Comments received on poems by lasergraph
POETRY IS
FredPeyer said:
As Michael already said, it is amazing how diverse poetry is, and how different, but equally valid so many here on MPS have been describing it.
Beautiful definition here, lasergraph!
December 11th, 2017 12:34
FredPeyer said:
As Michael already said, it is amazing how diverse poetry is, and how different, but equally valid so many here on MPS have been describing it.
Beautiful definition here, lasergraph!
December 11th, 2017 12:34
POETRY IS
orchidee said:
Yep. I reckon that\'s what poetry is - one view of it! Good write laser.
December 11th, 2017 10:59
orchidee said:
Yep. I reckon that\'s what poetry is - one view of it! Good write laser.
December 11th, 2017 10:59
POETRY IS
Christina8 said:
Excellent depiction of what poetry is, and I agree! Great job!
December 11th, 2017 10:51
Christina8 said:
Excellent depiction of what poetry is, and I agree! Great job!
December 11th, 2017 10:51
POETRY IS
Louis Gibbs said:
Poetry is both healing and revealing, isn\'t it, LG. Good write!
December 11th, 2017 09:37
Louis Gibbs said:
Poetry is both healing and revealing, isn\'t it, LG. Good write!
December 11th, 2017 09:37
POETRY IS
Michael Edwards said:
This is so interesting as it demonstrates the diversity in poetry. For me good poetry transports me and takes me to places either where I have never been or where I am asked to redefine. I never write poetry about my own personal inner thinking nor do I ever bear my soul. Even when I do write in the first person it is rare indeed that I actually am providing a documentary about myself except on those rare occasions where I am discussing politics or philosophy.
None of this is, of course, to distract from you your super poem Lasergraph.
December 11th, 2017 09:05
Michael Edwards said:
This is so interesting as it demonstrates the diversity in poetry. For me good poetry transports me and takes me to places either where I have never been or where I am asked to redefine. I never write poetry about my own personal inner thinking nor do I ever bear my soul. Even when I do write in the first person it is rare indeed that I actually am providing a documentary about myself except on those rare occasions where I am discussing politics or philosophy.
None of this is, of course, to distract from you your super poem Lasergraph.
December 11th, 2017 09:05
POETRY IS
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, it is amazing how many of us have reacted to Poetry is....
December 11th, 2017 09:02
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, it is amazing how many of us have reacted to Poetry is....
December 11th, 2017 09:02
POETRY IS
Laura🌻 said:
Great write Lasergraph! The last two lines speak volumes! Yes, as we write our pieces, bit by bit we reveal ourselves!
December 11th, 2017 08:56
Laura🌻 said:
Great write Lasergraph! The last two lines speak volumes! Yes, as we write our pieces, bit by bit we reveal ourselves!
December 11th, 2017 08:56
PEARL HARBOR
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, lasergraph! I visited Pearl Harbor memorial several times. And from my house I can see Kolekole pass where the Japanese airplanes crossed the Waianae mountain range. Their first target were the planes parked at Wheeler Airforce Base (now Wheeler Army Air Field) which is more or less next door to where I live. Many times I have contemplated how it must have been on that fateful day. If my house would have existed at that time, these Japanese planes would have flown right over it.
December 7th, 2017 20:27
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, lasergraph! I visited Pearl Harbor memorial several times. And from my house I can see Kolekole pass where the Japanese airplanes crossed the Waianae mountain range. Their first target were the planes parked at Wheeler Airforce Base (now Wheeler Army Air Field) which is more or less next door to where I live. Many times I have contemplated how it must have been on that fateful day. If my house would have existed at that time, these Japanese planes would have flown right over it.
December 7th, 2017 20:27
PEARL HARBOR
Christina8 said:
This is one of the best poems I\'ve seen written on the subject of Pearl Harbor! You did a wonderful job, laser! Excellent info,rhyme and structure to the poem.. A fine tribute to those soldiers who were there and lost their lives!
December 7th, 2017 18:46
Christina8 said:
This is one of the best poems I\'ve seen written on the subject of Pearl Harbor! You did a wonderful job, laser! Excellent info,rhyme and structure to the poem.. A fine tribute to those soldiers who were there and lost their lives!
December 7th, 2017 18:46
PEARL HARBOR
myself and me said:
With so many lives lost, there was no winner in wars.
December 7th, 2017 11:54
myself and me said:
With so many lives lost, there was no winner in wars.
December 7th, 2017 11:54
AUTUMN MEMORIES
myself and me said:
Oh, the hot chocolate, I shall make one tonight.
November 30th, 2017 08:11
myself and me said:
Oh, the hot chocolate, I shall make one tonight.
November 30th, 2017 08:11
AUTUMN MEMORIES
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write lg, those memories are special, especially those with family.
November 30th, 2017 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write lg, those memories are special, especially those with family.
November 30th, 2017 02:18
AUTUMN MEMORIES
Accidental Poet said:
Yes Ed, hold close these memories as like Michael said, Spring will be here before we know it. Get your Spring poems ready. ; ) Awesome write Ed.
November 29th, 2017 19:05
Accidental Poet said:
Yes Ed, hold close these memories as like Michael said, Spring will be here before we know it. Get your Spring poems ready. ; ) Awesome write Ed.
November 29th, 2017 19:05
AUTUMN MEMORIES
FredPeyer said:
Well said, lasergraph! Holiday memories are the best!
November 29th, 2017 18:37
FredPeyer said:
Well said, lasergraph! Holiday memories are the best!
November 29th, 2017 18:37
AUTUMN MEMORIES
Michael Edwards said:
Yes tempus fugit - before we know it, it\'ll be spring but the memories will always be with us - a fine write Lasergraph.
November 29th, 2017 12:22
Michael Edwards said:
Yes tempus fugit - before we know it, it\'ll be spring but the memories will always be with us - a fine write Lasergraph.
November 29th, 2017 12:22
THE BIRTH OF SALVATION.
FredPeyer said:
With all the hoopla and commercialism we tend to forget the REAL meaning of Christmas. Your poem brought that back, lasergraph!
November 22nd, 2017 12:25
FredPeyer said:
With all the hoopla and commercialism we tend to forget the REAL meaning of Christmas. Your poem brought that back, lasergraph!
November 22nd, 2017 12:25
THE BIRTH OF SALVATION.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with the true message of Christmas.
November 21st, 2017 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with the true message of Christmas.
November 21st, 2017 01:54
THE BIRTH OF SALVATION.
Accidental Poet said:
Wonderful poem for the birth of Christ.
November 20th, 2017 19:17
Accidental Poet said:
Wonderful poem for the birth of Christ.
November 20th, 2017 19:17
THE BIRTH OF SALVATION.
Christina8 said:
Marvelous! my christmas poem pales in comparison. A beautiful write!
November 20th, 2017 18:19
Christina8 said:
Marvelous! my christmas poem pales in comparison. A beautiful write!
November 20th, 2017 18:19
THE BIRTH OF SALVATION.
w c said:
Thanks lasergraph! He is the reason for the season!
November 20th, 2017 16:43
w c said:
Thanks lasergraph! He is the reason for the season!
November 20th, 2017 16:43
CELL PHONE INTRUDER
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, lasergraph. Here is the perfect answer when somebody tries to sell you something on the phone:
Oh, I am so glad you called. Would you be interested in Amway?
They usually hang up.
November 15th, 2017 18:11
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, lasergraph. Here is the perfect answer when somebody tries to sell you something on the phone:
Oh, I am so glad you called. Would you be interested in Amway?
They usually hang up.
November 15th, 2017 18:11
CELL PHONE INTRUDER
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write and I just laughed out loud - thank you.
I used to work in computing before retirement and computing has both software and hardware and as I have seen on a number of occasions it is called hardware because it creates a hell of a noise when thrown against a wall!
November 15th, 2017 02:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write and I just laughed out loud - thank you.
I used to work in computing before retirement and computing has both software and hardware and as I have seen on a number of occasions it is called hardware because it creates a hell of a noise when thrown against a wall!
November 15th, 2017 02:34
CELL PHONE INTRUDER
Laura🌻 said:
Great write Laser!
Lesson learned... I’m sure!
I thought it would have a
different ending. Actually,
I’m glad it has your ending
and not mine!
November 14th, 2017 17:15
Laura🌻 said:
Great write Laser!
Lesson learned... I’m sure!
I thought it would have a
different ending. Actually,
I’m glad it has your ending
and not mine!
November 14th, 2017 17:15
CELL PHONE INTRUDER
myself and me said:
It always happened like this, the phone ring at your inconvenience. Will the phone company offer you a new one?
November 14th, 2017 14:58
myself and me said:
It always happened like this, the phone ring at your inconvenience. Will the phone company offer you a new one?
November 14th, 2017 14:58
CELL PHONE INTRUDER
Fay Slimm. said:
Ouch - - I know just how mad it can make folks when naked they splash about trying to get to a persistent phone. Great rhyming too my friend.
November 14th, 2017 14:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Ouch - - I know just how mad it can make folks when naked they splash about trying to get to a persistent phone. Great rhyming too my friend.
November 14th, 2017 14:46
CELL PHONE INTRUDER
Christina8 said:
Wow laser! This wasn\'t how I expected it to end, but great poem nonetheless! Good luck with your new phone, providing you get one!
November 14th, 2017 12:51
Christina8 said:
Wow laser! This wasn\'t how I expected it to end, but great poem nonetheless! Good luck with your new phone, providing you get one!
November 14th, 2017 12:51
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