Comments received on poems by lasergraph
A TOUCH OF ROMANCE
FredPeyer said:
Lasergraph, love the whole poem, but especially the last stanza! Words are nice, but it is what you do that counts!
January 25th, 2018 15:37
FredPeyer said:
Lasergraph, love the whole poem, but especially the last stanza! Words are nice, but it is what you do that counts!
January 25th, 2018 15:37
A TOUCH OF ROMANCE
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - so romantic - -a charming read Laser along with the wonderful visual.
January 25th, 2018 13:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - so romantic - -a charming read Laser along with the wonderful visual.
January 25th, 2018 13:46
A TOUCH OF ROMANCE
Laura🌻 said:
Laser,
Absolutely delightful!
Enjoyed the entire poem!
I especially liked the lines...
“She had poured her shapely body,
Inside a long red gown.”
I like the visual very much!
Very creatively executed!
~Laura~
January 25th, 2018 09:42
Laura🌻 said:
Laser,
Absolutely delightful!
Enjoyed the entire poem!
I especially liked the lines...
“She had poured her shapely body,
Inside a long red gown.”
I like the visual very much!
Very creatively executed!
~Laura~
January 25th, 2018 09:42
SIGNS OF THE TIMES
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Edward and so true. Before I retired I worked for a computer software company and went all over the country installing software - it was a two day job when I first started, when I retired I could do it in under two hours sitting at my desk. Now 6 years on I would guess it is now just a press of a button!
January 24th, 2018 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Edward and so true. Before I retired I worked for a computer software company and went all over the country installing software - it was a two day job when I first started, when I retired I could do it in under two hours sitting at my desk. Now 6 years on I would guess it is now just a press of a button!
January 24th, 2018 02:04
SIGNS OF THE TIMES
Michael Edwards said:
A bit scary as were all previous advances which we now take for granted - one thing I have faith in - the ultimate controller will always be human - so if (a big if) we have faith in humans (?) then lets embrace it all - excellent write Laser
January 24th, 2018 01:56
Michael Edwards said:
A bit scary as were all previous advances which we now take for granted - one thing I have faith in - the ultimate controller will always be human - so if (a big if) we have faith in humans (?) then lets embrace it all - excellent write Laser
January 24th, 2018 01:56
SIGNS OF THE TIMES
FredPeyer said:
We went from horses to cars, from cars to airplanes, from adding machines to computers....and now robots, artificial intelligence. You are right on with this excellent poem!
January 23rd, 2018 22:26
FredPeyer said:
We went from horses to cars, from cars to airplanes, from adding machines to computers....and now robots, artificial intelligence. You are right on with this excellent poem!
January 23rd, 2018 22:26
SIGNS OF THE TIMES
Accidental Poet said:
Excellent write Ed. You\'re so right.
January 23rd, 2018 20:48
Accidental Poet said:
Excellent write Ed. You\'re so right.
January 23rd, 2018 20:48
UNSUNG HEROES
Goldfinch60 said:
A wonderful write that created emotions within me, so many unseen wounds from people who went to war.
January 20th, 2018 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
A wonderful write that created emotions within me, so many unseen wounds from people who went to war.
January 20th, 2018 01:40
UNSUNG HEROES
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully written in such simple yet such poignant language
January 20th, 2018 00:57
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully written in such simple yet such poignant language
January 20th, 2018 00:57
UNSUNG HEROES
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Lasergraph! Great rhyming too. Kat wrote a poem about old people too today and I am glad yours addresses that subject. We should be more thankful for all the good the elderly did in this world.
January 19th, 2018 16:30
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Lasergraph! Great rhyming too. Kat wrote a poem about old people too today and I am glad yours addresses that subject. We should be more thankful for all the good the elderly did in this world.
January 19th, 2018 16:30
UNSUNG HEROES
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
aaw , so sad , poor man :-( this is a great piece of writing , so moving ...too .
January 19th, 2018 13:49
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
aaw , so sad , poor man :-( this is a great piece of writing , so moving ...too .
January 19th, 2018 13:49
THINGS I HAVE LEARNED
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write. Walking with nature can work miracles.
January 17th, 2018 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write. Walking with nature can work miracles.
January 17th, 2018 02:15
THINGS I HAVE LEARNED
Louis Gibbs said:
I am working on exactly what your poem describes ... learning to chill out, not sweat the small stuff. You express it beautifully, LG!
January 16th, 2018 19:36
Louis Gibbs said:
I am working on exactly what your poem describes ... learning to chill out, not sweat the small stuff. You express it beautifully, LG!
January 16th, 2018 19:36
THINGS I HAVE LEARNED
WL Schuett said:
I have the same sort of metamorphosis guess it comes with age ... nice poem
January 16th, 2018 19:02
WL Schuett said:
I have the same sort of metamorphosis guess it comes with age ... nice poem
January 16th, 2018 19:02
THINGS I HAVE LEARNED
FredPeyer said:
It is amazing what aging does to our frame of mind. Well done, Lasergraph!
January 16th, 2018 17:58
FredPeyer said:
It is amazing what aging does to our frame of mind. Well done, Lasergraph!
January 16th, 2018 17:58
THINGS I HAVE LEARNED
Michael Edwards said:
There is far too much aggression and angst in this world - if only people could learn to \'chill out\' it would be a much better world - fine write Laser
January 16th, 2018 17:19
Michael Edwards said:
There is far too much aggression and angst in this world - if only people could learn to \'chill out\' it would be a much better world - fine write Laser
January 16th, 2018 17:19
THINGS I HAVE LEARNED
pots-and-pans said:
An interesting write! It\'s hard to find poems that flow as smoothly as your\'s does
January 16th, 2018 13:48
pots-and-pans said:
An interesting write! It\'s hard to find poems that flow as smoothly as your\'s does
January 16th, 2018 13:48
OUR MANY YEARS TOGETHER
FredPeyer said:
Lasergraph, this must be one of your best poems! I feel the same way, thank you for penning it!
January 16th, 2018 02:45
FredPeyer said:
Lasergraph, this must be one of your best poems! I feel the same way, thank you for penning it!
January 16th, 2018 02:45
OUR MANY YEARS TOGETHER
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, I have exactly the same feelings.
January 16th, 2018 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, I have exactly the same feelings.
January 16th, 2018 01:50
HAPPINESS IS
lasergraph said:
Thanks to all who commented. I am always uplifted when I come here. This place is like family and feels like going to \"Cheers\" where everybody knows your name.
January 15th, 2018 08:51
lasergraph said:
Thanks to all who commented. I am always uplifted when I come here. This place is like family and feels like going to \"Cheers\" where everybody knows your name.
January 15th, 2018 08:51
HAPPINESS IS
FredPeyer said:
The whole poem is great, but the last two lines are excellent!
January 14th, 2018 03:16
FredPeyer said:
The whole poem is great, but the last two lines are excellent!
January 14th, 2018 03:16
HAPPINESS IS
Accidental Poet said:
Beautiful poem Ed. A partner at your side is all you need.
January 13th, 2018 09:32
Accidental Poet said:
Beautiful poem Ed. A partner at your side is all you need.
January 13th, 2018 09:32
« Return to the profile of lasergraph
