Comments received on poems by Nicholas Browning
Hymn of Apparatus
spilleronsheet said:
It surely is a masterpiece
You really have way with your words
It seems as if somebody was captivated by the rules of society that caged him until the soul freed up by the time
When nothing could cage his soul inside
Such overwhelming emotions pour
That peace seems luxury now
November 28th, 2021 11:57
spilleronsheet said:
It surely is a masterpiece
You really have way with your words
It seems as if somebody was captivated by the rules of society that caged him until the soul freed up by the time
When nothing could cage his soul inside
Such overwhelming emotions pour
That peace seems luxury now
November 28th, 2021 11:57
Hymn of Apparatus
orchidee said:
As you replied: Death awaits - when I sing! heehee. A bad hair day then?
November 28th, 2021 09:06
orchidee said:
As you replied: Death awaits - when I sing! heehee. A bad hair day then?
November 28th, 2021 09:06
Hymn of Apparatus
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Makes me think of someone who feels trapped , and kind of overwhelmed in the mind , maybe ? Something interfering in your state of peace and calm ?
Interesting way with words here
November 28th, 2021 08:02
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Makes me think of someone who feels trapped , and kind of overwhelmed in the mind , maybe ? Something interfering in your state of peace and calm ?
Interesting way with words here
November 28th, 2021 08:02
Hymn of Apparatus
Paul Bell said:
This is like the atomic bomb going off, and the guy going into his pocket bringing out a cigar, slowly lighting it, then wondering if he\'s covered for major catastrophises.
November 28th, 2021 06:40
Paul Bell said:
This is like the atomic bomb going off, and the guy going into his pocket bringing out a cigar, slowly lighting it, then wondering if he\'s covered for major catastrophises.
November 28th, 2021 06:40
Hymn of Apparatus
Lorna said:
Oh peace shattered..... I know the feeling......
November 28th, 2021 05:59
Lorna said:
Oh peace shattered..... I know the feeling......
November 28th, 2021 05:59
Love and Battle in the North
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Braveheart, King Arthur, Hercules... and even Scorpion King all in one. A writing of this calibre makes for impeccable scripting Nicholas. The story telling is out of this world. Much respect sir.
November 27th, 2021 13:20
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Braveheart, King Arthur, Hercules... and even Scorpion King all in one. A writing of this calibre makes for impeccable scripting Nicholas. The story telling is out of this world. Much respect sir.
November 27th, 2021 13:20
Love and Battle in the North
orchidee said:
Epiphany\'s in Jan/Feb! Though I\'m sure Christmas is June. Hmmm.
But epi...word means revealing, dawning, showing, etc. as you say.
Do shut up now Orchi. lol.
November 27th, 2021 03:37
orchidee said:
Epiphany\'s in Jan/Feb! Though I\'m sure Christmas is June. Hmmm.
But epi...word means revealing, dawning, showing, etc. as you say.
Do shut up now Orchi. lol.
November 27th, 2021 03:37
Love and Battle in the North
A Boy With Roses said:
I do love men with a complexion like marbled stone, and the imagery in this poem is at a metaphorical peak. Beauty in words.
November 26th, 2021 19:05
A Boy With Roses said:
I do love men with a complexion like marbled stone, and the imagery in this poem is at a metaphorical peak. Beauty in words.
November 26th, 2021 19:05
Love and Battle in the North
Neville said:
a tale told terribly well .. write on sir ..
November 26th, 2021 14:58
Neville said:
a tale told terribly well .. write on sir ..
November 26th, 2021 14:58
Love and Battle in the North
dusk arising said:
Ah the good old romantic fable has stirred in your blood. The hero of mystery that haunts all our ego\'s.
Well done, enjoyed this.
November 26th, 2021 12:21
dusk arising said:
Ah the good old romantic fable has stirred in your blood. The hero of mystery that haunts all our ego\'s.
Well done, enjoyed this.
November 26th, 2021 12:21
Love and Battle in the North
Paul Bell said:
A little bit of Viking here, maybe even King Arthur. Only a man can go into battle for a woman, and rightly so.
This was epic.
November 26th, 2021 12:19
Paul Bell said:
A little bit of Viking here, maybe even King Arthur. Only a man can go into battle for a woman, and rightly so.
This was epic.
November 26th, 2021 12:19
Love and Battle in the North
Fay Slimm. said:
Surely a novel in the making here - the aspect of brandishing weapons to catch a lady\'s hand is so romantic - - you have a way with archaic honour dear NIc.
November 26th, 2021 11:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Surely a novel in the making here - the aspect of brandishing weapons to catch a lady\'s hand is so romantic - - you have a way with archaic honour dear NIc.
November 26th, 2021 11:47
Love and Battle in the North
spilleronsheet said:
What a beautiful depiction
The script was laid
The movie played
With such beautiful words adorning the epiphany stood in play
November 26th, 2021 10:24
spilleronsheet said:
What a beautiful depiction
The script was laid
The movie played
With such beautiful words adorning the epiphany stood in play
November 26th, 2021 10:24
Dreams of Life Unlived
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The windmills of the mind, so perfectly articulated. It\'s a beautiful piece sir. Bravo.
November 24th, 2021 06:07
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The windmills of the mind, so perfectly articulated. It\'s a beautiful piece sir. Bravo.
November 24th, 2021 06:07
Days Like These
Lathen Griffiths said:
I liked this and could definitely feel the rain drops.
November 23rd, 2021 16:28
Lathen Griffiths said:
I liked this and could definitely feel the rain drops.
November 23rd, 2021 16:28
Dreams of Life Unlived
spilleronsheet said:
The words so pure
Yet people taint them as rebel
I don’t know how find them liberal
They questions my thoughts
They question my dreams
Maybe the failures should stop me
Yet my heart isn’t willing to give up
I don’t know why but your lines made more a rebel
I wish to be more and more committed to the dreams that keep me awake
November 23rd, 2021 15:17
spilleronsheet said:
The words so pure
Yet people taint them as rebel
I don’t know how find them liberal
They questions my thoughts
They question my dreams
Maybe the failures should stop me
Yet my heart isn’t willing to give up
I don’t know why but your lines made more a rebel
I wish to be more and more committed to the dreams that keep me awake
November 23rd, 2021 15:17
Dreams of Life Unlived
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes goals just present themselves without actually having to achieve them. Must admit, I never set goals, they just lead to disappointment.
November 23rd, 2021 12:19
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes goals just present themselves without actually having to achieve them. Must admit, I never set goals, they just lead to disappointment.
November 23rd, 2021 12:19
Dreams of Life Unlived
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I’m sorry you feel scared . I understand what it’s like to feel scared … and to want something different but to fear making change
This a good poem and you have expressed yourself very well
Maybe one day you can move past the fear ?
Writing can be a nice escape
November 23rd, 2021 11:19
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I’m sorry you feel scared . I understand what it’s like to feel scared … and to want something different but to fear making change
This a good poem and you have expressed yourself very well
Maybe one day you can move past the fear ?
Writing can be a nice escape
November 23rd, 2021 11:19
Days Like These
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Nicholas, there are probably many people stepping though the rain with similar thoughts.
Andy
November 23rd, 2021 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Nicholas, there are probably many people stepping though the rain with similar thoughts.
Andy
November 23rd, 2021 02:01
Days Like These
L. B. Mek said:
\'How subtle the plummeting waves,
Their grace still loud enough
To anchor the weary mind.
Yet still melancholic,
And uniform,
Chanting blessings as they divide.\'
a brilliant stanza!
to what is a somewhat intense, yet relatable read
thanks for choosing to share, dear poet
November 22nd, 2021 07:33
L. B. Mek said:
\'How subtle the plummeting waves,
Their grace still loud enough
To anchor the weary mind.
Yet still melancholic,
And uniform,
Chanting blessings as they divide.\'
a brilliant stanza!
to what is a somewhat intense, yet relatable read
thanks for choosing to share, dear poet
November 22nd, 2021 07:33
Days Like These
orchidee said:
I\'m 99% sure you had me in mind! heeheehee. :) Good write N.
November 22nd, 2021 06:57
orchidee said:
I\'m 99% sure you had me in mind! heeheehee. :) Good write N.
November 22nd, 2021 06:57
Days Like These
spilleronsheet said:
A big applaud for the creator and the one who got inspired
Well chosen words
Such beautiful depiction
Loved the way you started the prose
Very satisfying and pleasing
November 22nd, 2021 05:21
spilleronsheet said:
A big applaud for the creator and the one who got inspired
Well chosen words
Such beautiful depiction
Loved the way you started the prose
Very satisfying and pleasing
November 22nd, 2021 05:21
Days Like These
Fay Slimm. said:
Whoever wrote this little masters both words and feelings behind the mask of cities -- loud applause for the talent found in Days Like \'These - -
November 22nd, 2021 05:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Whoever wrote this little masters both words and feelings behind the mask of cities -- loud applause for the talent found in Days Like \'These - -
November 22nd, 2021 05:13
Days Like These
HangingbyaHalo said:
Beautifully written. My favorite line..
“On days like these thoughts fill my head,
And I forget the air up here, is thin.”
I definitely relate to this today, I seem to be lost up there.
Thank you for sharing. ❤️
November 22nd, 2021 04:50
HangingbyaHalo said:
Beautifully written. My favorite line..
“On days like these thoughts fill my head,
And I forget the air up here, is thin.”
I definitely relate to this today, I seem to be lost up there.
Thank you for sharing. ❤️
November 22nd, 2021 04:50
Days Like These
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really like this poem of yours . An engaging lovely read 🙂
November 22nd, 2021 04:26
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really like this poem of yours . An engaging lovely read 🙂
November 22nd, 2021 04:26
Plague
Coyote said:
Excellent write Nicholas. Incredibly deep for just two stanzas. Nice work🙂
November 21st, 2021 12:52
Coyote said:
Excellent write Nicholas. Incredibly deep for just two stanzas. Nice work🙂
November 21st, 2021 12:52
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