Comments on community poems by Parisab

• Love Potion No.19 (Parisab) Thank you for the care you put in reading this
  May 7th, 2023 10:39
• Woman (Peter Gates) True appreciation of a woman, makes a man-wise words, sir
  May 7th, 2023 10:38
• Love Potion No.19 (Parisab) Thank you for your sagacious viewing of the poem, poet friend-I guess as...
  May 7th, 2023 10:18
• Free Falling (L. R. Thompson Poetry) I’m glad that the vigor of nature brought your creativity...
  May 7th, 2023 09:59
• Met Gala Mason Muppets (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) The Fashion designed a Theatre of Fools-even the talented ones are made to...
  May 7th, 2023 09:54
• coronated (Arqios) This poem was more interesting and authentic than watching the (real)...
  May 7th, 2023 09:51
• metamorphosis (Amysavciuc) Good experimentation in describing the growing and changing nature of pain...
  May 7th, 2023 09:43
• Pomegranate (Parisab) Hi again poet friend-the theory is that eve’s Apple was actually a...
  May 6th, 2023 22:49
• My birthday tomorrow (Ok Waleed) 25? It is, your poetry is sure more mature-happy birthday!
  May 6th, 2023 18:21
• Graduation day (2781) Significant day in a parent’s life: the tension is present in an...
  May 6th, 2023 11:31
• PRAYER OF THANKS (Bobby O) Divine and joyful! As though your words were touched by the holy spirit...
  May 6th, 2023 01:25
• Flight (Parisab) Your thoughtful insights are extremely impressive-your level of...
  May 6th, 2023 01:13
• This is Love (Parisab) Thank you dear poet besides your pensive look at the chorus, there is...
  May 5th, 2023 20:21
• Pomegranate (Parisab) *spend of your time resources
  May 4th, 2023 22:30
• Pomegranate (Parisab) You are so kind to I’ve of your time resources to familiarize yourself...
  May 4th, 2023 22:29
• Midnight Flight (Parisab) You are most gracious for giving this a second look-I experimented with...
  May 4th, 2023 22:26
• Foolish Child (EvenwheniLie) The bloodsucker reference “being too busy being stylish” is right on...
  May 4th, 2023 22:13
• A generation Z fairytale (EvenwheniLie) Nice flow to this poem-enjoyable and dynamic-thanks for introducing a...
  May 4th, 2023 22:06
• MISSED TAKES ( alternate version) (Bobby O) This is a good demonstration of why songs are instinctual and stories are...
  May 4th, 2023 00:13
• A Silence So Serene and Chill (Oscar Auliq-Ice) ‘the stillness of your nights’ sound so idyllic-I invite you to...
  April 30th, 2023 02:02
• Your Morning, My Evening  (Dr. Shailesh Gupta Veer) No matter the time, you only see her smile- This kind of love-makes this...
  April 30th, 2023 01:49
• Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G (Bobby O) This piece stands tall and complete. Thank you for sharing your knowledge...
  April 29th, 2023 19:28
• Waves (Lisztmsv) Never seen the ‘exchange for power’ in describing the final moments of...
  April 29th, 2023 16:39
• Maze Of Words (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) I aim to be a ‘dedicated’ ‘Elated Specimen’ to see beyond ‘plays...
  April 29th, 2023 16:36
• Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G (Bobby O) Sir B-Your poem is fire-I’ld gate crash that party with all those...
  April 29th, 2023 16:25
• Buried in Blue (FallingAwake2) Sorry for your loss-I’m so touched by your poem honoring his memory
  April 29th, 2023 02:21
• MISSING AUNT CAROL (Bobby O) I like how your poem took off with bebop fast tempo-great that she still...
  April 29th, 2023 01:16
• Please Quit The Fight (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla) May the world hear your plea-May peace be upon us all
  April 29th, 2023 01:06
• Buried in Blue (FallingAwake2) Very special-the 2nd thru 4th stanza could even stand on its own
  April 29th, 2023 00:46
• TEN O’ CLOCK LEAD IN (Bobby O) Great words to ‘awaken’ the not so far past-No one wins these wars-but...
  April 29th, 2023 00:42
• M.A.M.A.(Good Ol\' Mama) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) Sorry for your loss-most endearing words to describe her: ‘A.’ ...
  April 25th, 2023 19:12
• Sad as fuck by Abby Rose Wise (Abby1234) Hi dear poet-keep expressing your feelings in your poetry-I hope that you...
  April 25th, 2023 01:08
• Tears (Thinkerbell) I like how the message shifted and tears represented different emotions...
  April 23rd, 2023 19:46
• Forever Free (Gary Edward Geraci) Sorry for your loss and your thoughtful grievance
  April 22nd, 2023 13:25
• The intelligence gap (Hzugman) And forever more, good poet
  April 22nd, 2023 13:22
• All for Naught (Arobot) Good job emoting naturally, just like earth
  April 22nd, 2023 13:21
• perfect day (Waynechester) Young love’s forever-keep writing
  April 22nd, 2023 13:18
• Dancing in the Street (Parisab) Thank you for your attention and comments about my poems dear sir
  April 22nd, 2023 10:19
• Midnight Flight (Parisab) I was experimenting writing (and editing) in a dreamlike state:) Many...
  April 22nd, 2023 02:46
• Drug Dealing Deviants (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Action Packed-sad truths
  April 22nd, 2023 02:34
• WHAT IS (Fay Slimm.) Very experiential-great read
  April 22nd, 2023 02:32
• Godless Gloominess (Orchidee) Warmed the heart-much needed
  April 22nd, 2023 02:31
• Coonology (EvenwheniLie) Strong and reflective-Thanks for sharing
  April 22nd, 2023 01:49
• It\'s You (Samriddhi) Nice flow
  April 22nd, 2023 01:38
• Requiem Of A Blame (Man With No Name) Great use of imagery and rhythm-theme is clever as well
  April 22nd, 2023 01:36
• Like a Mother (Dr. Shailesh Gupta Veer) Beautiful use of refrain and emphasis on the rhythm-thanks for sharing
  April 22nd, 2023 01:17
• Triple Ice (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Important topic to tackle dear poet-I’m still optimistic about this...
  April 17th, 2023 22:12
• Holy Amnesia (Parisab) Thank you dear poet-I guess I see our memory loss, as a function of the...
  April 17th, 2023 18:49
• Friends make therapy cheaper (Ok Waleed) You’ve said it all in your three great stanzas
  April 15th, 2023 22:03
• Mozart In The Morning (Bella Shepard) Music is very meditative-thank you for taking us to your walk.
  April 15th, 2023 21:57
• Destruction (Jenny.g) If I may, as women, we feel more regret in expressing our rage. “Until I...
  April 15th, 2023 21:51
• Freedom in Motion (Iva Hotko) Great read-I miss that time of childhood , when I didn’t have to chose...
  April 15th, 2023 21:46
• Was 7 Below Today (Peter Gates) Well written- I like the message of doom wether we leave or stay, and...
  April 15th, 2023 21:37
• Homestretch (Ryan Robson-Bluer) Beautiful words in honoring those who missed their flight-Powerful setting...
  April 14th, 2023 11:34
• Homestretch (Ryan Robson-Bluer) Beautiful words in honoring those who missed their flight-Powerful setting...
  April 14th, 2023 11:33
• The Astute of Wonder (Julian Meredith) Your poem is written with tenderness and depth in all dimensions. Thank...
  April 14th, 2023 11:24
• Emmaus Event (Orchidee) Great feast for the ear! Great format for this message.
  April 10th, 2023 16:09
• My Angel of Love (Accidental Poet) Great emoting and still young at heart-thanks for sharing, dear sir.
  April 10th, 2023 16:01
• Soliloquy of a Songbird (Thinkerbell) I identify with this bird! Great job, dear friend and poet!
  April 8th, 2023 15:26
• A Cove In Cornwall - The Golden Hour (Freya) Very emotive and soft!
  April 8th, 2023 15:24
• Between Two Thrilling Moments (Dr. Shailesh Gupta Veer) Great historical and spiritual poem! Indeed, there is so much that happens...
  April 8th, 2023 15:23
• Loosing a bit (Spilleronsheet) Let your soul keep searching! Thanks for sharing.
  April 8th, 2023 15:09
• April\'s Insistence (Fay Slimm.) Another lovely poem before spring’s full return-thanks for sharing!
  April 8th, 2023 15:05
• Another Day in Politics (Salahidden) “And more small graves” very disturbing image, but unfortunately true...
  April 8th, 2023 14:59
• No Cigar (Kurt Philip Behm) Indeed!
  April 8th, 2023 14:55
• The Third Wing (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) The first two stanzas are divine-thanks for sharing
  April 2nd, 2023 15:29
• Thank you, Belgium. Thank you, Germany. (Dr.Suryaraju Mattimalla) Beautiful words of gratitude often untold, I recently had the same...
  April 1st, 2023 09:27
• Thank you, Belgium. Thank you, Germany. (Dr.Suryaraju Mattimalla) Beautiful words of gratitude often untold, I recently had the same...
  April 1st, 2023 09:26
• Allah Akbar (Ok Waleed) Poetic take on the essence of God and what he intended for us-Well said...
  March 31st, 2023 23:35
• For My Sweet Flower (Mark The Phenomenon) Very amusing and lovely descriptions of your muse
  March 31st, 2023 23:29
• At the cusp of eclipse (A.B. Jakobsen) Fantastical with haunting imagery-thanks for sharing
  March 31st, 2023 23:27
• Love so Lovely (Fay Slimm.) Great reciprocity between the adverb and adjective and so lovely!
  February 17th, 2023 18:50
• Ra-Yope, The Eagle (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) A great fun and great read Are your poems
  February 17th, 2023 15:59
• Emanuel (Parisab) Thank you for your positive feedback
  February 17th, 2023 02:37
• Real freedom in the USA (Hzugman) So true sir! Keep writing please-
  February 16th, 2023 17:53
• This is I (Parisab) I agree and thank you for reading thinkerbell.
  February 16th, 2023 11:05
• my path led to you. (Abbym.poetry) It’s great to love fearlessly and without bounds! Keep writing and...
  February 16th, 2023 10:17
• A Kite\'s flight (Thinkerbell) Enchanting metaphors! Could it be that your inner child is holding the...
  February 16th, 2023 10:13
• This is Love (Parisab) Thank you for reading
  February 15th, 2023 13:00
• The Listening Lion (Eileen Clark) He is majestic but also very “animalistic” I believe so are the other...
  February 14th, 2023 18:42
• Dancing in the Street (Parisab) Thank you for your spiritual and artistic insight dear reader-I’m...
  February 12th, 2023 14:35
• Trust (Arobot) Your words can describe the strength and vulnerability of our bond to...
  February 12th, 2023 11:00
• Dancing in the Street (Parisab) Thank you for reading and noticing dear poet. Indeed I have not forgotten...
  February 12th, 2023 10:39
• Dark or night (EvenwheniLie) Great sounding piece! Love the distinction between the dark and the night....
  February 11th, 2023 20:25
• My Lavender Chair (Eileen Clark) Blissful flowers and poem
  February 11th, 2023 19:51
• Tomorrow (Quemis) ‘And god blesses the knife’ and the rhythmic and the gentle flow of...
  February 11th, 2023 11:38
• ELEGY FOR ANN (Jarcher54) I stumbled upon this-Great composition! This poem conveys to me that she...
  February 10th, 2023 23:04
• This is I (Parisab) Thank you for reaching out and your kind commentary.
  February 10th, 2023 10:39
• It Is What It Is And It Ain\'t What It Ain\'t ([email protected]) Courage’s tone! Sending love and respect-
  February 9th, 2023 21:22
• The Cat On The Road (Eileen Clark) So beautifully vulnerable! Cats feel everything!
  February 9th, 2023 12:51
• Kristy (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) What a fantastical vision of spring!
  February 9th, 2023 12:48
• The Sins of Us (Parisab) Thank you for your comments. Great observation about the fearful flow at...
  February 9th, 2023 01:25
• The Small Space (Jarcher54) The loneliness is everywhere in the empty spaces your poem holds. How...
  February 9th, 2023 00:56
• Nectar (Fay Slimm.) Love the metaphors of “death’s potion” and the nectar in heaven in...
  February 5th, 2023 13:51