Comments received on poems by WL Schuett



Dawns Piper
Fay Slimm. said:

Stunning painting and amazing writing - - loud applause for both of them Bill.

September 26th, 2017 14:49

Scholarly Wanderers
chinaaliciarivera said:

Praise to the bees. I mean... as a child i ran from them so they won\'t sting me. And as an adult i still do. :)

But i love bees. The way they look. When you get a really good look at them, they are kind of cute. They are like little flying furry pets! :)

Good write. I do hope they never become extinct. They are part of life small little wonders. 💕 ❤ 😊

September 26th, 2017 14:16

The Alley
chinaaliciarivera said:

This poem gives you some interesting visuals in your mind. It makes me think of the life of an alley cat, or of homeless people. Their experiences. Their feelings. Interesting. Very interesting. Nice write. 💕 ❤ 😊

September 26th, 2017 14:11

Warm Stormy Rain
chinaaliciarivera said:

Lovely poem. 💕 ❤ 😊

September 26th, 2017 14:09

Return to the meadow
chinaaliciarivera said:

You could seriously narrate this poem over a strip of a movie i am serious. This poem could win contests! Seriously. I know a good poem when i read it. This is good. It gives the mind a good visual. I loved it. I hope you are planning on or already have composed a book. If not, you should write a book sir! Nice writes. Good rhyming. Good structure. Good scenery setting in the poems words. It really sets a scene in your mind with clarity. Nice. Keep up your writing. It is definitely a gift you have. 🌠 💕 💗💕 ❤ 😊

September 26th, 2017 13:33

Turtles on a log
chinaaliciarivera said:

This poem made me smile, and laugh. This is funny. What is really nice about this poem though i feel is that it teaches you in a way to appreciate the small things in life, life\'s little blessings and life\'s little things or little creatures that make us awe. Good rhyming again as well. Great work! 😊❤💕

September 26th, 2017 13:26

Dawns Piper
chinaaliciarivera said:

Lovely poem! Great writing and rhyming style. Very good. Well organized. Reads well. Nice. Love the Subject base also. Keep up the good writes. 😊❤💕

September 26th, 2017 13:18

Dawns Piper
FredPeyer said:

Great painting - great poem!
The perfect way to start my day!
I like how you relate the tears in the second and last stanza. So well written!

September 26th, 2017 12:15

Dawns Piper
Candlewitch said:

WOW!

I loved both painting and poem! beautiful work done here! :)

*hugs, Cat

September 26th, 2017 12:12

Dawns Piper
Christina8 said:

This is excellent poetry, WL! Beautiful imagery and rhyme! Picture of hope that I could use on this fine day. Thanks for sharing!

September 26th, 2017 10:33

The Alley
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. If we do go down that alley, which many of us do, and come out we will be a stronger better person for it.

There is so much to be seen in that artwork, the more i look the more I see - brilliant.

September 26th, 2017 00:53

The Alley
Accidental Poet said:

I wouldn\'t go down that alley no matter how many went with me. Not when there so many other well lit alleys. ; )

September 25th, 2017 19:43

The Alley
malubotelho said:

This poem reminded me of a Copacabana gallery at night when the stores are closed and if you live there at the building or you need to visit someone there, it gives me chills just to think. I\'ve been in that alley someday. I had to literally run with my heart racing. Awesome writing.

September 25th, 2017 19:27

The Alley
FredPeyer said:

Great, great writing, WL! For these kind of alleys I have two Samoan friends who are built like linebackers!

September 25th, 2017 17:29

The Alley
Louis Gibbs said:

We all must go down our dark alleys alone. This one sounds like a particularly challenging one, for sure! Well penned, WL!

September 25th, 2017 12:16

The Alley
Christina8 said:

A chilling write, WL! wonder if I\'ve been down this alley or just in my nightmares. This is simply excellent! Also enjoyed the painting!

September 25th, 2017 10:42

The Alley
Michael Edwards said:

I daren\'t without my comfort blanket - great chill write Bill.

September 25th, 2017 09:58

Warm Stormy Rain
Samreen Chowdhury said:

The contrast is beautiful here

September 24th, 2017 03:35

Warm Stormy Rain
Goldfinch60 said:

This is a wonderful write WL.

Another superb artwork as well.

September 22nd, 2017 01:38

Warm Stormy Rain
FredPeyer said:

WL, I salute you! Stunningly written!

September 22nd, 2017 01:25

Warm Stormy Rain
Christina8 said:

Beautifully written! This is a lovely gem of a find. A joy to read!

September 21st, 2017 20:35

Warm Stormy Rain
malubotelho said:

Beautiful writing. Very poetic as I like. Lovely written. I enjoyed this so much. Thank you.

September 21st, 2017 18:51

Huckleberry Stone
MaddieJ said:

Gorgeous painting! Love the poem as well!

September 21st, 2017 01:04

Raindrops on Cherries
MaddieJ said:

This was very touching! Thanks for sharing this poem with us! Always happy to read one of your poems friend!

September 21st, 2017 01:00

Raindrops on Cherries
WL Schuett said:

Thanks for sharing that AP I have not seen that movie but now I will watch for it ...and thanks for the supportive words , very nice

September 19th, 2017 21:09

Raindrops on Cherries
Accidental Poet said:

Very heartfelt WL. My adoptive mother passed from Alzheimer\'s disease and she too would ask the same questions every 5 minutes. It\'s not an easy thing to watch your parent slowly lose touch with reality. Have you seen the movie \"Still Alice\" with Julianne Moore? In it she is younger and it\'s hard to watch. But I had to watch it. My mother was 80, so many of the things she couldn\'t remember didn\'t matter much to her. I realized how fortunate she was to not get the disease until later in life. I wish you and your mom peace and love in her remaining time here with you.

September 19th, 2017 19:32

Raindrops on Cherries
FredPeyer said:

WL, this is one of the most beautifully written poems I ever read about a loved one with Alzheimers.
My mom had a big stroke and dementia before she passed away. And this poem reminded me so much of these last years. There was sadness and sorrow, but there was also joy and happiness during the few lucid moments she had. Thank you!

September 19th, 2017 12:34

Raindrops on Cherries
Michael Edwards said:

Very moving Bill - so well expressed.

September 19th, 2017 12:02

Raindrops on Cherries
myself and me said:

I am deeply moved by your writing and my eyes were wet.

September 19th, 2017 11:54

Raindrops on Cherries
malubotelho said:

Beautiful poem. A tribute to your dear mother. Wishing you strength to deal with this illness. My mother died at age 85 and her head was perfect but she had really bad osteoporosis.

September 19th, 2017 11:32



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