Comments on community poems by Parisab
- Dreams Whispered Secrets (Pop64)
Words in this poem transform and take shape like a gentle breeze with a...
October 1st, 2023 22:39 - Every day is a new adventure (Amy Michelle Mosier)
Powerful word play! Cool action words and nicely done.
October 1st, 2023 22:36 - Wasteland (Falcon_mn)
Mother Earth needs to be fertile or we have “stony graves” haunting...
October 1st, 2023 22:33 - Asked Twice (Introverted Sage)
Nicely reflective and neatly foretold…power holds special powers and be...
October 1st, 2023 22:31 - Depressing s (Vividvoid14)
Sad, but done neatly, thumbs up
October 1st, 2023 22:28 - The Dance of Overshadowed Children (Neville)
So hard to read this but too important of a piece to ignore…
October 1st, 2023 01:46 - I LEFT (Bobby O)
This cool “cat” flew over the moon and not a minute too soon! I...
October 1st, 2023 01:37 - Twilight Three Ways. (Goldfinch60)
That explains why the twilight feels so gloomy-must be a sign and a...
October 1st, 2023 01:22 - FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD (Bobby O)
Finding the truth in connection within and a gentle attachment to the one...
September 24th, 2023 19:32 - friendly compotision (Vividvoid14)
Great job looking for mentorship in an intelligent and culturally...
September 24th, 2023 19:27 - Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House (Neville)
I respect the mature words, love shifts its energy I presume…
September 24th, 2023 17:00 - cold heart (Vividvoid14)
You gots to hit the stage
Already dreamin 24-7
At least you’re not a...
September 23rd, 2023 20:57 - Chosen (DREEK0)
Keep the ‘torch’ in your ‘core’ burning-if it guides you to...
September 23rd, 2023 17:12 - MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN (Bobby O)
How could one resist, pleasure or business, both would become tales to...
September 23rd, 2023 17:04 - Victory (Gary Edward Geraci)
Wonderful structure! Indeed! Only love ‘ardent goodness’ converts
September 23rd, 2023 13:06 - When My Heart Fell in Love (Neville)
Poem reveals that the love is the intersection of soul in synch with...
September 23rd, 2023 11:31 - LIFE (Bobby O)
Laborious but delicate in structure and deep in connection-great that you...
September 23rd, 2023 11:26 - OP (Peto)
Your gentle heart is beating strong I hope-whomever the angel was, the...
September 23rd, 2023 02:10 - CRAZED and CONFUSED (Bobby O)
The barren desert must feelings so foreign from your side of Chicago-and...
September 21st, 2023 23:04 - Hall of Shame (AuburnScribbler)
We’re all in the hall of shame, with noone to throw the first stone,...
September 21st, 2023 21:15 - SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE (Bobby O)
Cool! And how did it go?
September 17th, 2023 23:19 - Parallel universe; really (EvenwheniLie)
Great metaphors to the all inclusive layers of the sometimes unfortunate...
September 17th, 2023 10:25 - Mamma\'s Winter Coat (Bella Shepard)
Bella. you described these forever memories so gently and lovingly-her...
September 17th, 2023 10:21 - Down in The Hold (Neville)
Hemingwayesque in its quality and tone, and I mean it as a...
September 17th, 2023 10:18 - Young Moon Killers (Parisab)
You have been so generous in your kindness, but I’m afraid it is much...
September 16th, 2023 20:54 - When All Said and Done it’s All Over (Neville)
Love lost can feel like an expected and unexpected ‘stab and kidney...
September 16th, 2023 20:28 - The Intersection (Gary Edward Geraci)
Reaching high for the ‘new sanctity’ Good prayer like poem, as always
September 16th, 2023 20:23 - Life teachers (Tia Natasha)
‘Once you’ve lived it, you can teach it’ And that is the truth!...
September 16th, 2023 20:19 - Time Out (Miegsm)
So powerful and important to share-for whatever it is worth, I have spent...
September 16th, 2023 20:15 - Young Moon Killers (Parisab)
Indeed, it is inevitable-I was referring to my body of work in general,...
September 16th, 2023 19:40 - my ex (Vividvoid14)
Maybe she is too young and/or not fit for your love! Let your heart’s...
September 16th, 2023 17:17 - The Sound of Darkness (Neville)
I think that Silence being light or ‘dark’ is becoming an endangered...
September 15th, 2023 16:15 - Song Of You (Serhat Doğan)
This sounds like home, be it mother land or the love of one woman-your...
September 15th, 2023 16:06 - FATED HERO FAKED (Bobby O)
So now you are ‘growing’ reflective on
Me! Your poems already had me...
September 15th, 2023 15:59 - Delights (Peto)
So many classic movie icons and even a modern Angelina Jolie who is...
September 15th, 2023 15:49 - Beyond Love (Sorenbarrett)
Reads like an intimate connection to many of women’s special works-I bet...
September 14th, 2023 14:07 - Lazy Day (Pacifique Niyitanga)
‘Papers catch no ink’ I love this description of the writers’...
September 14th, 2023 14:01 - MONK and MY AUNT (Bobby O)
The hyper focus on being present among the spirit of jazz in the ‘hazed...
September 14th, 2023 13:55 - Love Letter to God (Parisab)
LOL-as to your daily practice, may it always be received by the correct...
September 14th, 2023 12:40 - CROOKED EYES (Bobby O)
I call them the gladiators of our time, at the crooked sports show...
September 13th, 2023 23:39 - Poetic Justice (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
One of my favorite films and movie sound tracks! Your poem did them...
September 13th, 2023 14:10 - Ghetto Girls (Neville)
Thank you for reminding this and of all of the other ‘ghetto girls’ of...
September 13th, 2023 14:04 - Wandersworth (AuburnScribbler)
It is a delicate balance to address a person ‘unknown’ with...
September 13th, 2023 13:29 - Shadow Dance (Neville)
This has the aesthetic of a Georges Méliès movie-I specially was...
September 13th, 2023 13:24 - Blood Moon (Parisab)
Thank you for your attention, this is near the anniversary of her killing...
September 11th, 2023 02:04 - Love Potion No.19 (Parisab)
Thanks my dear poet friend-my words described that intoxicated feeling-I...
September 10th, 2023 10:23 - Open (Peto)
My pleasure, see previous message…
September 9th, 2023 09:52 - Open (Peto)
These actions made epics and universal love stories, truly a classic :I...
September 9th, 2023 09:24 - Solitude (B.E.Poet)
Great write about only knowing your essence through solitude-
September 8th, 2023 23:58 - UNSELFISH RAMBLE (Bobby O)
‘Digits open a pristine view’ ‘unselfish valor will display’ how...
September 8th, 2023 23:54 - What Does it Take (Introverted Sage)
May we all find safety, by making friends with our friends! Dynamic piece-
September 8th, 2023 23:48 - Holy Dreamscape (Parisab)
I’m so glad you found this piece engaging, Maxine:)
September 8th, 2023 23:43 - heart broken (Vividvoid14)
I am so glad that you write about all kinds of emotions such as pride,...
September 7th, 2023 10:06 - Tears of the Heavens (Petrichor of Love)
This poem found “it’s rightful place” today-thanks for sharing.
September 6th, 2023 14:58 - Blue Showers (Christ)
You have something special here. ‘I’m afraid it is dented within me’...
September 6th, 2023 14:52 - my mom (Vividvoid14)
What appropriate and beautiful selection of words to honor your mother! I...
September 4th, 2023 17:23 - Holy Dreamscape (Parisab)
Thank you-You are so cool, Vivid! Write on!!
September 4th, 2023 17:20 - Like a Video (Parisab)
I thank you!
September 4th, 2023 17:18 - Holy Dreamscape (Parisab)
So kind always!
September 4th, 2023 14:18 - Empty Sky (Teddy.15)
You are still looking up in the sky for a certain airplane-your sentiments...
September 4th, 2023 12:52 - Gospel Graces (Orchidee)
You had my hands up in the worshipin’ way! I am grateful for that O!
September 4th, 2023 12:33 - Voilà ! here I am, here We be (L. B. Mek)
I was mourning the passage of summer and ‘the august flowers strutting...
September 4th, 2023 12:31 - intern, patient confrontation (EvenwheniLie)
You told ‘his’ story vividly-I see this in those personally and...
September 4th, 2023 12:22 - WHAT DID YOU THINK WOULD HAPPEN? (LIZ)
Words written vividly about toxic love-thanks for sharing…
September 4th, 2023 00:38 - Empty Sky (Teddy.15)
You are still looking up in the sky for a certain airplane-your sentiments...
September 3rd, 2023 13:06 - Colour (Peto)
Such rare empathy to tell the story of this woman-your words carry...
September 3rd, 2023 01:37 - Unprecedented (Doggerel Dave)
So true, time for a new cliche’
September 2nd, 2023 01:37 - Book of me (Sueellennicole)
Bold words, the poem and your sentiments deserve respect…
September 1st, 2023 21:14 - MENTOR’s HONOR (Bobby O)
Bagpipes, how cool! Sorry for your loss, I am sure that your words hit all...
August 31st, 2023 21:26 - Holy Dreamscape (Parisab)
I hope that this finds you in great health…
August 31st, 2023 21:20 - Holy Dreamscape (Parisab)
Regards to you and your engagement with these words…
August 31st, 2023 21:19 - Run Away (Cali Kittana)
Sounds like a place that gives you enough space to be creative and to...
August 31st, 2023 16:30 - Wandering (Introverted Sage)
Great word pairings of words-‘hours.flowers.’ ‘the center. the...
August 31st, 2023 15:54 - Holes in Walls (AuburnScribbler)
Important reminder to our existence (of humanity)-thanks for penning on...
August 31st, 2023 09:45 - Whatever Happened to Miriam (Neville)
This brief encounter needs no introduction-I am sure she saw that you...
August 31st, 2023 09:28 - Massage (Peto)
‘The tenderness that lust evokes’ capturing the right balance between,...
August 31st, 2023 09:22 - Empty Units (AuburnScribbler)
Stark changes and loss of all which was left as familiar…It is scary...
August 29th, 2023 18:49 - BOY (DREEK0)
‘his life is a tragic piece of art’
He is so beautiful, the Boy,
his...
August 25th, 2023 21:30 - Waiting (Roxanna)
Eloquent and exquisite!
August 25th, 2023 15:48 - The Touron (Bella Shepard)
Touron? Love it! They should have listened to ‘Mama bison’ and now...
August 25th, 2023 15:46 - Sandy Thoughts (M.E.M.)
Very descriptive in the way you let ‘your sandy thoughts’ run its...
August 25th, 2023 11:32 - In Memory of K.F. (Orchidee)
Looks like on that very sad day everyone looked up with open hearts for...
August 25th, 2023 04:54 - Like a Video (Parisab)
Thank you for viewing and noticing my instinct for inventive styling, at...
August 25th, 2023 04:28 - Old Men of Steel (Parisab)
Yes for sure ‘new engagement’ is needed-while gender and age were not...
August 25th, 2023 04:15 - Michael\'s Call (Kurt Philip Behm)
‘The answer question free’ submission worded so purely.., Nice...
August 24th, 2023 21:02 - Wildflower (Garth Rakumakoe)
Undiscovered wildflower is lonely and like jazz. Love the references and...
August 24th, 2023 20:59 - Once Upon Her Night Scented Garden (Neville)
‘Her night scented garden’ captivated your memory with painstaking...
August 23rd, 2023 01:55 - Social Media Whore (Parisab)
It’s great that you visited and connected with my words, Maxine-I’m...
August 20th, 2023 16:18 - Love Potion No.19 (Parisab)
Thank you for your input and insight-looking forward to visiting more of...
August 19th, 2023 23:44 - I\'m Cool (DREEK0)
Cool puts out fires and rage about uncool injustice and non sense-but your...
August 19th, 2023 23:35 - She is Truth (DREEK0)
How powerful and reflective in the eyes of the beloved…Cool read, yet...
August 19th, 2023 22:14 - All Bases Covered (Neville)
He named the muse, and she stuck to the identity he created for her…I...
August 19th, 2023 22:12 - \"Whispers of Colors: A Canvas\'s Tale\" (SAFIYA MEHRAJ)
Beautiful and refreshingly colorful…
August 19th, 2023 22:04 - Shame and guilt sabotaged mine healthy growth... (Rew4er2nail)
Complex in objection and acceptance…Thank you for writing a very...
August 19th, 2023 22:02 - In blood, we write great poetries (Alex Praw)
Thank you for bringing to light the darkness which befalls the...
August 19th, 2023 21:56 - Fear Silence Not (Neville)
So true about the awkwardness of silence, the nature symbolism takes the...
August 19th, 2023 12:16 - Blessed to Share (Bobby O)
Special in its steadfast and emotive way… I ought to fave its ‘I...
August 19th, 2023 12:12 - When Love Dies (Garth Rakumakoe)
It had mattered not, if this poem was penned out of Love or Hurt. It is...
August 19th, 2023 12:04 - An Open Box (Lonelysoldier)
Great and open metaphor, I thought of a woman tapped in the box of...
August 18th, 2023 20:33 - Symptoms of Nigeria\'s Governing Arms (Joseph C Ogbonna)
Thanks for educating with your poem! I was hearing that they will be...
August 18th, 2023 20:28
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