Comments on community poems by Parisab
- till the day i die (Vividvoid14)
Great symbolism of the beehive to describe dangerously bitter thoughts....
February 16th, 2024 01:02 - The Titanic. (Doggerel Dave)
Titanic was indeed a great example, for the “words misused” . Thanks...
February 16th, 2024 00:52 - Four for the Show (Thomas W Case)
Such light and playful mood, full of respect for the harder past. Cheers...
February 16th, 2024 00:49 - Lord Speak (John Lee)
You can’t be lonely in your solitude of prayer. Heartfelt write.
February 5th, 2024 22:03 - A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab)
Means a lot coming from a poet at heart! It turns out that we are...
February 4th, 2024 14:05 - My Scars (Zhangyuyouyu)
Great concept of how the scars are sometimes hidden behind adornment …
February 4th, 2024 12:41 - Transformation (Sorenbarrett)
Simple and beautifully clean!
February 4th, 2024 12:38 - The Enemies To Lover Masquerade (Santajah Douglass)
Great narrative with a mature and deep understanding of the journey of...
February 4th, 2024 12:36 - Of Time and Of Love (Teddy.15)
Creatively beautiful! Thanks for invite on the time machine! Bella Ciao!
February 4th, 2024 12:33 - The most conquered (EvenwheniLie)
Great flow with messages, sourced by the ancient winds! Ugliest storms in...
February 4th, 2024 12:21 - Metaphors of change (Accidental Poet)
I never thought about how metaphor and change are related. That’s neat!
February 4th, 2024 12:13 - never ending symphony (Vividvoid14)
Great elements to include in your “never ending symphony”. Looks like...
February 4th, 2024 12:10 - Sweet rainbows (Reynaldo Casison)
Great recurring motif and each time with a new color of the rainbow…
February 4th, 2024 01:53 - A wasted Degree (Sakwa Franc)
Your poetry is very mature and rejects all non sense! I hope that all...
February 4th, 2024 01:51 - senryu to Gaza (Teddy.15)
Great form to describe madness and chaos- I believe the nations wanted to...
February 3rd, 2024 22:24 - A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab)
I’m so grateful, Neville…
February 3rd, 2024 13:21 - Uneasy Concerning The Future? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Your words give warning of more madness to come-thanks for this good write
February 3rd, 2024 01:24 - We All Slip (Thomas W Case)
How unfortunate! Her heart was cold like winter-glad you are better now-...
February 3rd, 2024 01:21 - Cockatrice in Profile (Bigguy)
Powerful and poignant-perfectly strong poem
February 2nd, 2024 21:33 - The Gagging of Gaza (Neville)
Seems like the lives you pictured are victims who are in disbelief of...
February 2nd, 2024 20:58 - Regrets Of The Setting Sun (Garth Rakumakoe)
Mistakes are temporary, so regret should only last until each sunset-love...
February 2nd, 2024 20:49 - 70’s Kid (The Fife Wanderer)
Sweet and free dialect, like a good childhood memory
February 2nd, 2024 01:14 - A BEAUTIFUL FIND (Bobby O)
Simply put, infinite ways to create order from chaos, yet it brings no...
February 2nd, 2024 01:10 - Woman with midnight candles (Reynaldo Casison)
Great painting with exquisite forms and shapes…
February 2nd, 2024 01:03 - The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab)
Many thanks, Sir…
January 28th, 2024 22:18 - A Starved Soul (Thinkerbell)
And such a sensitive soul, capturing and absorbing everything.
January 25th, 2024 23:51 - I Was Painting You (Thomas W Case)
How beautiful that you see your muse in everything so beautiful. I love...
January 25th, 2024 04:07 - A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab)
So awesome that you like it esteemed Poet…
January 21st, 2024 20:57 - A Nation: Desolated, Dusted and Defeated (Petrichor of Love)
Your poem make it more possible to look at the devastation happening right...
January 20th, 2024 13:29 - “Leave” (Nicole H.)
Thank you for making this poetry, may your life continue to evolve with...
January 20th, 2024 01:15 - pretty snow (Reynaldo Casison)
Beautiful description and symbolism: a lady I won’t ever meet from my...
January 20th, 2024 01:11 - Panic attacks (Lil)
Thanks for sharing your personal poem-panic attacks are false alarms and...
January 20th, 2024 00:32 - Emotional journey (Vividvoid14)
Keep letting your light shine-your path is a great one-
January 20th, 2024 00:29 - The cat (Shadowbones)
You’re building up into a great day of promise which is inevitable to...
January 19th, 2024 23:08 - Depression feelings (Chris M 352)
You describe it with familiarity-l hope that you also access how it helps...
January 19th, 2024 16:15 - Dreams of the Fish (Thomas W Case)
Everyone is so naive and innocent in your poems
see the dreams of
the...
January 19th, 2024 16:03 - Lavished (Neville)
So artful Neville! It portrays a portrait still appreciated by the artist...
January 19th, 2024 16:00 - Noncence Geography (Teddy.15)
Spiritosa is a cool reference-you have an air of class wherever you...
January 19th, 2024 15:54 - Moon Over Beverly (Mtrotter1)
Sounds like you are drawing this archetypal woman, with exact sensitivity...
January 19th, 2024 15:44 - Portrait of a Poetess (Teddy.15)
Great proclamation about your love for poetry -thanks Teddy
January 9th, 2024 00:06 - Just as The Sun was Rising (Teddy.15)
Gathering all things of beauty in a basket for our eyes to see- great
January 9th, 2024 00:02 - Art’s Value (Doggerel Dave)
Your vivid words share my frustration about the art “market”. ART is...
January 8th, 2024 23:47 - poem for a mother (Vividvoid14)
Your mother must be so special to inspire such bright a d beautiful words!...
January 6th, 2024 22:55 - War (Mlarouss)
Your words wrestle with this most cruel of topics in an effective...
January 3rd, 2024 23:05 - “Forever” (Marley Linville)
Very special poem from a mature and deserving heart …
January 3rd, 2024 22:49 - Sacred ground (Gregoria)
“I\'m giving up all battles,
I love the world through you, and this...
January 3rd, 2024 02:38 - Cruise Snobs (Neville)
He he! This made me chuckle while I was sympathizing with you. Flamboyance...
January 2nd, 2024 03:11 - True love (Gregoria)
Translating poetry is indeed difficult if not impossible, in my opinion. I...
January 2nd, 2024 03:04 - Locker Room Logic (Thomas W Case)
It’s not any better in women’s lockers, but this made me chuckle in...
January 2nd, 2024 00:27 - Forever My Darlings (Cassie58)
Beautiful at its core, with a heart, writing so purely…
January 2nd, 2024 00:23 - Crappy New Tear (A Reflective, on New Year\'s Eve, 2023) (AuburnScribbler)
Your words are loud and clear, I’m afraid we forget even if we learn and...
January 2nd, 2024 00:19 - Haiku 4 Having Me She Said (Neville)
Impromptu imagery matching your powerful sentiments…
January 2nd, 2024 00:13 - A Fresh Start (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Great advice and wishes for our new year…
January 1st, 2024 23:47 - fur, clothing, and you (Aceofwoes)
Incredibly soft in tone with matching imagery never too overpowering-
January 1st, 2024 23:46 - My New Year’s Wish for Everyone (Accidental Poet)
Keep manifesting in your words! To a new year of hope…
January 1st, 2024 23:40 - Suicide (Vividvoid14)
Sometimes it’s a good exercise to bring out what’s on your mind-good...
January 1st, 2024 23:38 - OCD (Gary Edward Geraci)
Words zooming into the details of objects and the discomfort of things...
December 29th, 2023 13:56 - Mediterranean Blue (Mlarouss)
Profound and yet personal…You described your relationship with the...
December 29th, 2023 13:51 - Star of Bethlehem Under Rubble (Parisab)
This came as a simple and basic monologue, I am so grateful that it caught...
December 28th, 2023 13:15 - Glorious Graces (Orchidee)
Precious words…
December 28th, 2023 00:17 - Going Against the Flow (Neville)
There is always true intimacy in your poetry, even when forever bonded...
December 27th, 2023 23:55 - EARTH MAY BE (Dev Parth)
To be small but so full of light! We live on a special planet, as you...
December 27th, 2023 23:39 - Guess the Fruit (Thomas W Case)
Very creative in so many colors and shapes…
December 27th, 2023 23:37 - I’LL JUST DISAPPEAR (Bobby O)
It must be winter over there! There will be fire (and hell to pay) in the...
December 27th, 2023 23:33 - From Big Things Small (Neville)
‘Tired and we’ll stretched truth’ when we realize that we are past...
December 18th, 2023 11:56 - A.I. And Religion (John Prophet)
Intriguing concept, perhaps to much credit given. As long A.I. is not the...
December 18th, 2023 11:53 - Like a Butterfly Melting (Thomas W Case)
The crow pecking and the life inching away like a filthy worm: like loss,...
December 12th, 2023 02:24 - The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab)
Thank you for the visit and your kind feedback-
December 12th, 2023 00:44 - THE OLD TREE (Nephilim56)
A shading tree
Where once we loved
In thought I travel
Mind...
December 10th, 2023 11:56 - Be Set Free (Angelia Lamar)
Steadfast in faith-your words ring of freedom…
December 1st, 2023 22:15 - The Pressure (Bloody Pen)
Those messages pressure and haunt us forever, but I’m relieved that you...
December 1st, 2023 11:44 - PRAYER OF THANKS (Bobby O)
Visited her again, so thanks…
I am obsessed by revisiting David Bowie...
December 1st, 2023 11:36 - No More Eden (Thomas W Case)
Very balanced in theme and content-May you find Eden in all beautiful...
December 1st, 2023 11:25 - Fine in Vine (Chiki1601)
Describing nature in classic terms never goes out of style! Well done!...
December 1st, 2023 11:23 - Wisdom of old (1) (Doggerel Dave)
Well said and complete…
Retirement=no more foolish plans I am bound...
December 1st, 2023 11:18 - PRAYER OF THANKS (Bobby O)
Graceful a d refined words, fit for the occasion!
November 26th, 2023 22:44 - Some (Peto)
And that says it all-thank you for sharing this…
November 26th, 2023 22:40 - Hi Lily (Lil)
Your words reflect the panic and chaos of your experiences. Yet you are...
November 26th, 2023 18:21 - It\'s Gonna be a Cold Winter (Quemis)
Another brilliant example of how you paint a vivid picture about the...
November 26th, 2023 18:06 - Suicide (John Lee)
As you said it so well we are here to pick up the pieces and not to put...
November 23rd, 2023 12:09 - Look To Infinity. (Goldfinch60)
Timely anaphora-liked this very much…
November 23rd, 2023 12:02 - Poets (Gray0328)
Beautiful -and you pictured the poet needing but a window and the novelist...
November 23rd, 2023 11:55 - Thank You! (Bella Shepard)
Thankful for you (and this community) as well…
November 23rd, 2023 11:45 - Reply to A. E. Housman (Jarcher54)
So exquisite! I also would like nothing more than your insight about the...
November 19th, 2023 15:41 - Heavy Hearts and Dandelions (Parisab)
Thanks for reading and I appreciate your comments…
November 18th, 2023 23:43 - sunflower seeds (Hers)
It’s brave to give it all to love…heartfelt poem…
November 17th, 2023 22:46 - Tired (The Fife Wanderer)
Just resting and wondering, without predicting! That’s the way to be...
November 17th, 2023 22:26 - Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter (Neville)
That is a good economic policy, when words are a few and to the point!...
November 17th, 2023 21:59 - PINCH ME (Bobby O)
My poet brother in arms, better watch out for trouble, LOL …
November 17th, 2023 21:53 - Dying (B.E.Poet)
Vividly painful moments -your poem may be feelings for others who are...
November 17th, 2023 21:50 - Poetry Is My Loving Wife (Thomas W Case)
A perfect marriage of vulnerability and strength…
November 17th, 2023 21:48 - AN ODE OF GRATITUDE (Bobby O)
Sounds like a “serendipitous” breeze is navigating these gentle...
November 17th, 2023 21:46 - Upon Leaving One’s Shadow Behind (Neville)
Mirror, bread, diamond, gifts, are all the generous gifts of this poem....
November 9th, 2023 17:37 - I Want To Save Everyone (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
This poem definitely evokes strong emotions-not much to be foretold with...
November 9th, 2023 17:31 - Phobia (Pacifique Niyitanga)
Great imagery: after breathing so that the “story” of phobia and fear...
November 1st, 2023 20:02 - A Handful of Water (Neville)
Your poem creates one singular moment of beauty and brings attention to...
October 30th, 2023 00:20 - Oswald Garden (The Fife Wanderer)
intricate view of the place you visited in nature and beautifully...
October 30th, 2023 00:11 - Trick or Treat (The Fife Wanderer)
Charming and stylistic poem…
October 28th, 2023 17:21 - The Big Boy Dance (GeekSusie)
I like the tone of strength, accountability, and self reliance. Also that...
October 28th, 2023 17:20 - Will They Remember Me Well? (Thomas W Case)
The words and the pic shows that you are “leaving your legacy”
October 27th, 2023 17:36
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