Comments on community poems by Parisab

• Wandersworth (AuburnScribbler) It is a delicate balance to address a person ‘unknown’ with...
  September 13th, 2023 13:29
• Shadow Dance (Neville) This has the aesthetic of a Georges Méliès movie-I specially was...
  September 13th, 2023 13:24
• Blood Moon (Parisab) Thank you for your attention, this is near the anniversary of her killing...
  September 11th, 2023 02:04
• Love Potion No.19 (Parisab) Thanks my dear poet friend-my words described that intoxicated feeling-I...
  September 10th, 2023 10:23
• Open (Peto) My pleasure, see previous message…
  September 9th, 2023 09:52
• Open (Peto) These actions made epics and universal love stories, truly a classic :I...
  September 9th, 2023 09:24
• Solitude (B.E.Poet) Great write about only knowing your essence through solitude-
  September 8th, 2023 23:58
• UNSELFISH RAMBLE (Bobby O) ‘Digits open a pristine view’ ‘unselfish valor will display’ how...
  September 8th, 2023 23:54
• What Does it Take (Introverted Sage) May we all find safety, by making friends with our friends! Dynamic piece-
  September 8th, 2023 23:48
• Holy Dreamscape (Parisab) I’m so glad you found this piece engaging, Maxine:)
  September 8th, 2023 23:43
• heart broken (Vividvoid14) I am so glad that you write about all kinds of emotions such as pride,...
  September 7th, 2023 10:06
• Blue Showers (Ysa) You have something special here. ‘I’m afraid it is dented within me’...
  September 6th, 2023 14:52
• my mom (Vividvoid14) What appropriate and beautiful selection of words to honor your mother! I...
  September 4th, 2023 17:23
• Holy Dreamscape (Parisab) Thank you-You are so cool, Vivid! Write on!!
  September 4th, 2023 17:20
• Like a Video (Parisab) I thank you!
  September 4th, 2023 17:18
• Holy Dreamscape (Parisab) So kind always!
  September 4th, 2023 14:18
• Empty Sky (Teddy.15) You are still looking up in the sky for a certain airplane-your sentiments...
  September 4th, 2023 12:52
• Gospel Graces (Orchidee) You had my hands up in the worshipin’ way! I am grateful for that O!
  September 4th, 2023 12:33
• Voilà ! here I am, here We be (L. B. Mek) I was mourning the passage of summer and ‘the august flowers strutting...
  September 4th, 2023 12:31
• intern, patient confrontation (EvenwheniLie) You told ‘his’ story vividly-I see this in those personally and...
  September 4th, 2023 12:22
• WHAT DID YOU THINK WOULD HAPPEN? (LIZ) Words written vividly about toxic love-thanks for sharing…
  September 4th, 2023 00:38
• Empty Sky (Teddy.15) You are still looking up in the sky for a certain airplane-your sentiments...
  September 3rd, 2023 13:06
• Colour (Peto) Such rare empathy to tell the story of this woman-your words carry...
  September 3rd, 2023 01:37
• Unprecedented (Doggerel Dave) So true, time for a new cliche’
  September 2nd, 2023 01:37
• Book of me (Sueellennicole) Bold words, the poem and your sentiments deserve respect…
  September 1st, 2023 21:14
• MENTOR’s HONOR (Bobby O) Bagpipes, how cool! Sorry for your loss, I am sure that your words hit all...
  August 31st, 2023 21:26
• Holy Dreamscape (Parisab) I hope that this finds you in great health…
  August 31st, 2023 21:20
• Holy Dreamscape (Parisab) Regards to you and your engagement with these words…
  August 31st, 2023 21:19
• Run Away (Cali Kittana) Sounds like a place that gives you enough space to be creative and to...
  August 31st, 2023 16:30
• Wandering (Introverted Sage) Great word pairings of words-‘hours.flowers.’ ‘the center. the...
  August 31st, 2023 15:54
• Holes in Walls (AuburnScribbler) Important reminder to our existence (of humanity)-thanks for penning on...
  August 31st, 2023 09:45
• Whatever Happened to Miriam (Neville) This brief encounter needs no introduction-I am sure she saw that you...
  August 31st, 2023 09:28
• Massage (Peto) ‘The tenderness that lust evokes’ capturing the right balance between,...
  August 31st, 2023 09:22
• Empty Units (AuburnScribbler) Stark changes and loss of all which was left as familiar…It is scary...
  August 29th, 2023 18:49
• BOY (DREEK0) ‘his life is a tragic piece of art’ He is so beautiful, the Boy, his...
  August 25th, 2023 21:30
• Waiting (Roxanna) Eloquent and exquisite!
  August 25th, 2023 15:48
• The Touron (Bella Shepard) Touron? Love it! They should have listened to ‘Mama bison’ and now...
  August 25th, 2023 15:46
• Sandy Thoughts (M.E.M.) Very descriptive in the way you let ‘your sandy thoughts’ run its...
  August 25th, 2023 11:32
• In Memory of K.F. (Orchidee) Looks like on that very sad day everyone looked up with open hearts for...
  August 25th, 2023 04:54
• Like a Video (Parisab) Thank you for viewing and noticing my instinct for inventive styling, at...
  August 25th, 2023 04:28
• Old Men of Steel (Parisab) Yes for sure ‘new engagement’ is needed-while gender and age were not...
  August 25th, 2023 04:15
• Michael\'s Call (Kurt Philip Behm) ‘The answer question free’ submission worded so purely.., Nice...
  August 24th, 2023 21:02
• Wildflower (Garth Rakumakoe) Undiscovered wildflower is lonely and like jazz. Love the references and...
  August 24th, 2023 20:59
• Once Upon Her Night Scented Garden  (Neville) ‘Her night scented garden’ captivated your memory with painstaking...
  August 23rd, 2023 01:55
• Social Media Whore (Parisab) It’s great that you visited and connected with my words, Maxine-I’m...
  August 20th, 2023 16:18
• Love Potion No.19 (Parisab) Thank you for your input and insight-looking forward to visiting more of...
  August 19th, 2023 23:44
• I\'m Cool (DREEK0) Cool puts out fires and rage about uncool injustice and non sense-but your...
  August 19th, 2023 23:35
• She is Truth (DREEK0) How powerful and reflective in the eyes of the beloved…Cool read, yet...
  August 19th, 2023 22:14
• All Bases Covered (Neville) He named the muse, and she stuck to the identity he created for her…I...
  August 19th, 2023 22:12
• \"Whispers of Colors: A Canvas\'s Tale\" (SAFIYA MEHRAJ) Beautiful and refreshingly colorful…
  August 19th, 2023 22:04
• Shame and guilt sabotaged mine healthy growth... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Complex in objection and acceptance…Thank you for writing a very...
  August 19th, 2023 22:02
• In blood, we write great poetries (Alex Praw) Thank you for bringing to light the darkness which befalls the...
  August 19th, 2023 21:56
• Fear Silence Not (Neville) So true about the awkwardness of silence, the nature symbolism takes the...
  August 19th, 2023 12:16
• Blessed to Share (Bobby O) Special in its steadfast and emotive way… I ought to fave its ‘I...
  August 19th, 2023 12:12
• When Love Dies (Garth Rakumakoe) It had mattered not, if this poem was penned out of Love or Hurt. It is...
  August 19th, 2023 12:04
• An Open Box (Lonelysoldier) Great and open metaphor, I thought of a woman tapped in the box of...
  August 18th, 2023 20:33
• Symptoms of Nigeria\'s Governing Arms (Joseph C Ogbonna) Thanks for educating with your poem! I was hearing that they will be...
  August 18th, 2023 20:28
• Wish I could be a bird (Mansoor khan) Your soul rises above in the form of your poetry-beautiful words in their...
  August 16th, 2023 02:03
• The Drawbridge Closes (Kurt Philip Behm) ‘The years have come’ The tears have stayed’ Neither youth nor old...
  August 16th, 2023 01:53
• Mused (Neville) You have changed the old saying of it takes (three) to “tangoed” I...
  August 14th, 2023 23:03
• heartfelt (Vividvoid14) You have all the right tools Vivid! May you keep shining, in years to...
  August 13th, 2023 17:04
• Old Men of Steel (Parisab) Glad if you enjoyed Sunset…I May remove the capital on the last stanza,...
  August 13th, 2023 16:35
• Old Men of Steel (Parisab) So I hear, I’m not running to the pole to exercise my right… They keep...
  August 13th, 2023 16:22
• Your Beautiful Slumber (Mosejindu) Delicate and thoughtful piece! It feels as though you want their peace...
  August 13th, 2023 16:19
• What if... (DesertWords) Such a timeless longing and fear of rejection! They don’t make them like...
  August 13th, 2023 16:13
• Short-Circuit (Teddy.15) Such a fresh concept, to not just criticize, but to empathize with it, and...
  August 13th, 2023 16:11
• Jazz On A Suumers Day. (Goldfinch60) Preservation Hall Jazz Band did it for me! They have been traveling all...
  August 13th, 2023 01:57
• Laundry (Greg57) We are glad you found your way! Laundry is meditation and sorting life for...
  August 11th, 2023 21:01
• Service Settings (Orchidee) Staying with grace through small gestures: beautiful “service...
  August 11th, 2023 20:58
• Cue to Make a Return (AuburnScribbler) ‘For a life full lived, is both sweet and rotten’ untying the grasp of...
  August 11th, 2023 20:53
• I Do Not Understand. (Goldfinch60) You’re listening to nature’s call and reflecting it back to us-We owe...
  August 11th, 2023 19:45
• Bow Upon String (DesertWords) Patiently built the action, to be release! Very succinct and a beautiful...
  August 11th, 2023 15:40
• I am strong (NafisaSB) Now everyone knows! My tolerance is my strength and My patience is my...
  August 11th, 2023 15:37
• RINSE & REPEAT (Bobby O) Looks like the Harley and the Barbie had a baby! This was a great...
  August 11th, 2023 11:44
• RINSE & REPEAT (Bobby O) Looks like the Barbie aesthetic enticed you too! Keep on throttling: You...
  August 11th, 2023 11:32
• Midnight Flight (Parisab) Thank you for visiting and your thoughtful attention.
  August 11th, 2023 11:22
• Damaged Goods (JBentley) Very powerful demonstration of how the combat mind is shaped! Saluting...
  August 10th, 2023 17:51
• Love Letter (Teddy.15) Your letter was an invitation to the Land of Nostalgia! Grazie!
  August 10th, 2023 17:42
• It’s just another superhero movie (EvenwheniLie) I’m already a fan of Cremation Mary and I will order a ‘Gucci plus...
  August 10th, 2023 17:37
• GLITTERING MNEMONIC (Syed Hassan Aamir) Reads like a prayer! Thank you.
  August 10th, 2023 11:48
• Ice (Peto) So the ‘toothless grinned’ man did not meet the same faith as your...
  August 10th, 2023 11:46
• Ocean\'s Mercy (Pourout._) Creative way to emote! Very descriptive and a fine poem…
  August 10th, 2023 11:39
• Pewter Pot (AuburnScribbler) Salud sir! This is an authentically masculine poem! It brought back the...
  August 10th, 2023 11:37
• A Thought For a Day (Neville) So wise to partake in universal joy! Thanks for the reminder, poet...
  August 10th, 2023 11:29
• The broken piggy bank (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) I’ve been keeping my piggy bank under my mattress, for the same exacting...
  August 10th, 2023 11:24
• no dad (Vividvoid14) You are a dream fourteen year old boy and a young man we should be all...
  August 10th, 2023 11:16
• Miniature Apartment Box shapes (Sunsetmet) So pleasant and lovely! Thank you for writing in an authentically personal...
  August 10th, 2023 11:11
• Moonshine on the Mere (JayGeorge) Reads like a novel! Throughly enjoyed the read…
  August 10th, 2023 11:07
• Miss (Peto) What made this poem special and different, that you are absorbed by her...
  August 10th, 2023 01:00
• For Astrid Wren My Little Bird (Neville) We can almost see you transform into a perfect image of a grandfather,...
  August 10th, 2023 00:50
• Makaveli, Biggie, Diddy & Jay-Z (Ultimate Penalty) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Art imitating life, sadly! Though none of it was fake, I presume.
  August 10th, 2023 00:44
• The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair (Neville) She met your most vital need (for bread) I can’t begin to imagine the...
  August 9th, 2023 00:38
• Future Skies (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Grasping what future may bring from the looks of it, seems impossible and...
  August 5th, 2023 01:08
• Afterbirth (Neville) Words flow while you seem all focused on your daughter with empathy all...
  August 5th, 2023 00:59
• Free to Ride (Gary Edward Geraci) Creative format with deep intention…
  August 5th, 2023 00:50
• Life (Bella Shepard) You first echo some good philosophy and then the beautiful and original...
  August 5th, 2023 00:47
• JAZZ IS LIFE (Bobby O) JAZZ (today) IS “LOVE SUPREME”! You wrote it again and made me listen...
  August 3rd, 2023 15:50
• Whispers of the Pleasure District: A Tale of Lahore’s After-Dark Secrets (Laraib Fatima) Women exploitation is colorless, stateless, and has many religions and...
  August 3rd, 2023 11:58
• THE BROKEN MAN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) You set a stunning stage for passing through: ‘blue light’ moment is...
  August 3rd, 2023 08:12
• Explosive (Pop64) First stanza sets the tone-I like that you let the emotions flow, but...
  August 3rd, 2023 08:08