Comments on community poems by Parisab

• Blood Moon (Parisab) Thank you for visiting an event from last year and things never went back...
  October 27th, 2023 17:34
• Senryu 1 (Teddy.15) It would be liberating to be as rich as a poet…
  October 26th, 2023 19:20
• And All Before Our Awakening (Neville) Neville it’s reassuring to know that you care so deeply, may you find...
  October 26th, 2023 19:17
• The Birth of Art (Thomas W Case) These words are magically mixed like alchemy…
  October 26th, 2023 19:13
• The Ponder Of It All (Garth Rakumakoe) Pondering is a free luxury until it is not …Very thoughtful words! These...
  October 26th, 2023 19:07
• Analog Of The Brain (Thomas W Case) Loved how you described technical hardware in such a soft manner…My...
  October 26th, 2023 01:54
• HASTEN (Bobby O) Wow Bobby! Your whole sense of being was linked to her affirmation and her...
  October 26th, 2023 01:51
• Young Moon Killers (Parisab) Thank you for your attention …
  October 26th, 2023 01:28
• Love Potion No.19 (Parisab) Glad I tried and happy that you enjoyed the read…
  October 26th, 2023 01:26
• Forever Losses (Parisab) I am humbled each time I try to pen one story of one brave heart, at a...
  October 26th, 2023 01:23
• Midnight Flight (Parisab) Thank you Eileen! I’m so glad you visited and enjoyed!
  October 26th, 2023 01:11
• My Fall Loving Cat (Eileen Clark) Full of playfulness and energy! You and your cats display an amusing...
  October 26th, 2023 01:10
• Azanian Death Of Poetry (Garth Rakumakoe) I am sure you did for novelty’s sake, insight, and talent! These are the...
  October 24th, 2023 21:19
• A FOREVER DOOM (Bobby O) I liked this whole presentation for many known and unknown reasons:...
  October 24th, 2023 01:22
• The Light Went Out (Peter Gates) I’m glad to see you every time you return inspired and light hearted…
  October 24th, 2023 00:58
• My poetic side (Peto) Your poems have a regal tone to them. It’s been truly special to be...
  October 23rd, 2023 00:01
• BEDFELLOWS (Bobby O) I chuckled for real…The awkward pairings the poem couldn’t resist…
  October 22nd, 2023 14:45
• Midlife Rap (Parisab) LOL, I’m glad we had fun-you must be fabulous Teddy…
  October 22nd, 2023 11:45
• Painter of the Sky (Rhmn_7) Great eye for hidden details of creation and nature…
  October 22nd, 2023 11:40
• What a life (Thomas W Case) The second poem was specially powerful to me. Glad to hear your...
  October 22nd, 2023 02:27
• San Francisco’s Waiting (Teddy.15) An idlic view of San Francisco. It has changed so much and is now reeks of...
  October 22nd, 2023 02:20
• Old Friend Muse (Garth Rakumakoe) Great friendship, good muse to have…
  October 21st, 2023 15:53
• Announcement of Anointing (Orchidee) To set at liberty those oppressed They who are bruised and find no...
  October 20th, 2023 02:13
• In Retrospect (Thomas W Case) Those experiences have to be expressed and deserve to be heard-it made my...
  October 20th, 2023 00:53
• Midlife Rap (Parisab) Thanks, sir!
  October 20th, 2023 00:44
• HAPYY! (Vividvoid14) I love the spelling you chose for the title “Hapyy” it grabs the...
  October 20th, 2023 00:42
• Odes to Fog (Quemis) Something profound about the symbolism here! I was amused by how you...
  October 20th, 2023 00:34
• Waltzing Through Memories (Thomas W Case) Another interpretation of fairytales,-yours is mind-bending and raw. You...
  October 19th, 2023 12:13
• Doorway (2781) Yet we miss out everytime and crawl into yet another dark hole…Heartfelt...
  October 19th, 2023 12:08
• Dancers in the Press (Quemis) Great wordplay worthy of a cool video game…
  October 19th, 2023 12:06
• The Boys (Quemis) Nothing more natural than the undying kinship between the...
  October 19th, 2023 12:04
• Holy Amnesia (Parisab) Thank you! We must be returning somewhere good, in such haste…
  October 19th, 2023 12:02
• Sleeping Beauty (Teddy.15) What a refreshing and pleasant picture you draw about nightmares, Teddy!
  October 19th, 2023 11:59
• My son of 2000, My son of now (Parisab) Appreciate your kind comments and glad that you found the poem...
  October 18th, 2023 09:31
• THE BOOK OF REVELATION (Cerry) Very good observation from the lens of “the book of revelation” I...
  October 18th, 2023 02:21
• Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird (Thomas W Case) Use of beautiful symbolism capturing the soul of a woman in an erotic and...
  October 18th, 2023 02:13
• Lonely Canvas (Teddy.15) Brilliant observation that he may not have wanted to draw in a genius...
  October 18th, 2023 02:06
• 4 Walls (Thomas W Case) Incredible in its honesty, you describe these objects inside the “four...
  October 18th, 2023 01:58
• My son of 2000, My son of now (Parisab) Thank you for appreciating the read…
  October 18th, 2023 00:51
• The Only Gift I Know (Hollow Enigma) ‘The Only Gift I Know’ is love: taking ideas everywhere and bringing...
  October 17th, 2023 00:32
• Significant, We (L. B. Mek) Proclamation that ‘we all are’ significant even if mortal after we...
  October 17th, 2023 00:27
• Words Unspoken (Garth Rakumakoe) I don’t know why this takes me to that moment for Whitney Houston! Huge...
  October 16th, 2023 16:40
• Advice for night hawks ( From the cycle NIGHTS) (Norman Flagtea) An important ‘to do’ list to follow! Reads with ease but in an orderly...
  October 16th, 2023 16:38
• Vic n tim (Peto) Great word play-some seek dare instead of truth and that is not meant to...
  October 16th, 2023 01:40
• Safety in Your Arms (YourPerson) Great symbolism in ‘clinging to safety like a drowning sailor clinging...
  October 15th, 2023 13:53
• Under the Moon (Pop64) A safe space described beautifully beneath the moonlight! I also prefer...
  October 15th, 2023 13:48
• The beauty of Becoming (Daye Writes) Strong voice penned delicately…
  October 15th, 2023 13:42
• The Typical Hollywood Tropes (Part.6) (No More Fun) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Well said and that’s the truth I’m afraid! The whole industry is a...
  October 14th, 2023 01:54
• Hype (Peto) Too cool to bother with ‘too much’ I presume! Yet you took your time...
  October 14th, 2023 01:40
• Orpheus Rebooted (Thomas W Case) Toxic defined meticulously! We become the company we save and ‘thank God...
  October 14th, 2023 01:32
• The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab) So glad you enjoyed this dear Teddy…
  October 14th, 2023 01:24
• As I (2781) Your poem just planted a seed! Thanks for sharing.
  October 13th, 2023 22:55
• The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab) Thank you-your poems are good fruits…
  October 13th, 2023 22:47
• Forever Losses (Parisab) Unfortunately this topic is always a reminder! War is hell and PTSD...
  October 13th, 2023 21:41
• Dissociation (Miss_Dreamer) Changing the words into a powerful tool of resilience…very much enjoyed...
  October 13th, 2023 17:59
• paths (Falcon_mn) A trail blazer of sorts and so brave-very descriptive-and I enjoyed
  October 13th, 2023 17:55
• The night we met (Emmalouise) Looks like a pretty intercontinental love affair… Nicely done!
  October 13th, 2023 17:52
• A Letter From Dante To Me (Teddy.15) Your words are lit, and Dante would love the light and fire beautifully...
  October 13th, 2023 17:49
• Nothing Clever To Say (Bella Shepard) I hope that you’re over the ‘big empty’ Hope that you are
  October 13th, 2023 12:07
• Buying (An Acrostic) (AuburnScribbler) Those trolls are waiting at every door and gate and even under bridges!...
  October 13th, 2023 12:04
• Burdened Soul (Vividvoid14) Vivid, your words are getting stronger and the soul of a poet notices...
  October 13th, 2023 11:52
• Lamb (Peto) So much empathy in the texture of your words-and it’s not easy to craft...
  October 13th, 2023 11:00
• Bombarded (L. B. Mek) Mind bending and maddening as is the reaction to the states of affaires!...
  October 13th, 2023 10:46
• Wordy hands (Elina Alamani) Honest and touching, your words stand out…
  October 13th, 2023 10:39
• Marble (PaperFlowerFields) Great imagery conveying those hard emotions of grief…
  October 13th, 2023 10:32
• JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version) (Bobby O) Almost prophetic, so there is hope since we have jazz-This was unintended...
  October 13th, 2023 02:55
• The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab) Lol-Why sir you did a quick spell check, while the “gilded creature”...
  October 13th, 2023 02:49
• Crescendo (Cameron Pfiester) Precisely noted…
  October 13th, 2023 02:27
• Trauma (Keeperofthesouls) You are not your trauma And this poem says it even better…
  October 13th, 2023 02:25
• Memories Of Brubeck. (Goldfinch60) Your words for the music are so intimate and endearing. Good write and...
  October 13th, 2023 02:22
• Trust Through Troubles (Orchidee) Amen, this will chase away the nightmares tonight…
  October 13th, 2023 02:19
• That Afterwards Feeling (Neville) The release and relief in a gentle and English fashion…
  October 13th, 2023 02:18
• The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab) I appreciate the literary exchange already and it even came with a small...
  October 13th, 2023 02:13
• Only You Quench my Thirst (Parisab) Thank you and cheers…
  October 13th, 2023 01:37
• London (Ranga) I also like to create travel poetry-I love visiting London and you make it...
  October 13th, 2023 01:32
• And Then The Night Comes (Thomas W Case) Night, fear, loneliness, love, hope, and insanity are elements pictured in...
  October 13th, 2023 01:29
• Artichokes, Avocados, And Van Gogh (Thomas W Case) “It\'s the impossibility of a thing that drives...
  October 13th, 2023 01:23
• Avoiding Cliche’ (Bobby O) Nothing about this is a cliche’ When one is so mindful to not be one! We...
  October 8th, 2023 11:57
• STRANGE TOWN (Nephilim56) Your poem pictured a town so cold and detached from the misery and...
  October 8th, 2023 11:46
• Sun light dance (Lorenz) This poem took care and effort- It left a great impression of dances of...
  October 8th, 2023 11:43
• Swift (2781) LOL-Love the title! The definition of economy is now so plastic…
  October 8th, 2023 11:38
• Dancing with my Soul (GeekSusie) Exacting words in the evolution of womanhood-Keep writing in your special...
  October 8th, 2023 11:36
• On Writing and Words (Pop64) Yes indeed you can impress, yet you are inviting us to let be poetry be a...
  October 8th, 2023 11:30
• Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James (Parisab) Thank you for your generous comment and feeling inspired by her…
  October 5th, 2023 09:54
• To The Weird Ones (Garth Rakumakoe) Your sensitivity to detail brings attention in a loud and clear manner. I...
  October 5th, 2023 09:38
• Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James (Parisab) Thank you for your attention for her music and appreciating this ode poet...
  October 5th, 2023 09:31
• Old Men of Steel (Parisab) ‘untold leadership pandemic’ never heard this being told so...
  October 5th, 2023 09:25
• Social Media Whore (Parisab) Thank you sir, there was an urgent need, to say it that day…
  October 5th, 2023 09:19
• The Last Mile (Garth Rakumakoe) Mature writing at its best-
  October 5th, 2023 00:15
• Every Drop (AuburnScribbler) The water crisis is universal and now we are more aware about the stream...
  October 5th, 2023 00:13
• What Would They Say? (Richard Martin) Very lyrical and powerful
  October 3rd, 2023 18:15
• Room number four (Falcon_mn) Reads like a great 19th century novel by masters-so descriptive and I...
  October 3rd, 2023 18:01
• Forgotten Grave (Eugene S.) Amazing insight that when there is finally an end ‘and it all crumbles...
  October 3rd, 2023 17:42
• Cradle (Falcon_mn) Powerful voice about the love of freedom and the motherland. No matter...
  October 3rd, 2023 17:28
• My son of 2000, My son of now (Parisab) Wow I was not aware of the cultural piece-it was born out of maternal...
  October 3rd, 2023 17:22
• Autumnal Witherings (Carly) Glad to meet you, Carly. Your poem connects beautifully with nature. These...
  October 3rd, 2023 01:03
• fifty & Waning, witnessing rap’s Decimation (L. B. Mek) I love this topic and can go on forever. Indeed the rap and hip hop...
  October 3rd, 2023 00:26
• Wasteland (Falcon_mn) Wow it is a universal story and yet so personal to your family’s...
  October 2nd, 2023 23:46
• Talk About Stupid (Neville) Feels like the first time, everytime, and then you are wiser until the...
  October 1st, 2023 22:54
• The Pain of Noise (Holy Onyx) Your poem delivers its message very clearly. Let the beautiful and rich...
  October 1st, 2023 22:42