Comments received on poems by WL Schuett



Night Sounds
Goldfinch60 said:

Love the artwork.

January 7th, 2018 02:13

Night Sounds
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive write.

January 7th, 2018 02:13

Soft
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write WL and the painting is superb.

January 2nd, 2018 01:49

Soft
FredPeyer said:

Wonderful choice of words, great writing, WL!
Love the last stanza. Wondering if the heart broke BECAUSE she did not want to give it away? Would it still be whole if given away?

January 1st, 2018 19:48

Soft
Christina8 said:

A great poem and picture! I loved the last lines, \"the heart she hadn\'\'t wanted to give away, softly broke.\" Wonderful!!

January 1st, 2018 18:44

Soft
Michael Edwards said:

Fine write Bill and a great picture.

January 1st, 2018 14:36

Soft
Shadowbox15 said:

Beautiful imagery

January 1st, 2018 12:28

Inside Out
myself and me said:

From a broken heart, I saw dead branches and beautiful blooms.

December 10th, 2017 12:55

Inside Out
FredPeyer said:

Love the painting, that view through broken sheetrock.
The poem is haunting me. There are days where I don\'t seem to be able to see \'inside out\' either. Beautifully written, WL!

December 10th, 2017 04:35

Inside Out
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful emotive write.

Such a great artwork as well.

December 10th, 2017 02:48

Inside Out
Michael Edwards said:

A sad write and a beauty of a painting - both great pieces

December 10th, 2017 01:00

Beyond Pain
FredPeyer said:

Great painting, great poem, WL!
And you are so right,
art is life, and life is art
and the two shall never part

December 5th, 2017 03:52

Beyond Pain
myself and me said:

reflecting the light of desire,
the attractive color dripping off
can not resist the temptation to taste
the perfect fruit
without considering the poison and consequence
Beyond pain
but never beyond sorrow

December 4th, 2017 19:43

Beyond Pain
Michael Edwards said:

Beautiful work Bill - both poem and painting.

December 4th, 2017 16:10

Sacred Creek
ZIGGY said:

A great poem indeed enjoyed your imagery in this piece a pleasure to read your work ,,,,cheers

December 2nd, 2017 12:40

Temporal Faith Floats
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Awesome phrasing here in freeverse. Great metaphors created poetically and wording too superb. Did u mean the soul will float in the hereafter? Sublime description indeed. Kudos.

Pls do review my latest poem too.

November 29th, 2017 12:54

Temporal Faith Floats
Goldfinch60 said:

What a wonderful write and that last line is so meaningful.

November 28th, 2017 02:16

Temporal Faith Floats
FredPeyer said:

WL, you are a great writer! \'artillery of knowledge\', \'time on thin ice\'...excellent writing, beautiful poem...definitely a favorite!

November 27th, 2017 20:56

Temporal Faith Floats
myself and me said:

The float soul fly along the ray of the Moon,
So tender, so light, so peace, so beautiful
Assimilated into the nigh sky
Turned into a star
Shine for you


November 27th, 2017 19:21

Temporal Faith Floats
Christina8 said:

This is an amazing write! Just absolutely captivating! i read it a few times just to absorb it all. I agree with the ladies before me, the deepest line is the last, where it has such a impactful effect on the reader. Excellent job!

November 27th, 2017 14:13

Sacred Creek
FredPeyer said:

Like the others, I was drawn into your poem right to the last and rather unexpected lines that stopped me and made me think. Do we?

November 22nd, 2017 12:56

Sacred Creek
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write together with a superb painting.

November 22nd, 2017 01:28

Sacred Creek
myself and me said:

Re: Stunning \"Sacred creek\"
A withered leaf
from no where
Fall in the sacred creek
Cause endless ripple of melancholy
Burning rose
Turn the creek into sea of fire

November 21st, 2017 19:56

Sacred Creek
Accidental Poet said:

Everyone has days like these Bill. And writing of it shows the poet in you. And your painting also shows the artist painter in you. Excellent work my friend.

November 21st, 2017 19:48

Sacred Creek
Fay Slimm. said:

Oh - these words paint a fantastic scene of sad nostalgia burned into readers\' minds with superb imagery . That final question rousing fresh interest re. what we hold sacred gives a stunning end Bill and what a wonderful painting too. A favourite with me without a doubt.

November 21st, 2017 17:18

Sacred Creek
Michael Edwards said:

Super art work and a super poem to go with it - great work Bill

November 21st, 2017 13:54

Sacred Creek
Christina8 said:

What a beautiful painting! A wonderful poem and along with Santita, I too am left pondering the final line. Great work!

November 21st, 2017 13:18

Tears of Thorns
Seek said:

Many stand alone lines here, pointing to the majesty of this work. Than you for sharing.

November 18th, 2017 13:00

Tears of Thorns
FredPeyer said:

Too many great lines to mention them all! This beautiful poem should be published in a book!

November 15th, 2017 18:23

Tears of Thorns
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write WL.

November 15th, 2017 02:55

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