Comments received on poems by WL Schuett
Temporal Faith Floats
FredPeyer said:
WL, you are a great writer! \'artillery of knowledge\', \'time on thin ice\'...excellent writing, beautiful poem...definitely a favorite!
November 27th, 2017 20:56
FredPeyer said:
WL, you are a great writer! \'artillery of knowledge\', \'time on thin ice\'...excellent writing, beautiful poem...definitely a favorite!
November 27th, 2017 20:56
Temporal Faith Floats
myself and me said:
The float soul fly along the ray of the Moon,
So tender, so light, so peace, so beautiful
Assimilated into the nigh sky
Turned into a star
Shine for you
November 27th, 2017 19:21
myself and me said:
The float soul fly along the ray of the Moon,
So tender, so light, so peace, so beautiful
Assimilated into the nigh sky
Turned into a star
Shine for you
November 27th, 2017 19:21
Temporal Faith Floats
Christina8 said:
This is an amazing write! Just absolutely captivating! i read it a few times just to absorb it all. I agree with the ladies before me, the deepest line is the last, where it has such a impactful effect on the reader. Excellent job!
November 27th, 2017 14:13
Christina8 said:
This is an amazing write! Just absolutely captivating! i read it a few times just to absorb it all. I agree with the ladies before me, the deepest line is the last, where it has such a impactful effect on the reader. Excellent job!
November 27th, 2017 14:13
Sacred Creek
FredPeyer said:
Like the others, I was drawn into your poem right to the last and rather unexpected lines that stopped me and made me think. Do we?
November 22nd, 2017 12:56
FredPeyer said:
Like the others, I was drawn into your poem right to the last and rather unexpected lines that stopped me and made me think. Do we?
November 22nd, 2017 12:56
Sacred Creek
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write together with a superb painting.
November 22nd, 2017 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write together with a superb painting.
November 22nd, 2017 01:28
Sacred Creek
myself and me said:
Re: Stunning \"Sacred creek\"
A withered leaf
from no where
Fall in the sacred creek
Cause endless ripple of melancholy
Burning rose
Turn the creek into sea of fire
November 21st, 2017 19:56
myself and me said:
Re: Stunning \"Sacred creek\"
A withered leaf
from no where
Fall in the sacred creek
Cause endless ripple of melancholy
Burning rose
Turn the creek into sea of fire
November 21st, 2017 19:56
Sacred Creek
Accidental Poet said:
Everyone has days like these Bill. And writing of it shows the poet in you. And your painting also shows the artist painter in you. Excellent work my friend.
November 21st, 2017 19:48
Accidental Poet said:
Everyone has days like these Bill. And writing of it shows the poet in you. And your painting also shows the artist painter in you. Excellent work my friend.
November 21st, 2017 19:48
Sacred Creek
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh - these words paint a fantastic scene of sad nostalgia burned into readers\' minds with superb imagery . That final question rousing fresh interest re. what we hold sacred gives a stunning end Bill and what a wonderful painting too. A favourite with me without a doubt.
November 21st, 2017 17:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh - these words paint a fantastic scene of sad nostalgia burned into readers\' minds with superb imagery . That final question rousing fresh interest re. what we hold sacred gives a stunning end Bill and what a wonderful painting too. A favourite with me without a doubt.
November 21st, 2017 17:18
Sacred Creek
Michael Edwards said:
Super art work and a super poem to go with it - great work Bill
November 21st, 2017 13:54
Michael Edwards said:
Super art work and a super poem to go with it - great work Bill
November 21st, 2017 13:54
Sacred Creek
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful painting! A wonderful poem and along with Santita, I too am left pondering the final line. Great work!
November 21st, 2017 13:18
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful painting! A wonderful poem and along with Santita, I too am left pondering the final line. Great work!
November 21st, 2017 13:18
Tears of Thorns
Seek said:
Many stand alone lines here, pointing to the majesty of this work. Than you for sharing.
November 18th, 2017 13:00
Seek said:
Many stand alone lines here, pointing to the majesty of this work. Than you for sharing.
November 18th, 2017 13:00
Tears of Thorns
FredPeyer said:
Too many great lines to mention them all! This beautiful poem should be published in a book!
November 15th, 2017 18:23
FredPeyer said:
Too many great lines to mention them all! This beautiful poem should be published in a book!
November 15th, 2017 18:23
Tears of Thorns
Michael Edwards said:
Bill a beautiful write and a stunning painting - couldn\'t ask for more.
November 14th, 2017 17:10
Michael Edwards said:
Bill a beautiful write and a stunning painting - couldn\'t ask for more.
November 14th, 2017 17:10
Tears of Thorns
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful painting...
Beautiful poem! A great
Read! Thank you!
November 14th, 2017 15:31
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful painting...
Beautiful poem! A great
Read! Thank you!
November 14th, 2017 15:31
Tears of Thorns
Christina8 said:
This is an absolutely beautiful write! Santita already highlighted my favorite verse. Always a fan of your poetry but this one is a gem! Nice picture to highlight it! Thanks for sharing!
November 14th, 2017 15:24
Christina8 said:
This is an absolutely beautiful write! Santita already highlighted my favorite verse. Always a fan of your poetry but this one is a gem! Nice picture to highlight it! Thanks for sharing!
November 14th, 2017 15:24
Tears of Thorns
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant artwork and oh how I enjoyed that beguiling verse full of good metaphor . Thanks so much for sharing them both.
November 14th, 2017 14:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant artwork and oh how I enjoyed that beguiling verse full of good metaphor . Thanks so much for sharing them both.
November 14th, 2017 14:40
Cracked Window
dusk arising said:
No matter what you write the reader sees it their way. I love the way you have disguised mugging the intellectuals here. Makes me think of Edward Lear for grown-ups.
November 10th, 2017 20:59
dusk arising said:
No matter what you write the reader sees it their way. I love the way you have disguised mugging the intellectuals here. Makes me think of Edward Lear for grown-ups.
November 10th, 2017 20:59
Cracked Window
myself and me said:
It seems to me that something has been hatched inside a withered leaf, something new, fresh, bright, full of life will burst from the dead shell. Love the contrast of the dark background and the beautiful yellowish light through the semi-transparent object (leaf?). I see hope. One of your best paint. The poem fit the paint, but the paint is a winner this time.
November 9th, 2017 11:46
myself and me said:
It seems to me that something has been hatched inside a withered leaf, something new, fresh, bright, full of life will burst from the dead shell. Love the contrast of the dark background and the beautiful yellowish light through the semi-transparent object (leaf?). I see hope. One of your best paint. The poem fit the paint, but the paint is a winner this time.
November 9th, 2017 11:46
Cracked Window
Goldfinch60 said:
Like us all we are all unique and see both the words and the words in different ways, the line that intrigues me is \"with a pocketful of leaves \" are we seeing leaves from a tree or leaving others or others leaving us.
In the painting I see new life.
Good write and fascinating painting WL.
November 9th, 2017 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Like us all we are all unique and see both the words and the words in different ways, the line that intrigues me is \"with a pocketful of leaves \" are we seeing leaves from a tree or leaving others or others leaving us.
In the painting I see new life.
Good write and fascinating painting WL.
November 9th, 2017 00:43
Cracked Window
Seek said:
A beautifully done poem. What stood out for me: \"...the solace of forgetfulness\" and \"...there is magic in the mundane\". To be honest, your poem, just like the painting has been \"...bubbling from the inside\" right from the get-go.
November 9th, 2017 00:24
Seek said:
A beautifully done poem. What stood out for me: \"...the solace of forgetfulness\" and \"...there is magic in the mundane\". To be honest, your poem, just like the painting has been \"...bubbling from the inside\" right from the get-go.
November 9th, 2017 00:24
Cracked Window
Michael Edwards said:
When I look at a painting like this I see use of tonal values and complementary shapes - okay so I can see a face beneath a crown of thorns if I really look but attempting to impose realism on work like this is at the bottom list. I love it for what it is - an almost-abstract with rather forbidding overtones. And a great write as well.
November 8th, 2017 17:31
Michael Edwards said:
When I look at a painting like this I see use of tonal values and complementary shapes - okay so I can see a face beneath a crown of thorns if I really look but attempting to impose realism on work like this is at the bottom list. I love it for what it is - an almost-abstract with rather forbidding overtones. And a great write as well.
November 8th, 2017 17:31
Cracked Window
Louis Gibbs said:
How about an alien life form with its soul on fire, surrounded by protective orbs of E.T.s? Nothing is too strange in this odd world!
Good, thought-provoking write and picture, WL!
November 8th, 2017 16:15
Louis Gibbs said:
How about an alien life form with its soul on fire, surrounded by protective orbs of E.T.s? Nothing is too strange in this odd world!
Good, thought-provoking write and picture, WL!
November 8th, 2017 16:15
Cracked Window
Brycycle said:
I really liked this poem, it is very unique. Great write, and painting.
November 8th, 2017 16:10
Brycycle said:
I really liked this poem, it is very unique. Great write, and painting.
November 8th, 2017 16:10
Cracked Window
MaddieJ said:
Amazing.... The poem and the painting. I saw a new self dripping from the old self. Like a cocoon, into a new exciting world. It\'s like you said though, we all see something different. \" There is magic in the mundane.\" is my favorite part
November 8th, 2017 15:55
MaddieJ said:
Amazing.... The poem and the painting. I saw a new self dripping from the old self. Like a cocoon, into a new exciting world. It\'s like you said though, we all see something different. \" There is magic in the mundane.\" is my favorite part
November 8th, 2017 15:55
Cracked Window
FredPeyer said:
The first thing I saw in your painting was a \'haunted face\'.
Your excellent poem is so right, WL, we all see the same thing in different ways. If you have eight witnesses to a crime, you will have eight different stories.
Very good poem!
November 8th, 2017 13:47
FredPeyer said:
The first thing I saw in your painting was a \'haunted face\'.
Your excellent poem is so right, WL, we all see the same thing in different ways. If you have eight witnesses to a crime, you will have eight different stories.
Very good poem!
November 8th, 2017 13:47
Edge of the Wind
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes in the search for a better place we learn that where we began was the better place. The \"Edge of the Wind\" is a strange place to begin and what you heard was a mere illusion, or should I say \'allusion,\' one that was not what you were seeking. Along the way though a very descriptive journey. Terrific poetry. - Phil A.
November 7th, 2017 20:08
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes in the search for a better place we learn that where we began was the better place. The \"Edge of the Wind\" is a strange place to begin and what you heard was a mere illusion, or should I say \'allusion,\' one that was not what you were seeking. Along the way though a very descriptive journey. Terrific poetry. - Phil A.
November 7th, 2017 20:08
Edge of the Wind
myself and me said:
Standing still, \"to listen to the edge of the wind\".
Keep the eye open, to seek the answer in the darkness.
Hold the breath, to wait for the messages.
Get lost in this poem. The painting is attractive.
November 6th, 2017 09:31
myself and me said:
Standing still, \"to listen to the edge of the wind\".
Keep the eye open, to seek the answer in the darkness.
Hold the breath, to wait for the messages.
Get lost in this poem. The painting is attractive.
November 6th, 2017 09:31
Edge of the Wind
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write WL and as Fred has said the \'to listen to the edge of the wind\'is a wonderful line that speaks to me.
November 5th, 2017 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write WL and as Fred has said the \'to listen to the edge of the wind\'is a wonderful line that speaks to me.
November 5th, 2017 02:23
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