Comments on community poems by Parisab
- Wish I could be a bird (Mansoor khan)
Your soul rises above in the form of your poetry-beautiful words in their...
August 16th, 2023 02:03 - The Drawbridge Closes (Kurt Philip Behm)
‘The years have come’
The tears have stayed’
Neither youth nor old...
August 16th, 2023 01:53 - Mused (Neville)
You have changed the old saying of it takes (three) to “tangoed” I...
August 14th, 2023 23:03 - heartfelt (Vividvoid14)
You have all the right tools Vivid! May you keep shining, in years to...
August 13th, 2023 17:04 - Old Men of Steel (Parisab)
Glad if you enjoyed Sunset…I May remove the capital on the last stanza,...
August 13th, 2023 16:35 - Old Men of Steel (Parisab)
So I hear, I’m not running to the pole to exercise my right… They keep...
August 13th, 2023 16:22 - Your Beautiful Slumber (Mosejindu)
Delicate and thoughtful piece! It feels as though you want their peace...
August 13th, 2023 16:19 - What if... (DesertWords)
Such a timeless longing and fear of rejection! They don’t make them like...
August 13th, 2023 16:13 - Short-Circuit (Teddy.15)
Such a fresh concept, to not just criticize, but to empathize with it, and...
August 13th, 2023 16:11 - Jazz On A Suumers Day. (Goldfinch60)
Preservation Hall Jazz Band did it for me! They have been traveling all...
August 13th, 2023 01:57 - Laundry (Greg57)
We are glad you found your way! Laundry is meditation and sorting life for...
August 11th, 2023 21:01 - Service Settings (Orchidee)
Staying with grace through small gestures: beautiful “service...
August 11th, 2023 20:58 - Cue to Make a Return (AuburnScribbler)
‘For a life full lived, is both sweet and rotten’ untying the grasp of...
August 11th, 2023 20:53 - I Do Not Understand. (Goldfinch60)
You’re listening to nature’s call and reflecting it back to us-We owe...
August 11th, 2023 19:45 - Bow Upon String (DesertWords)
Patiently built the action, to be release! Very succinct and a beautiful...
August 11th, 2023 15:40 - I am strong (NafisaSB)
Now everyone knows! My tolerance is my strength and My patience is my...
August 11th, 2023 15:37 - RINSE & REPEAT (Bobby O)
Looks like the Harley and the Barbie had a baby! This was a great...
August 11th, 2023 11:44 - RINSE & REPEAT (Bobby O)
Looks like the Barbie aesthetic enticed you too! Keep on throttling: You...
August 11th, 2023 11:32 - Midnight Flight (Parisab)
Thank you for visiting and your thoughtful attention.
August 11th, 2023 11:22 - Damaged Goods (JBentley)
Very powerful demonstration of how the combat mind is shaped! Saluting...
August 10th, 2023 17:51 - Love Letter (Teddy.15)
Your letter was an invitation to the Land of Nostalgia! Grazie!
August 10th, 2023 17:42 - It’s just another superhero movie (EvenwheniLie)
I’m already a fan of Cremation Mary and I will order a ‘Gucci plus...
August 10th, 2023 17:37 - GLITTERING MNEMONIC (Syed Hassan Aamir)
Reads like a prayer! Thank you.
August 10th, 2023 11:48 - Ice (Peto)
So the ‘toothless grinned’ man did not meet the same faith as your...
August 10th, 2023 11:46 - Ocean\'s Mercy (Pourout._)
Creative way to emote! Very descriptive and a fine poem…
August 10th, 2023 11:39 - Pewter Pot (AuburnScribbler)
Salud sir! This is an authentically masculine poem! It brought back the...
August 10th, 2023 11:37 - A Thought For a Day (Neville)
So wise to partake in universal joy! Thanks for the reminder, poet...
August 10th, 2023 11:29 - The broken piggy bank (Rew4er2nail)
I’ve been keeping my piggy bank under my mattress, for the same exacting...
August 10th, 2023 11:24 - no dad (Vividvoid14)
You are a dream fourteen year old boy and a young man we should be all...
August 10th, 2023 11:16 - Miniature Apartment Box shapes (Sunsetmet)
So pleasant and lovely! Thank you for writing in an authentically personal...
August 10th, 2023 11:11 - Moonshine on the Mere (JayGeorge)
Reads like a novel! Throughly enjoyed the read…
August 10th, 2023 11:07 - Miss (Peto)
What made this poem special and different, that you are absorbed by her...
August 10th, 2023 01:00 - For Astrid Wren My Little Bird (Neville)
We can almost see you transform into a perfect image of a grandfather,...
August 10th, 2023 00:50 - Makaveli, Biggie, Diddy & Jay-Z (Ultimate Penalty) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Art imitating life, sadly! Though none of it was fake, I presume.
August 10th, 2023 00:44 - The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair (Neville)
She met your most vital need (for bread) I can’t begin to imagine the...
August 9th, 2023 00:38 - Future Skies (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Grasping what future may bring from the looks of it, seems impossible and...
August 5th, 2023 01:08 - Afterbirth (Neville)
Words flow while you seem all focused on your daughter with empathy all...
August 5th, 2023 00:59 - Free to Ride (Gary Edward Geraci)
Creative format with deep intention…
August 5th, 2023 00:50 - Life (Bella Shepard)
You first echo some good philosophy and then the beautiful and original...
August 5th, 2023 00:47 - Stanford, my happiness (Dr.Suryaraju Mattimalla)
Your pain must be unbearable for you and your wife and all of his noble...
August 3rd, 2023 23:58 - JAZZ IS LIFE (Bobby O)
JAZZ (today) IS “LOVE SUPREME”! You wrote it again and made me listen...
August 3rd, 2023 15:50 - Whispers of the Pleasure District: A Tale of Lahore’s After-Dark Secrets (Laraib Fatima)
Women exploitation is colorless, stateless, and has many religions and...
August 3rd, 2023 11:58 - THE BROKEN MAN (Nephilim56)
You set a stunning stage for passing through: ‘blue light’ moment is...
August 3rd, 2023 08:12 - Explosive (Pop64)
First stanza sets the tone-I like that you let the emotions flow, but...
August 3rd, 2023 08:08 - Cake Walk Of Trees (Sunsetmet)
So pretty, you can taste it… Thank you for your enchanting poem,
August 3rd, 2023 08:03 - A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat (Neville)
I just imagined a boy looking at a vintage circus post card…this poem...
August 3rd, 2023 01:42 - Just a Dream I Had (Teddy.15)
He may return to another magical piazza nearby! It must be the Italian...
August 3rd, 2023 01:37 - Social Media Whore (Parisab)
He he, the poem was definitely confrontational-but I’m glad that...
August 2nd, 2023 22:35 - Social Media Whore (Parisab)
Thank you for your read and I’m glad that this was thought provokingly...
August 2nd, 2023 16:39 - Social Media Whore (Parisab)
LOL
Thank you!
August 2nd, 2023 10:23 - Things (Peto)
Chivalry in its truest form, in small and grand gestures-Great use of a...
August 2nd, 2023 10:13 - The Perfect Painting (Teddy.15)
You’ve painted another sweet picture! I love that you sound joyous while...
August 2nd, 2023 02:48 - Awake At Six. (Goldfinch60)
Be it ten or twelve
I still wake up at six
This poem sings like a...
August 2nd, 2023 01:51 - These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather (Neville)
The weather seems hazy and a bit shady-yet you still make it the most...
August 2nd, 2023 01:48 - Neurodivergent (MommaBear23)
‘As though you are hugging my soul’ We are connected to our children...
August 1st, 2023 22:35 - Is honesty the best policy in a cruel world? (Shruti14)
It’s so good that you’re growing more kind, since niceness means...
August 1st, 2023 22:07 - Tongue Spillage (Neville)
I’ve never heard a masculine brand of annoyances to sound so...
August 1st, 2023 22:03 - Mad Times of KP and I (Orchidee)
How special that your muse changes, but you remain o’ so faithful :)
August 1st, 2023 21:56 - B.E.A.U.T.Y.(Beauty) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
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August 1st, 2023 21:49 - JULY: A MOSAIC OF OPULENCE (Syed Hassan Aamir)
Intricate write which painted an elaborate picture! May I invite you to...
August 1st, 2023 21:47 - These times (Holly Anne)
Great gesture to remind us never to stop caring for our first...
August 1st, 2023 21:43 - Summer Feast (Parisab)
Thank you #hotidris ! Means a lot from an awesome story teller, such as...
August 1st, 2023 14:32 - QUIXOTE IMPOSSIBLE (Bobby O)
“On companions that usually trust me” and then you have the period....
July 30th, 2023 15:40 - In memory of Sinead O’Connor (L. B. Mek)
Such gentle words of compassion for a restless soul at last flown to...
July 30th, 2023 15:36 - Who Needs Foreplay .. When We Got Poetry (Neville)
‘Part way
down and across
some hypothetical
empty...
July 30th, 2023 15:30 - The three Eternal Knots of pain (Serene)
The emotions in this poem speak of guilt and obligation-each person does...
July 26th, 2023 21:43 - Only You Quench my Thirst (Parisab)
Thank you for your beautiful comment and visiting
July 26th, 2023 21:24 - Politricking (EvenwheniLie)
This poem has my vote!
July 26th, 2023 09:29 - Bless Me Father (Bobfallon)
Amen! Please keep writing to aid an awakening-
July 26th, 2023 09:24 - Commerce and Conscience (Harristotle)
Indeed! Please keep writing on this timely theme-
July 26th, 2023 09:22 - I Think it Only Fair to Suggest (Neville)
Inventive to make the title be your first stanza-like the ambivalence in...
July 26th, 2023 02:13 - Smooth talker (Peto)
Such an in-depth look at your muse with full commitment and...
July 26th, 2023 02:10 - Free Of Structure (Kurt Philip Behm)
‘-Immortality assuaged’ captivating words as always
July 26th, 2023 02:05 - One Tree, Many Branches (Pop64)
‘But yet, I am one tree with many branches’ great flow to your words...
July 25th, 2023 22:44 - Thank you MyPoeticSide (Hzugman)
Indeed, a great space with potential…
July 25th, 2023 22:42 - The Red MG (Bella Shepard)
Ain’t that a shame? ‘The house had weathered 60 years’ beautiful...
July 25th, 2023 22:39 - Redemption (Pincers)
Very descriptive of the earthly to divine transformation through
July 25th, 2023 22:36 - Free Of Structure (Kurt Philip Behm)
‘-Immortality assuaged’ captivating words as always
July 25th, 2023 20:45 - Lasagna (Bevan tse stuart)
Great symbolism and rhythm!
July 25th, 2023 20:44 - A Witness To Happiness (Mark The Phenomenon)
Heart warming words FR-your poem connects with the reader because your...
July 25th, 2023 20:43 - Seeing Eye (Introverted Sage)
Wisdom is truly magical!
July 23rd, 2023 19:34 - Nekky\'s Story (Joseph C Ogbonna)
Heartfelt empathy for victims of violence, which are not only the women...
July 23rd, 2023 19:33 - TRUE SIMPLE HEART (Bobby O)
“Carry nothing you must hide” a sage statement. I also am impressed by...
July 22nd, 2023 14:14 - Yasmen takes her Hajib off. (David Wakeling)
The cultural references are misplaced as a young Persian/Iranian American...
July 20th, 2023 02:57 - Yasmen takes her Hajib off. (David Wakeling)
This short story looks familiar? Has it been published elsewhere?
July 20th, 2023 02:40 - Dancing in the Street (Parisab)
The pen is much more effective in this battle-thank you for being an...
July 20th, 2023 02:31 - Apologies (Parisab)
I feel better that this poem spoke to you about an important tragedy of...
July 20th, 2023 02:28 - In the Wake of New Gods (Neville)
True description of the inception of technology and what the Apple Store...
July 20th, 2023 02:17 - Two Ants One Question (Neville)
Your poem was purely delightful…
July 20th, 2023 00:22 - Warm And Tender Love (Garth Rakumakoe)
Your poem coneys that as a child you were deeply moved by music and...
July 20th, 2023 00:18 - Poetess: that most profound, Lioness (L. B. Mek)
And I’ll huff and puff: which breaks the glass of the literary...
July 17th, 2023 22:00 - My son of 2000, My son of now (Parisab)
Thanks for the visit and the read-
July 12th, 2023 21:27 - The Hummingbird Blues (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
Oh such tender dedication to your hummingbird garden-I have planted...
July 12th, 2023 13:15 - I Remember (Bella Shepard)
Very heartfelt, so it was relatable-
July 12th, 2023 13:11 - Song of Venice Marchant after N.Rimsky-Korsakov (Ksey_Gan)
Beautiful Ode to Venice-I believe Anthony Bourdain said that it’s dying...
July 12th, 2023 13:08 - My Nevada (Teddy.15)
All the desperate things we do for love and sometimes with no...
July 10th, 2023 01:04 - Jazz Liberation (Parisab)
Thanks for visiting and yes indeed that’s the jazz spirit!
July 10th, 2023 00:59 - Today is 26.05 (Imalexx)
Good write to convey your shock, the day you lost your relative…
July 9th, 2023 13:05 - The Lady Who Liked Mangos. (David Wakeling)
Very gentle in its approach but shined bright as a poem-thanks for the...
July 9th, 2023 12:57 - Bebop. (Goldfinch60)
‘Bebop showed that music is freedom’ great appreciation line-In that...
July 9th, 2023 12:48
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