Comments received on poems by WL Schuett
Breaking Free
MendedFences27 said:
\"A blink of an eye, between the righteous and the fool.\" \'Wasted years as he filled his glass with her tears.\" Brilliant phrases, among a poignant poem of self-reclamation. The artwork depicts the sense of freedom she must have felt, once she became that \"born again jewel.\" It requires a great deal of courage for someone to free herself from such a relationship. Awesome write. Terrific poem and painting. - Phil A.
October 20th, 2017 13:26
MendedFences27 said:
\"A blink of an eye, between the righteous and the fool.\" \'Wasted years as he filled his glass with her tears.\" Brilliant phrases, among a poignant poem of self-reclamation. The artwork depicts the sense of freedom she must have felt, once she became that \"born again jewel.\" It requires a great deal of courage for someone to free herself from such a relationship. Awesome write. Terrific poem and painting. - Phil A.
October 20th, 2017 13:26
Blind Faith
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write WL.
That artwork is wonderful.
October 20th, 2017 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write WL.
That artwork is wonderful.
October 20th, 2017 01:06
Blind Faith
MendedFences27 said:
46 years into a marriage and still, things mystify me, about her, about us. My faith in her, in us, all of us now, still remains. I believe the \"earthquake\" happened the moment I met her, she would challenge that notion. We still look ahead to a future together, and more and more we harken back to memories.
Well, to say I loved your poem would not do it justice. I was caught by the first stanza, confirmed by the second, and succumbed by the third and fourth. Thus enthralled, I read on through stanzas 5, 6, and 7. Then, you gave us the 8th, a loophole out, a method of expression, and a summation of all that proceeded. A fantastic journey, a wonderful poem, one that I must save. _ Phil A.
October 19th, 2017 20:38
MendedFences27 said:
46 years into a marriage and still, things mystify me, about her, about us. My faith in her, in us, all of us now, still remains. I believe the \"earthquake\" happened the moment I met her, she would challenge that notion. We still look ahead to a future together, and more and more we harken back to memories.
Well, to say I loved your poem would not do it justice. I was caught by the first stanza, confirmed by the second, and succumbed by the third and fourth. Thus enthralled, I read on through stanzas 5, 6, and 7. Then, you gave us the 8th, a loophole out, a method of expression, and a summation of all that proceeded. A fantastic journey, a wonderful poem, one that I must save. _ Phil A.
October 19th, 2017 20:38
Blind Faith
Christina8 said:
An absolutely beautiful poem, Bill! Loved the last stanza (it was all great) because it was so relatable! Thanks for sharing such a great one!
October 19th, 2017 11:17
Christina8 said:
An absolutely beautiful poem, Bill! Loved the last stanza (it was all great) because it was so relatable! Thanks for sharing such a great one!
October 19th, 2017 11:17
Never a doubt
Goldfinch60 said:
Very loving write and knowing who will be with you forever is a great state to be in, I too am in that same state.
Good artwork as well she is a lovely lady.
October 18th, 2017 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Very loving write and knowing who will be with you forever is a great state to be in, I too am in that same state.
Good artwork as well she is a lovely lady.
October 18th, 2017 00:52
Never a doubt
Accidental Poet said:
Easily worthy of all this in return from your love. ; )
October 17th, 2017 18:44
Accidental Poet said:
Easily worthy of all this in return from your love. ; )
October 17th, 2017 18:44
Never a doubt
Laura🌻 said:
WL,
Love the poem...love the painting!
Beautiful! Warm...loving...eternally faithful! To be blessed with an amazing partner is a blessing in itself!
October 17th, 2017 11:20
Laura🌻 said:
WL,
Love the poem...love the painting!
Beautiful! Warm...loving...eternally faithful! To be blessed with an amazing partner is a blessing in itself!
October 17th, 2017 11:20
Never a doubt
FredPeyer said:
WL you wrote a great tribute to the one you love. Having that someone on our side through the good and bad times until the very end is really all we can ever ask! Love the way you handled the light in the portrait!
October 17th, 2017 11:19
FredPeyer said:
WL you wrote a great tribute to the one you love. Having that someone on our side through the good and bad times until the very end is really all we can ever ask! Love the way you handled the light in the portrait!
October 17th, 2017 11:19
Never a doubt
Christina8 said:
It\'s such a wonderful piece you have here-a painting with a heartfelt poem to match. Isn\'t it wonderful to have found that perfect someone? LOVED the poem, I hope she loved the tribute! You are both very lucky.
October 17th, 2017 10:37
Christina8 said:
It\'s such a wonderful piece you have here-a painting with a heartfelt poem to match. Isn\'t it wonderful to have found that perfect someone? LOVED the poem, I hope she loved the tribute! You are both very lucky.
October 17th, 2017 10:37
Breaking Free
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale of breaking free and finding oneself within yourself.
Good artwork as well.
October 17th, 2017 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale of breaking free and finding oneself within yourself.
Good artwork as well.
October 17th, 2017 00:21
Breaking Free
Christina8 said:
What a wonderful message of hope! This is such a great poem! Absolutely loved it!
October 16th, 2017 13:36
Christina8 said:
What a wonderful message of hope! This is such a great poem! Absolutely loved it!
October 16th, 2017 13:36
Faded Flower
Seek said:
A lonely hovel took you to a flower that no one else saw is the positive I took from this sad piece so well written and a beautiful painting to go with it.
October 16th, 2017 05:26
Seek said:
A lonely hovel took you to a flower that no one else saw is the positive I took from this sad piece so well written and a beautiful painting to go with it.
October 16th, 2017 05:26
Faded Flower
MendedFences27 said:
I think the painting is a stirring representation of loneliness and depression. The poem paints an equally mournful picture of one overwhelmed by the emotions depicted in your painting. A sad ending as both are swept away, but only poetically, both remain captured in your art and poem. Found this fascinating. - Phil A.
October 13th, 2017 13:04
MendedFences27 said:
I think the painting is a stirring representation of loneliness and depression. The poem paints an equally mournful picture of one overwhelmed by the emotions depicted in your painting. A sad ending as both are swept away, but only poetically, both remain captured in your art and poem. Found this fascinating. - Phil A.
October 13th, 2017 13:04
Faded Flower
Sugiura Asuna said:
Beautiful in ways which you can only become when sad and lonely.
October 13th, 2017 11:50
Sugiura Asuna said:
Beautiful in ways which you can only become when sad and lonely.
October 13th, 2017 11:50
Faded Flower
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, WL, but haunting. You captured that loneliness really well. I like the whole poem, but especially the ending, which isn\'t really an ending, but open ended...
The painting expresses the feelings and undercurrents from within the poem. Well done, Kudos!
October 13th, 2017 11:41
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, WL, but haunting. You captured that loneliness really well. I like the whole poem, but especially the ending, which isn\'t really an ending, but open ended...
The painting expresses the feelings and undercurrents from within the poem. Well done, Kudos!
October 13th, 2017 11:41
Faded Flower
Fay Slimm. said:
Fantastic talent for brushwork and poetry - very poignant both picture and verse - a really good duo WL.
October 13th, 2017 10:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Fantastic talent for brushwork and poetry - very poignant both picture and verse - a really good duo WL.
October 13th, 2017 10:42
Faded Flower
Louis Gibbs said:
A mournful picture painted here so well, WL, both in words and by brush. Your dual talents continue to impress me. Well done!
October 13th, 2017 09:39
Louis Gibbs said:
A mournful picture painted here so well, WL, both in words and by brush. Your dual talents continue to impress me. Well done!
October 13th, 2017 09:39
Windowless House
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotion laden write, I do hope that the windows can be replaced.
That artwork is very good even if it is somewhat disturbing, but art should produce feelings in the viewer.
October 13th, 2017 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotion laden write, I do hope that the windows can be replaced.
That artwork is very good even if it is somewhat disturbing, but art should produce feelings in the viewer.
October 13th, 2017 00:21
Windowless House
FredPeyer said:
Great metaphor, sounds like it is not only windowless, but after you entered they also took away the door.
You do write very beautifully, WL.
October 12th, 2017 17:57
FredPeyer said:
Great metaphor, sounds like it is not only windowless, but after you entered they also took away the door.
You do write very beautifully, WL.
October 12th, 2017 17:57
Windowless House
Cranial Tapestry said:
beautifully written!
brilliant portrayal of the situation.
absolutely love this!
October 12th, 2017 10:54
Cranial Tapestry said:
beautifully written!
brilliant portrayal of the situation.
absolutely love this!
October 12th, 2017 10:54
A poet in an all nite cafe
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, those people who have never written a verse can give us so much inspiration.
October 11th, 2017 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, those people who have never written a verse can give us so much inspiration.
October 11th, 2017 00:49
A poet in an all nite cafe
FredPeyer said:
Your incredible poem made me think, WL. And you are right, one does not have to be a writer to be a poet.Under definition of \'poet\' it does say \'A person who writes poems\', but it also says: \'a person possessing special powers of imagination or expression\'.
October 10th, 2017 12:40
FredPeyer said:
Your incredible poem made me think, WL. And you are right, one does not have to be a writer to be a poet.Under definition of \'poet\' it does say \'A person who writes poems\', but it also says: \'a person possessing special powers of imagination or expression\'.
October 10th, 2017 12:40
A poet in an all nite cafe
Christina8 said:
This was a really cool poem. Kept me captivated. And it\'s so true that people who have never written a verse, in all those places you cited, \"is where we find the true poets of our universe\". Excellent!
October 10th, 2017 11:18
Christina8 said:
This was a really cool poem. Kept me captivated. And it\'s so true that people who have never written a verse, in all those places you cited, \"is where we find the true poets of our universe\". Excellent!
October 10th, 2017 11:18
Searching Light
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. We should always go towards the light.
Another wonderful painting WL.
October 7th, 2017 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. We should always go towards the light.
Another wonderful painting WL.
October 7th, 2017 00:51
Searching Light
malubotelho said:
A very beautiful writing WL. I love the way we speak about the light. Believing that the light will reach you. Awesome.
October 6th, 2017 23:26
malubotelho said:
A very beautiful writing WL. I love the way we speak about the light. Believing that the light will reach you. Awesome.
October 6th, 2017 23:26
Searching Light
FredPeyer said:
I do love your poem, WL, it is so well written. I think all of us humans are looking for that light. Some are lucky to find it during their lifetime, but most have to wait until they get to the \'other\' side.
October 6th, 2017 12:50
FredPeyer said:
I do love your poem, WL, it is so well written. I think all of us humans are looking for that light. Some are lucky to find it during their lifetime, but most have to wait until they get to the \'other\' side.
October 6th, 2017 12:50
Searching Light
Louis Gibbs said:
Congratulations and condolences on being on the unending path to enlightenment, WL! Your wonderfully expressed poem does it tribute.
October 6th, 2017 10:30
Louis Gibbs said:
Congratulations and condolences on being on the unending path to enlightenment, WL! Your wonderfully expressed poem does it tribute.
October 6th, 2017 10:30
Searching Light
lasergraph said:
Great light and great graphic. The light finds some easy, others stumble to it.
October 6th, 2017 10:03
lasergraph said:
Great light and great graphic. The light finds some easy, others stumble to it.
October 6th, 2017 10:03
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