Comments on community poems by Bobby O
- The last words of Amber Watson (David Wakeling)
Love it. Especially because you moved the story w symbolic elements while...
April 25th, 2023 00:57 - SKIP THE. SELFISH. ROAD (Bobby O)
Really cool to use the very words that describe my thoughts. Good incite...
April 25th, 2023 00:54 - The Lonely Road (Vhawlalawream)
This needs a rewrite. Solid sentiment but it seems that you wrote down...
April 25th, 2023 00:43 - Here With you - for sisters (Raven Forevermore Est.1995)
Shout that out everyday.
April 25th, 2023 00:18 - The Train. (Beans2206)
Such great use of metaphor and it also builds a tension which caused me to...
April 24th, 2023 23:22 - ESCAPABLE TARGETS (Bobby O)
Speak loud and true.
April 24th, 2023 07:03 - The Window (CreativelyUninspired)
It has s factor of encouragement that speaks
April 24th, 2023 04:26 - Deathwish (PurpleGlasses)
I used to think knowing truth, awareness of that dangerous place indicated...
April 24th, 2023 04:21 - I Dreamed a Dream (Injoy828)
That’s a DEFCON 4 kind of warning not just not just a chronicle of...
April 24th, 2023 03:28 - COLLECTION (Bobby O)
I don’t follow ? I take notes
April 23rd, 2023 21:27 - Shedding the Mortal Coil (Audrey A.)
Using regular sentence structure throughout the whole piece takes away...
April 23rd, 2023 19:52 - A Shadow of What Once Was (Ravale)
Ooops
April 23rd, 2023 18:04 - Tears (Thinkerbell)
Nice ending. Drops took on a lifelike persona I felt it. Nice piece and...
April 23rd, 2023 17:07 - My Walk of Stardom (Mrsbrown)
That was really an impactful way to date a story. I felt it deep. Nice...
April 23rd, 2023 17:04 - The Unknown (Anonymouspursuer)
The message is wise and encapsulates the biggest mystery and made me...
April 23rd, 2023 16:25
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