Comments on community poems by Parisab
- MISSING AUNT CAROL (Bobby O)
I like how your poem took off with bebop fast tempo-great that she still...
April 29th, 2023 01:16 - Please Quit The Fight (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla)
May the world hear your plea-May peace be upon us all
April 29th, 2023 01:06 - Buried in Blue (FallingAwake2)
Very special-the 2nd thru 4th stanza could even stand on its own
April 29th, 2023 00:46 - TEN O’ CLOCK LEAD IN (Bobby O)
Great words to ‘awaken’ the not so far past-No one wins these wars-but...
April 29th, 2023 00:42 - M.A.M.A.(Good Ol\' Mama) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
Sorry for your loss-most endearing words to describe her: ‘A.’
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April 25th, 2023 19:12 - Sad as fuck by Abby Rose Wise (Abby1234)
Hi dear poet-keep expressing your feelings in your poetry-I hope that you...
April 25th, 2023 01:08 - Tears (Thinkerbell)
I like how the message shifted and tears represented different emotions...
April 23rd, 2023 19:46 - Forever Free (Gary Edward Geraci)
Sorry for your loss and your thoughtful grievance
April 22nd, 2023 13:25 - The intelligence gap (Hzugman)
And forever more, good poet
April 22nd, 2023 13:22 - All for Naught (Arobot)
Good job emoting naturally, just like earth
April 22nd, 2023 13:21 - perfect day (Waynechester)
Young love’s forever-keep writing
April 22nd, 2023 13:18 - Dancing in the Street (Parisab)
Thank you for your attention and comments about my poems dear sir
April 22nd, 2023 10:19 - Midnight Flight (Parisab)
I was experimenting writing (and editing) in a dreamlike state:) Many...
April 22nd, 2023 02:46 - Drug Dealing Deviants (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Action Packed-sad truths
April 22nd, 2023 02:34 - WHAT IS (Fay Slimm.)
Very experiential-great read
April 22nd, 2023 02:32
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