Comments on community poems by Parisab

• Words Unspoken (Garth Rakumakoe) I don’t know why this takes me to that moment for Whitney Houston! Huge...
  October 16th, 2023 16:40
• Advice for night hawks ( From the cycle NIGHTS) (Norman Flagtea) An important ‘to do’ list to follow! Reads with ease but in an orderly...
  October 16th, 2023 16:38
• Vic n tim (Peto) Great word play-some seek dare instead of truth and that is not meant to...
  October 16th, 2023 01:40
• Safety in Your Arms (YourPerson) Great symbolism in ‘clinging to safety like a drowning sailor clinging...
  October 15th, 2023 13:53
• Under the Moon (Pop64) A safe space described beautifully beneath the moonlight! I also prefer...
  October 15th, 2023 13:48
• The beauty of Becoming (Jowi) Strong voice penned delicately…
  October 15th, 2023 13:42
• The Typical Hollywood Tropes (Part.6) (No More Fun) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Well said and that’s the truth I’m afraid! The whole industry is a...
  October 14th, 2023 01:54
• Hype (Peto) Too cool to bother with ‘too much’ I presume! Yet you took your time...
  October 14th, 2023 01:40
• Orpheus Rebooted (Thomas W Case) Toxic defined meticulously! We become the company we save and ‘thank God...
  October 14th, 2023 01:32
• The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab) So glad you enjoyed this dear Teddy…
  October 14th, 2023 01:24
• As I (2781) Your poem just planted a seed! Thanks for sharing.
  October 13th, 2023 22:55
• The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab) Thank you-your poems are good fruits…
  October 13th, 2023 22:47
• Forever Losses (Parisab) Unfortunately this topic is always a reminder! War is hell and PTSD...
  October 13th, 2023 21:41
• Dissociation (Miss_Dreamer) Changing the words into a powerful tool of resilience…very much enjoyed...
  October 13th, 2023 17:59
• paths (Falcon_mn) A trail blazer of sorts and so brave-very descriptive-and I enjoyed
  October 13th, 2023 17:55
• The night we met (Emmalouise) Looks like a pretty intercontinental love affair… Nicely done!
  October 13th, 2023 17:52
• A Letter From Dante To Me (Teddy.15) Your words are lit, and Dante would love the light and fire beautifully...
  October 13th, 2023 17:49
• Nothing Clever To Say (Bella Shepard) I hope that you’re over the ‘big empty’ Hope that you are
  October 13th, 2023 12:07
• Buying (An Acrostic) (AuburnScribbler) Those trolls are waiting at every door and gate and even under bridges!...
  October 13th, 2023 12:04
• Burdened Soul (Vividvoid14) Vivid, your words are getting stronger and the soul of a poet notices...
  October 13th, 2023 11:52
• Lamb (Peto) So much empathy in the texture of your words-and it’s not easy to craft...
  October 13th, 2023 11:00
• Bombarded (L. B. Mek) Mind bending and maddening as is the reaction to the states of affaires!...
  October 13th, 2023 10:46
• Wordy hands (Elina Alamani) Honest and touching, your words stand out…
  October 13th, 2023 10:39
• Marble (PaperFlowerFields) Great imagery conveying those hard emotions of grief…
  October 13th, 2023 10:32
• JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version) (Bobby O) Almost prophetic, so there is hope since we have jazz-This was unintended...
  October 13th, 2023 02:55
• The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab) Lol-Why sir you did a quick spell check, while the “gilded creature”...
  October 13th, 2023 02:49
• Crescendo (Cameron Pfiester) Precisely noted…
  October 13th, 2023 02:27
• Trauma (Keeperofthesouls) You are not your trauma And this poem says it even better…
  October 13th, 2023 02:25
• Memories Of Brubeck. (Goldfinch60) Your words for the music are so intimate and endearing. Good write and...
  October 13th, 2023 02:22
• Trust Through Troubles (Orchidee) Amen, this will chase away the nightmares tonight…
  October 13th, 2023 02:19
• That Afterwards Feeling (Neville) The release and relief in a gentle and English fashion…
  October 13th, 2023 02:18
• The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab) I appreciate the literary exchange already and it even came with a small...
  October 13th, 2023 02:13
• Only You Quench my Thirst (Parisab) Thank you and cheers…
  October 13th, 2023 01:37
• London (Ranga) I also like to create travel poetry-I love visiting London and you make it...
  October 13th, 2023 01:32
• And Then The Night Comes (Thomas W Case) Night, fear, loneliness, love, hope, and insanity are elements pictured in...
  October 13th, 2023 01:29
• Artichokes, Avocados, And Van Gogh (Thomas W Case) “It\'s the impossibility of a thing that drives...
  October 13th, 2023 01:23
• Avoiding Cliche’ (Bobby O) Nothing about this is a cliche’ When one is so mindful to not be one! We...
  October 8th, 2023 11:57
• STRANGE TOWN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Your poem pictured a town so cold and detached from the misery and...
  October 8th, 2023 11:46
• Sun light dance (Lorenz) This poem took care and effort- It left a great impression of dances of...
  October 8th, 2023 11:43
• Swift (2781) LOL-Love the title! The definition of economy is now so plastic…
  October 8th, 2023 11:38
• Dancing with my Soul (GeekSusie) Exacting words in the evolution of womanhood-Keep writing in your special...
  October 8th, 2023 11:36
• On Writing and Words (Pop64) Yes indeed you can impress, yet you are inviting us to let be poetry be a...
  October 8th, 2023 11:30
• Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James (Parisab) Thank you for your generous comment and feeling inspired by her…
  October 5th, 2023 09:54
• To The Weird Ones (Garth Rakumakoe) Your sensitivity to detail brings attention in a loud and clear manner. I...
  October 5th, 2023 09:38
• Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James (Parisab) Thank you for your attention for her music and appreciating this ode poet...
  October 5th, 2023 09:31
• Old Men of Steel (Parisab) ‘untold leadership pandemic’ never heard this being told so...
  October 5th, 2023 09:25
• Social Media Whore (Parisab) Thank you sir, there was an urgent need, to say it that day…
  October 5th, 2023 09:19
• The Last Mile (Garth Rakumakoe) Mature writing at its best-
  October 5th, 2023 00:15
• Every Drop (AuburnScribbler) The water crisis is universal and now we are more aware about the stream...
  October 5th, 2023 00:13
• What Would They Say? (Richard Martin) Very lyrical and powerful
  October 3rd, 2023 18:15
• Room number four (Falcon_mn) Reads like a great 19th century novel by masters-so descriptive and I...
  October 3rd, 2023 18:01
• Forgotten Grave (Eugene S.) Amazing insight that when there is finally an end ‘and it all crumbles...
  October 3rd, 2023 17:42
• Cradle (Falcon_mn) Powerful voice about the love of freedom and the motherland. No matter...
  October 3rd, 2023 17:28
• My son of 2000, My son of now (Parisab) Wow I was not aware of the cultural piece-it was born out of maternal...
  October 3rd, 2023 17:22
• Autumnal Witherings (Carly) Glad to meet you, Carly. Your poem connects beautifully with nature. These...
  October 3rd, 2023 01:03
• fifty & Waning, witnessing rap’s Decimation (L. B. Mek) I love this topic and can go on forever. Indeed the rap and hip hop...
  October 3rd, 2023 00:26
• Wasteland (Falcon_mn) Wow it is a universal story and yet so personal to your family’s...
  October 2nd, 2023 23:46
• Talk About Stupid (Neville) Feels like the first time, everytime, and then you are wiser until the...
  October 1st, 2023 22:54
• The Pain of Noise (Vintrice C. Johnson) Your poem delivers its message very clearly. Let the beautiful and rich...
  October 1st, 2023 22:42
• Dreams Whispered Secrets (Pop64) Words in this poem transform and take shape like a gentle breeze with a...
  October 1st, 2023 22:39
• Every day is a new adventure - (Amy Michelle Mosier) Powerful word play! Cool action words and nicely done.
  October 1st, 2023 22:36
• Wasteland (Falcon_mn) Mother Earth needs to be fertile or we have “stony graves” haunting...
  October 1st, 2023 22:33
• Asked Twice (Introverted Sage) Nicely reflective and neatly foretold…power holds special powers and be...
  October 1st, 2023 22:31
• Depressing s (Vividvoid14) Sad, but done neatly, thumbs up
  October 1st, 2023 22:28
• The Dance of Overshadowed Children (Neville) So hard to read this but too important of a piece to ignore…
  October 1st, 2023 01:46
• I LEFT (Bobby O) This cool “cat” flew over the moon and not a minute too soon! I...
  October 1st, 2023 01:37
• Twilight Three Ways. (Goldfinch60) That explains why the twilight feels so gloomy-must be a sign and a...
  October 1st, 2023 01:22
• FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD (Bobby O) Finding the truth in connection within and a gentle attachment to the one...
  September 24th, 2023 19:32
• friendly compotision (Vividvoid14) Great job looking for mentorship in an intelligent and culturally...
  September 24th, 2023 19:27
• Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House (Neville) I respect the mature words, love shifts its energy I presume…
  September 24th, 2023 17:00
• cold heart (Vividvoid14) You gots to hit the stage Already dreamin 24-7 At least you’re not a...
  September 23rd, 2023 20:57
• Chosen (DREEK0) Keep the ‘torch’ in your ‘core’ burning-if it guides you to...
  September 23rd, 2023 17:12
• MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN (Bobby O) How could one resist, pleasure or business, both would become tales to...
  September 23rd, 2023 17:04
• Victory (Gary Edward Geraci) Wonderful structure! Indeed! Only love ‘ardent goodness’ converts
  September 23rd, 2023 13:06
• When My Heart Fell in Love (Neville) Poem reveals that the love is the intersection of soul in synch with...
  September 23rd, 2023 11:31
• OP (Peto) Your gentle heart is beating strong I hope-whomever the angel was, the...
  September 23rd, 2023 02:10
• CRAZED and CONFUSED (Bobby O) The barren desert must feelings so foreign from your side of Chicago-and...
  September 21st, 2023 23:04
• Hall of Shame (AuburnScribbler) We’re all in the hall of shame, with noone to throw the first stone,...
  September 21st, 2023 21:15
• SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE (Bobby O) Cool! And how did it go?
  September 17th, 2023 23:19
• Parallel universe; really (EvenwheniLie) Great metaphors to the all inclusive layers of the sometimes unfortunate...
  September 17th, 2023 10:25
• Mamma\'s Winter Coat (Bella Shepard) Bella. you described these forever memories so gently and lovingly-her...
  September 17th, 2023 10:21
• Down in The Hold (Neville) Hemingwayesque in its quality and tone, and I mean it as a...
  September 17th, 2023 10:18
• Young Moon Killers (Parisab) You have been so generous in your kindness, but I’m afraid it is much...
  September 16th, 2023 20:54
• When All Said and Done it’s All Over (Neville) Love lost can feel like an expected and unexpected ‘stab and kidney...
  September 16th, 2023 20:28
• The Intersection (Gary Edward Geraci) Reaching high for the ‘new sanctity’ Good prayer like poem, as always
  September 16th, 2023 20:23
• Life teachers (Tia Natasha) ‘Once you’ve lived it, you can teach it’ And that is the truth!...
  September 16th, 2023 20:19
• Time Out (Miegsm) So powerful and important to share-for whatever it is worth, I have spent...
  September 16th, 2023 20:15
• Young Moon Killers (Parisab) Indeed, it is inevitable-I was referring to my body of work in general,...
  September 16th, 2023 19:40
• my ex (Vividvoid14) Maybe she is too young and/or not fit for your love! Let your heart’s...
  September 16th, 2023 17:17
• The Sound of Darkness (Neville) I think that Silence being light or ‘dark’ is becoming an endangered...
  September 15th, 2023 16:15
• Song Of You (Serhat Doğan) This sounds like home, be it mother land or the love of one woman-your...
  September 15th, 2023 16:06
• FATED HERO FAKED (Bobby O) So now you are ‘growing’ reflective on Me! Your poems already had me...
  September 15th, 2023 15:59
• Delights (Peto) So many classic movie icons and even a modern Angelina Jolie who is...
  September 15th, 2023 15:49
• Beyond Love (Sorenbarrett) Reads like an intimate connection to many of women’s special works-I bet...
  September 14th, 2023 14:07
• Lazy Day (Pacifique Niyitanga) ‘Papers catch no ink’ I love this description of the writers’...
  September 14th, 2023 14:01
• MONK and MY AUNT (Bobby O) The hyper focus on being present among the spirit of jazz in the ‘hazed...
  September 14th, 2023 13:55
• Love Letter to God (Parisab) LOL-as to your daily practice, may it always be received by the correct...
  September 14th, 2023 12:40
• CROOKED EYES (Bobby O) I call them the gladiators of our time, at the crooked sports show...
  September 13th, 2023 23:39
• Poetic Justice (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) One of my favorite films and movie sound tracks! Your poem did them...
  September 13th, 2023 14:10
• Ghetto Girls (Neville) Thank you for reminding this and of all of the other ‘ghetto girls’ of...
  September 13th, 2023 14:04