Comments on community poems by Bobby O
- The Dark Whisperer (People Say)
Maybe change the sentence structure here and there and convey w suggestion...
April 10th, 2023 20:08 - Our minds are burning trees, and thoughts the ashen leaves (Eclisse)
Eyes narrowed
Nice to indicate w strong prose and to create that...
April 10th, 2023 19:47 - Memories (Fay Slimm.)
Limestone luminescence.
Such a descriptive phrase.
Nice
April 10th, 2023 16:52 - Visitor (Dakota)
Stark recognition indicates the chance to capture seemingly unreachable...
April 10th, 2023 16:28 - A gift you give each other (Dakota)
My heart goes out to you if you had to actually live through that. The...
April 10th, 2023 16:25 - Until All\'s Undone (Rocky Lagou)
Rocky , Dude, you write well. Better than most and I’m enjoying diving...
April 10th, 2023 14:29 - My Angel of Love (Accidental Poet)
I feel that and that makes it perfect.
April 10th, 2023 10:19 - Our Love (Peter Gates)
The prose snd rhyme was pleasant but I’m nowhere near confident enough...
April 10th, 2023 05:48 - What is Love? (Adventuressmalik)
We sure think differently on the subject. But aside from preconceptions I...
April 10th, 2023 05:45 - BACK IN THE DAY (Randy6)
I respect your point of view but my instincts tend to not finding the past...
April 10th, 2023 05:40 - Fantasy Thoughts About Him (Alana6789)
Kept me interested
April 10th, 2023 04:02 - When The Rains Stop (Satishverma)
To stitch again my gaze
Really clever ways to express ideas w creative...
April 9th, 2023 21:21 - END OUT (Bobby O)
Exact
April 8th, 2023 09:51 - Periodically (Dakota)
Just as momentum builds it slips when standard phrase lacks metaphor or...
April 8th, 2023 09:03 - The Sound of Bob Dylan. (David Wakeling)
Maybe change the form of your sentence structure here and there...
April 8th, 2023 08:57
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