Comments received on poems by Nicholas Browning
Sacrifice
Goldfinch60 said:
Very though provoking write Nicholas, my Faith in the Church is questionable at the moment but my Faith in God is unchallenged, to me it is religion that is the problem no God, \"My Spirit.\"
March 24th, 2019 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Very though provoking write Nicholas, my Faith in the Church is questionable at the moment but my Faith in God is unchallenged, to me it is religion that is the problem no God, \"My Spirit.\"
March 24th, 2019 01:12
Sacrifice
Neville said:
we all have to make them every now and again... they are what they are, only by definition..... an intriguing poem and likewise enjoyed.... N
March 23rd, 2019 18:21
Neville said:
we all have to make them every now and again... they are what they are, only by definition..... an intriguing poem and likewise enjoyed.... N
March 23rd, 2019 18:21
Sacrifice
Michael Edwards said:
Sylvia refers to faith\' truth, righteousness and evil - I too was minded towards these by your words with the exception of faith. Since it has no meaning in my world in respect of religious beliefs it not something which I pick up on. Getting back to the poem it was certainly thought provoking which is the sign of a good write.
March 23rd, 2019 13:47
Michael Edwards said:
Sylvia refers to faith\' truth, righteousness and evil - I too was minded towards these by your words with the exception of faith. Since it has no meaning in my world in respect of religious beliefs it not something which I pick up on. Getting back to the poem it was certainly thought provoking which is the sign of a good write.
March 23rd, 2019 13:47
Sacrifice
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever last line to end this beguiling write Nick - your pen achieves much with any subject or theme and sacrifice can mean all this and more.
March 23rd, 2019 13:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever last line to end this beguiling write Nick - your pen achieves much with any subject or theme and sacrifice can mean all this and more.
March 23rd, 2019 13:09
Sacrifice
Laura🌻 said:
Nicholas,
I liked reading your poem and your author comments! I don’t know how old you are, but you are very wise! This world needs more people like you in it! It would be a more tolerable and better place!
‘Pulp Fiction’ is definitely a quotable movie! The only reason why I saw that movie was because I was an invited guest at its debut thanks to John Travolta!
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2019 04:44
Laura🌻 said:
Nicholas,
I liked reading your poem and your author comments! I don’t know how old you are, but you are very wise! This world needs more people like you in it! It would be a more tolerable and better place!
‘Pulp Fiction’ is definitely a quotable movie! The only reason why I saw that movie was because I was an invited guest at its debut thanks to John Travolta!
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2019 04:44
Sacrifice
sylviasearcher said:
Thought provoking... though I have to admit it made me head hurt a little as is always the case with the unknown and unfathomable
March 23rd, 2019 04:42
sylviasearcher said:
Thought provoking... though I have to admit it made me head hurt a little as is always the case with the unknown and unfathomable
March 23rd, 2019 04:42
Sacrifice
orchidee said:
A fine write Nicholas, though I don\'t go along with some of the things in this myself.
Meanwhile - I never knew ya was that old? You older than me, seeing Babel and all that?!
Well, I\'m scared to go to an Antiques Show in case they think I\'m an exhibit and keep me there.
March 23rd, 2019 04:04
orchidee said:
A fine write Nicholas, though I don\'t go along with some of the things in this myself.
Meanwhile - I never knew ya was that old? You older than me, seeing Babel and all that?!
Well, I\'m scared to go to an Antiques Show in case they think I\'m an exhibit and keep me there.
March 23rd, 2019 04:04
A Life in Grey
MendedFences27 said:
Life , death, the Earth, and Mankind, all intertwine in as many ways as their are people. Each perceives reality in a unique way. Some of us dare to write about it.
A beautifully worded tour through town and mind. Enjoyed your penultimate stanza the most. \"Like ashes the wind had blown.\" - Phil A.
March 22nd, 2019 11:12
MendedFences27 said:
Life , death, the Earth, and Mankind, all intertwine in as many ways as their are people. Each perceives reality in a unique way. Some of us dare to write about it.
A beautifully worded tour through town and mind. Enjoyed your penultimate stanza the most. \"Like ashes the wind had blown.\" - Phil A.
March 22nd, 2019 11:12
A Life in Grey
Neville said:
Reads like a condensed novel... a good novel mind and true....
March 22nd, 2019 06:28
Neville said:
Reads like a condensed novel... a good novel mind and true....
March 22nd, 2019 06:28
A Life in Grey
Michael Edwards said:
You have conveyed it so well in this engaging write.
March 22nd, 2019 06:04
Michael Edwards said:
You have conveyed it so well in this engaging write.
March 22nd, 2019 06:04
A Life in Grey
Fay Slimm. said:
Fantastic imagery in this walk through a peopled town - - your pen queries the whys and yet writes so bravely of life and death\'s mysteries. Well done again Nick.
March 22nd, 2019 03:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Fantastic imagery in this walk through a peopled town - - your pen queries the whys and yet writes so bravely of life and death\'s mysteries. Well done again Nick.
March 22nd, 2019 03:59
A Life in Grey
sylviasearcher said:
What a well written piece of a walk through human land.
It surely never made much sense to me.
It has taken me about now to give up hope on finding sense though.
March 22nd, 2019 03:13
sylviasearcher said:
What a well written piece of a walk through human land.
It surely never made much sense to me.
It has taken me about now to give up hope on finding sense though.
March 22nd, 2019 03:13
A Life in Grey
orchidee said:
A fine write Nicholas. Our town is busy. Though this reminds me of a woodland walk. A wood which is tended though, by conservation folk.
March 22nd, 2019 02:45
orchidee said:
A fine write Nicholas. Our town is busy. Though this reminds me of a woodland walk. A wood which is tended though, by conservation folk.
March 22nd, 2019 02:45
The Girl Who Tamed a Demon
Fay Slimm. said:
Embracing your fright is the way to dispense with demons - good thought Nick - loved the number too.
March 21st, 2019 17:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Embracing your fright is the way to dispense with demons - good thought Nick - loved the number too.
March 21st, 2019 17:49
The Girl Who Tamed a Demon
Neville said:
There are many such women out there, treat them lightly.. and hold your forearm higher...a shield tis most finely not...
March 21st, 2019 17:36
Neville said:
There are many such women out there, treat them lightly.. and hold your forearm higher...a shield tis most finely not...
March 21st, 2019 17:36
The Girl Who Tamed a Demon
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant. Whenever we approach the unknown and overcome our fright we learn and move forward.
March 21st, 2019 03:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant. Whenever we approach the unknown and overcome our fright we learn and move forward.
March 21st, 2019 03:11
The Girl Who Tamed a Demon
orchidee said:
A fine write Nicholas. \'He/She who sups with the devil should use a long spoon\', said by someone or other in late 14th Century, I read. Maybe said by me. I\'m millions of years old, so I could have said it back then. lol.
March 21st, 2019 02:58
orchidee said:
A fine write Nicholas. \'He/She who sups with the devil should use a long spoon\', said by someone or other in late 14th Century, I read. Maybe said by me. I\'m millions of years old, so I could have said it back then. lol.
March 21st, 2019 02:58
The Girl Who Tamed a Demon
Laura🌻 said:
Nicholas,
An intriguing write!
Love the song! I think it can have a lot to do with your fine poem!
~Laura~
March 21st, 2019 01:20
Laura🌻 said:
Nicholas,
An intriguing write!
Love the song! I think it can have a lot to do with your fine poem!
~Laura~
March 21st, 2019 01:20
How Else Would We Know?
MendedFences27 said:
Finding the right words aye, that\'s the rub. Is it art, if I change \"is\" to \"was\".?
Do poems fall from trees? Or must a man intercede? Are there such things as poets who can not spell, witches who cannot brew, Seers who can\'t foretell, or artists who won\'t tattoo. It\'s all about the words. Loved this one.- Phil A.
March 19th, 2019 16:11
MendedFences27 said:
Finding the right words aye, that\'s the rub. Is it art, if I change \"is\" to \"was\".?
Do poems fall from trees? Or must a man intercede? Are there such things as poets who can not spell, witches who cannot brew, Seers who can\'t foretell, or artists who won\'t tattoo. It\'s all about the words. Loved this one.- Phil A.
March 19th, 2019 16:11
How Else Would We Know?
orchidee said:
How we gonna disprove maths skills? We - Gold and I anyway - know Fibonacci sequences - oohhh! Google if not known!
March 19th, 2019 15:12
orchidee said:
How we gonna disprove maths skills? We - Gold and I anyway - know Fibonacci sequences - oohhh! Google if not known!
March 19th, 2019 15:12
How Else Would We Know?
Suresh said:
Words unfound - to disprove - false belief
What\'s not there to disprove what\'s not there
Let spirits lift your spirit
March 19th, 2019 13:25
Suresh said:
Words unfound - to disprove - false belief
What\'s not there to disprove what\'s not there
Let spirits lift your spirit
March 19th, 2019 13:25
How Else Would We Know?
Fay Slimm. said:
A good way to attract the Muse is quietly sit and wait for those \"words unfound\" - - an inspired write Nick.
March 19th, 2019 06:13
Fay Slimm. said:
A good way to attract the Muse is quietly sit and wait for those \"words unfound\" - - an inspired write Nick.
March 19th, 2019 06:13
How Else Would We Know?
orchidee said:
Erm, what you setting out to disprove?!
March 19th, 2019 03:46
orchidee said:
Erm, what you setting out to disprove?!
March 19th, 2019 03:46
How Else Would We Know?
sylviasearcher said:
You mustered something poignant and indeed your words paint a picture on the canvas of the mind. Another ache though. Like I was reaching out for something that had no form or shape and no one else could see. But still I sat and pondered it though it evaded my capture. And still I wanted to sense it. Knowing I never could.
March 19th, 2019 03:15
sylviasearcher said:
You mustered something poignant and indeed your words paint a picture on the canvas of the mind. Another ache though. Like I was reaching out for something that had no form or shape and no one else could see. But still I sat and pondered it though it evaded my capture. And still I wanted to sense it. Knowing I never could.
March 19th, 2019 03:15
How Else Would We Know?
Michael Edwards said:
Poetry and art are different branches of the same tree.
A painting evokes thoughts
a poem paints pictures \'
March 19th, 2019 02:11
Michael Edwards said:
Poetry and art are different branches of the same tree.
A painting evokes thoughts
a poem paints pictures \'
March 19th, 2019 02:11
How Else Would We Know?
Goldfinch60 said:
Words can bring art to us all.
Art can bring words to us all.
My very first poem was written because the way a piece of artwork affected me.
March 19th, 2019 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Words can bring art to us all.
Art can bring words to us all.
My very first poem was written because the way a piece of artwork affected me.
March 19th, 2019 01:48
Story of Our Lives
orchidee said:
A fine write Nicholas. There\'s no glee if I start singing though. lol.
March 18th, 2019 02:50
orchidee said:
A fine write Nicholas. There\'s no glee if I start singing though. lol.
March 18th, 2019 02:50
Story of Our Lives
sylviasearcher said:
Well your job was done because I thoroughly enjoyed this one!
In fact it’s a favourite.
Kind of romantic yet ‘broken’.
Gentle as a lullaby yet written like a eulogy.
March 18th, 2019 02:30
sylviasearcher said:
Well your job was done because I thoroughly enjoyed this one!
In fact it’s a favourite.
Kind of romantic yet ‘broken’.
Gentle as a lullaby yet written like a eulogy.
March 18th, 2019 02:30
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