Comments received on poems by lasergraph
HALLOWEEN
orchidee said:
Boo hoo, UK does not have Thanksgiving. We got to wait until Christmas for our turkeys! A fine write Laser, though I\'m not \"into\" Halloween myself.
October 3rd, 2017 08:06
orchidee said:
Boo hoo, UK does not have Thanksgiving. We got to wait until Christmas for our turkeys! A fine write Laser, though I\'m not \"into\" Halloween myself.
October 3rd, 2017 08:06
HALLOWEEN
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, the holidays ... what would the economy do without them. Cute poem, LG!
October 3rd, 2017 07:50
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, the holidays ... what would the economy do without them. Cute poem, LG!
October 3rd, 2017 07:50
CHILLY WRITING DAY
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, ideas in your mind change as the words go onto the page. Good write.
September 30th, 2017 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, ideas in your mind change as the words go onto the page. Good write.
September 30th, 2017 01:12
CHILLY WRITING DAY
WL Schuett said:
Totally relate , must be pretty common to let the poem lead , to just hold on and follow
Nicely done ✅
September 29th, 2017 18:15
WL Schuett said:
Totally relate , must be pretty common to let the poem lead , to just hold on and follow
Nicely done ✅
September 29th, 2017 18:15
CHILLY WRITING DAY
malubotelho said:
Great writing Laser. I can relate to that. Mostly for me is before get to sleep. I have to tell to myself. This is time to sleep and not to carve your mind. Stop it.
September 29th, 2017 14:35
malubotelho said:
Great writing Laser. I can relate to that. Mostly for me is before get to sleep. I have to tell to myself. This is time to sleep and not to carve your mind. Stop it.
September 29th, 2017 14:35
CHILLY WRITING DAY
Christina8 said:
Really well written, laser! Nice ending. After I start an idea, the poem usually takes on a life of its own but first you gotta come up with the idea! Very nice!
September 29th, 2017 14:21
Christina8 said:
Really well written, laser! Nice ending. After I start an idea, the poem usually takes on a life of its own but first you gotta come up with the idea! Very nice!
September 29th, 2017 14:21
CHILLY WRITING DAY
FredPeyer said:
I really like this thoughtful poem, lasergraph. And I do think we are all grappling with the same problems as far as writing is concerned. I usually come up with a first line, having no idea where it will take me. But take me it does!
September 29th, 2017 13:57
FredPeyer said:
I really like this thoughtful poem, lasergraph. And I do think we are all grappling with the same problems as far as writing is concerned. I usually come up with a first line, having no idea where it will take me. But take me it does!
September 29th, 2017 13:57
CHILLY WRITING DAY
UnspokenVoice92 said:
The morning fork in the road. Excellent.
September 29th, 2017 13:45
UnspokenVoice92 said:
The morning fork in the road. Excellent.
September 29th, 2017 13:45
CHILLY WRITING DAY
Louis Gibbs said:
So much truth in that last phrase, LG. They do take on a life of their own and show us how to end, don\'t they. Well penned!
September 29th, 2017 13:24
Louis Gibbs said:
So much truth in that last phrase, LG. They do take on a life of their own and show us how to end, don\'t they. Well penned!
September 29th, 2017 13:24
CHILLY WRITING DAY
w c said:
Thanks L! I know what you mean. A poem frequently writes itself.
September 29th, 2017 13:23
w c said:
Thanks L! I know what you mean. A poem frequently writes itself.
September 29th, 2017 13:23
PHOTOS OF LIFE
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Yes it is true that we photograph the happy times and when we look back at the pictures the sad times are forgotten.
September 28th, 2017 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Yes it is true that we photograph the happy times and when we look back at the pictures the sad times are forgotten.
September 28th, 2017 00:59
PHOTOS OF LIFE
FredPeyer said:
We photograph the happy times and even without pictures we usually remember the happy times. Your excellent poem made me want to go look for old pictures! Unfortunately, no time...but one of these days!
Great writing, I like it a lot!
September 27th, 2017 21:06
FredPeyer said:
We photograph the happy times and even without pictures we usually remember the happy times. Your excellent poem made me want to go look for old pictures! Unfortunately, no time...but one of these days!
Great writing, I like it a lot!
September 27th, 2017 21:06
PHOTOS OF LIFE
Christina8 said:
i believe our most precious possessions we hold are our pictures. Most would say money, but I would grab my pictures in an emergency anyday. I really loved your well written poem!
September 27th, 2017 20:28
Christina8 said:
i believe our most precious possessions we hold are our pictures. Most would say money, but I would grab my pictures in an emergency anyday. I really loved your well written poem!
September 27th, 2017 20:28
PHOTOS OF LIFE
Accidental Poet said:
It hits home for me as well Ed. Being the antique camera and photograph collector that I am, I\'m always drawn into old photographs to listen for the story in the photograph. Thanks for sharing this write. I love it. ; )
September 27th, 2017 18:57
Accidental Poet said:
It hits home for me as well Ed. Being the antique camera and photograph collector that I am, I\'m always drawn into old photographs to listen for the story in the photograph. Thanks for sharing this write. I love it. ; )
September 27th, 2017 18:57
PHOTOS OF LIFE
WL Schuett said:
Love this it sure hits home to me , cool 😎 poem
September 27th, 2017 16:29
WL Schuett said:
Love this it sure hits home to me , cool 😎 poem
September 27th, 2017 16:29
HERMAN AND BIG E
Goldfinch60 said:
Super tribute, his passion will be there for eternity.
September 27th, 2017 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Super tribute, his passion will be there for eternity.
September 27th, 2017 00:51
HERMAN AND BIG E
FredPeyer said:
Great, great tribute to your brother-in-law. May he be surrounded by angels listening to his heavenly music!
September 26th, 2017 17:00
FredPeyer said:
Great, great tribute to your brother-in-law. May he be surrounded by angels listening to his heavenly music!
September 26th, 2017 17:00
HERMAN AND BIG E
malubotelho said:
Awesome tribute to your brother. Beautiful writing.
September 26th, 2017 16:39
malubotelho said:
Awesome tribute to your brother. Beautiful writing.
September 26th, 2017 16:39
HERMAN AND BIG E
WL Schuett said:
That\'s a great tribute to your Brother in law
Well done he was obviously a friend
September 26th, 2017 14:29
WL Schuett said:
That\'s a great tribute to your Brother in law
Well done he was obviously a friend
September 26th, 2017 14:29
NEVER
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write, losing a child is so painful.
September 26th, 2017 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write, losing a child is so painful.
September 26th, 2017 01:05
NEVER
Accidental Poet said:
My condolences for your loss. Anyone who loses a child goes through a gauntlet of pain unmatched anywhere. Like you said, they never got to grow and do so many of the tings that many take for granted. ((((HUGS)))) my friend.
September 25th, 2017 19:32
Accidental Poet said:
My condolences for your loss. Anyone who loses a child goes through a gauntlet of pain unmatched anywhere. Like you said, they never got to grow and do so many of the tings that many take for granted. ((((HUGS)))) my friend.
September 25th, 2017 19:32
NEVER
dusk arising said:
This is so sad Lasergraph. Makes me think of a person who is so special to me. She will never do most of those things and i felt this sadden my heart.
September 25th, 2017 18:10
dusk arising said:
This is so sad Lasergraph. Makes me think of a person who is so special to me. She will never do most of those things and i felt this sadden my heart.
September 25th, 2017 18:10
NEVER
FredPeyer said:
Thank you so much, lasergraph, for sharing this with us. As a parent I know that losing a child is the hardest thing one could imagine. But losing a baby is even harder. Your poem is such a lovely tribute to this child.
September 25th, 2017 17:33
FredPeyer said:
Thank you so much, lasergraph, for sharing this with us. As a parent I know that losing a child is the hardest thing one could imagine. But losing a baby is even harder. Your poem is such a lovely tribute to this child.
September 25th, 2017 17:33
NEVER
orchidee said:
Hopefully some healing will come through writing of this. I read a little book of a 13yo passing away, called \'Another lily gathered (to heaven)\'.
September 25th, 2017 12:58
orchidee said:
Hopefully some healing will come through writing of this. I read a little book of a 13yo passing away, called \'Another lily gathered (to heaven)\'.
September 25th, 2017 12:58
NEVER
Christina8 said:
Oh, this gave me the chills and my eyes welled up. I have suffered loss too, so thanks for sharing this personal poem with me. But this poem isn\'t about me, it\'s about YOU and I am very sorry for your loss. I felt your sadness every line I looked at. Very well written. My condolences!
September 25th, 2017 12:47
Christina8 said:
Oh, this gave me the chills and my eyes welled up. I have suffered loss too, so thanks for sharing this personal poem with me. But this poem isn\'t about me, it\'s about YOU and I am very sorry for your loss. I felt your sadness every line I looked at. Very well written. My condolences!
September 25th, 2017 12:47
NEVER
Louis Gibbs said:
A heart-wrenching poem about a heart-wrenching experience, LG! One of life\'s toughest. My condolences.
September 25th, 2017 12:11
Louis Gibbs said:
A heart-wrenching poem about a heart-wrenching experience, LG! One of life\'s toughest. My condolences.
September 25th, 2017 12:11
NEVER
w c said:
Wow! What a poem. I can only imagine what it\'s like to lose a child.
September 25th, 2017 11:48
w c said:
Wow! What a poem. I can only imagine what it\'s like to lose a child.
September 25th, 2017 11:48
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