Comments received on poems by WL Schuett



Tears of Thorns
Michael Edwards said:

Bill a beautiful write and a stunning painting - couldn\'t ask for more.

November 14th, 2017 17:10

Tears of Thorns
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Beautiful painting...
Beautiful poem! A great
Read! Thank you!

November 14th, 2017 15:31

Tears of Thorns
Christina8 said:

This is an absolutely beautiful write! Santita already highlighted my favorite verse. Always a fan of your poetry but this one is a gem! Nice picture to highlight it! Thanks for sharing!

November 14th, 2017 15:24

Tears of Thorns
myself and me said:

Lovely paint. Marvelous poem.

November 14th, 2017 14:55

Tears of Thorns
Fay Slimm. said:

Brilliant artwork and oh how I enjoyed that beguiling verse full of good metaphor . Thanks so much for sharing them both.

November 14th, 2017 14:40

Cracked Window
dusk arising said:

No matter what you write the reader sees it their way. I love the way you have disguised mugging the intellectuals here. Makes me think of Edward Lear for grown-ups.


November 10th, 2017 20:59

Cracked Window
myself and me said:

It seems to me that something has been hatched inside a withered leaf, something new, fresh, bright, full of life will burst from the dead shell. Love the contrast of the dark background and the beautiful yellowish light through the semi-transparent object (leaf?). I see hope. One of your best paint. The poem fit the paint, but the paint is a winner this time.

November 9th, 2017 11:46

Cracked Window
Goldfinch60 said:

Like us all we are all unique and see both the words and the words in different ways, the line that intrigues me is \"with a pocketful of leaves \" are we seeing leaves from a tree or leaving others or others leaving us.
In the painting I see new life.
Good write and fascinating painting WL.

November 9th, 2017 00:43

Cracked Window
Seek said:

A beautifully done poem. What stood out for me: \"...the solace of forgetfulness\" and \"...there is magic in the mundane\". To be honest, your poem, just like the painting has been \"...bubbling from the inside\" right from the get-go.

November 9th, 2017 00:24

Cracked Window
Michael Edwards said:

When I look at a painting like this I see use of tonal values and complementary shapes - okay so I can see a face beneath a crown of thorns if I really look but attempting to impose realism on work like this is at the bottom list. I love it for what it is - an almost-abstract with rather forbidding overtones. And a great write as well.

November 8th, 2017 17:31

Cracked Window
Louis Gibbs said:

How about an alien life form with its soul on fire, surrounded by protective orbs of E.T.s? Nothing is too strange in this odd world!
Good, thought-provoking write and picture, WL!

November 8th, 2017 16:15

Cracked Window
Brycycle said:

I really liked this poem, it is very unique. Great write, and painting.

November 8th, 2017 16:10

Cracked Window
MaddieJ said:

Amazing.... The poem and the painting. I saw a new self dripping from the old self. Like a cocoon, into a new exciting world. It\'s like you said though, we all see something different. \" There is magic in the mundane.\" is my favorite part

November 8th, 2017 15:55

Cracked Window
FredPeyer said:

The first thing I saw in your painting was a \'haunted face\'.
Your excellent poem is so right, WL, we all see the same thing in different ways. If you have eight witnesses to a crime, you will have eight different stories.
Very good poem!

November 8th, 2017 13:47

Edge of the Wind
MendedFences27 said:

Sometimes in the search for a better place we learn that where we began was the better place. The \"Edge of the Wind\" is a strange place to begin and what you heard was a mere illusion, or should I say \'allusion,\' one that was not what you were seeking. Along the way though a very descriptive journey. Terrific poetry. - Phil A.

November 7th, 2017 20:08

Edge of the Wind
myself and me said:

Standing still, \"to listen to the edge of the wind\".
Keep the eye open, to seek the answer in the darkness.
Hold the breath, to wait for the messages.
Get lost in this poem. The painting is attractive.

November 6th, 2017 09:31

Edge of the Wind
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write WL and as Fred has said the \'to listen to the edge of the wind\'is a wonderful line that speaks to me.

November 5th, 2017 02:23

Edge of the Wind
CMoses said:

Incredible journey inside this poem.

November 4th, 2017 21:53

Edge of the Wind
Accidental Poet said:

What can I say that hasn\'t already been said here?
OUTSTANDING BILL! That\'s what I\'ll say of your painting and poem.

November 4th, 2017 20:04

Edge of the Wind
FredPeyer said:

Even though your painting is good, WL, the poem outshines it! And I just love the \'listen to the edge of the wind\'! Great, great poem!!! (Was contemplating to give you 4 exclamation points, but did not want to overdo it)

November 4th, 2017 19:50

Edge of the Wind
Christina8 said:

There simply aren\'t words to tell you how great your poem is. Kat said \"awe inspiring\" and that it should be in a book, and I most certainly agree! You are talented beyond my abilities to critique. Excellent poetry, Bill!

November 4th, 2017 18:44

Twilight Song
MaddieJ said:

\"She was counting to zero

down a road to nowhere

with nothing in sight \" These lines are golden! Thanks for another excellent write friend!

November 1st, 2017 20:42

Twilight Song
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write WL, I was drawn right into this.

October 31st, 2017 01:25

Twilight Song
myself and me said:

The melancholy eyes are searching for hope, the closed mouth is trying to express depressed feelings. The \"twilight song\" is sad and far.

October 30th, 2017 14:21

Twilight Song
Louis Gibbs said:

Devoid of life-force. Surrendered to the void. A quenched soul, is what this painting and poem express to me. Both so well done, WL!

October 30th, 2017 12:38

Twilight Song
Alex Arnot said:

a very surreal darkness! I also really like the title of this poem.

October 30th, 2017 12:21

The Morning
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write for a wondrous time of the day.

Fabulous artwork as well.

October 27th, 2017 01:42

The Morning
FredPeyer said:

You just made my morning, WL! Beautifully written!

October 26th, 2017 19:41

The Morning
Christina8 said:

Amazing! Your words flow effortlessly. Beautiful depiction of the morning--with a wonderful painting to match!

October 26th, 2017 19:07

The Morning
Accidental Poet said:

A very realistic and soothing morning write. And a beautiful painting too.

October 26th, 2017 19:04

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