Comments received on poems by Nicholas Browning



Winter Sun
Caring dove said:

It’s a difficult feeling to have ... even tho we know it might not be true

September 2nd, 2021 15:50

Winter Sun
Caring dove said:

I liked your choice of words . Good poem ... engaging , flows nicely )

September 2nd, 2021 15:49

Winter Sun
orchidee said:

Good write Nicholas.

September 2nd, 2021 11:44

Winter Sun
Neville said:

I very much enjoyed this introduction to your written words Nicholas and am delighted that you posted here today ... and I am sure there will be many such visits .................................... Neville

September 2nd, 2021 10:36

Musings of a Crow
Goldfinch60 said:

May the warmth of love bring you back to the wonderful days that will be there for you Nicholas.

Andy

August 14th, 2021 00:37

Musings of a Crow
L. B. Mek said:

brilliant imagery and wonderful flow
those frustrations and doubts are so relatable,
thanks for sharing

August 13th, 2021 05:09

Musings of a Crow
orchidee said:

Good write Nicholas.
Some don\'t like crows / rooks / ravens. They are lovely birds though.

August 13th, 2021 04:11

Musings of a Crow
Saxon Crow said:

Being somewhat bias towards crows, I feel somewhat sad at the thought of a crow freezing to death! However, a wonderfully crafted piece here Nicholas

August 13th, 2021 02:44

Musings of a Crow
Lorna said:

Those last two lines killed me...........

August 13th, 2021 02:42

Ash
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

April 17th, 2021 11:05

Shadow In The Shade
orchidee said:

Good write N.

April 14th, 2021 02:05

Shadow In The Shade
Goldfinch60 said:

That light is always there for us but some do not want to see it.

Andy

April 14th, 2021 00:37

Shadow In The Shade
Trenz Pruca said:

Thank you. A good and thoughtful poem.

April 13th, 2021 19:50

Weeping Wisp
L. B. Mek said:

a fun read, thanks for sharing

April 13th, 2021 05:13

Weeping Wisp
orchidee said:

Good write N.

April 13th, 2021 01:46

The Meaning in Nothing
L. B. Mek said:

a triumphantly melodic poem you\'ve penned, really like the flow and set-up to the \'slap\' of a twist at the end,
a wonderful read

December 17th, 2020 06:34

The Meaning in Nothing
jarcher54 said:

A very fine, subtle tour de force. I appreciate the simple descriptive first three stanzas, the overheard words, the shadows and sun, the birds flitting away... then the inward turn at the end. I am frankly startled by the phrase \"kindness without sincerity.\" Elusive, enigmatic, insightful. Thank you.

December 16th, 2020 22:31

Tides of Change
orchidee said:

Cooeee, good write N.
I dunno if I seen many gyres, or lyres! heehee.

December 16th, 2020 03:06

Tides of Change
Goldfinch60 said:

Each day in our lives is so special.

Andy

December 16th, 2020 02:23

As All Things Must
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow great sublime muse and the descriptions make it a fine abstract poem indeed. Kudos.

Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too!

February 26th, 2020 01:52

As All Things Must
Fay Slimm. said:

Both wording and message gives linguistic pleasure to this reader Nick - I love the archaic style with expressions like \"Often more than not is there a purpose in meager things\" - apt pointers indeed to look twice before giving up to and ebbing spirit...... into my faves with this one my friend.

February 5th, 2020 03:02

As All Things Must
orchidee said:

Yes, good write N. I will take 3 weeks to see all the things in it!
Nothing new there then? As in \'What the heck is this guy talking about?!\' heehee.

February 5th, 2020 02:50

As All Things Must
Goldfinch60 said:

Good intriguing write Nicholas, I have read it several times and find more in it each time I read it.

Andy

February 5th, 2020 02:10

Soft Be The Echo
Gary Edward Geraci said:

I appreciate your four syllabic stanzas (I counted roughly 8-6-8-6 in the first two), with a contraction and then expansion of syllables in your third and last stanza respectively (with end rhymes in the last one) - perhaps subconsciously (or purposefully) accentuating the confusion in the human person’s universal “longing” (though it only appears to be “one-sided”) and continuous quest for communion and recognition. Excellent writing and diction my friend.

January 23rd, 2020 12:24

Soft Be The Echo
Fay Slimm. said:

A delightfully arranged dish of imagery that your eloquent poetry offers today Nicholas - -- I liked the intriguing title which opened the subject of trying yet often hiding behind negative emotions which lose us the fight.......... I can relate very well with the longing to break down self-made barriers to know someone better. A stirring read.

January 19th, 2020 09:19

Soft Be The Echo
orchidee said:

A fine write N.
Meanwhile - I worry about my failure to connect with others. Why they all run away? I only say \'I\'m gonna sing now!\' and I don\'t see them for dust - the dust cloud they kick up as they run away so fast. heehee.
Just gimme a call if anyone truly upsets ya. I\'ll pop round to them and sing to \'em! lol.

January 19th, 2020 03:45

Soft Be The Echo
Nemo said:

Well God daum, described so well, I also go through this constant struggle in my day to day life, fear of being judged or thing might not come out the way you want them to.all I can say is the struggle is real, social anxiety is a bitch 😂
But a great write as always 🌹

January 19th, 2020 03:33

I Remember
Fay Slimm. said:

An admirable rendering of the passing of Autumn and the eloquent personification Nicholas ...........

January 14th, 2020 08:45

I Remember
Michael Edwards said:

A worthy read - so well expressed.

January 14th, 2020 03:18

I Remember
orchidee said:

A fine write Nicholas. Did ya remember that I turned up, started singing, and ruined everything?! Or did ya prefer to forget that bit?! heehee.

January 14th, 2020 03:02



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