Comments received on poems by Nicholas Browning
Winter Sun
Neville said:
I very much enjoyed this introduction to your written words Nicholas and am delighted that you posted here today ... and I am sure there will be many such visits .................................... Neville
September 2nd, 2021 10:36
Neville said:
I very much enjoyed this introduction to your written words Nicholas and am delighted that you posted here today ... and I am sure there will be many such visits .................................... Neville
September 2nd, 2021 10:36
Musings of a Crow
Goldfinch60 said:
May the warmth of love bring you back to the wonderful days that will be there for you Nicholas.
Andy
August 14th, 2021 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
May the warmth of love bring you back to the wonderful days that will be there for you Nicholas.
Andy
August 14th, 2021 00:37
Musings of a Crow
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant imagery and wonderful flow
those frustrations and doubts are so relatable,
thanks for sharing
August 13th, 2021 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant imagery and wonderful flow
those frustrations and doubts are so relatable,
thanks for sharing
August 13th, 2021 05:09
Musings of a Crow
orchidee said:
Good write Nicholas.
Some don\'t like crows / rooks / ravens. They are lovely birds though.
August 13th, 2021 04:11
orchidee said:
Good write Nicholas.
Some don\'t like crows / rooks / ravens. They are lovely birds though.
August 13th, 2021 04:11
Musings of a Crow
Saxon Crow said:
Being somewhat bias towards crows, I feel somewhat sad at the thought of a crow freezing to death! However, a wonderfully crafted piece here Nicholas
August 13th, 2021 02:44
Saxon Crow said:
Being somewhat bias towards crows, I feel somewhat sad at the thought of a crow freezing to death! However, a wonderfully crafted piece here Nicholas
August 13th, 2021 02:44
Shadow In The Shade
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is always there for us but some do not want to see it.
Andy
April 14th, 2021 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is always there for us but some do not want to see it.
Andy
April 14th, 2021 00:37
The Meaning in Nothing
L. B. Mek said:
a triumphantly melodic poem you\'ve penned, really like the flow and set-up to the \'slap\' of a twist at the end,
a wonderful read
December 17th, 2020 06:34
L. B. Mek said:
a triumphantly melodic poem you\'ve penned, really like the flow and set-up to the \'slap\' of a twist at the end,
a wonderful read
December 17th, 2020 06:34
The Meaning in Nothing
jarcher54 said:
A very fine, subtle tour de force. I appreciate the simple descriptive first three stanzas, the overheard words, the shadows and sun, the birds flitting away... then the inward turn at the end. I am frankly startled by the phrase \"kindness without sincerity.\" Elusive, enigmatic, insightful. Thank you.
December 16th, 2020 22:31
jarcher54 said:
A very fine, subtle tour de force. I appreciate the simple descriptive first three stanzas, the overheard words, the shadows and sun, the birds flitting away... then the inward turn at the end. I am frankly startled by the phrase \"kindness without sincerity.\" Elusive, enigmatic, insightful. Thank you.
December 16th, 2020 22:31
Tides of Change
orchidee said:
Cooeee, good write N.
I dunno if I seen many gyres, or lyres! heehee.
December 16th, 2020 03:06
orchidee said:
Cooeee, good write N.
I dunno if I seen many gyres, or lyres! heehee.
December 16th, 2020 03:06
Tides of Change
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day in our lives is so special.
Andy
December 16th, 2020 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day in our lives is so special.
Andy
December 16th, 2020 02:23
As All Things Must
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow great sublime muse and the descriptions make it a fine abstract poem indeed. Kudos.
Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too!
February 26th, 2020 01:52
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow great sublime muse and the descriptions make it a fine abstract poem indeed. Kudos.
Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too!
February 26th, 2020 01:52
As All Things Must
Fay Slimm. said:
Both wording and message gives linguistic pleasure to this reader Nick - I love the archaic style with expressions like \"Often more than not is there a purpose in meager things\" - apt pointers indeed to look twice before giving up to and ebbing spirit...... into my faves with this one my friend.
February 5th, 2020 03:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Both wording and message gives linguistic pleasure to this reader Nick - I love the archaic style with expressions like \"Often more than not is there a purpose in meager things\" - apt pointers indeed to look twice before giving up to and ebbing spirit...... into my faves with this one my friend.
February 5th, 2020 03:02
As All Things Must
orchidee said:
Yes, good write N. I will take 3 weeks to see all the things in it!
Nothing new there then? As in \'What the heck is this guy talking about?!\' heehee.
February 5th, 2020 02:50
orchidee said:
Yes, good write N. I will take 3 weeks to see all the things in it!
Nothing new there then? As in \'What the heck is this guy talking about?!\' heehee.
February 5th, 2020 02:50
As All Things Must
Goldfinch60 said:
Good intriguing write Nicholas, I have read it several times and find more in it each time I read it.
Andy
February 5th, 2020 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Good intriguing write Nicholas, I have read it several times and find more in it each time I read it.
Andy
February 5th, 2020 02:10
Soft Be The Echo
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I appreciate your four syllabic stanzas (I counted roughly 8-6-8-6 in the first two), with a contraction and then expansion of syllables in your third and last stanza respectively (with end rhymes in the last one) - perhaps subconsciously (or purposefully) accentuating the confusion in the human person’s universal “longing” (though it only appears to be “one-sided”) and continuous quest for communion and recognition. Excellent writing and diction my friend.
January 23rd, 2020 12:24
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I appreciate your four syllabic stanzas (I counted roughly 8-6-8-6 in the first two), with a contraction and then expansion of syllables in your third and last stanza respectively (with end rhymes in the last one) - perhaps subconsciously (or purposefully) accentuating the confusion in the human person’s universal “longing” (though it only appears to be “one-sided”) and continuous quest for communion and recognition. Excellent writing and diction my friend.
January 23rd, 2020 12:24
Soft Be The Echo
Fay Slimm. said:
A delightfully arranged dish of imagery that your eloquent poetry offers today Nicholas - -- I liked the intriguing title which opened the subject of trying yet often hiding behind negative emotions which lose us the fight.......... I can relate very well with the longing to break down self-made barriers to know someone better. A stirring read.
January 19th, 2020 09:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A delightfully arranged dish of imagery that your eloquent poetry offers today Nicholas - -- I liked the intriguing title which opened the subject of trying yet often hiding behind negative emotions which lose us the fight.......... I can relate very well with the longing to break down self-made barriers to know someone better. A stirring read.
January 19th, 2020 09:19
Soft Be The Echo
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Meanwhile - I worry about my failure to connect with others. Why they all run away? I only say \'I\'m gonna sing now!\' and I don\'t see them for dust - the dust cloud they kick up as they run away so fast. heehee.
Just gimme a call if anyone truly upsets ya. I\'ll pop round to them and sing to \'em! lol.
January 19th, 2020 03:45
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Meanwhile - I worry about my failure to connect with others. Why they all run away? I only say \'I\'m gonna sing now!\' and I don\'t see them for dust - the dust cloud they kick up as they run away so fast. heehee.
Just gimme a call if anyone truly upsets ya. I\'ll pop round to them and sing to \'em! lol.
January 19th, 2020 03:45
Soft Be The Echo
Nemo said:
Well God daum, described so well, I also go through this constant struggle in my day to day life, fear of being judged or thing might not come out the way you want them to.all I can say is the struggle is real, social anxiety is a bitch 😂
But a great write as always 🌹
January 19th, 2020 03:33
Nemo said:
Well God daum, described so well, I also go through this constant struggle in my day to day life, fear of being judged or thing might not come out the way you want them to.all I can say is the struggle is real, social anxiety is a bitch 😂
But a great write as always 🌹
January 19th, 2020 03:33
I Remember
Fay Slimm. said:
An admirable rendering of the passing of Autumn and the eloquent personification Nicholas ...........
January 14th, 2020 08:45
Fay Slimm. said:
An admirable rendering of the passing of Autumn and the eloquent personification Nicholas ...........
January 14th, 2020 08:45
I Remember
orchidee said:
A fine write Nicholas. Did ya remember that I turned up, started singing, and ruined everything?! Or did ya prefer to forget that bit?! heehee.
January 14th, 2020 03:02
orchidee said:
A fine write Nicholas. Did ya remember that I turned up, started singing, and ruined everything?! Or did ya prefer to forget that bit?! heehee.
January 14th, 2020 03:02
I Remember
Nemo said:
Beautiful relation with autumn, was a pleasure to read it 🌹
January 14th, 2020 02:53
Nemo said:
Beautiful relation with autumn, was a pleasure to read it 🌹
January 14th, 2020 02:53
I Remember
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Nicholas, I am always sad when autumn passes.
January 14th, 2020 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Nicholas, I am always sad when autumn passes.
January 14th, 2020 01:11
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