Comments received on poems by lasergraph
WHEN I WAS A TEEN
Christina8 said:
Excellent write laser. I remember when all these things started to be commonplace but a home computer was too expensive till the late 90\'s. And slow! Awesome nostalgic write!
January 11th, 2018 12:10
Christina8 said:
Excellent write laser. I remember when all these things started to be commonplace but a home computer was too expensive till the late 90\'s. And slow! Awesome nostalgic write!
January 11th, 2018 12:10
WHEN I WAS A TEEN
Michael Edwards said:
Ah yes - such new innovations these days - we have seen so much - good work.
January 11th, 2018 11:47
Michael Edwards said:
Ah yes - such new innovations these days - we have seen so much - good work.
January 11th, 2018 11:47
WHEN I WAS A TEEN
AlinaVanderson said:
As a teen nowadays I wish It could be simpler but all my friends seem to be addicted to their technology.
January 11th, 2018 10:39
AlinaVanderson said:
As a teen nowadays I wish It could be simpler but all my friends seem to be addicted to their technology.
January 11th, 2018 10:39
REFLECTION ON AGE
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow totally awesome as u age gracefully , enviable rhyming n flow. Enjoyed it so much and it is inspiring even to us who would join u sooner or later. Kudos.
Pleez do review my latest poem titled, \"play it on your lips\"
January 10th, 2018 00:21
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow totally awesome as u age gracefully , enviable rhyming n flow. Enjoyed it so much and it is inspiring even to us who would join u sooner or later. Kudos.
Pleez do review my latest poem titled, \"play it on your lips\"
January 10th, 2018 00:21
REFLECTION ON AGE
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow totally awesome as u age gracefully , enviable rhyming n flow. Enjoyed it so much and it is inspiring even to us who would join u sooner or later. Kudos.
Pleez do review my latest poem titled, \"play it on your lips\"
January 10th, 2018 00:20
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow totally awesome as u age gracefully , enviable rhyming n flow. Enjoyed it so much and it is inspiring even to us who would join u sooner or later. Kudos.
Pleez do review my latest poem titled, \"play it on your lips\"
January 10th, 2018 00:20
REFLECTION ON AGE
lasergraph said:
I want to give thanks to all here is my poetic family. I too am young at heart, I don\'t feel old, maybe a few aches and pains. We have a unique chance to tell our history to those who have come after us, but like we were at that age, they probably won\'t listen.
January 5th, 2018 08:45
lasergraph said:
I want to give thanks to all here is my poetic family. I too am young at heart, I don\'t feel old, maybe a few aches and pains. We have a unique chance to tell our history to those who have come after us, but like we were at that age, they probably won\'t listen.
January 5th, 2018 08:45
REFLECTION ON AGE
w c said:
Thank you, L, for this beautiful poem. I must say I remain young at heart.
January 4th, 2018 17:13
w c said:
Thank you, L, for this beautiful poem. I must say I remain young at heart.
January 4th, 2018 17:13
REFLECTION ON AGE
FredPeyer said:
Lasergraph, you expressed very beautifully what many of us \'advanced age\' experience. But that is only the outside. Inside we are ageless and wrinkle-less!
January 4th, 2018 16:29
FredPeyer said:
Lasergraph, you expressed very beautifully what many of us \'advanced age\' experience. But that is only the outside. Inside we are ageless and wrinkle-less!
January 4th, 2018 16:29
REFLECTION ON AGE
Michael Edwards said:
Age is the process or ripening and who wants a sour apple? Great write Lasergraph.
January 4th, 2018 12:21
Michael Edwards said:
Age is the process or ripening and who wants a sour apple? Great write Lasergraph.
January 4th, 2018 12:21
PEACE ON EARTH
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true Edward, the rush is over and wonderful family time is back with us.
December 27th, 2017 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true Edward, the rush is over and wonderful family time is back with us.
December 27th, 2017 02:02
PEACE ON EARTH
Christina8 said:
Wonderful write! A lovely pic! Your last few lines are beautiful sentiments.
December 27th, 2017 00:41
Christina8 said:
Wonderful write! A lovely pic! Your last few lines are beautiful sentiments.
December 27th, 2017 00:41
ODE TO BARBIE
FredPeyer said:
Building things with or for the grand children is so much fun, and you captured that feeling perfectly, lasergraph! Well penned!
December 14th, 2017 13:55
FredPeyer said:
Building things with or for the grand children is so much fun, and you captured that feeling perfectly, lasergraph! Well penned!
December 14th, 2017 13:55
ODE TO BARBIE
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write.
I can remember many years ago when one of our Granddaughters had a Barbie Van for Christmas, it took us two hours to get the thing together!
December 13th, 2017 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write.
I can remember many years ago when one of our Granddaughters had a Barbie Van for Christmas, it took us two hours to get the thing together!
December 13th, 2017 01:59
ODE TO BARBIE
Fay Slimm. said:
Aha ha - - what a wonderful fun-ending to this charming read - thanks muchly for sharing something on Barbie - brought back fond memories.
December 12th, 2017 11:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Aha ha - - what a wonderful fun-ending to this charming read - thanks muchly for sharing something on Barbie - brought back fond memories.
December 12th, 2017 11:50
ODE TO BARBIE
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem! Brave man putting together a barbie house! lol
December 12th, 2017 11:27
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem! Brave man putting together a barbie house! lol
December 12th, 2017 11:27
POETRY IS
FredPeyer said:
As Michael already said, it is amazing how diverse poetry is, and how different, but equally valid so many here on MPS have been describing it.
Beautiful definition here, lasergraph!
December 11th, 2017 12:34
FredPeyer said:
As Michael already said, it is amazing how diverse poetry is, and how different, but equally valid so many here on MPS have been describing it.
Beautiful definition here, lasergraph!
December 11th, 2017 12:34
POETRY IS
orchidee said:
Yep. I reckon that\'s what poetry is - one view of it! Good write laser.
December 11th, 2017 10:59
orchidee said:
Yep. I reckon that\'s what poetry is - one view of it! Good write laser.
December 11th, 2017 10:59
POETRY IS
Christina8 said:
Excellent depiction of what poetry is, and I agree! Great job!
December 11th, 2017 10:51
Christina8 said:
Excellent depiction of what poetry is, and I agree! Great job!
December 11th, 2017 10:51
POETRY IS
Louis Gibbs said:
Poetry is both healing and revealing, isn\'t it, LG. Good write!
December 11th, 2017 09:37
Louis Gibbs said:
Poetry is both healing and revealing, isn\'t it, LG. Good write!
December 11th, 2017 09:37
POETRY IS
Michael Edwards said:
This is so interesting as it demonstrates the diversity in poetry. For me good poetry transports me and takes me to places either where I have never been or where I am asked to redefine. I never write poetry about my own personal inner thinking nor do I ever bear my soul. Even when I do write in the first person it is rare indeed that I actually am providing a documentary about myself except on those rare occasions where I am discussing politics or philosophy.
None of this is, of course, to distract from you your super poem Lasergraph.
December 11th, 2017 09:05
Michael Edwards said:
This is so interesting as it demonstrates the diversity in poetry. For me good poetry transports me and takes me to places either where I have never been or where I am asked to redefine. I never write poetry about my own personal inner thinking nor do I ever bear my soul. Even when I do write in the first person it is rare indeed that I actually am providing a documentary about myself except on those rare occasions where I am discussing politics or philosophy.
None of this is, of course, to distract from you your super poem Lasergraph.
December 11th, 2017 09:05
POETRY IS
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, it is amazing how many of us have reacted to Poetry is....
December 11th, 2017 09:02
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, it is amazing how many of us have reacted to Poetry is....
December 11th, 2017 09:02
POETRY IS
Laura🌻 said:
Great write Lasergraph! The last two lines speak volumes! Yes, as we write our pieces, bit by bit we reveal ourselves!
December 11th, 2017 08:56
Laura🌻 said:
Great write Lasergraph! The last two lines speak volumes! Yes, as we write our pieces, bit by bit we reveal ourselves!
December 11th, 2017 08:56
PEARL HARBOR
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, lasergraph! I visited Pearl Harbor memorial several times. And from my house I can see Kolekole pass where the Japanese airplanes crossed the Waianae mountain range. Their first target were the planes parked at Wheeler Airforce Base (now Wheeler Army Air Field) which is more or less next door to where I live. Many times I have contemplated how it must have been on that fateful day. If my house would have existed at that time, these Japanese planes would have flown right over it.
December 7th, 2017 20:27
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, lasergraph! I visited Pearl Harbor memorial several times. And from my house I can see Kolekole pass where the Japanese airplanes crossed the Waianae mountain range. Their first target were the planes parked at Wheeler Airforce Base (now Wheeler Army Air Field) which is more or less next door to where I live. Many times I have contemplated how it must have been on that fateful day. If my house would have existed at that time, these Japanese planes would have flown right over it.
December 7th, 2017 20:27
PEARL HARBOR
Christina8 said:
This is one of the best poems I\'ve seen written on the subject of Pearl Harbor! You did a wonderful job, laser! Excellent info,rhyme and structure to the poem.. A fine tribute to those soldiers who were there and lost their lives!
December 7th, 2017 18:46
Christina8 said:
This is one of the best poems I\'ve seen written on the subject of Pearl Harbor! You did a wonderful job, laser! Excellent info,rhyme and structure to the poem.. A fine tribute to those soldiers who were there and lost their lives!
December 7th, 2017 18:46
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