Comments on community poems by Bobby O

• Sonnet (Neville) That’s a delicate touch of juxtaposition
  June 15th, 2024 05:14
• MISSING AUNT CAROL (Bobby O) How perfect is that.
  June 15th, 2024 01:21
• SOLDIERS BLEEDING (Bobby O) Means a lot. Many thanks.
  June 14th, 2024 23:17
• Dark bliss of ignorance (Sorenbarrett) I really enjoyed this. Strong Impactful words
  June 14th, 2024 22:03
• No animals were injured in the making of this poem. (David Wakeling) Mr. Boss, I guarantee she remembers that seems sad that you never saw...
  June 14th, 2024 22:00
• When the Laughter Dies (Thomas W Case) Wow! It’s literal and metaphoric all at once. “I think of our laughter...
  June 14th, 2024 21:11
• Lost (Thomas W Case) I love the concept. I wanted one more line. A sort of payoff that that...
  June 7th, 2024 04:13
• What Game is this? (David Wakeling) Where saviors try- how perfect was that I always enjoy how you free up...
  June 7th, 2024 04:09
• Our River. (Goldfinch60) Mr Finch, descriptive snd gripping and for me, I wanted more. Thought of...
  June 7th, 2024 04:04
• Sucker Punched (Neville) And nary shall he be again unwise
  June 7th, 2024 03:20
• A smile she hides (Kayla Jackson) I think maybe she is worth it and I feel the weight transferred to her was...
  June 6th, 2024 23:50
• The Breaking In of A New Summers Day (Neville) My friend, I really really like this one. The juxtaposition , the Yin...
  June 6th, 2024 05:05
• Another Lover (Thomas W Case) Disclaimers not withstanding, I believe the eagle of the person allows...
  May 30th, 2024 04:45
• Virtuous Visitation (Orchidee) Nice. . I have always wished that the Bible spent more time exploring the...
  May 30th, 2024 04:42
• So Very Lightly Hued (Neville) We fade to a status that can’t match the world we inhabit.
  May 29th, 2024 11:08
• Root to my issues (Vividvoid14) That’s powerful. Excellent variance in phrasing promotes action and...
  May 29th, 2024 10:52
• Furor Scribendi (Thomas W Case) Declarative. If there exists a wiggle of doubt it’s too small to...
  May 26th, 2024 05:49
• Dead men don’t wear dresses. (David Wakeling) Resolute. It’s like there are some concepts that are anchors and they...
  May 26th, 2024 05:15
• That Gift of A Feeling  (Neville) Dude , smooth, ….,WASNT it ? On one read it skated by me as matter of...
  May 26th, 2024 05:11
• Hold the Sugar (Neville) Metaphorical Moments carve indelible impressions and even if we beg...
  May 11th, 2024 16:09
• THE STUBBORN ROAD (Bobby O) Way cool. Many thanks and shared Cool vibes.
  May 1st, 2024 01:16
• Smiling Depressives (Neville) I hold out hope that I can keep all type of shriveling to a minimum. ...
  May 1st, 2024 00:49
• Last Night (13LaurenD) Like when the director says “action” it came slice and I was so okay...
  March 27th, 2024 20:24
• just another sadness (Vividvoid14) Strategies. With your permission I’d like to dig into points of origin...
  March 27th, 2024 20:18
• LOVES LAST EPISODE (Bobby O) Simpatico
  March 26th, 2024 22:25
• The Final Over. (Goldfinch60) I felt the action and it was way cool that each stanza developed...
  March 23rd, 2024 07:24
• Spirit Mother (Introverted Sage) Refreshing to read , home run
  March 22nd, 2024 03:12
• LOVES LAST EPISODE (Bobby O) That means a lot
  March 21st, 2024 18:48
• Visions of not (Sorenbarrett) A bent line is shortest and a funnel is wherever we dance. I love this....
  March 21st, 2024 07:09
• Green is my Bed (Thomas W Case) I smiled at the Utopia line , It may mean Naivette is good Or why not...
  March 21st, 2024 07:05
• The Money Girls. (David Wakeling) Really nice. And I absorbed a metaphor that speaks and squeaks life w keen...
  March 21st, 2024 07:00
• The Money Girls. (David Wakeling) Really nice. And I absorbed a metaphor that speaks and squeaks life w keen...
  March 21st, 2024 07:00
• Finally (13LaurenD) I like it. I absorb it more as a message to self and addressing him was a...
  March 21st, 2024 06:54
• cristal my angel (Vividvoid14) Dude, that’s a good piece. It’s gratifying to the strength in your...
  March 21st, 2024 06:49
• Jazz In Hell (Thomas W Case) Two things First I enjoyed it Second I’m still trying to get around...
  March 21st, 2024 06:47
• My new favorite song — Sky Up (Bobby O) It’s a departure from my usual, jazz or progressive R&B but I don’t...
  March 16th, 2024 23:10
• THE SENSE TO SHAKE IT OFF (Bobby O) For real
  March 13th, 2024 05:47
• Will you be ready. (David Wakeling) That line “embrace the gypsy” is do exact , it’s NOW and true and...
  March 13th, 2024 04:09
• lost one (Vividvoid14) That’s nice. It’s honest and to an exact point. Nice job
  March 13th, 2024 04:05
• That Sorceriffic Ass (Thomas W Case) I can relate. I’m guessing that’s a trap that has a tomorrow??
  March 13th, 2024 03:59
• Do I make you Nervous? (David Wakeling) Check and double check and the inquisition itself w repeated refrain ...
  March 13th, 2024 03:56
• bad boy (Vividvoid14) Nice. Maybe kick that ending up a notch People see the truth is just a...
  March 9th, 2024 21:50
• Afraid (Peto) Allegorical w the meaning true to real events as naïveté and Disney...
  March 7th, 2024 11:01
• A CRITICAL MEASURE (Bobby O) Hmmm. , for the therapeutic part of this suggested exercise we might try...
  March 7th, 2024 10:25
• seven kinds of death (Karley) It’s not easy to digest
  March 6th, 2024 22:30
• How I Love (Introverted Sage) So we are simpatico ! I’ve reread and now realize where I jumped off...
  March 6th, 2024 15:42
• Veil of Sorrow (Cloie) I’ve read it twice and see the “why” as the vehicle that conveys a...
  March 6th, 2024 07:49
• Presence Providence (Orchidee) Topic aside , this leads with logic that adds strength and credibility to...
  March 6th, 2024 07:31
• A CRITICAL MEASURE (Bobby O) So you have a recent undesired relationship outcome? Two taps on my...
  March 6th, 2024 06:05
• The window (Anaisabel89) Maybe temporarily dark? I feel that the astute recognition described here...
  March 6th, 2024 04:59
• Don\'t be afraid (Sorenbarrett) This switches direction perhaps w purposed intention. It’s almost as if...
  March 6th, 2024 04:51
• How I Love (Introverted Sage) Is that all logic ? Is there intertwined caution ? It’s might be the way...
  March 6th, 2024 04:47
• One Month (13LaurenD) I love the way you expressed yourself with honesty and humility in your...
  March 6th, 2024 04:40
• A CRITICAL MEASURE (Bobby O) Wow ! That means a lot. I got tingly. Too cool.
  March 6th, 2024 02:20
• The Love I Deserve (13LaurenD) It’s a-visit to sad and to authentic and to a past place valued such...
  March 6th, 2024 02:03
• Into the Dark (Thomas W Case) The sec and chocolate nevertheless have value for inspiration. ?? It’s a...
  March 6th, 2024 01:57
• Recall (Neville) Any stone yet turned still presents gifts for perspective
  March 6th, 2024 01:52
• Standing on the cliff , by the sea, at night, I heard a voice. (David Wakeling) I love this. It means several things all at once with recognition of worth...
  March 6th, 2024 01:49
• On Waking Up in Rio (Neville) The seamless aspect of that “bundling” speaks of a great acquired...
  March 6th, 2024 01:47
• Six (Thomas W Case) Prolific writing , and without the accoutrements. Humor aside, you and a...
  March 6th, 2024 01:43
• Anyone (Peto) Extra descriptive. Evokes a pathos in the reader a sortof a reluctant ...
  March 5th, 2024 19:32
• even if I lose my soul (Vividvoid14) Is it more of an admission or an announcement?
  March 5th, 2024 19:29
• cant block the sun (Vividvoid14) I like the writing we gotta get you off the subject matter though cause...
  March 2nd, 2024 22:53
• my reality (Vividvoid14) The witch fits perfect but then you quit applying that magic. For...
  March 1st, 2024 00:01
• My Very Dearest Sigmund (Neville) You describe happenstance? Or perhaps inevitability like knowing water...
  February 29th, 2024 22:06
• Flying (Peto) You write well. Seems like this one had another chapter. ?
  February 29th, 2024 21:50
• closed door (Vividvoid14) I like the content but it’s just statements. Poetry needs to be alive w...
  February 27th, 2024 01:14
• AND THE LINES WERE LONG (Bobby O) I’m not gonna be deal with fuck humility here I actually had an idea in...
  February 25th, 2024 06:58
• AND THE LINES WERE LONG (Bobby O) Hey cool, we have labors of love in common. I wrote this piece for over...
  February 18th, 2024 06:06
• Paddy McGee (Teddy.15) That’s really freaking clever. It’s alive. It paints a story’ with...
  February 18th, 2024 05:20
• FATAL ARROGANCE (Bobby O) You are a constant highlight.
  February 17th, 2024 23:29
• The Elephant Cowboy (Jaxxie) The last line flipped me over again. There is some continuity both to your...
  February 17th, 2024 08:31
• Solomon Kane (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) And there you have it.
  February 17th, 2024 08:29
• We didn\'t build these streets for crazy people (Jaxxie) I almost got it. I got lost on the last Stanza.
  February 17th, 2024 08:27
• What are you afraid of Tina Louise? (David Wakeling) Gilligan
  February 17th, 2024 04:53
• Her (13LaurenD) The quiz then the test and then he can find his arrogance confides with...
  February 17th, 2024 04:51
• I\'ve Been a Slave (Thomas W Case) Resilience
  February 17th, 2024 04:47
• Answer Phone. (Goldfinch60) The very last was very perfect Mr Finch. I got a real fresh...
  February 17th, 2024 04:46
• All the Wrong Buttons (Neville) Literal is possible here but I’m feeling metaphor , commentary that...
  February 17th, 2024 03:51
• FATAL ARROGANCE (Bobby O)
  February 17th, 2024 03:20
• time to die (Vividvoid14) Nice write. I encourage you think about pairing these cathartic writes...
  February 15th, 2024 19:03
• no longer my dad (Vividvoid14) Wow! I felt that. You really hit me w this one and it’s obvious you’ve...
  February 12th, 2024 12:55
• The Late Great Hieronymus Bosch (Neville) That’s a name that eschews character. And what I like most is that we...
  February 9th, 2024 11:24
• Altered Images (Neville) Thus the origin of those glasses ?
  February 8th, 2024 06:04
• Ouroboros (Neville) I like it and I’m wondering if that perfect circle referred to a wrapped...
  February 7th, 2024 18:27
• never ending symphony (Vividvoid14) Had to read it twice to filter out your ambivalence. It’s written with a...
  February 4th, 2024 17:41
• A BEAUTIFUL FIND (Bobby O) Thankd
  February 3rd, 2024 00:29
• A BEAUTIFUL FIND (Bobby O) I still don’t understand quantum entanglement , I really think it had to...
  February 2nd, 2024 01:28
• Sorry (Neville) I love to use that word as acknowledgement sans pledge.
  February 1st, 2024 01:16
• Just a Few Odd Diary Notes (Neville) I count but I reserve the right to refuse audit and to creatively...
  February 1st, 2024 01:14
• The Demon of Creative Energy (Thomas W Case) I was gonna say carthartic but no , I changed my mind. Fuck that demon ( I...
  February 1st, 2024 01:05
• The Past. (David Wakeling) I guess what you pose here is a reality that slips into places of hope and...
  February 1st, 2024 00:58
• Belladonna (Thomas W Case) That speaks accurately of the moment but perhaps it’s a product of...
  January 24th, 2024 03:19
• There was a time (David Wakeling) I got confused but then I realized my supposition was incomplete , one...
  January 23rd, 2024 11:48
• GENDER ROTATION (Bobby O) The first stanza speaks to how ego or power trips doesn’t mean you are...
  January 22nd, 2024 18:02
• Nothing is Free (Neville) Nuanced precision precluding customary casted semantic opens new path to...
  January 22nd, 2024 15:27
• The Sound of Bob Dylan. (David Wakeling) That rain will fall hard and I hope Joan joins with blue untangled as all...
  January 22nd, 2024 15:13
• Lavished (Neville) How clever ? The Canvas becomes a character with various degrees of depth...
  January 18th, 2024 03:21
• The Whole of A Woman Shared (Neville) Ok, I had my thoughts born free of influence but after reading some of...
  January 17th, 2024 05:32
• National Soil (Jaxxie) Fun to read and curious surprise will Treat
  January 13th, 2024 07:10