Comments received on poems by WL Schuett
Raining Heart in Silence
myself and me said:
Why the eyes, used to be sharp and shrewd, filled with melancholy.
Distance, the far distance, the eyes are on,
What is she searching for
What is she waiting for
on this cold silent night
on this snow covered branch
January 23rd, 2018 13:09
myself and me said:
Why the eyes, used to be sharp and shrewd, filled with melancholy.
Distance, the far distance, the eyes are on,
What is she searching for
What is she waiting for
on this cold silent night
on this snow covered branch
January 23rd, 2018 13:09
Raining Heart in Silence
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write WL, may the light of the moon bring her peace and happiness.
Superb artwork.
January 23rd, 2018 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write WL, may the light of the moon bring her peace and happiness.
Superb artwork.
January 23rd, 2018 01:55
Raining Heart in Silence
Michael Edwards said:
Some great lines in this super work Bill - love the painting.
January 23rd, 2018 01:14
Michael Edwards said:
Some great lines in this super work Bill - love the painting.
January 23rd, 2018 01:14
Alibis
Accidental Poet said:
You\'ve no need for an alibi here Bill. It\'s awesome!
January 14th, 2018 11:14
Accidental Poet said:
You\'ve no need for an alibi here Bill. It\'s awesome!
January 14th, 2018 11:14
Alibis
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write so full of great imagery.
Love the artwork.
January 14th, 2018 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write so full of great imagery.
Love the artwork.
January 14th, 2018 01:55
Alibis
Michael Edwards said:
Glorious use of the language in what I would call an abstract work and all the better for it.
January 14th, 2018 01:27
Michael Edwards said:
Glorious use of the language in what I would call an abstract work and all the better for it.
January 14th, 2018 01:27
Alibis
FredPeyer said:
You have no alibi, so you were there! And that awesome poem proves it!
January 13th, 2018 21:56
FredPeyer said:
You have no alibi, so you were there! And that awesome poem proves it!
January 13th, 2018 21:56
Clouded
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, may that crack show you the beauty of your dreams.
Wonderful artwork.
January 12th, 2018 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, may that crack show you the beauty of your dreams.
Wonderful artwork.
January 12th, 2018 02:29
Clouded
Michael Edwards said:
Love the way this is brought together by that last verse - great work Bill
January 12th, 2018 01:31
Michael Edwards said:
Love the way this is brought together by that last verse - great work Bill
January 12th, 2018 01:31
Clouded
El_Pretzadente said:
\"Quiet Pride & Pretty Grace
Drenched in the Purist Sorrow.\"
That\'s Beautiful.
January 11th, 2018 23:43
El_Pretzadente said:
\"Quiet Pride & Pretty Grace
Drenched in the Purist Sorrow.\"
That\'s Beautiful.
January 11th, 2018 23:43
Night Sounds
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing, WL! Love the whole poem, but especially the last stanza.
January 7th, 2018 10:51
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing, WL! Love the whole poem, but especially the last stanza.
January 7th, 2018 10:51
Night Sounds
Accidental Poet said:
May she re-invent herself and be all that she aspires to be in her new life upon leaving her cocoon. Wonderful write Bill.
January 7th, 2018 08:06
Accidental Poet said:
May she re-invent herself and be all that she aspires to be in her new life upon leaving her cocoon. Wonderful write Bill.
January 7th, 2018 08:06
Soft
FredPeyer said:
Wonderful choice of words, great writing, WL!
Love the last stanza. Wondering if the heart broke BECAUSE she did not want to give it away? Would it still be whole if given away?
January 1st, 2018 19:48
FredPeyer said:
Wonderful choice of words, great writing, WL!
Love the last stanza. Wondering if the heart broke BECAUSE she did not want to give it away? Would it still be whole if given away?
January 1st, 2018 19:48
Soft
Christina8 said:
A great poem and picture! I loved the last lines, \"the heart she hadn\'\'t wanted to give away, softly broke.\" Wonderful!!
January 1st, 2018 18:44
Christina8 said:
A great poem and picture! I loved the last lines, \"the heart she hadn\'\'t wanted to give away, softly broke.\" Wonderful!!
January 1st, 2018 18:44
Inside Out
myself and me said:
From a broken heart, I saw dead branches and beautiful blooms.
December 10th, 2017 12:55
myself and me said:
From a broken heart, I saw dead branches and beautiful blooms.
December 10th, 2017 12:55
Inside Out
FredPeyer said:
Love the painting, that view through broken sheetrock.
The poem is haunting me. There are days where I don\'t seem to be able to see \'inside out\' either. Beautifully written, WL!
December 10th, 2017 04:35
FredPeyer said:
Love the painting, that view through broken sheetrock.
The poem is haunting me. There are days where I don\'t seem to be able to see \'inside out\' either. Beautifully written, WL!
December 10th, 2017 04:35
Inside Out
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive write.
Such a great artwork as well.
December 10th, 2017 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive write.
Such a great artwork as well.
December 10th, 2017 02:48
Inside Out
Michael Edwards said:
A sad write and a beauty of a painting - both great pieces
December 10th, 2017 01:00
Michael Edwards said:
A sad write and a beauty of a painting - both great pieces
December 10th, 2017 01:00
Beyond Pain
FredPeyer said:
Great painting, great poem, WL!
And you are so right,
art is life, and life is art
and the two shall never part
December 5th, 2017 03:52
FredPeyer said:
Great painting, great poem, WL!
And you are so right,
art is life, and life is art
and the two shall never part
December 5th, 2017 03:52
Beyond Pain
myself and me said:
reflecting the light of desire,
the attractive color dripping off
can not resist the temptation to taste
the perfect fruit
without considering the poison and consequence
Beyond pain
but never beyond sorrow
December 4th, 2017 19:43
myself and me said:
reflecting the light of desire,
the attractive color dripping off
can not resist the temptation to taste
the perfect fruit
without considering the poison and consequence
Beyond pain
but never beyond sorrow
December 4th, 2017 19:43
Beyond Pain
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful work Bill - both poem and painting.
December 4th, 2017 16:10
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful work Bill - both poem and painting.
December 4th, 2017 16:10
Sacred Creek
ZIGGY said:
A great poem indeed enjoyed your imagery in this piece a pleasure to read your work ,,,,cheers
December 2nd, 2017 12:40
ZIGGY said:
A great poem indeed enjoyed your imagery in this piece a pleasure to read your work ,,,,cheers
December 2nd, 2017 12:40
Temporal Faith Floats
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Awesome phrasing here in freeverse. Great metaphors created poetically and wording too superb. Did u mean the soul will float in the hereafter? Sublime description indeed. Kudos.
Pls do review my latest poem too.
November 29th, 2017 12:54
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Awesome phrasing here in freeverse. Great metaphors created poetically and wording too superb. Did u mean the soul will float in the hereafter? Sublime description indeed. Kudos.
Pls do review my latest poem too.
November 29th, 2017 12:54
Temporal Faith Floats
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write and that last line is so meaningful.
November 28th, 2017 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write and that last line is so meaningful.
November 28th, 2017 02:16
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