Comments received on poems by Nicholas Browning
Musings of a Crow
Saxon Crow said:
Being somewhat bias towards crows, I feel somewhat sad at the thought of a crow freezing to death! However, a wonderfully crafted piece here Nicholas
August 13th, 2021 02:44
Saxon Crow said:
Being somewhat bias towards crows, I feel somewhat sad at the thought of a crow freezing to death! However, a wonderfully crafted piece here Nicholas
August 13th, 2021 02:44
Shadow In The Shade
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is always there for us but some do not want to see it.
Andy
April 14th, 2021 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is always there for us but some do not want to see it.
Andy
April 14th, 2021 00:37
The Meaning in Nothing
L. B. Mek said:
a triumphantly melodic poem you\'ve penned, really like the flow and set-up to the \'slap\' of a twist at the end,
a wonderful read
December 17th, 2020 06:34
L. B. Mek said:
a triumphantly melodic poem you\'ve penned, really like the flow and set-up to the \'slap\' of a twist at the end,
a wonderful read
December 17th, 2020 06:34
The Meaning in Nothing
jarcher54 said:
A very fine, subtle tour de force. I appreciate the simple descriptive first three stanzas, the overheard words, the shadows and sun, the birds flitting away... then the inward turn at the end. I am frankly startled by the phrase \"kindness without sincerity.\" Elusive, enigmatic, insightful. Thank you.
December 16th, 2020 22:31
jarcher54 said:
A very fine, subtle tour de force. I appreciate the simple descriptive first three stanzas, the overheard words, the shadows and sun, the birds flitting away... then the inward turn at the end. I am frankly startled by the phrase \"kindness without sincerity.\" Elusive, enigmatic, insightful. Thank you.
December 16th, 2020 22:31
Soft Be The Echo
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I appreciate your four syllabic stanzas (I counted roughly 8-6-8-6 in the first two), with a contraction and then expansion of syllables in your third and last stanza respectively (with end rhymes in the last one) - perhaps subconsciously (or purposefully) accentuating the confusion in the human person’s universal “longing” (though it only appears to be “one-sided”) and continuous quest for communion and recognition. Excellent writing and diction my friend.
January 23rd, 2020 12:24
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I appreciate your four syllabic stanzas (I counted roughly 8-6-8-6 in the first two), with a contraction and then expansion of syllables in your third and last stanza respectively (with end rhymes in the last one) - perhaps subconsciously (or purposefully) accentuating the confusion in the human person’s universal “longing” (though it only appears to be “one-sided”) and continuous quest for communion and recognition. Excellent writing and diction my friend.
January 23rd, 2020 12:24
Soft Be The Echo
Fay Slimm. said:
A delightfully arranged dish of imagery that your eloquent poetry offers today Nicholas - -- I liked the intriguing title which opened the subject of trying yet often hiding behind negative emotions which lose us the fight.......... I can relate very well with the longing to break down self-made barriers to know someone better. A stirring read.
January 19th, 2020 09:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A delightfully arranged dish of imagery that your eloquent poetry offers today Nicholas - -- I liked the intriguing title which opened the subject of trying yet often hiding behind negative emotions which lose us the fight.......... I can relate very well with the longing to break down self-made barriers to know someone better. A stirring read.
January 19th, 2020 09:19
Soft Be The Echo
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Meanwhile - I worry about my failure to connect with others. Why they all run away? I only say \'I\'m gonna sing now!\' and I don\'t see them for dust - the dust cloud they kick up as they run away so fast. heehee.
Just gimme a call if anyone truly upsets ya. I\'ll pop round to them and sing to \'em! lol.
January 19th, 2020 03:45
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Meanwhile - I worry about my failure to connect with others. Why they all run away? I only say \'I\'m gonna sing now!\' and I don\'t see them for dust - the dust cloud they kick up as they run away so fast. heehee.
Just gimme a call if anyone truly upsets ya. I\'ll pop round to them and sing to \'em! lol.
January 19th, 2020 03:45
Soft Be The Echo
Nemo said:
Well God daum, described so well, I also go through this constant struggle in my day to day life, fear of being judged or thing might not come out the way you want them to.all I can say is the struggle is real, social anxiety is a bitch 😂
But a great write as always 🌹
January 19th, 2020 03:33
Nemo said:
Well God daum, described so well, I also go through this constant struggle in my day to day life, fear of being judged or thing might not come out the way you want them to.all I can say is the struggle is real, social anxiety is a bitch 😂
But a great write as always 🌹
January 19th, 2020 03:33
A Ghost Perched on a Box
Nemo said:
Wow you are a very talented writer 👍.
Great write 🌹
December 31st, 2019 09:45
Nemo said:
Wow you are a very talented writer 👍.
Great write 🌹
December 31st, 2019 09:45
A Ghost Perched on a Box
John Prophet said:
Very emotive write from someone so young. Very sophisticated.
December 23rd, 2019 07:25
John Prophet said:
Very emotive write from someone so young. Very sophisticated.
December 23rd, 2019 07:25
A Ghost Perched on a Box
Fay Slimm. said:
I enjoyed every line of intrigue as your story progressed in this meeting with person unknown. You captured the scene so well I was there Nicholas - - thanks for this atmospheric read
December 22nd, 2019 11:31
Fay Slimm. said:
I enjoyed every line of intrigue as your story progressed in this meeting with person unknown. You captured the scene so well I was there Nicholas - - thanks for this atmospheric read
December 22nd, 2019 11:31
Light of a Dying Star
orchidee said:
I\'ll pop round and sing to ya at night then! That\'ll wake ya up to write more fine poems like this. Mind ya, me singing will wake even the dead! lol.
December 5th, 2019 02:52
orchidee said:
I\'ll pop round and sing to ya at night then! That\'ll wake ya up to write more fine poems like this. Mind ya, me singing will wake even the dead! lol.
December 5th, 2019 02:52
Oh, Night, What a Wonder
Goldfinch60 said:
Solitude in the night sky can be a wonderful enabling of the spirit within life.
October 19th, 2019 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Solitude in the night sky can be a wonderful enabling of the spirit within life.
October 19th, 2019 00:55
The Midnight Maelstrom
Goddess of the Mist said:
Nice! This just felt good to read.
August 17th, 2019 21:46
Goddess of the Mist said:
Nice! This just felt good to read.
August 17th, 2019 21:46
The Midnight Maelstrom
Neville said:
fascinating from beginning to end...
and consequently, I liked this no end
Well penned, friend...
August 17th, 2019 04:22
Neville said:
fascinating from beginning to end...
and consequently, I liked this no end
Well penned, friend...
August 17th, 2019 04:22
The Monarch\'s Ballad
Goldfinch60 said:
That last stanza is so meaningful, overcoming adversity leads to a wonderful future.
June 21st, 2019 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
That last stanza is so meaningful, overcoming adversity leads to a wonderful future.
June 21st, 2019 00:35
The Girl Who Tamed a Demon
Paris said:
This poem is beautiful, such a lovely poem. Really enjoyed reading it, made my imagination run a bit wild.
March 29th, 2019 15:10
Paris said:
This poem is beautiful, such a lovely poem. Really enjoyed reading it, made my imagination run a bit wild.
March 29th, 2019 15:10
Misinterpretation
dusk arising said:
And there you have it in your own words.... \'certainty does not exist\' for each of us will embroider that which we behold with our own life\'s experiences. My gold maybe your polished brass and yet anothers recycleable scrap.
What wonderful variety we are.
March 26th, 2019 20:07
dusk arising said:
And there you have it in your own words.... \'certainty does not exist\' for each of us will embroider that which we behold with our own life\'s experiences. My gold maybe your polished brass and yet anothers recycleable scrap.
What wonderful variety we are.
March 26th, 2019 20:07
Misinterpretation
Suresh said:
Kindness for ignorance or weakness- isn\'t that the fact.
But I won\'t give up being kind ....
March 26th, 2019 15:23
Suresh said:
Kindness for ignorance or weakness- isn\'t that the fact.
But I won\'t give up being kind ....
March 26th, 2019 15:23
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