Comments received on poems by lasergraph



A TOUCH OF ROMANCE
FredPeyer said:

Lasergraph, love the whole poem, but especially the last stanza! Words are nice, but it is what you do that counts!


January 25th, 2018 15:37

A TOUCH OF ROMANCE
Resa71 said:

Such a romantic, beautiful poem

January 25th, 2018 14:06

A TOUCH OF ROMANCE
Fay Slimm. said:

Wow - so romantic - -a charming read Laser along with the wonderful visual.

January 25th, 2018 13:46

A TOUCH OF ROMANCE
Laura🌻 said:

Laser,
Absolutely delightful!
Enjoyed the entire poem!
I especially liked the lines...
“She had poured her shapely body,
Inside a long red gown.”

I like the visual very much!
Very creatively executed!

~Laura~


January 25th, 2018 09:42

A TOUCH OF ROMANCE
orchidee said:

Good write laser. Swoon! lol.

January 25th, 2018 09:23

A TOUCH OF ROMANCE
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

January 25th, 2018 09:20

A TOUCH OF ROMANCE
Goldfinch60 said:

A fine romantic write Edward.

January 25th, 2018 09:04

SIGNS OF THE TIMES
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Edward and so true. Before I retired I worked for a computer software company and went all over the country installing software - it was a two day job when I first started, when I retired I could do it in under two hours sitting at my desk. Now 6 years on I would guess it is now just a press of a button!

January 24th, 2018 02:04

SIGNS OF THE TIMES
Michael Edwards said:

A bit scary as were all previous advances which we now take for granted - one thing I have faith in - the ultimate controller will always be human - so if (a big if) we have faith in humans (?) then lets embrace it all - excellent write Laser

January 24th, 2018 01:56

SIGNS OF THE TIMES
FredPeyer said:

We went from horses to cars, from cars to airplanes, from adding machines to computers....and now robots, artificial intelligence. You are right on with this excellent poem!

January 23rd, 2018 22:26

SIGNS OF THE TIMES
Accidental Poet said:

Excellent write Ed. You\'re so right.

January 23rd, 2018 20:48

UNSUNG HEROES
Goldfinch60 said:

A wonderful write that created emotions within me, so many unseen wounds from people who went to war.

January 20th, 2018 01:40

UNSUNG HEROES
Michael Edwards said:

Beautifully written in such simple yet such poignant language

January 20th, 2018 00:57

UNSUNG HEROES
FredPeyer said:

Very well written, Lasergraph! Great rhyming too. Kat wrote a poem about old people too today and I am glad yours addresses that subject. We should be more thankful for all the good the elderly did in this world.

January 19th, 2018 16:30

UNSUNG HEROES
Aislinn Wilson said:

This is really moving, well done

January 19th, 2018 14:04

UNSUNG HEROES
Caring dove said:

aaw , so sad , poor man :-( this is a great piece of writing , so moving ...too .

January 19th, 2018 13:49

THINGS I HAVE LEARNED
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good and very true write. Walking with nature can work miracles.

January 17th, 2018 02:15

THINGS I HAVE LEARNED
Louis Gibbs said:

I am working on exactly what your poem describes ... learning to chill out, not sweat the small stuff. You express it beautifully, LG!

January 16th, 2018 19:36

THINGS I HAVE LEARNED
WL Schuett said:

I have the same sort of metamorphosis guess it comes with age ... nice poem

January 16th, 2018 19:02

THINGS I HAVE LEARNED
FredPeyer said:

It is amazing what aging does to our frame of mind. Well done, Lasergraph!

January 16th, 2018 17:58

THINGS I HAVE LEARNED
Michael Edwards said:

There is far too much aggression and angst in this world - if only people could learn to \'chill out\' it would be a much better world - fine write Laser

January 16th, 2018 17:19

THINGS I HAVE LEARNED
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 16th, 2018 14:41

THINGS I HAVE LEARNED
orchidee said:

A fine and true write laser.

January 16th, 2018 13:52

THINGS I HAVE LEARNED
pots-and-pans said:

An interesting write! It\'s hard to find poems that flow as smoothly as your\'s does

January 16th, 2018 13:48

OUR MANY YEARS TOGETHER
FredPeyer said:

Lasergraph, this must be one of your best poems! I feel the same way, thank you for penning it!

January 16th, 2018 02:45

OUR MANY YEARS TOGETHER
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write, I have exactly the same feelings.

January 16th, 2018 01:50

HAPPINESS IS
lasergraph said:

Thanks to all who commented. I am always uplifted when I come here. This place is like family and feels like going to \"Cheers\" where everybody knows your name.

January 15th, 2018 08:51

HAPPINESS IS
Chloe Rachel Flisher said:

What a powerful poem. Well done!

January 14th, 2018 13:39

HAPPINESS IS
FredPeyer said:

The whole poem is great, but the last two lines are excellent!


January 14th, 2018 03:16

HAPPINESS IS
Accidental Poet said:

Beautiful poem Ed. A partner at your side is all you need.

January 13th, 2018 09:32

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