Comments on community poems by Parisab

• Portrait of a Poetess (Teddy.15) Great proclamation about your love for poetry -thanks Teddy
  January 9th, 2024 00:06
• Just as The Sun was Rising (Teddy.15) Gathering all things of beauty in a basket for our eyes to see- great
  January 9th, 2024 00:02
• Art’s Value (Doggerel Dave) Your vivid words share my frustration about the art “market”. ART is...
  January 8th, 2024 23:47
• poem for a mother (Vividvoid14) Your mother must be so special to inspire such bright a d beautiful words!...
  January 6th, 2024 22:55
• War (Mlarouss) Your words wrestle with this most cruel of topics in an effective...
  January 3rd, 2024 23:05
• “Forever” (Marley Linville) Very special poem from a mature and deserving heart …
  January 3rd, 2024 22:49
• Sacred ground (Calliope) “I\'m giving up all battles, I love the world through you, and this...
  January 3rd, 2024 02:38
• Cruise Snobs (Neville) He he! This made me chuckle while I was sympathizing with you. Flamboyance...
  January 2nd, 2024 03:11
• True love (Calliope) Translating poetry is indeed difficult if not impossible, in my opinion. I...
  January 2nd, 2024 03:04
• Locker Room Logic (Thomas W Case) It’s not any better in women’s lockers, but this made me chuckle in...
  January 2nd, 2024 00:27
• Forever My Darlings (Cassie58) Beautiful at its core, with a heart, writing so purely…
  January 2nd, 2024 00:23
• Crappy New Tear (A Reflective, on New Year\'s Eve, 2023) (AuburnScribbler) Your words are loud and clear, I’m afraid we forget even if we learn and...
  January 2nd, 2024 00:19
• Haiku 4 Having Me She Said (Neville) Impromptu imagery matching your powerful sentiments…
  January 2nd, 2024 00:13
• A Fresh Start (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Great advice and wishes for our new year…
  January 1st, 2024 23:47
• fur, clothing, and you (Aceofwoes) Incredibly soft in tone with matching imagery never too overpowering-
  January 1st, 2024 23:46
• Suicide (Vividvoid14) Sometimes it’s a good exercise to bring out what’s on your mind-good...
  January 1st, 2024 23:38
• OCD (Gary Edward Geraci) Words zooming into the details of objects and the discomfort of things...
  December 29th, 2023 13:56
• Mediterranean Blue (Mlarouss) Profound and yet personal…You described your relationship with the...
  December 29th, 2023 13:51
• Star of Bethlehem Under Rubble (Parisab) This came as a simple and basic monologue, I am so grateful that it caught...
  December 28th, 2023 13:15
• Glorious Graces (Orchidee) Precious words…
  December 28th, 2023 00:17
• Going Against the Flow (Neville) There is always true intimacy in your poetry, even when forever bonded...
  December 27th, 2023 23:55
• EARTH MAY BE (Dev Parth) To be small but so full of light! We live on a special planet, as you...
  December 27th, 2023 23:39
• Guess the Fruit (Thomas W Case) Very creative in so many colors and shapes…
  December 27th, 2023 23:37
• I’LL JUST DISAPPEAR (Bobby O) It must be winter over there! There will be fire (and hell to pay) in the...
  December 27th, 2023 23:33
• From Big Things Small (Neville) ‘Tired and we’ll stretched truth’ when we realize that we are past...
  December 18th, 2023 11:56
• A.I. And Religion (E.J. Waling) Intriguing concept, perhaps to much credit given. As long A.I. is not the...
  December 18th, 2023 11:53
• Like a Butterfly Melting (Thomas W Case) The crow pecking and the life inching away like a filthy worm: like loss,...
  December 12th, 2023 02:24
• The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab) Thank you for the visit and your kind feedback-
  December 12th, 2023 00:44
• THE OLD TREE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A shading tree Where once we loved In thought I travel Mind...
  December 10th, 2023 11:56
• Be Set Free (Angelia Lamar) Steadfast in faith-your words ring of freedom…
  December 1st, 2023 22:15
• The Pressure (Bloody Pen) Those messages pressure and haunt us forever, but I’m relieved that you...
  December 1st, 2023 11:44
• PRAYER OF THANKS (Bobby O) Visited her again, so thanks… I am obsessed by revisiting David Bowie...
  December 1st, 2023 11:36
• No More Eden (Thomas W Case) Very balanced in theme and content-May you find Eden in all beautiful...
  December 1st, 2023 11:25
• Fine in Vine (Chiki1601) Describing nature in classic terms never goes out of style! Well done!...
  December 1st, 2023 11:23
• Wisdom of old (1) (Doggerel Dave) Well said and complete… Retirement=no more foolish plans I am bound...
  December 1st, 2023 11:18
• PRAYER OF THANKS (Bobby O) Graceful a d refined words, fit for the occasion!
  November 26th, 2023 22:44
• Some (Peto) And that says it all-thank you for sharing this…
  November 26th, 2023 22:40
• Hi Lily (Hey!) Your words reflect the panic and chaos of your experiences. Yet you are...
  November 26th, 2023 18:21
• It\'s Gonna be a Cold Winter (Quemis) Another brilliant example of how you paint a vivid picture about the...
  November 26th, 2023 18:06
• Suicide (John Lee) As you said it so well we are here to pick up the pieces and not to put...
  November 23rd, 2023 12:09
• Look To Infinity. (Goldfinch60) Timely anaphora-liked this very much…
  November 23rd, 2023 12:02
• Poets (Gray0328) Beautiful -and you pictured the poet needing but a window and the novelist...
  November 23rd, 2023 11:55
• Thank You! (Bella Shepard) Thankful for you (and this community) as well…
  November 23rd, 2023 11:45
• Reply to A. E. Housman (Jarcher54) So exquisite! I also would like nothing more than your insight about the...
  November 19th, 2023 15:41
• Heavy Hearts and Dandelions (Parisab) Thanks for reading and I appreciate your comments…
  November 18th, 2023 23:43
• Tired (The Fife Wanderer) Just resting and wondering, without predicting! That’s the way to be...
  November 17th, 2023 22:26
• Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter (Neville) That is a good economic policy, when words are a few and to the point!...
  November 17th, 2023 21:59
• PINCH ME (Bobby O) My poet brother in arms, better watch out for trouble, LOL …
  November 17th, 2023 21:53
• Dying (B.E.Poet) Vividly painful moments -your poem may be feelings for others who are...
  November 17th, 2023 21:50
• Poetry Is My Loving Wife (Thomas W Case) A perfect marriage of vulnerability and strength…
  November 17th, 2023 21:48
• AN ODE OF GRATITUDE (Bobby O) Sounds like a “serendipitous” breeze is navigating these gentle...
  November 17th, 2023 21:46
• Upon Leaving One’s Shadow Behind (Neville) Mirror, bread, diamond, gifts, are all the generous gifts of this poem....
  November 9th, 2023 17:37
• I Want To Save Everyone (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) This poem definitely evokes strong emotions-not much to be foretold with...
  November 9th, 2023 17:31
• Phobia I (Pacifique Niyitanga) Great imagery: after breathing so that the “story” of phobia and fear...
  November 1st, 2023 20:02
• A Handful of Water (Neville) Your poem creates one singular moment of beauty and brings attention to...
  October 30th, 2023 00:20
• Oswald Garden (The Fife Wanderer) intricate view of the place you visited in nature and beautifully...
  October 30th, 2023 00:11
• Trick or Treat (The Fife Wanderer) Charming and stylistic poem…
  October 28th, 2023 17:21
• The Big Boy Dance (GeekSusie) I like the tone of strength, accountability, and self reliance. Also that...
  October 28th, 2023 17:20
• Will They Remember Me Well? (Thomas W Case) The words and the pic shows that you are “leaving your legacy”
  October 27th, 2023 17:36
• Blood Moon (Parisab) Thank you for visiting an event from last year and things never went back...
  October 27th, 2023 17:34
• Senryu 1 (Teddy.15) It would be liberating to be as rich as a poet…
  October 26th, 2023 19:20
• And All Before Our Awakening (Neville) Neville it’s reassuring to know that you care so deeply, may you find...
  October 26th, 2023 19:17
• The Birth of Art (Thomas W Case) These words are magically mixed like alchemy…
  October 26th, 2023 19:13
• The Ponder Of It All (Garth Rakumakoe) Pondering is a free luxury until it is not …Very thoughtful words! These...
  October 26th, 2023 19:07
• Analog Of The Brain (Thomas W Case) Loved how you described technical hardware in such a soft manner…My...
  October 26th, 2023 01:54
• HASTEN (Bobby O) Wow Bobby! Your whole sense of being was linked to her affirmation and her...
  October 26th, 2023 01:51
• Young Moon Killers (Parisab) Thank you for your attention …
  October 26th, 2023 01:28
• Love Potion No.19 (Parisab) Glad I tried and happy that you enjoyed the read…
  October 26th, 2023 01:26
• Forever Losses (Parisab) I am humbled each time I try to pen one story of one brave heart, at a...
  October 26th, 2023 01:23
• Midnight Flight (Parisab) Thank you Eileen! I’m so glad you visited and enjoyed!
  October 26th, 2023 01:11
• My Fall Loving Cat (Eileen M. Clark) Full of playfulness and energy! You and your cats display an amusing...
  October 26th, 2023 01:10
• Azanian Death Of Poetry (Garth Rakumakoe) I am sure you did for novelty’s sake, insight, and talent! These are the...
  October 24th, 2023 21:19
• A FOREVER DOOM (Bobby O) I liked this whole presentation for many known and unknown reasons:...
  October 24th, 2023 01:22
• The Light Went Out (Peter Gates) I’m glad to see you every time you return inspired and light hearted…
  October 24th, 2023 00:58
• My poetic side (Peto) Your poems have a regal tone to them. It’s been truly special to be...
  October 23rd, 2023 00:01
• BEDFELLOWS (Bobby O) I chuckled for real…The awkward pairings the poem couldn’t resist…
  October 22nd, 2023 14:45
• Midlife Rap (Parisab) LOL, I’m glad we had fun-you must be fabulous Teddy…
  October 22nd, 2023 11:45
• Painter of the Sky (Rhmn_7) Great eye for hidden details of creation and nature…
  October 22nd, 2023 11:40
• What a life (Thomas W Case) The second poem was specially powerful to me. Glad to hear your...
  October 22nd, 2023 02:27
• San Francisco’s Waiting (Teddy.15) An idlic view of San Francisco. It has changed so much and is now reeks of...
  October 22nd, 2023 02:20
• Old Friend Muse (Garth Rakumakoe) Great friendship, good muse to have…
  October 21st, 2023 15:53
• Announcement of Anointing (Orchidee) To set at liberty those oppressed They who are bruised and find no...
  October 20th, 2023 02:13
• In Retrospect (Thomas W Case) Those experiences have to be expressed and deserve to be heard-it made my...
  October 20th, 2023 00:53
• Midlife Rap (Parisab) Thanks, sir!
  October 20th, 2023 00:44
• HAPYY! (Vividvoid14) I love the spelling you chose for the title “Hapyy” it grabs the...
  October 20th, 2023 00:42
• Odes to Fog (Quemis) Something profound about the symbolism here! I was amused by how you...
  October 20th, 2023 00:34
• Waltzing Through Memories (Thomas W Case) Another interpretation of fairytales,-yours is mind-bending and raw. You...
  October 19th, 2023 12:13
• Doorway (2781) Yet we miss out everytime and crawl into yet another dark hole…Heartfelt...
  October 19th, 2023 12:08
• Dancers in the Press (Quemis) Great wordplay worthy of a cool video game…
  October 19th, 2023 12:06
• The Boys (Quemis) Nothing more natural than the undying kinship between the...
  October 19th, 2023 12:04
• Holy Amnesia (Parisab) Thank you! We must be returning somewhere good, in such haste…
  October 19th, 2023 12:02
• Sleeping Beauty (Teddy.15) What a refreshing and pleasant picture you draw about nightmares, Teddy!
  October 19th, 2023 11:59
• My son of 2000, My son of now (Parisab) Appreciate your kind comments and glad that you found the poem...
  October 18th, 2023 09:31
• THE BOOK OF REVELATION (Cerry) Very good observation from the lens of “the book of revelation” I...
  October 18th, 2023 02:21
• Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird (Thomas W Case) Use of beautiful symbolism capturing the soul of a woman in an erotic and...
  October 18th, 2023 02:13
• Lonely Canvas (Teddy.15) Brilliant observation that he may not have wanted to draw in a genius...
  October 18th, 2023 02:06
• 4 Walls (Thomas W Case) Incredible in its honesty, you describe these objects inside the “four...
  October 18th, 2023 01:58
• My son of 2000, My son of now (Parisab) Thank you for appreciating the read…
  October 18th, 2023 00:51
• The Only Gift I Know (Hollow Enigma) ‘The Only Gift I Know’ is love: taking ideas everywhere and bringing...
  October 17th, 2023 00:32
• Significant, We (L. B. Mek) Proclamation that ‘we all are’ significant even if mortal after we...
  October 17th, 2023 00:27