Comments received on poems by Nicholas Browning



Onus of Living
Daveyboyz said:

There\'s truth in this, well written.

April 20th, 2018 05:58

Onus of Living
onepauly said:

Great Write
it means something
i\'ll take impassivly

April 20th, 2018 03:58

Onus of Living
orchidee said:

yes, the same end for every human being. This came to mind reading this - St Francis of Assisi said \'What one is before God, that is what one is, and no more\'.

April 20th, 2018 03:54

Astral Days and Sunlit Nights
Michael Edwards said:

AQ super read Nicholas

April 17th, 2018 11:28

Astral Days and Sunlit Nights
orchidee said:

Never knew there was so much in imagination! heehee. Erm, it\'s \'esoteric\' for me, I can tell ya. Gets a bit cryptic for me. It\'s why I opt for the simpler crosswords rather than the cryptic ones in the papers!

April 17th, 2018 08:18

Astral Days and Sunlit Nights
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful esoteric write Nicholas, the last stanza is so meaningful.

April 17th, 2018 08:02

Astral Days and Sunlit Nights
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow admirable classic term, tone and feel to this unique spiritual poem. Awesome rhyming too. ESP liked the last stanza but every stanza was great. Kudos.

Pleez do review, write your thoughts under my newest poem here too.

April 17th, 2018 06:41

Astral Days and Sunlit Nights
Jeremy Cohen said:

This is very thought provoking and beautiful in a unique way. I really like it.

April 17th, 2018 05:45

Throne
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write which leaves one intrigued which I think is good.

April 15th, 2018 12:30

Throne
Laura🌻 said:

Nicholas,
Very mysterious and intriguing! I like this fine write very much because it’s so open to interpretation by the readers of which I am one!
Super!

~Laura~

April 15th, 2018 09:42

Throne
orchidee said:

Yes, it\'s all Greek to some of us. lol. Something to do with the script I think - not sure. Ahh, translation by M.
Ya could write about what ya is doing for the other 11 months of the year too! lol.
If I get too complex, I over-rate myself, then run out of material! I should stay simple - ish!

April 15th, 2018 08:31

Throne
Daveyboyz said:

Nice words, well written but I can\'t find the meaning and I would like to understand what is referred to.

April 15th, 2018 04:08

Throne
Michael Edwards said:

Couldn\'t read the script so put it into translate :


At first there were many, now, less than few:
So I dress myself in August -
On a broken throne, cut from stone,
Waiting for something new.

Something of an enigmatic write which I love simply for the use of the language and the way the words are woven - no don\'t do anything to it.

April 15th, 2018 03:29

Tell
Daveyboyz said:

First verse I thought it was going to be about logging... by the end I saw Ypres.

April 13th, 2018 10:05

Tell
sylviasearcher said:

War

April 13th, 2018 09:06

Clockwork Empire
Noah said:

I love the title and the image this portrays. I very much enjoy the vocabulary used in this

April 12th, 2018 14:27

Demon and The Pretender
RiverJordan said:

Digging this, now we need some holy water haha

April 12th, 2018 05:14

Demon and The Pretender
Michael Edwards said:

I\'ve just read it through a couple of times and it just gets better - must read it out loud next time - super write Nicholas.

April 12th, 2018 04:38

Demon and The Pretender
orchidee said:

I can\'t seem to unravel this. Maybe I\'m not using enough brain cells? Well, at times I only have about three. Have they gone on holiday?! heehee.
One thing\'s for sure, I say. We won\'t have a good day if we\'re the demon. Though we may all want to be \'naughty\' at times!

April 12th, 2018 03:15

Demon and The Pretender
sylviasearcher said:

This is an amazing piece of prose!

Hit me on so many levels. I need to keep reading it.


April 12th, 2018 03:00

Let Me Ask You a Question
Nicholas Browning said:

Thank you very much.

April 11th, 2018 12:22

Let Me Ask You a Question
sylviasearcher said:

Yes I wondered what you were asking me.
Sometimes we search for answers but if we are not asking the right question we are left in a quandry.

What is is what is but must it be so?

April 11th, 2018 04:03

Let Me Ask You a Question
Michael Edwards said:

That is the question! A poem that makes you think but what about? I like this - it\'s something different.

April 11th, 2018 02:50

Let Me Ask You a Question
Goldfinch60 said:

It can be wonderful. Good thought provoking write Nicholas.

April 11th, 2018 02:06

Let Me Ask You a Question
orchidee said:

Erm, could depend on what \"it\" is, what we\'re doing, what we\'re thinking about, etc!

April 11th, 2018 01:52

Clockwork Empire
orchidee said:

Plodding on, getting nowhere? Going round in circles, and not even noticing it?! Sometimes life can seem like this.
It\'s daft - we say \'hooray for the weekend\', then soon again it\'s midweek, and \'repeat\' as you say.

April 10th, 2018 02:05

Oeuvre: Contour
orchidee said:

A fine write Nicholas.

March 17th, 2018 12:59

Oeuvre: Contour
Jamie said:

I don\'t know if you\'re the luckier guy to have witnessed a beauty like this, or, if she is the luckier for having been admired in such great form!

March 17th, 2018 12:26

Oeuvre: Contour
Michael Edwards said:

A great read and refreshingly original.

March 17th, 2018 12:12

Absence of Truth
Shakerite said:

A cool use of words . Enjoy your work.

March 16th, 2018 19:29

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