Comments on community poems by Parisab
- Urban Love (Gray0328)
Love’s brief glow in the electric night.
Great end line!
July 21st, 2024 12:11 - Winter Vigil (Gray0328)
You kept the entire rhythm as “slow and deliberate” I really like that...
July 16th, 2024 20:27 - ~> From This Day On (form Rondeu) (Thad Wilk)
Nice form for these sentiments-I hope that you will visit my scribbles…
July 16th, 2024 20:25 - The Gift of Absence (Gray0328)
Loving in silence is filled with grace-
I really enjoyed this tender...
July 7th, 2024 23:46 - Drum of Rum (Tony36)
Humorous sound from the sea… it must be great on the farm now…
July 6th, 2024 09:45 - Desolation (Peto)
Song of detachment, indeed-All are strangers to each other sometimes…...
July 6th, 2024 09:42 - Woman\'s day (DeadRose)
Sorry does not make any wrong, right… tender and compassionate...
July 5th, 2024 13:56 - Evil intended (EvenwheniLie)
Indeed to recognize “the good in men comes best when “life...
July 5th, 2024 11:33 - WAIT FOR YOUR TIME (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
‘Delay is not denial’ very inspirational….
July 5th, 2024 11:25 - Unyielding (Gray0328)
Great metaphor about how the light came through the dark mirror…Grace is...
July 5th, 2024 11:21 - ``* Global Warming form Monotetra (Thad Wilk)
Best wishes and hopes for the tree your poem spoke for and for your...
July 5th, 2024 11:18 - Dark things (Sorenbarrett)
That’s a stunning description of a night terror-great method with the...
July 5th, 2024 10:09 - HELL IS AN EMPTY SPACE (Richard Gordon Zyne)
So Grace lives in “hell” That’s hopeful-inspiring message …
July 4th, 2024 17:27 - The Backbone of a Poem (Teddy.15)
We are indeed building castles sometimes from the dungeons-yours is always...
July 4th, 2024 17:11 - Curtains Calling (Neville)
Beautiful aesthetics in all you do-nothing more beautiful than dancing...
July 4th, 2024 16:50 - CARVING (Bobby O)
What disaster we survived, Bobby-cool and devilish work …
July 4th, 2024 16:47 - A Pantheon Of Pleasantries (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Great poem, great advise-that’s why I’ve been quiet a while, LOL
July 4th, 2024 16:45 - So Dont Feel Blue (Reynaldo Casison)
This painting has a lot of depth …
July 4th, 2024 16:43 - A flaw in our design? (EvenwheniLie)
Two poems So Succinct
July 4th, 2024 16:35 - Into the Dark (Thomas W Case)
Check out my poem after months-filled with similar sentiment …be well
July 4th, 2024 16:34 - City on a Hill - an American Sonnet (JD Boye)
Palms together with fingers crossed for our City on the Hill
July 4th, 2024 16:32 - Specters At Dusk (Gray0328)
So this moment…hauntingly true…
July 4th, 2024 16:31 - Caviar (Sorenbarrett)
That’s what I feel like….
July 4th, 2024 16:30 - Joseph Robinette Biden Junior (Rew4er2nail)
Good one, check out my Old Men of Steele even worse than expected
July 4th, 2024 16:29 - ALL WE TREASURE (Bobby O)
Powerful words singing of friendships treasured! Thanks for sharing and...
May 19th, 2024 18:47 - Portrait of A Wild Garden (Neville)
LOL-Spring beats us to it! I had to visit for a while and see that the...
May 19th, 2024 10:40 - Philosophy of Me (Teddy.15)
This is truly next level, so I post after sometime. For a minute, I felt...
May 19th, 2024 10:19 - Ghost in the grocery store (Mirrorball)
Well done, escaping the ghost of your winter past. Too bad you didn’t...
April 27th, 2024 10:45 - Pure (Alan R)
You are drawing a map to your heart, but I guess they still miss the...
April 27th, 2024 10:41 - I am in love! (Lil)
This magic of first love is real! So happy for you and the lucky one with...
April 26th, 2024 01:08 - Our Skies Are Red With Blood (Teddy.15)
Dear Teddy even your parent’s account of the war has left the...
April 26th, 2024 01:00 - My Collection of War Zones and Other Disasters (Neville)
You have seen and served far and wide while keeping the heart of a...
April 26th, 2024 00:49 - Sonnets and Villanelles and Cats on my Desk (Thomas W Case)
procrastination and sobriety.
Such fuzzy black miracles.
Great double...
April 19th, 2024 22:42 - Holy Dreamscape (Parisab)
Thankful as always…
April 14th, 2024 21:08 - The Unanticipated Buzz (Gray0328)
So playful while solving nature’s rhyme:
‘One simply bursts forth in...
April 14th, 2024 09:54 - Dead End Eyes (Thomas W Case)
There is no point of return, in that dead end… so watch out and turn...
April 14th, 2024 09:48 - Two Powers (Gray0328)
I saw both ‘masters’ to befriend… but they were both lost when I...
April 14th, 2024 09:43 - My Darling London (Teddy.15)
A good problem to have-lucky to have such lover as London dear Teddy …
April 14th, 2024 09:37 - Heavy Hearts and Dandelions (Parisab)
Thank you for the kind sentiment and connecting to the words…
April 14th, 2024 09:34 - Yesterday I Met a Monster (Neville)
Wow Neville, those are the days I wish we are out sick-Although another...
April 14th, 2024 09:32 - Olive Oil (Orchidee)
A very gentle prayer, olive oil dressed this salad well -
April 14th, 2024 09:26 - Modern poet (Sorenbarrett)
Even a poem translated becomes another one ‘birth a new creature’...
April 14th, 2024 09:20 - Party of One (Mrharrell)
‘Party of one” is the what you call for both, but being alone and...
April 14th, 2024 09:15 - White Dwarf (Weltschmerz)
This is what I call an attractive poem…
April 11th, 2024 11:17 - Rooms of Life (Gray0328)
Fascinating poem depicting the heart and soul of an aging house…I was...
April 11th, 2024 11:14 - Winter is my land (Lorenz)
Stunning description of an urban winter in the city escape i haven’t...
April 11th, 2024 11:10 - Buzzard. (Goldfinch60)
So seem less and happy! Enjoyable read…
April 8th, 2024 01:52 - bad boy (Vividvoid14)
Looks like this “baddie” has grit like the poem…you are describing...
March 11th, 2024 19:35 - Pedestal (Teddy.15)
Very Bronte in style, so romantic and mystical …happy international...
March 9th, 2024 01:59 - Exquisite beauties (Reynaldo Casison)
Very cohesive and imaginative..your relationship with beauty is very...
March 9th, 2024 01:45 - Bleeding Hands (Keith Jeffries)
Very sensitive and sincere write! I can see that you empathize with the...
March 7th, 2024 11:18 - Afraid (Peto)
To see her full story, even the ‘epic’s only torn page’ is a pure...
March 7th, 2024 11:12 - The Search Continues (Thomas W Case)
Great relationship with nature and it doesn’t have to be faked…
March 2nd, 2024 11:51 - Bloody Blood Tests (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Those letters give you anxiety but helpful nevertheless-and cheers to your...
March 2nd, 2024 11:49 - Where Truth Lies (Neville)
I think that I found a treasure in your poem : in the last line: there’s...
March 2nd, 2024 11:46 - The View (Garth Rakumakoe)
This is indeed a heart of a poet! Thanks to your heart and your words for...
March 2nd, 2024 11:42 - A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab)
your comments mean a lot.. cheers to you..
March 2nd, 2024 11:32 - my reality (Vividvoid14)
His poetry crew see that
His words still jam!
(Maybe the last two...
March 1st, 2024 18:01 - my reality (Vividvoid14)
Glad…Bobby and I got your poetry back …
March 1st, 2024 17:59 - Quitting the fight (Gregoria)
A moving piece, can see how the heart has become disengaged…
March 1st, 2024 14:27 - my reality (Vividvoid14)
“this smile to me its just arts and crafts”
Brilliant line,...
March 1st, 2024 11:55 - Vuitton Clerihew (Doggerel Dave)
That always annoys me (as a tourist.) And the fakes make the fair pricing...
March 1st, 2024 11:29 - THEATRE (Nephilim56)
You’ve set a real stage on this one! Great read….
March 1st, 2024 11:24 - Arc (Neville)
Your descriptions have their uniques touch on every image, including a...
March 1st, 2024 11:22 - It was hefted upon a breeze - (Amy Michelle Mosier)
I really like your unique imagery and the flow to your poem, always…
March 1st, 2024 11:19 - Dreaming (Peto)
And that’s quiet a dream, more like a bash, Peto! Glad to see this...
March 1st, 2024 11:16 - Slumberbashing with Raven (Teddy.15)
Mascara and all!
Fabulous, Teddy!
March 1st, 2024 11:13 - Lost papers of a troubled man (EvenwheniLie)
“cultural dystrophy that serves as a trophy to victims trying to be...
March 1st, 2024 11:11 - Lark Ascending (Vaughan Williams) (Cassie58)
then moves slowly upwards
imitating a lark, the messenger
of a brand...
March 1st, 2024 10:54 - A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab)
I truly appreciate your refreshing view of this piece, Cassie:)
March 1st, 2024 10:47 - If I Were To Write A Poem (SNB)
Very clever in concept…
February 28th, 2024 11:03 - Memorize - A Sonnet (JD Boye)
difficult technique with original insert of Shakespeare..good write…
February 28th, 2024 00:31 - WITH EYES (Serhat Doğan)
Best not to talk if you want to speak truthfully, and eyes will tell about...
February 28th, 2024 00:22 - Falsetto (Introverted Sage)
Dark with Poe imagery, and of course original …
February 28th, 2024 00:17 - Let yourself feel love (Reynaldo Casison)
I especially like this work, it’s very intimate and as if you’re...
February 25th, 2024 11:51 - LEGENDARY MR. ROBINSON (Bobby O)
They had other plans for him, to parade him center stage, he was so...
February 25th, 2024 11:49 - God is an Artist (Thomas W Case)
And sometimes, we succeed.
And it is good,
and He is well...
February 25th, 2024 11:40 - Three Summers (Neville)
One is afraid that after three summers , they might fall. Love the title...
February 25th, 2024 11:32 - lovely sight (Vividvoid14)
Your words light a candle to face the dark. Ignorance is the weapon of...
February 25th, 2024 11:27 - It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun (Teddy.15)
To praise ones essence in the hard labor of a sonnet, is so brave and...
February 25th, 2024 11:17 - Inconsistencies (Sorenbarrett)
Thoughtful and lively ideas from your poem! Whether real as in faith or...
February 19th, 2024 14:47 - On Love Once More (Ian Konopatzke)
Refreshingly classic, in style and form….
Nice write!
February 19th, 2024 14:41 - The Transition Between the Seasons (JosephineAdams)
Great metaphors for the changing of the season (especially that her eyes...
February 19th, 2024 14:39 - Upon Finding a Smile (Neville)
Just the simple mention of the smile, brightened up the poem! Mine have...
February 19th, 2024 14:37 - I Heard It In A Song (Garth Rakumakoe)
There is so much good music out there which connect with the heart, and...
February 19th, 2024 14:34 - Freedom, A Ruthless Fight (Mehrangaiz)
Very good write, describing medical treatment with surgical precision and...
February 18th, 2024 16:28 - Paddy McGee (Teddy.15)
LOL, no accountability for that cringe-worthy Mc Gee. Indeed it must be...
February 18th, 2024 12:59 - Slayer (2781)
Thanks for reminders of the much needed faith…
February 18th, 2024 12:44 - Crush (Cloie)
Very exquisite and fresh imagery!
February 18th, 2024 12:40 - Letter to my parents (Lil)
You really touched my heart with your letter poem. You are generous and...
February 18th, 2024 12:35 - Searching for Nod (Thomas W Case)
Burnt out on senses, like a sigh of relief after a night at a New...
February 17th, 2024 23:33 - Why Not Just Call it a Day (Neville)
I don’t know the back story, Nev, but this one is relentless! I hope...
February 17th, 2024 23:29 - Moonsong hymn (Reynaldo Casison)
Lovely imaging!
February 17th, 2024 23:25 - FATAL ARROGANCE (Bobby O)
Love the urgency in your play by play… conducting as you were right...
February 17th, 2024 23:21 - fusion poem (Vividvoid14)
Good job, I’ll join like this:
“Burning the Demon” of...
February 16th, 2024 20:13 - fusion poem (Vividvoid14)
Hey Vivid, to start your fusioned poem go to your public profile and...
February 16th, 2024 18:04 - I AM AFRICA (Aloo Denish Obiero)
Very powerful and May Africa continue to keep its legacy and thrive in...
February 16th, 2024 18:00 - Footsteps (John Lee)
fascinating and captivating! Great use of heart chambers turning to...
February 16th, 2024 03:22 - Photo Album (Garth Rakumakoe)
Your words are elevated and supreme in this poem. I am moved by the...
February 16th, 2024 03:06 - Fantasia (Teddy.15)
Brava! Fatto a Firenze:)
February 16th, 2024 02:53
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