Comments received on poems by not_defined
Sol
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem that shows fleeting moments of brightness worth pursuing. Nicely worded this poem takes the reader on that journey.
August 4th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem that shows fleeting moments of brightness worth pursuing. Nicely worded this poem takes the reader on that journey.
August 4th, 2025 04:31
Sol
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write, when those rare moment\'s happen amongst the chaos of the mind, we have to treasure them, nicely expressed and written
August 4th, 2025 01:14
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write, when those rare moment\'s happen amongst the chaos of the mind, we have to treasure them, nicely expressed and written
August 4th, 2025 01:14
For What Its Worth
Poetic Licence said:
A very honest and passionate write, of an open apology of past behaviour or actions, nicely expressed and written
July 25th, 2025 15:59
Poetic Licence said:
A very honest and passionate write, of an open apology of past behaviour or actions, nicely expressed and written
July 25th, 2025 15:59
For What Its Worth
sorenbarrett said:
Hindsight is always much better that what we see at the moment. A lovely poem
July 25th, 2025 14:42
sorenbarrett said:
Hindsight is always much better that what we see at the moment. A lovely poem
July 25th, 2025 14:42
Thoughts
Poetic Licence said:
Negative thoughts continuing to thrive, making it harder each day to try and survive, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 22:34
Poetic Licence said:
Negative thoughts continuing to thrive, making it harder each day to try and survive, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 22:34
Lost Memories: Volume I
sorenbarrett said:
A little bit of everything in this one. From beginning to end a potpourri. Good going
June 28th, 2025 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
A little bit of everything in this one. From beginning to end a potpourri. Good going
June 28th, 2025 19:34
Receding
sorenbarrett said:
I am not sure what this format is called but it is most interesting in that it reinforces the thought making sure that the reader does not miss it. Nicely done
June 18th, 2025 03:27
sorenbarrett said:
I am not sure what this format is called but it is most interesting in that it reinforces the thought making sure that the reader does not miss it. Nicely done
June 18th, 2025 03:27
Receding
Poetic Licence said:
A sense it is all slipping away and one cannot stop it, nicely expressed and written
June 18th, 2025 01:31
Poetic Licence said:
A sense it is all slipping away and one cannot stop it, nicely expressed and written
June 18th, 2025 01:31
Questions?
sorenbarrett said:
I like the format of this poem in question form with the reoccurring \"I do too\" Clever it leads the reader to the end where again is the statement repeated. Well done
June 7th, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
I like the format of this poem in question form with the reoccurring \"I do too\" Clever it leads the reader to the end where again is the statement repeated. Well done
June 7th, 2025 03:51
Diseased
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This would surely make for a great song lyric I would wonder what type of music you would use, it made me think of the last two songs I have listened to, an enjoyable piece! Ty for sharing.
May 18th, 2025 03:59
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This would surely make for a great song lyric I would wonder what type of music you would use, it made me think of the last two songs I have listened to, an enjoyable piece! Ty for sharing.
May 18th, 2025 03:59
Diseased
sorenbarrett said:
So interesting the words we use to describe things. Disease for pain is an interesting association. I hear hurt here. Nicely written
May 17th, 2025 15:13
sorenbarrett said:
So interesting the words we use to describe things. Disease for pain is an interesting association. I hear hurt here. Nicely written
May 17th, 2025 15:13
Diseased
Poetic Licence said:
I don\'t know about a song but it certainly highlights the struggles and demons going in a troubled mind searching for anwsers and a way out, nicely written and expressed
May 17th, 2025 15:03
Poetic Licence said:
I don\'t know about a song but it certainly highlights the struggles and demons going in a troubled mind searching for anwsers and a way out, nicely written and expressed
May 17th, 2025 15:03
Momentary Relief
sorenbarrett said:
a poem of safety and protection within one\'s own place all set to good rhyme nicely done
April 30th, 2025 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
a poem of safety and protection within one\'s own place all set to good rhyme nicely done
April 30th, 2025 12:44
Time
sorenbarrett said:
This one started sad and ended far sadder. A bold and powerful write
April 26th, 2025 15:48
sorenbarrett said:
This one started sad and ended far sadder. A bold and powerful write
April 26th, 2025 15:48
The Night
Cheeky Missy said:
Superbly rendered with a subtle, yet painfully haunting poignancy which half culls tears for the charming boy whose soul none comforted. Thank you so very much for sharing.
April 25th, 2025 17:26
Cheeky Missy said:
Superbly rendered with a subtle, yet painfully haunting poignancy which half culls tears for the charming boy whose soul none comforted. Thank you so very much for sharing.
April 25th, 2025 17:26
The Night
sorenbarrett said:
This poem goes full cycle and as day goes to night so life goes to death. Fear is a life long thing for some that wish not to loose something. A lovely write
April 25th, 2025 12:29
sorenbarrett said:
This poem goes full cycle and as day goes to night so life goes to death. Fear is a life long thing for some that wish not to loose something. A lovely write
April 25th, 2025 12:29
I Love You
MinaH said:
You have such a talent to be able to put such emotions in poetry. Every word is relatable
April 19th, 2025 17:56
MinaH said:
You have such a talent to be able to put such emotions in poetry. Every word is relatable
April 19th, 2025 17:56
Falling Apart
sorenbarrett said:
You convey well the feeling of falling apart with nicely worded phrases. Well done
April 19th, 2025 10:36
sorenbarrett said:
You convey well the feeling of falling apart with nicely worded phrases. Well done
April 19th, 2025 10:36
Stars In The Sky
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write confirming that true love has no boundaries even after death, enjoyed the read
March 25th, 2025 03:32
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write confirming that true love has no boundaries even after death, enjoyed the read
March 25th, 2025 03:32
Stars In The Sky
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and with the idea that love goes beyond death. Very nicely done with nice images
March 24th, 2025 18:47
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and with the idea that love goes beyond death. Very nicely done with nice images
March 24th, 2025 18:47
When The Day Comes
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful image implanted sun like this memory whether of person, love or whatever will always return and engulf so well done a fave
March 16th, 2025 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful image implanted sun like this memory whether of person, love or whatever will always return and engulf so well done a fave
March 16th, 2025 06:51
When The Day Comes
Poetic Licence said:
I think that\'s a lovely write letting someone know that you will always be around, even in another life, nicely expressed
March 16th, 2025 05:16
Poetic Licence said:
I think that\'s a lovely write letting someone know that you will always be around, even in another life, nicely expressed
March 16th, 2025 05:16
Fragile
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a inner beauty to it that shines through and can be felt by the reader. Well done
July 19th, 2024 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a inner beauty to it that shines through and can be felt by the reader. Well done
July 19th, 2024 05:33
Second Chance
Hey! said:
I just am touched honestly this is a great poem really. Keep it up!!!!
November 12th, 2023 12:49
Hey! said:
I just am touched honestly this is a great poem really. Keep it up!!!!
November 12th, 2023 12:49
Mirror
L. B. Mek said:
a relatable read, thanks for sharing
(maybe, we need only realise
\'it\'s okay: to not - be ok\'
then, afford that mirror reflection
a small merciful smile
as your poetry, wisely suggests
and let that
be our anchor, to fall back upon
when the sea\'s
start getting rough, yet again
when we arrive
at those brief, still waters of relief
we find a new anchor
add to our survivor\'s fight, armoury
one anchor, at a time
we forge our unbreakable, spine
fly our flag, high
on that mast of self-excavated
worth! and
in each daybreaks, Aurora success
hope for the best)
May 8th, 2023 06:34
L. B. Mek said:
a relatable read, thanks for sharing
(maybe, we need only realise
\'it\'s okay: to not - be ok\'
then, afford that mirror reflection
a small merciful smile
as your poetry, wisely suggests
and let that
be our anchor, to fall back upon
when the sea\'s
start getting rough, yet again
when we arrive
at those brief, still waters of relief
we find a new anchor
add to our survivor\'s fight, armoury
one anchor, at a time
we forge our unbreakable, spine
fly our flag, high
on that mast of self-excavated
worth! and
in each daybreaks, Aurora success
hope for the best)
May 8th, 2023 06:34
Mirror
2781 said:
Self loathing ministers from the pit.
We are all made in God\'s image
That\'s no shit
From the depths of despair
We all can grow
To take our inheritance
At the foot of the throne.
May 8th, 2023 04:31
2781 said:
Self loathing ministers from the pit.
We are all made in God\'s image
That\'s no shit
From the depths of despair
We all can grow
To take our inheritance
At the foot of the throne.
May 8th, 2023 04:31
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