Comments on community poems by Parisab

• \"The haunted office\" ; 14 June, 2023 (Soman Ragavan) Really interesting concept and presentation!
  June 14th, 2023 11:53
• Azorica (Meheli Chatterjee) I can see your admiration of the world from the eyes of a scientist and...
  June 14th, 2023 11:50
• November 6th 2021 8:30pm (Love-Me-Softly) Thank you for sharing, the tone and the imagery of your poem is also bold...
  June 14th, 2023 11:44
• At Mars Hotel (Pacifique Niyitanga) I like your enigmatic style, please don’t let anyone to force you to...
  June 14th, 2023 11:39
• My Embrace (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Music in reliving our memories: enjoyed the musical and piano references,...
  June 12th, 2023 11:22
• At 10 pm (Pacifique Niyitanga) Few words instructing scenes to come alive: I like the vagueness:...
  June 12th, 2023 10:41
• Ahh! That first cup (Hzugman) Simple pleasures, no more
  June 12th, 2023 10:25
• Love Letter to God (Parisab) Thank you dear sir!
  June 4th, 2023 20:31
• No More Blues for These Tired Eyes (Neville) Your words have the gift of sight, May all your senses be right.
  June 3rd, 2023 00:02
• Justice System Cruelty (Love-Me-Softly) I’m afraid the Truth and the law may overlap but are not the same-I hope...
  June 2nd, 2023 07:19
• Forever Losses (Parisab) Thank you LB for never forgetting! Great to see your return and your...
  June 2nd, 2023 07:07
• Forever Losses (Parisab) Thank you for connecting with this poem’s emotions. I appreciate the...
  May 27th, 2023 22:23
• SUDDENLY AWKWARD (Bobby O) Writing about past impressions, like looking for footprints on the...
  May 26th, 2023 20:49
• Forever Losses (Parisab) I am grateful for your attention and acknowledgement of our veterans. I am...
  May 26th, 2023 15:07
• Forever Losses (Parisab) I will do so, sir-my father was a vet and so are some of my patients who...
  May 26th, 2023 12:42
• A Call for Ears (Rohan Regi) “A mind turning deaf to its own voice” great description of the...
  May 25th, 2023 02:01
• Shyless Rose (Fay Slimm.) And those shy roses have the sharpest thorns-my grand dame roses in the...
  May 25th, 2023 01:55
• On Memorial Day (Peter Gates) Deserving words for the heroes of the past and the future. Great read.
  May 25th, 2023 01:28
• FACING HARD TRUTH (Bobby O) Great and brave write-using intellectualized terms to serve one’s...
  May 21st, 2023 01:54
• BLACK DYNAMITE (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I find the genre so appealing-the black independent movies made light (and...
  May 21st, 2023 01:46
• Love Potion No.19 (Parisab) Thank you and Stay thirsty poet friend…
  May 21st, 2023 01:36
• Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain (Parisab) Thank you for the close read poet friend-The texts gathered the final days...
  May 21st, 2023 01:31
• Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain (Parisab) Thank you for your attention to the poem, as well as your investment...
  May 20th, 2023 21:48
• Woke (Neville) The poem was engaging and I actually wished for the sun coming out in the...
  May 20th, 2023 17:48
• Embracing Life\'s Dance (Muhammad Nasrullah Khan) Beautiful job describing life to a woman in a creative way…
  May 20th, 2023 17:44
• Sins to Pardon (Sorenbarrett) Beautiful twist to an ancient story…
  May 20th, 2023 17:41
• iv. (Verona) So true!
  May 20th, 2023 17:39
• Miraculous (Gary Edward Geraci) Beautiful spin to a sacred story…
  May 20th, 2023 17:38
• The Most Valuable Treasure (J.Edse) I can sense the attention to detail and connecting it to the mystery of...
  May 20th, 2023 17:37
• Just Around The Corner (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla) The poem never stops dreaming and hoping, even under unpleasant and dire...
  May 16th, 2023 13:10
• Adventure at the Airport (Reflections Corporate Training Hub) You immerse the reader into the adventure-good inspiration for those who...
  May 16th, 2023 13:06
• CLICHE’ NO LONGER (Bobby O) ‘When again love visits,Thank God that glorious day This story then...
  May 16th, 2023 01:54
• Redefining (Fay Slimm.) Both the background and foreground are “unruffled” and calming-the...
  May 16th, 2023 01:42
• Mantis Praying (Neville) For sure women can also be violent and dangerous, but interestingly in...
  May 15th, 2023 02:01
• 3 NERDS WALKED INTO A V BAR (Bobby O) You taught them in the true southern gentlemanly fashion, sir.
  May 12th, 2023 14:10
• The bane to my existence (Eldian_Devil137) There is maturity in the words of silence. Your poem is received loud and...
  May 12th, 2023 11:12
• Uplifting Utterance (Orchidee) Joyous!
  May 12th, 2023 03:02
• Love Potion No.19 (Parisab) Thank you for your great power of observation and your elevated expertise...
  May 12th, 2023 01:54
• Bye Bye By Abby Rose wise (Abby1234) You will continue to write great poetry: if you keep your mind...
  May 11th, 2023 14:29
• New Deal (Kurt Philip Behm) ‘This roiling morbid funk’ describes the texture of this great poem-I...
  May 11th, 2023 14:19
• The Sins of Us (Parisab) Thank you. I’m looking forward to the literary exchange.
  May 11th, 2023 01:04
• Still Some Way to Go (Neville) I see this as complete, you responded and chose the direction of your...
  May 10th, 2023 14:10
• Camber Powered (Fay Slimm.) ‘Monotone minds by your own alchemic bosom’ I see you are enjoying...
  May 10th, 2023 11:27
• Time Sojourned (Kurt Philip Behm) Moving freely through different ways of art, from lyrics to rhyme-It’s a...
  May 10th, 2023 11:15
• Fields (Joakim Bergen) Beautiful appreciation of the field of nature!
  May 10th, 2023 11:13
• FAITH (Bobby O) As once said first stanza is gifted by God
  May 10th, 2023 11:08
• 300 (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I also invite you to search for the images of Palace of Xerxes in...
  May 10th, 2023 03:14
• 300 (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Well written poem about a movie poet friend, but Speaking of Hollywood,...
  May 10th, 2023 02:55
• Practical Pursuits (Orchidee) “The God of peace sanctify you Spirit, soul, and body too” These...
  May 10th, 2023 00:23
• Eine Idylle (Olaf Gatermann) Thank you for the English translation, as the poet should translate their...
  May 10th, 2023 00:08
• Treading The Path Of Life (Bella Shepard) Let there be light! Great descriptive build up-I wonder if you find Mary...
  May 7th, 2023 15:36
• Love Potion No.19 (Parisab) Thank you for the care you put in reading this
  May 7th, 2023 10:39
• Woman (Peter Gates) True appreciation of a woman, makes a man-wise words, sir
  May 7th, 2023 10:38
• Love Potion No.19 (Parisab) Thank you for your sagacious viewing of the poem, poet friend-I guess as...
  May 7th, 2023 10:18
• Free Falling (L. R. Thompson Poetry) I’m glad that the vigor of nature brought your creativity...
  May 7th, 2023 09:59
• Met Gala Mason Muppets (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) The Fashion designed a Theatre of Fools-even the talented ones are made to...
  May 7th, 2023 09:54
• coronated (Arqios) This poem was more interesting and authentic than watching the (real)...
  May 7th, 2023 09:51
• metamorphosis (Amysavciuc) Good experimentation in describing the growing and changing nature of pain...
  May 7th, 2023 09:43
• Pomegranate (Parisab) Hi again poet friend-the theory is that eve’s Apple was actually a...
  May 6th, 2023 22:49
• My birthday tomorrow (Ok Waleed) 25? It is, your poetry is sure more mature-happy birthday!
  May 6th, 2023 18:21
• Graduation day (2781) Significant day in a parent’s life: the tension is present in an...
  May 6th, 2023 11:31
• PRAYER OF THANKS (Bobby O) Divine and joyful! As though your words were touched by the holy spirit...
  May 6th, 2023 01:25
• Flight (Parisab) Your thoughtful insights are extremely impressive-your level of...
  May 6th, 2023 01:13
• This is Love (Parisab) Thank you dear poet besides your pensive look at the chorus, there is...
  May 5th, 2023 20:21
• Pomegranate (Parisab) *spend of your time resources
  May 4th, 2023 22:30
• Pomegranate (Parisab) You are so kind to I’ve of your time resources to familiarize yourself...
  May 4th, 2023 22:29
• Midnight Flight (Parisab) You are most gracious for giving this a second look-I experimented with...
  May 4th, 2023 22:26
• Foolish Child (EvenwheniLie) The bloodsucker reference “being too busy being stylish” is right on...
  May 4th, 2023 22:13
• A generation Z fairytale (EvenwheniLie) Nice flow to this poem-enjoyable and dynamic-thanks for introducing a...
  May 4th, 2023 22:06
• MISSED TAKES ( alternate version) (Bobby O) This is a good demonstration of why songs are instinctual and stories are...
  May 4th, 2023 00:13
• A Silence So Serene and Chill (Oscar Auliq-Ice) ‘the stillness of your nights’ sound so idyllic-I invite you to...
  April 30th, 2023 02:02
• Your Morning, My Evening  (Dr. Shailesh Gupta Veer) No matter the time, you only see her smile- This kind of love-makes this...
  April 30th, 2023 01:49
• Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G (Bobby O) This piece stands tall and complete. Thank you for sharing your knowledge...
  April 29th, 2023 19:28
• Waves (Lisztmsv) Never seen the ‘exchange for power’ in describing the final moments of...
  April 29th, 2023 16:39
• Maze Of Words (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) I aim to be a ‘dedicated’ ‘Elated Specimen’ to see beyond ‘plays...
  April 29th, 2023 16:36
• Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G (Bobby O) Sir B-Your poem is fire-I’ld gate crash that party with all those...
  April 29th, 2023 16:25
• Buried in Blue (FallingAwake2) Sorry for your loss-I’m so touched by your poem honoring his memory
  April 29th, 2023 02:21
• MISSING AUNT CAROL (Bobby O) I like how your poem took off with bebop fast tempo-great that she still...
  April 29th, 2023 01:16
• Please Quit The Fight (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla) May the world hear your plea-May peace be upon us all
  April 29th, 2023 01:06
• Buried in Blue (FallingAwake2) Very special-the 2nd thru 4th stanza could even stand on its own
  April 29th, 2023 00:46
• TEN O’ CLOCK LEAD IN (Bobby O) Great words to ‘awaken’ the not so far past-No one wins these wars-but...
  April 29th, 2023 00:42
• M.A.M.A.(Good Ol\' Mama) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) Sorry for your loss-most endearing words to describe her: ‘A.’ ...
  April 25th, 2023 19:12
• Sad as fuck by Abby Rose Wise (Abby1234) Hi dear poet-keep expressing your feelings in your poetry-I hope that you...
  April 25th, 2023 01:08
• Tears (Thinkerbell) I like how the message shifted and tears represented different emotions...
  April 23rd, 2023 19:46
• Forever Free (Gary Edward Geraci) Sorry for your loss and your thoughtful grievance
  April 22nd, 2023 13:25
• The intelligence gap (Hzugman) And forever more, good poet
  April 22nd, 2023 13:22
• All for Naught (Arobot) Good job emoting naturally, just like earth
  April 22nd, 2023 13:21
• perfect day (Waynechester) Young love’s forever-keep writing
  April 22nd, 2023 13:18
• Dancing in the Street (Parisab) Thank you for your attention and comments about my poems dear sir
  April 22nd, 2023 10:19
• Midnight Flight (Parisab) I was experimenting writing (and editing) in a dreamlike state:) Many...
  April 22nd, 2023 02:46
• Drug Dealing Deviants (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Action Packed-sad truths
  April 22nd, 2023 02:34
• WHAT IS (Fay Slimm.) Very experiential-great read
  April 22nd, 2023 02:32
• Godless Gloominess (Orchidee) Warmed the heart-much needed
  April 22nd, 2023 02:31
• Coonology (EvenwheniLie) Strong and reflective-Thanks for sharing
  April 22nd, 2023 01:49
• It\'s You (Samriddhi) Nice flow
  April 22nd, 2023 01:38
• Requiem Of A Blame (Man With No Name) Great use of imagery and rhythm-theme is clever as well
  April 22nd, 2023 01:36
• Like a Mother (Dr. Shailesh Gupta Veer) Beautiful use of refrain and emphasis on the rhythm-thanks for sharing
  April 22nd, 2023 01:17
• Triple Ice (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Important topic to tackle dear poet-I’m still optimistic about this...
  April 17th, 2023 22:12
• Holy Amnesia (Parisab) Thank you dear poet-I guess I see our memory loss, as a function of the...
  April 17th, 2023 18:49
• Friends make therapy cheaper (Ok Waleed) You’ve said it all in your three great stanzas
  April 15th, 2023 22:03