Comments on community poems by Parisab

• Two Powers (Gray0328) I saw both ‘masters’ to befriend… but they were both lost when I...
  April 14th, 2024 09:43
• My Darling London (Teddy.15) A good problem to have-lucky to have such lover as London dear Teddy …
  April 14th, 2024 09:37
• Heavy Hearts and Dandelions (Parisab) Thank you for the kind sentiment and connecting to the words…
  April 14th, 2024 09:34
• Yesterday I Met a Monster (Neville) Wow Neville, those are the days I wish we are out sick-Although another...
  April 14th, 2024 09:32
• Olive Oil (Orchidee) A very gentle prayer, olive oil dressed this salad well -
  April 14th, 2024 09:26
• Modern poet (Sorenbarrett) Even a poem translated becomes another one ‘birth a new creature’...
  April 14th, 2024 09:20
• Party of One (Mrharrell) ‘Party of one” is the what you call for both, but being alone and...
  April 14th, 2024 09:15
• White Dwarf (Weltschmerz) This is what I call an attractive poem…
  April 11th, 2024 11:17
• Rooms of Life (Gray0328) Fascinating poem depicting the heart and soul of an aging house…I was...
  April 11th, 2024 11:14
• Winter is my land (Lorenz) Stunning description of an urban winter in the city escape i haven’t...
  April 11th, 2024 11:10
• Buzzard. (Goldfinch60) So seem less and happy! Enjoyable read…
  April 8th, 2024 01:52
• bad boy (Vividvoid14) Looks like this “baddie” has grit like the poem…you are describing...
  March 11th, 2024 19:35
• Pedestal (Teddy.15) Very Bronte in style, so romantic and mystical …happy international...
  March 9th, 2024 01:59
• Exquisite beauties (Reynaldo Casison) Very cohesive and imaginative..your relationship with beauty is very...
  March 9th, 2024 01:45
• Bleeding Hands (Keith Jeffries) Very sensitive and sincere write! I can see that you empathize with the...
  March 7th, 2024 11:18
• Afraid (Peto) To see her full story, even the ‘epic’s only torn page’ is a pure...
  March 7th, 2024 11:12
• The Search Continues (Thomas W Case) Great relationship with nature and it doesn’t have to be faked…
  March 2nd, 2024 11:51
• Bloody Blood Tests (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Those letters give you anxiety but helpful nevertheless-and cheers to your...
  March 2nd, 2024 11:49
• Where Truth Lies (Neville) I think that I found a treasure in your poem : in the last line: there’s...
  March 2nd, 2024 11:46
• The View (Garth Rakumakoe) This is indeed a heart of a poet! Thanks to your heart and your words for...
  March 2nd, 2024 11:42
• A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab) your comments mean a lot.. cheers to you..
  March 2nd, 2024 11:32
• my reality (Vividvoid14) His poetry crew see that His words still jam! (Maybe the last two...
  March 1st, 2024 18:01
• my reality (Vividvoid14) Glad…Bobby and I got your poetry back …
  March 1st, 2024 17:59
• Quitting the fight (Calliope) A moving piece, can see how the heart has become disengaged…
  March 1st, 2024 14:27
• my reality (Vividvoid14) “this smile to me its just arts and crafts” Brilliant line,...
  March 1st, 2024 11:55
• Vuitton Clerihew (Doggerel Dave) That always annoys me (as a tourist.) And the fakes make the fair pricing...
  March 1st, 2024 11:29
• THEATRE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) You’ve set a real stage on this one! Great read….
  March 1st, 2024 11:24
• Arc (Neville) Your descriptions have their uniques touch on every image, including a...
  March 1st, 2024 11:22
• It was hefted upon a breeze - (Amy Michelle Mosier) I really like your unique imagery and the flow to your poem, always…
  March 1st, 2024 11:19
• Dreaming (Peto) And that’s quiet a dream, more like a bash, Peto! Glad to see this...
  March 1st, 2024 11:16
• Slumberbashing with Raven (Teddy.15) Mascara and all! Fabulous, Teddy!
  March 1st, 2024 11:13
• Lost papers of a troubled man (EvenwheniLie) “cultural dystrophy that serves as a trophy to victims trying to be...
  March 1st, 2024 11:11
• Lark Ascending (Vaughan Williams) (Cassie58) then moves slowly upwards imitating a lark, the messenger of a brand...
  March 1st, 2024 10:54
• A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab) I truly appreciate your refreshing view of this piece, Cassie:)
  March 1st, 2024 10:47
• If I Were To Write A Poem (SNB) Very clever in concept…
  February 28th, 2024 11:03
• Memorize - A Sonnet (JD Boye) difficult technique with original insert of Shakespeare..good write…
  February 28th, 2024 00:31
• WITH EYES (Serhat Doğan) Best not to talk if you want to speak truthfully, and eyes will tell about...
  February 28th, 2024 00:22
• Falsetto (Introverted Sage) Dark with Poe imagery, and of course original …
  February 28th, 2024 00:17
• Let yourself feel love (Reynaldo Casison) I especially like this work, it’s very intimate and as if you’re...
  February 25th, 2024 11:51
• LEGENDARY MR. ROBINSON (Bobby O) They had other plans for him, to parade him center stage, he was so...
  February 25th, 2024 11:49
• God is an Artist (Thomas W Case) And sometimes, we succeed. And it is good, and He is well...
  February 25th, 2024 11:40
• Three Summers (Neville) One is afraid that after three summers , they might fall. Love the title...
  February 25th, 2024 11:32
• lovely sight (Vividvoid14) Your words light a candle to face the dark. Ignorance is the weapon of...
  February 25th, 2024 11:27
• It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun (Teddy.15) To praise ones essence in the hard labor of a sonnet, is so brave and...
  February 25th, 2024 11:17
• Inconsistencies (Sorenbarrett) Thoughtful and lively ideas from your poem! Whether real as in faith or...
  February 19th, 2024 14:47
• On Love Once More (Ian Konopatzke) Refreshingly classic, in style and form…. Nice write!
  February 19th, 2024 14:41
• The Transition Between the Seasons (JosephineAdams) Great metaphors for the changing of the season (especially that her eyes...
  February 19th, 2024 14:39
• Upon Finding a Smile (Neville) Just the simple mention of the smile, brightened up the poem! Mine have...
  February 19th, 2024 14:37
• I Heard It In A Song (Garth Rakumakoe) There is so much good music out there which connect with the heart, and...
  February 19th, 2024 14:34
• Freedom, A Ruthless Fight (M.M.) Very good write, describing medical treatment with surgical precision and...
  February 18th, 2024 16:28
• Paddy McGee (Teddy.15) LOL, no accountability for that cringe-worthy Mc Gee. Indeed it must be...
  February 18th, 2024 12:59
• Slayer (2781) Thanks for reminders of the much needed faith…
  February 18th, 2024 12:44
• Crush (Cloie) Very exquisite and fresh imagery!
  February 18th, 2024 12:40
• Letter to my parents (Hey!) You really touched my heart with your letter poem. You are generous and...
  February 18th, 2024 12:35
• Searching for Nod (Thomas W Case) Burnt out on senses, like a sigh of relief after a night at a New...
  February 17th, 2024 23:33
• Why Not Just Call it a Day (Neville) I don’t know the back story, Nev, but this one is relentless! I hope...
  February 17th, 2024 23:29
• Moonsong hymn (Reynaldo Casison) Lovely imaging!
  February 17th, 2024 23:25
• FATAL ARROGANCE (Bobby O) Love the urgency in your play by play… conducting as you were right...
  February 17th, 2024 23:21
• fusion poem (Vividvoid14) Good job, I’ll join like this: “Burning the Demon” of...
  February 16th, 2024 20:13
• fusion poem (Vividvoid14) Hey Vivid, to start your fusioned poem go to your public profile and...
  February 16th, 2024 18:04
• I AM AFRICA (Aloo Denish Obiero) Very powerful and May Africa continue to keep its legacy and thrive in...
  February 16th, 2024 18:00
• Footsteps (John Lee) fascinating and captivating! Great use of heart chambers turning to...
  February 16th, 2024 03:22
• Photo Album (Garth Rakumakoe) Your words are elevated and supreme in this poem. I am moved by the...
  February 16th, 2024 03:06
• Fantasia (Teddy.15) Brava! Fatto a Firenze:)
  February 16th, 2024 02:53
• till the day i die (Vividvoid14) Great symbolism of the beehive to describe dangerously bitter thoughts....
  February 16th, 2024 01:02
• The Titanic. (Doggerel Dave) Titanic was indeed a great example, for the “words misused” . Thanks...
  February 16th, 2024 00:52
• Four for the Show (Thomas W Case) Such light and playful mood, full of respect for the harder past. Cheers...
  February 16th, 2024 00:49
• Lord Speak (John Lee) You can’t be lonely in your solitude of prayer. Heartfelt write.
  February 5th, 2024 22:03
• A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab) Means a lot coming from a poet at heart! It turns out that we are...
  February 4th, 2024 14:05
• My Scars (Zhangyuyouyu) Great concept of how the scars are sometimes hidden behind adornment …
  February 4th, 2024 12:41
• Transformation (Sorenbarrett) Simple and beautifully clean!
  February 4th, 2024 12:38
• The Enemies To Lover Masquerade (Santajah Douglass) Great narrative with a mature and deep understanding of the journey of...
  February 4th, 2024 12:36
• Of Time and Of Love (Teddy.15) Creatively beautiful! Thanks for invite on the time machine! Bella Ciao!
  February 4th, 2024 12:33
• The most conquered (EvenwheniLie) Great flow with messages, sourced by the ancient winds! Ugliest storms in...
  February 4th, 2024 12:21
• never ending symphony (Vividvoid14) Great elements to include in your “never ending symphony”. Looks like...
  February 4th, 2024 12:10
• Sweet rainbows (Reynaldo Casison) Great recurring motif and each time with a new color of the rainbow…
  February 4th, 2024 01:53
• A wasted Degree (Sakwa Franc) Your poetry is very mature and rejects all non sense! I hope that all...
  February 4th, 2024 01:51
• senryu to Gaza (Teddy.15) Great form to describe madness and chaos- I believe the nations wanted to...
  February 3rd, 2024 22:24
• A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab) I’m so grateful, Neville…
  February 3rd, 2024 13:21
• Uneasy Concerning The Future? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Your words give warning of more madness to come-thanks for this good write
  February 3rd, 2024 01:24
• We All Slip (Thomas W Case) How unfortunate! Her heart was cold like winter-glad you are better now-...
  February 3rd, 2024 01:21
• Cockatrice in Profile (Bigguy) Powerful and poignant-perfectly strong poem
  February 2nd, 2024 21:33
• The Gagging of Gaza (Neville) Seems like the lives you pictured are victims who are in disbelief of...
  February 2nd, 2024 20:58
• Regrets Of The Setting Sun (Garth Rakumakoe) Mistakes are temporary, so regret should only last until each sunset-love...
  February 2nd, 2024 20:49
• 70’s Kid (The Fife Wanderer) Sweet and free dialect, like a good childhood memory
  February 2nd, 2024 01:14
• A BEAUTIFUL FIND (Bobby O) Simply put, infinite ways to create order from chaos, yet it brings no...
  February 2nd, 2024 01:10
• Woman with midnight candles (Reynaldo Casison) Great painting with exquisite forms and shapes…
  February 2nd, 2024 01:03
• The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab) Many thanks, Sir…
  January 28th, 2024 22:18
• A Starved Soul (Thinkerbell) And such a sensitive soul, capturing and absorbing everything.
  January 25th, 2024 23:51
• I Was Painting You (Thomas W Case) How beautiful that you see your muse in everything so beautiful. I love...
  January 25th, 2024 04:07
• A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab) So awesome that you like it esteemed Poet…
  January 21st, 2024 20:57
• “Leave” (Nicole H.) Thank you for making this poetry, may your life continue to evolve with...
  January 20th, 2024 01:15
• pretty snow (Reynaldo Casison) Beautiful description and symbolism: a lady I won’t ever meet from my...
  January 20th, 2024 01:11
• Panic attacks (Hey!) Thanks for sharing your personal poem-panic attacks are false alarms and...
  January 20th, 2024 00:32
• Emotional journey (Vividvoid14) Keep letting your light shine-your path is a great one-
  January 20th, 2024 00:29
• The cat (Shadowbones) You’re building up into a great day of promise which is inevitable to...
  January 19th, 2024 23:08
• Depression feelings (Chris M 352) You describe it with familiarity-l hope that you also access how it helps...
  January 19th, 2024 16:15
• Dreams of the Fish (Thomas W Case) Everyone is so naive and innocent in your poems see the dreams of the...
  January 19th, 2024 16:03
• Lavished (Neville) So artful Neville! It portrays a portrait still appreciated by the artist...
  January 19th, 2024 16:00
• Noncence Geography (Teddy.15) Spiritosa is a cool reference-you have an air of class wherever you...
  January 19th, 2024 15:54