…
  July 3rd, 2023 10:39
• Only You Quench my Thirst (Parisab) Cheers to the bruises that yielded to the right blend to savor at...
  July 3rd, 2023 03:23
• Lush II (Eugene S.) I stumbled upon this-the last stanza is especially charming! Artistic and...
  July 2nd, 2023 00:14
• Pomegranate (Parisab) Thank you for your reaction with the senses and your sophisticated...
  July 1st, 2023 17:23
• Jazz State Of Mind (Garth Rakumakoe) I’m a “jazz child” and I won’t apologize…thank you for the...
  July 1st, 2023 16:19
• Only You Quench my Thirst (Parisab) Salute! May it quench your soul….
  July 1st, 2023 15:20
• Belligerent Bullies On The School Bus (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I like the reference to the Lost Boys of the Peter Pan-Alas some never...
  July 1st, 2023 01:07
• When the Limelight Sucks (Neville) Are channeling Taylor Swift? I’m sure that she is lost cause for fame-or...
  July 1st, 2023 01:04
• SAM COOKE STILL NO. 1 (Bobby O) Thank you for being a serious patron of his memory-All I know is that he...
  July 1st, 2023 00:16
• Last like Jesus (Tayama) He needs no proof to exist and his love is unconditional, even if in...
  June 30th, 2023 21:52
• When Enough Is Enough (Amber D. Petty Patrick) ‘Because now is all I know’ a great read to decide when enough is...
  June 30th, 2023 21:31
• Where is my cat? (Ok Waleed) Did you name your cat after Erica Badu? I hope that you found her…
  June 30th, 2023 21:28
• Marking The Secrets (Kurt Philip Behm) Absence of love bears hate… Such alarming content told so succinctly and...
  June 26th, 2023 21:26
• The Neighbor (CaitlinKCarter) I see the dark character described in a comical manner, skillfully. Fun...
  June 26th, 2023 21:17
• G.R.O.E.L.A.(Groela) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) FUNtastic !
  June 25th, 2023 13:39
• Longing for a Lasting Peace (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla) Beauty can grow from ashes in your powerful poetry…
  June 25th, 2023 12:16
• Midlife Rap (Parisab) So glad you visited and gave a shout out…I knew I could count on your...
  June 25th, 2023 02:14
• I KNEW IT WOULD BE NEVER (Bobby O) This robot is artificial since your intelligence is not-‘design function...
  June 25th, 2023 01:49
• Ferry man (Peto) I truly enjoy the contrast between the tone and the content! Tender it...
  June 25th, 2023 01:28
• Good Morning (Peter Gates) Great letter to remind us to serenade every dawn…
  June 23rd, 2023 23:48
• No Gardener Required (Neville) This poem is lush in language and succulent in capturing ones imagination....
  June 23rd, 2023 23:34
• Permit (Love-Me-Softly) It’s probably not your driving, but a reaction to their fear and...
  June 20th, 2023 01:45
• The Sins of Us (Parisab) Thank you for your kind attention and great insight!
  June 18th, 2023 23:23
• Haiku # 102 (Olaf Gatermann) Looks in great shape in German, good translation and meaning
  June 18th, 2023 07:54
• Similar Reflections (Mara \"Marzipan\") Good job describing the word figuratively and in literal imagery-
  June 18th, 2023 07:44
• By the Man above (Gary Edward Geraci) I see the humanity and desperation for hope in these most undesired and...
  June 17th, 2023 12:19
• Paths XIV (Eugene S.) using the frailty of the ‘individual within’ as a ‘A foundation on...
  June 17th, 2023 12:02
• Midlife Rap (Parisab) I tried to enter the sacred grounds of this art form with respect and what...
  June 17th, 2023 11:39
• N (Pacifique Niyitanga) Great metaphors portraying the conflict between the “Nasty Nonsense rain...
  June 17th, 2023 11:35
• POSTPARTUM SNEAK ATTACK (Bobby O) Very respectful and empathetic perspective from a third person point of...
  June 16th, 2023 21:36
• Midlife Rap (Parisab) Thanks for reading friend poet and appreciating my sincere attempt…
  June 16th, 2023 09:22
• Legacies Ending In Flames (50 Years Of Hip-Hop) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) We have to keep the flames alive: thanks for giving props to some of the...
  June 16th, 2023 09:14
• Midlife Rap (Parisab) Thanks for the reminder to keep it FUNtastic good friend and poet!
  June 16th, 2023 08:59
• A Daft Update (Orchidee) Light hearted yet scary-makes me want to put on a cat costume:))
  June 16th, 2023 08:57
• Tesla The Golem (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) Each of the characters you create come from a long story-always a fun...
  June 14th, 2023 11:57