Comments received on poems by WL Schuett
Clouded
El_Pretzadente said:
\"Quiet Pride & Pretty Grace
Drenched in the Purist Sorrow.\"
That\'s Beautiful.
January 11th, 2018 23:43
El_Pretzadente said:
\"Quiet Pride & Pretty Grace
Drenched in the Purist Sorrow.\"
That\'s Beautiful.
January 11th, 2018 23:43
Night Sounds
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing, WL! Love the whole poem, but especially the last stanza.
January 7th, 2018 10:51
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing, WL! Love the whole poem, but especially the last stanza.
January 7th, 2018 10:51
Night Sounds
Accidental Poet said:
May she re-invent herself and be all that she aspires to be in her new life upon leaving her cocoon. Wonderful write Bill.
January 7th, 2018 08:06
Accidental Poet said:
May she re-invent herself and be all that she aspires to be in her new life upon leaving her cocoon. Wonderful write Bill.
January 7th, 2018 08:06
Soft
FredPeyer said:
Wonderful choice of words, great writing, WL!
Love the last stanza. Wondering if the heart broke BECAUSE she did not want to give it away? Would it still be whole if given away?
January 1st, 2018 19:48
FredPeyer said:
Wonderful choice of words, great writing, WL!
Love the last stanza. Wondering if the heart broke BECAUSE she did not want to give it away? Would it still be whole if given away?
January 1st, 2018 19:48
Soft
Christina8 said:
A great poem and picture! I loved the last lines, \"the heart she hadn\'\'t wanted to give away, softly broke.\" Wonderful!!
January 1st, 2018 18:44
Christina8 said:
A great poem and picture! I loved the last lines, \"the heart she hadn\'\'t wanted to give away, softly broke.\" Wonderful!!
January 1st, 2018 18:44
Inside Out
myself and me said:
From a broken heart, I saw dead branches and beautiful blooms.
December 10th, 2017 12:55
myself and me said:
From a broken heart, I saw dead branches and beautiful blooms.
December 10th, 2017 12:55
Inside Out
FredPeyer said:
Love the painting, that view through broken sheetrock.
The poem is haunting me. There are days where I don\'t seem to be able to see \'inside out\' either. Beautifully written, WL!
December 10th, 2017 04:35
FredPeyer said:
Love the painting, that view through broken sheetrock.
The poem is haunting me. There are days where I don\'t seem to be able to see \'inside out\' either. Beautifully written, WL!
December 10th, 2017 04:35
Inside Out
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive write.
Such a great artwork as well.
December 10th, 2017 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive write.
Such a great artwork as well.
December 10th, 2017 02:48
Inside Out
Michael Edwards said:
A sad write and a beauty of a painting - both great pieces
December 10th, 2017 01:00
Michael Edwards said:
A sad write and a beauty of a painting - both great pieces
December 10th, 2017 01:00
Beyond Pain
FredPeyer said:
Great painting, great poem, WL!
And you are so right,
art is life, and life is art
and the two shall never part
December 5th, 2017 03:52
FredPeyer said:
Great painting, great poem, WL!
And you are so right,
art is life, and life is art
and the two shall never part
December 5th, 2017 03:52
Beyond Pain
myself and me said:
reflecting the light of desire,
the attractive color dripping off
can not resist the temptation to taste
the perfect fruit
without considering the poison and consequence
Beyond pain
but never beyond sorrow
December 4th, 2017 19:43
myself and me said:
reflecting the light of desire,
the attractive color dripping off
can not resist the temptation to taste
the perfect fruit
without considering the poison and consequence
Beyond pain
but never beyond sorrow
December 4th, 2017 19:43
Beyond Pain
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful work Bill - both poem and painting.
December 4th, 2017 16:10
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful work Bill - both poem and painting.
December 4th, 2017 16:10
Sacred Creek
ZIGGY said:
A great poem indeed enjoyed your imagery in this piece a pleasure to read your work ,,,,cheers
December 2nd, 2017 12:40
ZIGGY said:
A great poem indeed enjoyed your imagery in this piece a pleasure to read your work ,,,,cheers
December 2nd, 2017 12:40
Temporal Faith Floats
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Awesome phrasing here in freeverse. Great metaphors created poetically and wording too superb. Did u mean the soul will float in the hereafter? Sublime description indeed. Kudos.
Pls do review my latest poem too.
November 29th, 2017 12:54
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Awesome phrasing here in freeverse. Great metaphors created poetically and wording too superb. Did u mean the soul will float in the hereafter? Sublime description indeed. Kudos.
Pls do review my latest poem too.
November 29th, 2017 12:54
Temporal Faith Floats
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write and that last line is so meaningful.
November 28th, 2017 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write and that last line is so meaningful.
November 28th, 2017 02:16
Temporal Faith Floats
FredPeyer said:
WL, you are a great writer! \'artillery of knowledge\', \'time on thin ice\'...excellent writing, beautiful poem...definitely a favorite!
November 27th, 2017 20:56
FredPeyer said:
WL, you are a great writer! \'artillery of knowledge\', \'time on thin ice\'...excellent writing, beautiful poem...definitely a favorite!
November 27th, 2017 20:56
Temporal Faith Floats
myself and me said:
The float soul fly along the ray of the Moon,
So tender, so light, so peace, so beautiful
Assimilated into the nigh sky
Turned into a star
Shine for you
November 27th, 2017 19:21
myself and me said:
The float soul fly along the ray of the Moon,
So tender, so light, so peace, so beautiful
Assimilated into the nigh sky
Turned into a star
Shine for you
November 27th, 2017 19:21
Temporal Faith Floats
Christina8 said:
This is an amazing write! Just absolutely captivating! i read it a few times just to absorb it all. I agree with the ladies before me, the deepest line is the last, where it has such a impactful effect on the reader. Excellent job!
November 27th, 2017 14:13
Christina8 said:
This is an amazing write! Just absolutely captivating! i read it a few times just to absorb it all. I agree with the ladies before me, the deepest line is the last, where it has such a impactful effect on the reader. Excellent job!
November 27th, 2017 14:13
Sacred Creek
FredPeyer said:
Like the others, I was drawn into your poem right to the last and rather unexpected lines that stopped me and made me think. Do we?
November 22nd, 2017 12:56
FredPeyer said:
Like the others, I was drawn into your poem right to the last and rather unexpected lines that stopped me and made me think. Do we?
November 22nd, 2017 12:56
Sacred Creek
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write together with a superb painting.
November 22nd, 2017 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write together with a superb painting.
November 22nd, 2017 01:28
Sacred Creek
myself and me said:
Re: Stunning \"Sacred creek\"
A withered leaf
from no where
Fall in the sacred creek
Cause endless ripple of melancholy
Burning rose
Turn the creek into sea of fire
November 21st, 2017 19:56
myself and me said:
Re: Stunning \"Sacred creek\"
A withered leaf
from no where
Fall in the sacred creek
Cause endless ripple of melancholy
Burning rose
Turn the creek into sea of fire
November 21st, 2017 19:56
Sacred Creek
Accidental Poet said:
Everyone has days like these Bill. And writing of it shows the poet in you. And your painting also shows the artist painter in you. Excellent work my friend.
November 21st, 2017 19:48
Accidental Poet said:
Everyone has days like these Bill. And writing of it shows the poet in you. And your painting also shows the artist painter in you. Excellent work my friend.
November 21st, 2017 19:48
Sacred Creek
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh - these words paint a fantastic scene of sad nostalgia burned into readers\' minds with superb imagery . That final question rousing fresh interest re. what we hold sacred gives a stunning end Bill and what a wonderful painting too. A favourite with me without a doubt.
November 21st, 2017 17:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh - these words paint a fantastic scene of sad nostalgia burned into readers\' minds with superb imagery . That final question rousing fresh interest re. what we hold sacred gives a stunning end Bill and what a wonderful painting too. A favourite with me without a doubt.
November 21st, 2017 17:18
Sacred Creek
Michael Edwards said:
Super art work and a super poem to go with it - great work Bill
November 21st, 2017 13:54
Michael Edwards said:
Super art work and a super poem to go with it - great work Bill
November 21st, 2017 13:54
Sacred Creek
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful painting! A wonderful poem and along with Santita, I too am left pondering the final line. Great work!
November 21st, 2017 13:18
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful painting! A wonderful poem and along with Santita, I too am left pondering the final line. Great work!
November 21st, 2017 13:18
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