Comments received on poems by Nicholas Browning
\"Pet Project\"
orchidee said:
I\'m an old spoilsport, ruining the heaviness of dark poems, by some daft (crass?) comment, such as: \'Oohh, sit down and we\'ll have a nice cuppa tea and slice of cake, and sort things out, if ya having a bad-hair day!\' heehee
September 11th, 2018 07:15
orchidee said:
I\'m an old spoilsport, ruining the heaviness of dark poems, by some daft (crass?) comment, such as: \'Oohh, sit down and we\'ll have a nice cuppa tea and slice of cake, and sort things out, if ya having a bad-hair day!\' heehee
September 11th, 2018 07:15
The Pariah
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A sublime abstract muse written in an interesting evocative style. Kudos.
So nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too.
September 6th, 2018 06:07
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A sublime abstract muse written in an interesting evocative style. Kudos.
So nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too.
September 6th, 2018 06:07
The Pariah
orchidee said:
Oops, this has appeared as a fine Greek poem. Be with ya in a couple of hours, after I\'ve translated it. I can, ya know. It need not stay \'all Greek\' to me! lol.
August 22nd, 2018 03:04
orchidee said:
Oops, this has appeared as a fine Greek poem. Be with ya in a couple of hours, after I\'ve translated it. I can, ya know. It need not stay \'all Greek\' to me! lol.
August 22nd, 2018 03:04
Sunlight
orchidee said:
You staying a while? You not popping your clogs yet?!
August 21st, 2018 01:23
orchidee said:
You staying a while? You not popping your clogs yet?!
August 21st, 2018 01:23
Irregular
onepauly said:
the first and second lines, and that word trance. I smoked a six inch joint sitting in the sand, and watch the waves crash into the rocks below.
it was very transcending.
July 20th, 2018 12:13
onepauly said:
the first and second lines, and that word trance. I smoked a six inch joint sitting in the sand, and watch the waves crash into the rocks below.
it was very transcending.
July 20th, 2018 12:13
Irregular
Stan Rodriguez said:
nicely written - nice imagery - strong - enjoyed your poem thanks for sharing. get them coming.
July 20th, 2018 10:47
Stan Rodriguez said:
nicely written - nice imagery - strong - enjoyed your poem thanks for sharing. get them coming.
July 20th, 2018 10:47
Irregular
orchidee said:
Coeee, that you in the pic, or some other guy?! A fine write N.
July 20th, 2018 09:42
orchidee said:
Coeee, that you in the pic, or some other guy?! A fine write N.
July 20th, 2018 09:42
Astral Days and Sunlit Nights
ZIGGY said:
hi no doubt your prowess in this piece it is easy to see the value of your thoughts read and enjoyed great write ,,,,zigs
June 18th, 2018 13:23
ZIGGY said:
hi no doubt your prowess in this piece it is easy to see the value of your thoughts read and enjoyed great write ,,,,zigs
June 18th, 2018 13:23
Put a Face to the Name
Goldfinch60 said:
very good write. It is amazing what the pen will write when put onto the page.
June 1st, 2018 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
very good write. It is amazing what the pen will write when put onto the page.
June 1st, 2018 00:52
Put a Face to the Name
poetboy123 said:
A brilliant thought-provoking write, and it\'s nice to see you back as well!
May 31st, 2018 10:06
poetboy123 said:
A brilliant thought-provoking write, and it\'s nice to see you back as well!
May 31st, 2018 10:06
Ghost
Fay Slimm. said:
I was walking that pathway with you so clear your description of life in a typical city - thanks for sharing it Nicholas.
May 10th, 2018 16:43
Fay Slimm. said:
I was walking that pathway with you so clear your description of life in a typical city - thanks for sharing it Nicholas.
May 10th, 2018 16:43
Ghost
orchidee said:
Aww, did I say ya was dead?! But a shocker - a friend said to someone I know: \'Not seen ya for ages; thought ya was dead!\' Oohh. A fine write N.
May 10th, 2018 11:39
orchidee said:
Aww, did I say ya was dead?! But a shocker - a friend said to someone I know: \'Not seen ya for ages; thought ya was dead!\' Oohh. A fine write N.
May 10th, 2018 11:39
Ghost
Michael Edwards said:
So pleased you\'re not dead - I would miss your super work. A great bit of narrative poetry.
May 10th, 2018 11:12
Michael Edwards said:
So pleased you\'re not dead - I would miss your super work. A great bit of narrative poetry.
May 10th, 2018 11:12
Ghost
Lorna said:
This is very powerful Nicholas. I love the story it tells although a bit sad........
May 10th, 2018 07:39
Lorna said:
This is very powerful Nicholas. I love the story it tells although a bit sad........
May 10th, 2018 07:39
Memories of Yesterday
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Great diction for “only 21” and an impressive number of lines for someone of your generation. Keep up the great work!
May 6th, 2018 21:25
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Great diction for “only 21” and an impressive number of lines for someone of your generation. Keep up the great work!
May 6th, 2018 21:25
Memories of Yesterday
sylviasearcher said:
This reads well beyond your youth...
Reminds me of a feeling I get sometimes
April 24th, 2018 09:39
sylviasearcher said:
This reads well beyond your youth...
Reminds me of a feeling I get sometimes
April 24th, 2018 09:39
Beatific Sorrow
Michael Edwards said:
Fine work Nicholas - some great lines here.
April 22nd, 2018 09:41
Michael Edwards said:
Fine work Nicholas - some great lines here.
April 22nd, 2018 09:41
Beatific Sorrow
orchidee said:
Oohh I dunno - I don\'t fancy much of that bruising and clawing stuff! Not today, thank you! lol. What I often say is \'Can\'t we work it out over a nice cuppa and slice of cake?! A bit quaint, I know. Tee hee.
April 22nd, 2018 07:54
orchidee said:
Oohh I dunno - I don\'t fancy much of that bruising and clawing stuff! Not today, thank you! lol. What I often say is \'Can\'t we work it out over a nice cuppa and slice of cake?! A bit quaint, I know. Tee hee.
April 22nd, 2018 07:54
Beatific Sorrow
onepauly said:
Ive been in misery so many times that whenever it passes through I just set myself feel for happiness or something more positive or similer. sometimes it works. ha! ha!
April 22nd, 2018 06:42
onepauly said:
Ive been in misery so many times that whenever it passes through I just set myself feel for happiness or something more positive or similer. sometimes it works. ha! ha!
April 22nd, 2018 06:42
Onus of Living
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Nicholas. My body may well decay or get blown in the wind but My Spirit will go on forever.
April 21st, 2018 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Nicholas. My body may well decay or get blown in the wind but My Spirit will go on forever.
April 21st, 2018 00:44
Onus of Living
Michael Edwards said:
Unless we are cremated..! great final line.
April 20th, 2018 10:42
Michael Edwards said:
Unless we are cremated..! great final line.
April 20th, 2018 10:42
Onus of Living
onepauly said:
Great Write
it means something
i\'ll take impassivly
April 20th, 2018 03:58
onepauly said:
Great Write
it means something
i\'ll take impassivly
April 20th, 2018 03:58
Onus of Living
orchidee said:
yes, the same end for every human being. This came to mind reading this - St Francis of Assisi said \'What one is before God, that is what one is, and no more\'.
April 20th, 2018 03:54
orchidee said:
yes, the same end for every human being. This came to mind reading this - St Francis of Assisi said \'What one is before God, that is what one is, and no more\'.
April 20th, 2018 03:54
Astral Days and Sunlit Nights
orchidee said:
Never knew there was so much in imagination! heehee. Erm, it\'s \'esoteric\' for me, I can tell ya. Gets a bit cryptic for me. It\'s why I opt for the simpler crosswords rather than the cryptic ones in the papers!
April 17th, 2018 08:18
orchidee said:
Never knew there was so much in imagination! heehee. Erm, it\'s \'esoteric\' for me, I can tell ya. Gets a bit cryptic for me. It\'s why I opt for the simpler crosswords rather than the cryptic ones in the papers!
April 17th, 2018 08:18
Astral Days and Sunlit Nights
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful esoteric write Nicholas, the last stanza is so meaningful.
April 17th, 2018 08:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful esoteric write Nicholas, the last stanza is so meaningful.
April 17th, 2018 08:02
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