Comments on community poems by Parisab
- Four for the Show (Thomas W Case)
Such light and playful mood, full of respect for the harder past. Cheers...
February 16th, 2024 00:49 - Lord Speak (John Lee)
You can’t be lonely in your solitude of prayer. Heartfelt write.
February 5th, 2024 22:03 - A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab)
Means a lot coming from a poet at heart! It turns out that we are...
February 4th, 2024 14:05 - My Scars (Zhangyuyouyu)
Great concept of how the scars are sometimes hidden behind adornment …
February 4th, 2024 12:41 - Transformation (Sorenbarrett)
Simple and beautifully clean!
February 4th, 2024 12:38 - The Enemies To Lover Masquerade (Santajah Douglass)
Great narrative with a mature and deep understanding of the journey of...
February 4th, 2024 12:36 - Of Time and Of Love (Teddy.15)
Creatively beautiful! Thanks for invite on the time machine! Bella Ciao!
February 4th, 2024 12:33 - The most conquered (EvenwheniLie)
Great flow with messages, sourced by the ancient winds! Ugliest storms in...
February 4th, 2024 12:21 - Metaphors of change (Accidental Poet)
I never thought about how metaphor and change are related. That’s neat!
February 4th, 2024 12:13 - never ending symphony (Vividvoid14)
Great elements to include in your “never ending symphony”. Looks like...
February 4th, 2024 12:10 - Sweet rainbows (Reynaldo Casison)
Great recurring motif and each time with a new color of the rainbow…
February 4th, 2024 01:53 - A wasted Degree (Sakwa Franc)
Your poetry is very mature and rejects all non sense! I hope that all...
February 4th, 2024 01:51 - Beard guy (Dayena)
The last two stanzas wrap up the whole story beautifully -so fanciful is...
February 4th, 2024 01:42 - senryu to Gaza (Teddy.15)
Great form to describe madness and chaos- I believe the nations wanted to...
February 3rd, 2024 22:24 - None like you (Dayena)
You’ve grown fond of your muse and so no bells and whistles were...
February 3rd, 2024 13:26
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