Comments received on poems by WL Schuett
Twilight Song
MaddieJ said:
\"She was counting to zero
down a road to nowhere
with nothing in sight \" These lines are golden! Thanks for another excellent write friend!
November 1st, 2017 20:42
MaddieJ said:
\"She was counting to zero
down a road to nowhere
with nothing in sight \" These lines are golden! Thanks for another excellent write friend!
November 1st, 2017 20:42
Twilight Song
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write WL, I was drawn right into this.
October 31st, 2017 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write WL, I was drawn right into this.
October 31st, 2017 01:25
Twilight Song
myself and me said:
The melancholy eyes are searching for hope, the closed mouth is trying to express depressed feelings. The \"twilight song\" is sad and far.
October 30th, 2017 14:21
myself and me said:
The melancholy eyes are searching for hope, the closed mouth is trying to express depressed feelings. The \"twilight song\" is sad and far.
October 30th, 2017 14:21
Twilight Song
Louis Gibbs said:
Devoid of life-force. Surrendered to the void. A quenched soul, is what this painting and poem express to me. Both so well done, WL!
October 30th, 2017 12:38
Louis Gibbs said:
Devoid of life-force. Surrendered to the void. A quenched soul, is what this painting and poem express to me. Both so well done, WL!
October 30th, 2017 12:38
Twilight Song
Alex Arnot said:
a very surreal darkness! I also really like the title of this poem.
October 30th, 2017 12:21
Alex Arnot said:
a very surreal darkness! I also really like the title of this poem.
October 30th, 2017 12:21
The Morning
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write for a wondrous time of the day.
Fabulous artwork as well.
October 27th, 2017 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write for a wondrous time of the day.
Fabulous artwork as well.
October 27th, 2017 01:42
The Morning
FredPeyer said:
You just made my morning, WL! Beautifully written!
October 26th, 2017 19:41
FredPeyer said:
You just made my morning, WL! Beautifully written!
October 26th, 2017 19:41
The Morning
Christina8 said:
Amazing! Your words flow effortlessly. Beautiful depiction of the morning--with a wonderful painting to match!
October 26th, 2017 19:07
Christina8 said:
Amazing! Your words flow effortlessly. Beautiful depiction of the morning--with a wonderful painting to match!
October 26th, 2017 19:07
The Morning
Louis Gibbs said:
A strong poem and a beautiful painting, WL! I enjoyed them both. Thanks.
October 26th, 2017 16:38
Louis Gibbs said:
A strong poem and a beautiful painting, WL! I enjoyed them both. Thanks.
October 26th, 2017 16:38
The Morning
Michael Edwards said:
Sensitive and well constructed - great work Bill and love the painting.
October 26th, 2017 16:18
Michael Edwards said:
Sensitive and well constructed - great work Bill and love the painting.
October 26th, 2017 16:18
The Morning
myself and me said:
A beautiful morning with whispers, coffee and roses. The sound, the smell and the view, you have them all. Such a beautiful paint followed by pretty poem.
October 26th, 2017 15:03
myself and me said:
A beautiful morning with whispers, coffee and roses. The sound, the smell and the view, you have them all. Such a beautiful paint followed by pretty poem.
October 26th, 2017 15:03
The Morning
Laura🌻 said:
That is so, so beautiful!
You are so gifted with your
Poetic Pen. Your words flow on the page
...(really screen)...
like the waters of a river!
I truly enjoyed this poem!
October 26th, 2017 14:49
Laura🌻 said:
That is so, so beautiful!
You are so gifted with your
Poetic Pen. Your words flow on the page
...(really screen)...
like the waters of a river!
I truly enjoyed this poem!
October 26th, 2017 14:49
Shadow fall
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write WL, the peace an love just shines through your words.
October 25th, 2017 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write WL, the peace an love just shines through your words.
October 25th, 2017 00:46
Shadow fall
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully expressed, beautiful imagery, a pleasure to read. Kudos!
October 24th, 2017 18:17
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully expressed, beautiful imagery, a pleasure to read. Kudos!
October 24th, 2017 18:17
Shadow fall
Poems For Food said:
This poem was beautiful. I have nothing else to say because it simply was beautiful.
October 24th, 2017 12:45
Poems For Food said:
This poem was beautiful. I have nothing else to say because it simply was beautiful.
October 24th, 2017 12:45
Shadow fall
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem, so tenderly written! A magnificent tribute to love!
October 24th, 2017 11:01
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem, so tenderly written! A magnificent tribute to love!
October 24th, 2017 11:01
Shadow fall
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah a well told tale of days gone by where tender and gentle were love\'s emotions while hurricane lamps sent forth a soft glow...... your words brought all this to light so clearly WL - a gem of a read.
October 24th, 2017 10:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah a well told tale of days gone by where tender and gentle were love\'s emotions while hurricane lamps sent forth a soft glow...... your words brought all this to light so clearly WL - a gem of a read.
October 24th, 2017 10:43
Shadow fall
Louis Gibbs said:
Warm and tender, this tribute to love, WL! Kudos.
October 24th, 2017 10:33
Louis Gibbs said:
Warm and tender, this tribute to love, WL! Kudos.
October 24th, 2017 10:33
Memory of love
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive write, that chance needs to be taken.
Yet another superb artwork WL, I truly admire your artwork and am astounded by it.
October 22nd, 2017 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive write, that chance needs to be taken.
Yet another superb artwork WL, I truly admire your artwork and am astounded by it.
October 22nd, 2017 00:43
Memory of love
Laura🌻 said:
Tears on a pansy! This alone is poetry!
Beautiful painting to illustrate your words!
Exquisite!!
Last stanza says it all!
October 21st, 2017 13:56
Laura🌻 said:
Tears on a pansy! This alone is poetry!
Beautiful painting to illustrate your words!
Exquisite!!
Last stanza says it all!
October 21st, 2017 13:56
Memory of love
Michael Edwards said:
Some great lines in this super work plus a great painting .
October 21st, 2017 11:27
Michael Edwards said:
Some great lines in this super work plus a great painting .
October 21st, 2017 11:27
Memory of love
Fay Slimm. said:
Such powerful words and so meaningful when memory takes the place of real love in the heart - - being a moon to somebody\'s star was such an inspired thought - thank you for posting this gem of a read.
October 21st, 2017 11:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Such powerful words and so meaningful when memory takes the place of real love in the heart - - being a moon to somebody\'s star was such an inspired thought - thank you for posting this gem of a read.
October 21st, 2017 11:01
Memory of love
Christina8 said:
I love this. So well said. Love the rhyme and words so well chosen. This poem is definitely a fave!
October 21st, 2017 10:53
Christina8 said:
I love this. So well said. Love the rhyme and words so well chosen. This poem is definitely a fave!
October 21st, 2017 10:53
Breaking Free
MendedFences27 said:
\"A blink of an eye, between the righteous and the fool.\" \'Wasted years as he filled his glass with her tears.\" Brilliant phrases, among a poignant poem of self-reclamation. The artwork depicts the sense of freedom she must have felt, once she became that \"born again jewel.\" It requires a great deal of courage for someone to free herself from such a relationship. Awesome write. Terrific poem and painting. - Phil A.
October 20th, 2017 13:26
MendedFences27 said:
\"A blink of an eye, between the righteous and the fool.\" \'Wasted years as he filled his glass with her tears.\" Brilliant phrases, among a poignant poem of self-reclamation. The artwork depicts the sense of freedom she must have felt, once she became that \"born again jewel.\" It requires a great deal of courage for someone to free herself from such a relationship. Awesome write. Terrific poem and painting. - Phil A.
October 20th, 2017 13:26
Blind Faith
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write WL.
That artwork is wonderful.
October 20th, 2017 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write WL.
That artwork is wonderful.
October 20th, 2017 01:06
Blind Faith
MendedFences27 said:
46 years into a marriage and still, things mystify me, about her, about us. My faith in her, in us, all of us now, still remains. I believe the \"earthquake\" happened the moment I met her, she would challenge that notion. We still look ahead to a future together, and more and more we harken back to memories.
Well, to say I loved your poem would not do it justice. I was caught by the first stanza, confirmed by the second, and succumbed by the third and fourth. Thus enthralled, I read on through stanzas 5, 6, and 7. Then, you gave us the 8th, a loophole out, a method of expression, and a summation of all that proceeded. A fantastic journey, a wonderful poem, one that I must save. _ Phil A.
October 19th, 2017 20:38
MendedFences27 said:
46 years into a marriage and still, things mystify me, about her, about us. My faith in her, in us, all of us now, still remains. I believe the \"earthquake\" happened the moment I met her, she would challenge that notion. We still look ahead to a future together, and more and more we harken back to memories.
Well, to say I loved your poem would not do it justice. I was caught by the first stanza, confirmed by the second, and succumbed by the third and fourth. Thus enthralled, I read on through stanzas 5, 6, and 7. Then, you gave us the 8th, a loophole out, a method of expression, and a summation of all that proceeded. A fantastic journey, a wonderful poem, one that I must save. _ Phil A.
October 19th, 2017 20:38
Blind Faith
Christina8 said:
An absolutely beautiful poem, Bill! Loved the last stanza (it was all great) because it was so relatable! Thanks for sharing such a great one!
October 19th, 2017 11:17
Christina8 said:
An absolutely beautiful poem, Bill! Loved the last stanza (it was all great) because it was so relatable! Thanks for sharing such a great one!
October 19th, 2017 11:17
Never a doubt
Goldfinch60 said:
Very loving write and knowing who will be with you forever is a great state to be in, I too am in that same state.
Good artwork as well she is a lovely lady.
October 18th, 2017 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Very loving write and knowing who will be with you forever is a great state to be in, I too am in that same state.
Good artwork as well she is a lovely lady.
October 18th, 2017 00:52
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