Comments on community poems by Parisab

• Fruit Trees in Every Room (Thomas W Case) The title itself is poetry ..,
  June 13th, 2025 14:55
• Looking Back (Garth Rakumakoe) I love the cinema reference and then you scripting your own stunning...
  June 13th, 2025 14:53
• Off the charts 📉 (Vividvoid14) Sometimes you are stronger than even your mom-keep writing and give her...
  June 13th, 2025 14:47
• One More Open Verdict For the Road (Neville) She was looking for a safe place to land on and fell on her head instead!...
  May 17th, 2025 19:20
• You will argue (Sorenbarrett) Coming from your heart, it will land on the reader’s mind -it’s...
  April 19th, 2025 13:58
• Vicissitude (Garth Rakumakoe) Our graves share measuring tapes where the sky and horizon meet and...
  April 6th, 2025 00:19
• Bitter Medicine (Garth Rakumakoe) We are indeed the poets of our own fate, whilst celebrating memories of...
  April 6th, 2025 00:16
• Too Soon To Crawl (ADarkerMind) Few look beneath the soil surface-the treacherous path of the roots...
  March 17th, 2025 12:35
• Muddy shoes (Sorenbarrett) So true to this season of mud-your words make this sound like my dilemma...
  March 17th, 2025 12:09
• Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates) (Teddy.15) Technical and sensitive-nice pairing Teddy :)
  March 17th, 2025 12:03
• Bard (Sorenbarrett) Lots of creativity went into this enigma of poetry -thanks for sharing
  March 17th, 2025 12:02
• They (Tony36) Unfortunate, but feels true…thought provoking
  March 17th, 2025 12:00
• The Artist\'s Ascent (Gray0328) Life is the only masterpiece…thought provoking as always
  March 17th, 2025 11:59
• show me your eyes (Sheta) I missed out when you showed me your eyes Aesthete, I am in the...
  March 17th, 2025 11:48
• sheen of young love (Arqios) This Smiths’ song is a perfect pairing with your fresh harvest of a...
  February 18th, 2025 17:45
• To L. B. (Sorenbarrett) I appreciate you dedicating these words to a poet I admired-I also wish...
  February 18th, 2025 02:57
• Moments (Cassie58) Beautiful connection to nature and re-birth
  February 18th, 2025 02:33
• My Bed For The Night (Poetic Licence) Glad you listened as a way of helping-good write
  February 17th, 2025 03:35
• MidNight Haikus (Reynaldo Casison) You painted a collection of beautiful sunsets Reynaldo Casison
  February 17th, 2025 00:55
• Sussing the Pot Plant (Neville) Gardens always help the marriage grow, especially when looking through the...
  February 16th, 2025 23:00
• WHEN TO STOP (Bobby O) That non-judgmental stance is a great pose to practice-I catch myself...
  February 16th, 2025 22:56
• I\'ll Be Home (Thomas W Case) Your poems always house, homes without boundaries-I really like this one
  February 16th, 2025 22:48
• Record Player (Sorenbarrett) Old music sounds different to us now-your words sounded of timeless music
  February 16th, 2025 22:45
• The Quiet Sanctum (Gray0328) Divine messaging about seeking the silence in faith -great word play
  February 16th, 2025 22:41
• Imagining the Impossible (Teddy.15) Great inquiry about the heart ❤️
  February 16th, 2025 22:39
• Plus ou moins (Poetaldo) Plus ou moins Je te le dis en français Ou avez-vous mal? mais réponds...
  January 30th, 2025 21:34
• FOXES IN THE TREES (Bobby O) I like everything about this. As if you and Bukowsky were walking in...
  December 16th, 2024 03:19
• Lorenz (Vividvoid14) Whatever their name, they are ignorant and certainly not a philosopher,...
  December 13th, 2024 15:59
• wind woman (Sheta) Beautiful tone and energy…
  December 13th, 2024 15:52
• Afterwards #2   (Neville) This is Shakespeare being cheeky-love the imagery of “Dark as a drawer...
  December 13th, 2024 15:51
• Mistakes (Vividvoid14) Your words are maturing and your spirit is always pure and you! Shine on,...
  December 13th, 2024 15:47
• Peace on earth, good will (Sorenbarrett) Ideals are fully received at this time (of the year:) May these loving...
  December 13th, 2024 15:46
• The Vertigo of Eternity (Gray0328) Divine and a lovely description…
  December 13th, 2024 15:44
• My Favorite Things (Garth Rakumakoe) “Classical paintings under the everyday sun” This poem has such a...
  December 13th, 2024 15:42
• Star (Vividvoid14) You are already shining bright, Vivid! I’m so glad to see you in the...
  November 26th, 2024 01:41
• If Only Things Had Been Different (Neville) Acknowledging, rather than apologizing, seems more real…I believe, it...
  November 1st, 2024 11:15
• Aftermath (Teddy.15) Love your satire, always! I tried to treat them but alas, they’re all in...
  November 1st, 2024 11:09
• Samhain Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) The thinning veil, as autumn nights descend, Reveals the breath of those...
  November 1st, 2024 11:05
• Time to Live (Arqios) Dawn is always fascinating and full of promise! Through trials faced,...
  November 1st, 2024 10:56
• Sleep – Where and How to Find it (Doggerel Dave) I’ve always felt the same about the simple things-Grandmothers’...
  October 26th, 2024 10:44
• ~> Mary, Mary, Quite Contrary -form Parody- (Thad Wilk) Wow-truly scary -but I’m afraid he’s real and out of his...
  October 26th, 2024 10:36
• Sixty Minute Slumberbash (Teddy.15) He he, I wish it were that simple for us on the right side of the...
  October 26th, 2024 10:33
• The Consolation of Boethius (Gray0328) Sounds like he is free at all cost…Your work is always powerful, sir….
  October 26th, 2024 10:29
• Halfway to Hanoi (Neville) Honest and exploitative-not fluffy- with a dash of regret? Thank you for...
  October 26th, 2024 10:26
• My Alice (Thomas W Case) Powerful and raw with precision…
  October 26th, 2024 10:19
• What I left behind (Sorenbarrett) Hidden messages from nature, for the wise to hear …
  October 26th, 2024 10:17
• If You Were Me (Gray0328) Important ideas and mighty wisdom… Glad that you aren’t silent,
  September 23rd, 2024 01:10
• SOLAR POWER (Bobby O) Beautiful word play, this poem is an elevated form of your...
  September 23rd, 2024 01:08
• And All That\'s Gold (Teddy.15) warm sunshine beaming through the, soon to be skeleton of the great...
  September 5th, 2024 23:49
• Remontant Hydrangeas (Gray0328) Two lives converge within one tender bloom Old and new embrace, the...
  September 5th, 2024 23:46
• Perfectly white (Anabasova) Sometimes opposites make of the best pairing in poetry and...
  August 27th, 2024 12:55
• () Dialectics indeed! So fond of this pairing!
  August 16th, 2024 13:49
• () Dialects, indeed! So fond of the spectrum….
  August 16th, 2024 13:48
• No One But Us Ghosts & a Haiku - Woken by Doves (Neville) I really like this pairing with the haiku-like a glass of well aged Shiraz...
  August 16th, 2024 13:47
• THIS DAY A WINDMILL (Bobby O) So still and motionless is this windmill…hardly a description of Mr...
  August 16th, 2024 01:10
• Silent colors (Sorenbarrett) The whole of nature, describing primary colors…very inventive….
  August 16th, 2024 01:03
• Because My Darling It all Belongs to You (Teddy.15) Your love language displayed on the beautiful stage you described in your...
  August 16th, 2024 00:54
• The Champion of Coney Island (Gray0328) Your poem is actually operatic and elegant even though is describing an...
  August 6th, 2024 00:13
• NO SENSE GUESSING (Bobby O) Always are the times that you own your words and then they can take...
  August 5th, 2024 23:59
• () May you be always drunk on love, no matter whom you’ll cull…
  August 5th, 2024 11:36
• Immaterial Things Such as These (Neville) Writers are desperate people and when they stop being desperate they...
  August 5th, 2024 02:14
• Montana (Thomas W Case) True whispers from under the bridge, reminding us about dreams long...
  August 5th, 2024 02:02
• Natures Wonder In Life. (Goldfinch60) Your words connected like the interconnectedness of nature-enjoyable...
  August 5th, 2024 01:54
• Family Secrets (Garth Rakumakoe) Words revealing of the hidden and closed off Family Secrets-like the...
  July 27th, 2024 18:28
• INCIDENCE (Bobby O) Leaning into “nonchalance” is a “manufactured reality”-thought...
  July 27th, 2024 18:23
• Urban Love (Gray0328) Love’s brief glow in the electric night. Great end line!
  July 21st, 2024 12:11
• Winter Vigil (Gray0328) You kept the entire rhythm as “slow and deliberate” I really like that...
  July 16th, 2024 20:27
• ~> From This Day On (form Rondeu) (Thad Wilk) Nice form for these sentiments-I hope that you will visit my scribbles…
  July 16th, 2024 20:25
• The Gift of Absence (Gray0328) Loving in silence is filled with grace- I really enjoyed this tender...
  July 7th, 2024 23:46
• Drum of Rum (Tony36) Humorous sound from the sea… it must be great on the farm now…
  July 6th, 2024 09:45
• Desolation (Peto) Song of detachment, indeed-All are strangers to each other sometimes…...
  July 6th, 2024 09:42
• Evil intended (EvenwheniLie) Indeed to recognize “the good in men comes best when “life...
  July 5th, 2024 11:33
• WAIT FOR YOUR TIME (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) ‘Delay is not denial’ very inspirational….
  July 5th, 2024 11:25
• Unyielding (Gray0328) Great metaphor about how the light came through the dark mirror…Grace is...
  July 5th, 2024 11:21
• ``* Global Warming form Monotetra (Thad Wilk) Best wishes and hopes for the tree your poem spoke for and for your...
  July 5th, 2024 11:18
• Dark things (Sorenbarrett) That’s a stunning description of a night terror-great method with the...
  July 5th, 2024 10:09
• HELL IS AN EMPTY SPACE (R. Gordon Zyne) So Grace lives in “hell” That’s hopeful-inspiring message …
  July 4th, 2024 17:27
• The Backbone of a Poem (Teddy.15) We are indeed building castles sometimes from the dungeons-yours is always...
  July 4th, 2024 17:11
• Curtains Calling (Neville) Beautiful aesthetics in all you do-nothing more beautiful than dancing...
  July 4th, 2024 16:50
• CARVING (Bobby O) What disaster we survived, Bobby-cool and devilish work …
  July 4th, 2024 16:47
• A Pantheon Of Pleasantries (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Great poem, great advise-that’s why I’ve been quiet a while, LOL
  July 4th, 2024 16:45
• So Dont Feel Blue (Reynaldo Casison) This painting has a lot of depth …
  July 4th, 2024 16:43
• A flaw in our design? (EvenwheniLie) Two poems So Succinct
  July 4th, 2024 16:35
• Into the Dark (Thomas W Case) Check out my poem after months-filled with similar sentiment …be well
  July 4th, 2024 16:34
• City on a Hill - an American Sonnet  (JD Boye) Palms together with fingers crossed for our City on the Hill
  July 4th, 2024 16:32
• Specters At Dusk (Gray0328) So this moment…hauntingly true…
  July 4th, 2024 16:31
• Caviar (Sorenbarrett) That’s what I feel like….
  July 4th, 2024 16:30
• Joseph Robinette Biden Junior (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Good one, check out my Old Men of Steele even worse than expected
  July 4th, 2024 16:29
• ALL WE TREASURE (Bobby O) Powerful words singing of friendships treasured! Thanks for sharing and...
  May 19th, 2024 18:47
• Portrait of A Wild Garden (Neville) LOL-Spring beats us to it! I had to visit for a while and see that the...
  May 19th, 2024 10:40
• Philosophy of Me (Teddy.15) This is truly next level, so I post after sometime. For a minute, I felt...
  May 19th, 2024 10:19
• Ghost in the grocery store (Mirrorball) Well done, escaping the ghost of your winter past. Too bad you didn’t...
  April 27th, 2024 10:45
• Pure (Alan R) You are drawing a map to your heart, but I guess they still miss the...
  April 27th, 2024 10:41
• I am in love! (Hey!) This magic of first love is real! So happy for you and the lucky one with...
  April 26th, 2024 01:08
• Our Skies Are Red With Blood (Teddy.15) Dear Teddy even your parent’s account of the war has left the...
  April 26th, 2024 01:00
• My Collection of War Zones and Other Disasters (Neville) You have seen and served far and wide while keeping the heart of a...
  April 26th, 2024 00:49
• Sonnets and Villanelles and Cats on my Desk (Thomas W Case) procrastination and sobriety. Such fuzzy black miracles. Great double...
  April 19th, 2024 22:42
• Holy Dreamscape (Parisab) Thankful as always…
  April 14th, 2024 21:08
• The Unanticipated Buzz (Gray0328) So playful while solving nature’s rhyme: ‘One simply bursts forth in...
  April 14th, 2024 09:54
• Dead End Eyes (Thomas W Case) There is no point of return, in that dead end… so watch out and turn...
  April 14th, 2024 09:48