Comments received on poems by Nicholas Browning
A Scholar\'s Colloquy
orchidee said:
In me dafter moments - sherry-drinking, pork-pie eating moments that is - I also have moments where I may be confused, and dunno if I\'m on foot or horse-back. That is, if some poems may get too cryptic for me! lol.
August 18th, 2017 10:46
orchidee said:
In me dafter moments - sherry-drinking, pork-pie eating moments that is - I also have moments where I may be confused, and dunno if I\'m on foot or horse-back. That is, if some poems may get too cryptic for me! lol.
August 18th, 2017 10:46
A Scholar\'s Colloquy
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - \'Dang it\', said the uneducated man. \'A colloquy, Sire\'? I knoweth not what thou is on about, even before we\'ve started\'! Oohh, he talked a bit old-fashioned too! heehee.
August 18th, 2017 10:36
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - \'Dang it\', said the uneducated man. \'A colloquy, Sire\'? I knoweth not what thou is on about, even before we\'ve started\'! Oohh, he talked a bit old-fashioned too! heehee.
August 18th, 2017 10:36
A Scholar\'s Colloquy
orchidee said:
I doubt the uneducated man (if it\'s me, or whoever it is. lol) will be able to understand the history scholar!
There\'s more I could say about your \'one man\' personal comment, though it would lead off to a religious, or spiritual, or call it whatever, discussion.
August 18th, 2017 10:33
orchidee said:
I doubt the uneducated man (if it\'s me, or whoever it is. lol) will be able to understand the history scholar!
There\'s more I could say about your \'one man\' personal comment, though it would lead off to a religious, or spiritual, or call it whatever, discussion.
August 18th, 2017 10:33
Ill
poetboy123 said:
A feeling that many of us encounter at times, great write Nicholas!
August 17th, 2017 20:51
poetboy123 said:
A feeling that many of us encounter at times, great write Nicholas!
August 17th, 2017 20:51
Ill
FredPeyer said:
To you Nicholas, it might have been \'just a simple work to pass the time\', but to me this is a very relevant and well written poem. As I get older I do worry sometimes of \'losing my mind\'. It is happening to a brother in law, and it is not funny!
Just think, the worst thing that can happen to a writer, be he good or bad doesn\'t matter, as long as he considers himself a writer, is losing his mind. What is the alternative? Mindless TV?
I love your writing, and would love to have you join my circle of friends. I usually read all \'friend\' poems, and then, if I have time, I pick and choose from the general section. Sometimes I miss the ones I want to read.
August 17th, 2017 18:30
FredPeyer said:
To you Nicholas, it might have been \'just a simple work to pass the time\', but to me this is a very relevant and well written poem. As I get older I do worry sometimes of \'losing my mind\'. It is happening to a brother in law, and it is not funny!
Just think, the worst thing that can happen to a writer, be he good or bad doesn\'t matter, as long as he considers himself a writer, is losing his mind. What is the alternative? Mindless TV?
I love your writing, and would love to have you join my circle of friends. I usually read all \'friend\' poems, and then, if I have time, I pick and choose from the general section. Sometimes I miss the ones I want to read.
August 17th, 2017 18:30
Ill
malubotelho said:
Awesome writing Nicholas. I have to visit you more times.
August 17th, 2017 10:43
malubotelho said:
Awesome writing Nicholas. I have to visit you more times.
August 17th, 2017 10:43
Ill
orchidee said:
You better now?! (heehee). I seem to get longer! doh! Well, I should not waffle then.
August 17th, 2017 08:42
orchidee said:
You better now?! (heehee). I seem to get longer! doh! Well, I should not waffle then.
August 17th, 2017 08:42
Ill
burning-embers said:
I must have lost my mind and then.... well questioning every line of a draft idea until its..... is \'publishable\' a value statement or an excuse for my giving up? .... then there\'s mindfulness .... I\'ll stick to plumbing i think.
August 17th, 2017 03:50
burning-embers said:
I must have lost my mind and then.... well questioning every line of a draft idea until its..... is \'publishable\' a value statement or an excuse for my giving up? .... then there\'s mindfulness .... I\'ll stick to plumbing i think.
August 17th, 2017 03:50
Ill
Michael Edwards said:
I am more and more beginning to appreciate short works and rarely write anything much longer these days. They can pack a punch and often leave the reader wanting more - like this great shortie.
August 17th, 2017 02:01
Michael Edwards said:
I am more and more beginning to appreciate short works and rarely write anything much longer these days. They can pack a punch and often leave the reader wanting more - like this great shortie.
August 17th, 2017 02:01
Ill
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Your mind is not lost if you can create these words.
August 17th, 2017 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Your mind is not lost if you can create these words.
August 17th, 2017 01:51
Ill
orchidee said:
Hope it don\'t mean you\'re questioning every line of poetry that you write?! You would never finish a poem!
August 17th, 2017 01:43
orchidee said:
Hope it don\'t mean you\'re questioning every line of poetry that you write?! You would never finish a poem!
August 17th, 2017 01:43
Nithing
FredPeyer said:
Nicholas, while it may not take prowess or skill to write about oneself, you displayed both in your well written poem.
About the \"asked to be here\" lines. I think it all depends on what one believes. Some people believe that the soul asks to be born into a particular body in order to fulfill it\'s purpose, then after death of that body, to eventually return in another one to fulfill additional or other purposes.
But I guess we will never know that for certain.
August 16th, 2017 11:07
FredPeyer said:
Nicholas, while it may not take prowess or skill to write about oneself, you displayed both in your well written poem.
About the \"asked to be here\" lines. I think it all depends on what one believes. Some people believe that the soul asks to be born into a particular body in order to fulfill it\'s purpose, then after death of that body, to eventually return in another one to fulfill additional or other purposes.
But I guess we will never know that for certain.
August 16th, 2017 11:07
Nithing
orchidee said:
Well, I feel it does take skill, courage, and whatever else, to write about one\'s self. We\'re complicated, or complex, beings. A fine write N.
August 16th, 2017 08:47
orchidee said:
Well, I feel it does take skill, courage, and whatever else, to write about one\'s self. We\'re complicated, or complex, beings. A fine write N.
August 16th, 2017 08:47
\"Nowhere Locomotive\"
sue.evans said:
I liked your metaphor for the journey of life.
August 15th, 2017 16:28
sue.evans said:
I liked your metaphor for the journey of life.
August 15th, 2017 16:28
\"Nowhere Locomotive\"
FredPeyer said:
Don\'t know how to translate, maybe you can enlighten me.
August 15th, 2017 11:45
FredPeyer said:
Don\'t know how to translate, maybe you can enlighten me.
August 15th, 2017 11:45
\"Nowhere Locomotive\"
orchidee said:
I got as far as: Something \'persists\' (verse 1). It will take me about 3 hours to translate, I expect! I\'m not fluent in Greek, only know a smidgeon. *Gets out my Greek to English alphabet list*.
August 15th, 2017 10:36
orchidee said:
I got as far as: Something \'persists\' (verse 1). It will take me about 3 hours to translate, I expect! I\'m not fluent in Greek, only know a smidgeon. *Gets out my Greek to English alphabet list*.
August 15th, 2017 10:36
Death of a King
Providence2017 said:
This so resonates with me. Thank you so much for publishing this!
August 11th, 2017 11:33
Providence2017 said:
This so resonates with me. Thank you so much for publishing this!
August 11th, 2017 11:33
Death of a King
Michael Edwards said:
Read it and thoroughly enjoyed the language. As for the message I need to read it again but off out shortly so will return.
August 11th, 2017 03:10
Michael Edwards said:
Read it and thoroughly enjoyed the language. As for the message I need to read it again but off out shortly so will return.
August 11th, 2017 03:10
To no Avail
orchidee said:
Erm, Hi N. I didn\'t mean your poem hardly gets \'off the ground\'! I meant the bit about how are we supposed to be ourselves, etc\'. lol
August 10th, 2017 08:01
orchidee said:
Erm, Hi N. I didn\'t mean your poem hardly gets \'off the ground\'! I meant the bit about how are we supposed to be ourselves, etc\'. lol
August 10th, 2017 08:01
To no Avail
orchidee said:
A fine write N. A bit like: Why won\'t my telly work? Erm, try plugging it in and put the mains switch to \'on\'. \'Ahh, that would be a help\', he replied! heehee.
August 10th, 2017 01:56
orchidee said:
A fine write N. A bit like: Why won\'t my telly work? Erm, try plugging it in and put the mains switch to \'on\'. \'Ahh, that would be a help\', he replied! heehee.
August 10th, 2017 01:56
Minnesota Verdure
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
I really enjoyed your educational words. You had me looking things words up left and right. Plus your imagery and sentiments on your travels, as well as the ending. Tyfs!
July 19th, 2017 14:45
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
I really enjoyed your educational words. You had me looking things words up left and right. Plus your imagery and sentiments on your travels, as well as the ending. Tyfs!
July 19th, 2017 14:45
Minnesota Verdure
Its Raskolnikov said:
I love the descriptive imagery, and the way you use perspective to add to the poem
July 17th, 2017 23:53
Its Raskolnikov said:
I love the descriptive imagery, and the way you use perspective to add to the poem
July 17th, 2017 23:53
Minnesota Verdure
FredPeyer said:
Nicholas, judging from your well written poem you did enjoy your vacation tremendously. Love the \'serenade of old dirt paths, farmlands\' part!
July 17th, 2017 23:21
FredPeyer said:
Nicholas, judging from your well written poem you did enjoy your vacation tremendously. Love the \'serenade of old dirt paths, farmlands\' part!
July 17th, 2017 23:21
Minnesota Verdure
Frank Prem said:
Nicholas you\'ve had a wonderful trip and it shows in the poem.
Delighted for you.
July 17th, 2017 20:05
Frank Prem said:
Nicholas you\'ve had a wonderful trip and it shows in the poem.
Delighted for you.
July 17th, 2017 20:05
Rice Wine
orchidee said:
Erm, I expect I shall enjoy it - after couple of hours translation by myself! At the moment, it\'s \'all Greek\' to me!
July 16th, 2017 01:31
orchidee said:
Erm, I expect I shall enjoy it - after couple of hours translation by myself! At the moment, it\'s \'all Greek\' to me!
July 16th, 2017 01:31
Rice Wine
Michael Edwards said:
Found the translation and enjoyed it - a great celebration - I raise the red cup to you.
July 16th, 2017 00:54
Michael Edwards said:
Found the translation and enjoyed it - a great celebration - I raise the red cup to you.
July 16th, 2017 00:54
Counting Sheep
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Whoa, I never read a poem so educational. Tyfs! The poem was deep and yet shown in it, poetry. Very unique and a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing again and for posting the info in your note. :)
July 15th, 2017 13:16
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Whoa, I never read a poem so educational. Tyfs! The poem was deep and yet shown in it, poetry. Very unique and a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing again and for posting the info in your note. :)
July 15th, 2017 13:16
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