Comments received on poems by Nicholas Browning



Late By Yesterday
Goldfinch60 said:

Intriguing words Nicholas.

Andy

December 3rd, 2021 01:36

Late By Yesterday
spilleronsheet said:

Woah
It sounded like a tongue twister
Lmao 🤣

December 2nd, 2021 11:34

Late By Yesterday
orchidee said:

I\'m late now, having spent hours unravelling this! lol.

December 2nd, 2021 10:59

Late By Yesterday
dusk arising said:

Nice word play to bring on a headache for deep thunkers LOL

December 2nd, 2021 10:46

Late By Yesterday
Lorna said:

Though twisting insanity here and I so enjoyed it!

December 2nd, 2021 09:34

The Lone Man Humble
Garth Rakumakoe said:

\"And when it\'s down to you and me,

I\'m in love with possibility.\" - Where do I even start? You open invisible windows here brother. I know and feel what these words mean. We\'ve all been there, at the \"in love with possibility\" bus stop. Definitely a fave my friend. Kudos to you. I am enriched today.

December 2nd, 2021 07:39

Late By Yesterday
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

I didn’t understand this but you sound in a bit of a confused place in your mind . Sorry that you feel this way

December 2nd, 2021 07:36

The God of all Creation
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Some people like to think they are superior and above … don’t they , but it’s not true .

A good writing )

December 2nd, 2021 01:31

The Lone Man Humble
Lorna said:

Yes Nicholas..... you are inching your way to touchy feely..... we\'ll watch you closely..... good one...

December 1st, 2021 06:09

Someday
Vamsi Sudha said:

Quite interesting way of presentation Nicholas !!
Loved these lines :)
Every turn of the hip and nod of glee
I\'m not likely to forget


December 1st, 2021 03:16

The Lone Man Humble
orchidee said:

A fine write N.
Ohh, I\'ll stick around (verse 4) like a .....bad smell?! heehee.

December 1st, 2021 02:57

The Lone Man Humble
Goldfinch60 said:

That possibility is always there for us to achieve Nicholas.

Andy

December 1st, 2021 01:51

The Lone Man Humble
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

A nice writing .., sometimes we can feel so unsure and anxious in life .

I like your choice of words , and nice flow )

December 1st, 2021 01:18

Someday
Neville said:



I have no doubt that someday .. its just gonna click .. nice poem too sir ..


November 30th, 2021 11:04

Someday
spilleronsheet said:

Another jewel in poetry of yours…such a way you wrote about the love one meets…in hopes of meeting again…loved the way you placed those words

November 30th, 2021 07:40

Someday
L. B. Mek said:

your talent
for beautifully acute imagery, is inspirational..
such a majestic hymn of a poem
may the right: she
find you soon, dear Poet

November 30th, 2021 06:18

Someday
Lorna said:

Ahhhh beautiful yearning.... take heart. My brother when he was 6 saw a picture of a beautiful woman in the supermarket and said I\'m going to marry a girl just like that - and he did! Almost thee spitting image! So who knows!

November 30th, 2021 05:28

Someday
orchidee said:

Good write N.

November 30th, 2021 02:49

Someday
Goldfinch60 said:

You will meet that person and your life will be fulfilled in love.

Andy

November 30th, 2021 02:00

Someday
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely writing , hopefully you will meet the right person one day ,

I really like this poem of yours 🙂

November 30th, 2021 01:58

Arrow
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Nicholas, but as d a said you are too young to die yet so enjoy your life to the full.

Andy

November 30th, 2021 01:39

Arrow
spilleronsheet said:

A clap for the arrangement of poetry
A clap of the gems like words as ornament
A clap for the message that store
A bow for the powerful message
Fighting with one oneself
Angel and devil resides in my own mind
A bow and arrow could create such a muse
Your a poet of great insight
Bow to a great poet

November 30th, 2021 00:34

Arrow
Lorna said:

For some reason I really love the underlying menace in the last 3 lines.... if you\'re aiming for evil I hope you do hit it!

November 29th, 2021 12:25

Arrow
Neville said:


Without doubt my most favouwritest Nicholas Browning poem to date .. I still regularly use my old English longbow by the way .................... N

November 29th, 2021 09:19

Arrow
orchidee said:

But - doh!- I tried ritualistic suicide. But the brine was too salty. I spat it out. Another \'failure\'? (heehee).


November 29th, 2021 07:05

Arrow
orchidee said:

A fine write N.
I had trouble with an arrow in 1066 - the legendary story on here, in some poems! lol.

November 29th, 2021 07:01

Arrow
Doggerel Dave said:

Kudos for the time and energy taken to construct that - I know I would never have the patience.

November 29th, 2021 06:27

Arrow
dusk arising said:

Too morose, you\'ve got plenty of life left in ya yet young-un.
Like the way you laid out this piece which i know can be a bit of a trial from my own experiments.

November 29th, 2021 06:23

Arrow
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Very dark read ! Darkness should never win and humans shouldn’t suffer … let their be more light in the world )

November 29th, 2021 05:51

Hymn of Apparatus
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Wizardry. Mystique. Urban legend like almost even. Dark figures in trench coats at night kinda stuff. Appearing to disappear and reappear. Maybe it\'s just me and my over-active imagination, lol. I think \"dope\" is the word hey. Well done brother.

November 28th, 2021 13:50

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