Comments received on poems by Nicholas Browning
\"Pet Project\"
Neville said:
a certain melancholia weaves its way throughout this poem... yet it still feels comfortable here.. I dont mind admitting that I enjoyed the ride my friend... N
December 13th, 2018 17:39
Neville said:
a certain melancholia weaves its way throughout this poem... yet it still feels comfortable here.. I dont mind admitting that I enjoyed the ride my friend... N
December 13th, 2018 17:39
Tabula Rasa
Fay Slimm. said:
Truths abound in this honest verse - - a false step is certainly not a failure
- - trying again is the answer to
the fact that \"everything changes\" - - thanks for this well-written reminder Nicolas --
December 13th, 2018 16:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Truths abound in this honest verse - - a false step is certainly not a failure
- - trying again is the answer to
the fact that \"everything changes\" - - thanks for this well-written reminder Nicolas --
December 13th, 2018 16:06
Tabula Rasa
Michael Edwards said:
A great read and so well written - much enjoyed.
December 13th, 2018 11:44
Michael Edwards said:
A great read and so well written - much enjoyed.
December 13th, 2018 11:44
Tabula Rasa
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Erm, someone tried to see what was in my head (let alone my heart). The answer was \'nothing\', or \'air\', maybe \'hot air\' of me waffling! heehee.
December 13th, 2018 02:46
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Erm, someone tried to see what was in my head (let alone my heart). The answer was \'nothing\', or \'air\', maybe \'hot air\' of me waffling! heehee.
December 13th, 2018 02:46
Telltale Signs of a Journey Undone
Michael Edwards said:
The message accompanying this is the saddest read of the day. Don\'t give up - you have a great pen as this posting shows - and if you do leave at least write the occasional piece as the mood takes you and post here to keep in touch.
September 19th, 2018 09:34
Michael Edwards said:
The message accompanying this is the saddest read of the day. Don\'t give up - you have a great pen as this posting shows - and if you do leave at least write the occasional piece as the mood takes you and post here to keep in touch.
September 19th, 2018 09:34
\"Pet Project\"
orchidee said:
I\'m an old spoilsport, ruining the heaviness of dark poems, by some daft (crass?) comment, such as: \'Oohh, sit down and we\'ll have a nice cuppa tea and slice of cake, and sort things out, if ya having a bad-hair day!\' heehee
September 11th, 2018 07:15
orchidee said:
I\'m an old spoilsport, ruining the heaviness of dark poems, by some daft (crass?) comment, such as: \'Oohh, sit down and we\'ll have a nice cuppa tea and slice of cake, and sort things out, if ya having a bad-hair day!\' heehee
September 11th, 2018 07:15
The Pariah
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A sublime abstract muse written in an interesting evocative style. Kudos.
So nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too.
September 6th, 2018 06:07
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A sublime abstract muse written in an interesting evocative style. Kudos.
So nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too.
September 6th, 2018 06:07
The Pariah
orchidee said:
Oops, this has appeared as a fine Greek poem. Be with ya in a couple of hours, after I\'ve translated it. I can, ya know. It need not stay \'all Greek\' to me! lol.
August 22nd, 2018 03:04
orchidee said:
Oops, this has appeared as a fine Greek poem. Be with ya in a couple of hours, after I\'ve translated it. I can, ya know. It need not stay \'all Greek\' to me! lol.
August 22nd, 2018 03:04
Sunlight
orchidee said:
You staying a while? You not popping your clogs yet?!
August 21st, 2018 01:23
orchidee said:
You staying a while? You not popping your clogs yet?!
August 21st, 2018 01:23
Irregular
onepauly said:
the first and second lines, and that word trance. I smoked a six inch joint sitting in the sand, and watch the waves crash into the rocks below.
it was very transcending.
July 20th, 2018 12:13
onepauly said:
the first and second lines, and that word trance. I smoked a six inch joint sitting in the sand, and watch the waves crash into the rocks below.
it was very transcending.
July 20th, 2018 12:13
Irregular
Stan Rodriguez said:
nicely written - nice imagery - strong - enjoyed your poem thanks for sharing. get them coming.
July 20th, 2018 10:47
Stan Rodriguez said:
nicely written - nice imagery - strong - enjoyed your poem thanks for sharing. get them coming.
July 20th, 2018 10:47
Irregular
orchidee said:
Coeee, that you in the pic, or some other guy?! A fine write N.
July 20th, 2018 09:42
orchidee said:
Coeee, that you in the pic, or some other guy?! A fine write N.
July 20th, 2018 09:42
Astral Days and Sunlit Nights
ZIGGY said:
hi no doubt your prowess in this piece it is easy to see the value of your thoughts read and enjoyed great write ,,,,zigs
June 18th, 2018 13:23
ZIGGY said:
hi no doubt your prowess in this piece it is easy to see the value of your thoughts read and enjoyed great write ,,,,zigs
June 18th, 2018 13:23
Put a Face to the Name
Goldfinch60 said:
very good write. It is amazing what the pen will write when put onto the page.
June 1st, 2018 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
very good write. It is amazing what the pen will write when put onto the page.
June 1st, 2018 00:52
Put a Face to the Name
poetboy123 said:
A brilliant thought-provoking write, and it\'s nice to see you back as well!
May 31st, 2018 10:06
poetboy123 said:
A brilliant thought-provoking write, and it\'s nice to see you back as well!
May 31st, 2018 10:06
Ghost
Fay Slimm. said:
I was walking that pathway with you so clear your description of life in a typical city - thanks for sharing it Nicholas.
May 10th, 2018 16:43
Fay Slimm. said:
I was walking that pathway with you so clear your description of life in a typical city - thanks for sharing it Nicholas.
May 10th, 2018 16:43
Ghost
orchidee said:
Aww, did I say ya was dead?! But a shocker - a friend said to someone I know: \'Not seen ya for ages; thought ya was dead!\' Oohh. A fine write N.
May 10th, 2018 11:39
orchidee said:
Aww, did I say ya was dead?! But a shocker - a friend said to someone I know: \'Not seen ya for ages; thought ya was dead!\' Oohh. A fine write N.
May 10th, 2018 11:39
Ghost
Michael Edwards said:
So pleased you\'re not dead - I would miss your super work. A great bit of narrative poetry.
May 10th, 2018 11:12
Michael Edwards said:
So pleased you\'re not dead - I would miss your super work. A great bit of narrative poetry.
May 10th, 2018 11:12
Ghost
Lorna said:
This is very powerful Nicholas. I love the story it tells although a bit sad........
May 10th, 2018 07:39
Lorna said:
This is very powerful Nicholas. I love the story it tells although a bit sad........
May 10th, 2018 07:39
Memories of Yesterday
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Great diction for “only 21” and an impressive number of lines for someone of your generation. Keep up the great work!
May 6th, 2018 21:25
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Great diction for “only 21” and an impressive number of lines for someone of your generation. Keep up the great work!
May 6th, 2018 21:25
Memories of Yesterday
sylviasearcher said:
This reads well beyond your youth...
Reminds me of a feeling I get sometimes
April 24th, 2018 09:39
sylviasearcher said:
This reads well beyond your youth...
Reminds me of a feeling I get sometimes
April 24th, 2018 09:39
Beatific Sorrow
Michael Edwards said:
Fine work Nicholas - some great lines here.
April 22nd, 2018 09:41
Michael Edwards said:
Fine work Nicholas - some great lines here.
April 22nd, 2018 09:41
Beatific Sorrow
orchidee said:
Oohh I dunno - I don\'t fancy much of that bruising and clawing stuff! Not today, thank you! lol. What I often say is \'Can\'t we work it out over a nice cuppa and slice of cake?! A bit quaint, I know. Tee hee.
April 22nd, 2018 07:54
orchidee said:
Oohh I dunno - I don\'t fancy much of that bruising and clawing stuff! Not today, thank you! lol. What I often say is \'Can\'t we work it out over a nice cuppa and slice of cake?! A bit quaint, I know. Tee hee.
April 22nd, 2018 07:54
Beatific Sorrow
onepauly said:
Ive been in misery so many times that whenever it passes through I just set myself feel for happiness or something more positive or similer. sometimes it works. ha! ha!
April 22nd, 2018 06:42
onepauly said:
Ive been in misery so many times that whenever it passes through I just set myself feel for happiness or something more positive or similer. sometimes it works. ha! ha!
April 22nd, 2018 06:42
Onus of Living
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Nicholas. My body may well decay or get blown in the wind but My Spirit will go on forever.
April 21st, 2018 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Nicholas. My body may well decay or get blown in the wind but My Spirit will go on forever.
April 21st, 2018 00:44
Onus of Living
Michael Edwards said:
Unless we are cremated..! great final line.
April 20th, 2018 10:42
Michael Edwards said:
Unless we are cremated..! great final line.
April 20th, 2018 10:42
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