Comments received on poems by lasergraph



THE GIFT OF TIME
Michael Edwards said:

What a beautiful write - I am in awe of the little ones and I have one for a sleep over this coming weekend - so looking forward to it.

November 8th, 2017 11:53

THE GIFT OF TIME
w c said:

This is an awesome poem! I thoroughly enjoyed it.

November 8th, 2017 11:01

THE GIFT OF TIME
orchidee said:

I had TIME to read this good poem, laser!

November 8th, 2017 11:01

THE GIFT OF TIME
Louis Gibbs said:

A great gift to give a young one, indeed. Well expressed, LG!

November 8th, 2017 11:00

MY WIFE OF MANY YEARS
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write and a very strong write. We celebrate 36 years today, not bad for a second marriage for both of us.

November 7th, 2017 01:47

MY WIFE OF MANY YEARS
FredPeyer said:

lasergraph, after 41 years with my wife I can truly appreciate your excellent poem!

November 6th, 2017 16:28

MY WIFE OF MANY YEARS
orchidee said:

A good write laser.

November 6th, 2017 15:54

MY WIFE OF MANY YEARS
myself and me said:

Lucky you found your true love. It is such a blessing.

November 6th, 2017 15:44

MY WIFE OF MANY YEARS
Christina8 said:

Very good poem. Reminds me of my marriage, though not as many years as yours. May you have many more years together!!

November 6th, 2017 15:38

SANTA CLAUS BLUES
w c said:

Awesome! This poem reminds of the thing i enjoy- a sense of humor. Thank you for sharing.

November 2nd, 2017 21:04

SANTA CLAUS BLUES
Christina8 said:

An awesome write on a modern santa! An enjoyable read!

November 2nd, 2017 20:22

SANTA CLAUS BLUES
WL Schuett said:

A fun commentary on today’s world of Christmas....

November 2nd, 2017 18:05

SANTA CLAUS BLUES
Mugsdaddy said:

Absolutely hilarious, unfortunately it would probably be true if Santa hadn\'t filed bankruptcy and sold the shop years ago .

November 2nd, 2017 14:03

SANTA CLAUS BLUES
FredPeyer said:

Great ideas and imagination, so well written, and to top it all off, your picture goes perfect with the Santa image!!! :-)

November 2nd, 2017 13:26

SANTA CLAUS BLUES
myself and me said:

It is such a joy to read your poem.

November 2nd, 2017 12:56

SANTA CLAUS BLUES
Michael Edwards said:

A poignant message served with a smile - great work.

November 2nd, 2017 12:35

THE GYM
myself and me said:

Gym is the place for us to get that extra space in our stomach to enjoy all the sweet we like.

November 2nd, 2017 11:57

SANTA CLAUS BLUES
orchidee said:

A modern-day Santa there. Oh lol. Good write Laser.

November 2nd, 2017 10:38

SANTA CLAUS BLUES
Louis Gibbs said:

This is destined to become a Christmas classic, LG! A fine tribute to the retailer\'s holiday. Kudos!

November 2nd, 2017 10:26

THE GYM
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write. I had thought about going to a gym once but I went and laid down in a darkened room until that thought had passed.

November 2nd, 2017 01:31

THE GYM
w c said:

It\'s been too long since i\'ve worked out! I now do curls with my gallon of milk lol. I really enjoyed this poem.

November 1st, 2017 16:35

THE GYM
FredPeyer said:

Lasergraph, love your poem. You speak from my heart. I cannot count how many times I started to work out and gave up again. I don\'t go to a gym, I have everything right here at home. All the hardware, but nobody to push me! :-)
But hey, in my mind I do have a beautiful body!!!

November 1st, 2017 11:41

THE GYM
Louis Gibbs said:

I assume you sued and got a fine settlement. If not, Michael was an attorney. I\'m sure he could help, for a reasonable fee.
Cute poem, LG!

November 1st, 2017 11:07

THE GYM
orchidee said:

You having fun there?! Good write laser. lol.

November 1st, 2017 09:12

BLACK FRIDAY
FredPeyer said:

Great poem, lasergraph! Thank God I can let my wife do most of the shopping. Whenever I buy something it is wrong anyway and has to be returned! I am so done with it!!!

October 31st, 2017 18:28

BLACK FRIDAY
Louis Gibbs said:

This feels like the decade that Amazon ate the world, doesn\'t it? Well written, LG!

October 31st, 2017 16:02

BLACK FRIDAY
Christina8 said:

Oh I love this poem and the lighthearted message and frustration to get out and shop right after Thanksgiving! Great job! (I think Amazon is great too! :-))

October 31st, 2017 14:25

TWISTED CAP
Goldfinch60 said:

So true, those forgotten days of our youth but we still remember the spinning ceilings.

October 28th, 2017 00:48

TWISTED CAP
myself and me said:

Wow, those old memories take us to the lovely moments of the life.

October 27th, 2017 19:40

TWISTED CAP
FredPeyer said:

Thanks for the memories, lasergraph! Nicely done! While I may not have the parties anymore, at least I still have my wine! :-)

October 27th, 2017 12:24



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