Comments received on poems by lasergraph



SANTA CLAUS BLUES
myself and me said:

It is such a joy to read your poem.

November 2nd, 2017 12:56

SANTA CLAUS BLUES
Michael Edwards said:

A poignant message served with a smile - great work.

November 2nd, 2017 12:35

THE GYM
myself and me said:

Gym is the place for us to get that extra space in our stomach to enjoy all the sweet we like.

November 2nd, 2017 11:57

SANTA CLAUS BLUES
orchidee said:

A modern-day Santa there. Oh lol. Good write Laser.

November 2nd, 2017 10:38

SANTA CLAUS BLUES
Louis Gibbs said:

This is destined to become a Christmas classic, LG! A fine tribute to the retailer\'s holiday. Kudos!

November 2nd, 2017 10:26

THE GYM
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write. I had thought about going to a gym once but I went and laid down in a darkened room until that thought had passed.

November 2nd, 2017 01:31

THE GYM
Accidental Poet said:

I\'m exercising now as I type. Great write Ed.

November 1st, 2017 18:30

THE GYM
w c said:

It\'s been too long since i\'ve worked out! I now do curls with my gallon of milk lol. I really enjoyed this poem.

November 1st, 2017 16:35

THE GYM
FredPeyer said:

Lasergraph, love your poem. You speak from my heart. I cannot count how many times I started to work out and gave up again. I don\'t go to a gym, I have everything right here at home. All the hardware, but nobody to push me! :-)
But hey, in my mind I do have a beautiful body!!!

November 1st, 2017 11:41

THE GYM
Louis Gibbs said:

I assume you sued and got a fine settlement. If not, Michael was an attorney. I\'m sure he could help, for a reasonable fee.
Cute poem, LG!

November 1st, 2017 11:07

THE GYM
orchidee said:

You having fun there?! Good write laser. lol.

November 1st, 2017 09:12

BLACK FRIDAY
Accidental Poet said:

Yes it\'s that time of year again. I\'ve already heard a Christmas ad on the radio. And the Christmas decorations will be going up very soon in the malls. It seems earlier and earlier every year. To me, Christmas will always be the month of December only. That\'s when I know it\'s the Christmas season. I say, one holiday at a time please. Excellent write Ed.

October 31st, 2017 19:11

BLACK FRIDAY
FredPeyer said:

Great poem, lasergraph! Thank God I can let my wife do most of the shopping. Whenever I buy something it is wrong anyway and has to be returned! I am so done with it!!!

October 31st, 2017 18:28

BLACK FRIDAY
Louis Gibbs said:

This feels like the decade that Amazon ate the world, doesn\'t it? Well written, LG!

October 31st, 2017 16:02

BLACK FRIDAY
Christina8 said:

Oh I love this poem and the lighthearted message and frustration to get out and shop right after Thanksgiving! Great job! (I think Amazon is great too! :-))

October 31st, 2017 14:25

THE BOOK
Accidental Poet said:

Always enjoy a great read. Oh, and I\'m sure your book was great too. ; )

October 30th, 2017 18:03

TWISTED CAP
Goldfinch60 said:

So true, those forgotten days of our youth but we still remember the spinning ceilings.

October 28th, 2017 00:48

TWISTED CAP
myself and me said:

Wow, those old memories take us to the lovely moments of the life.

October 27th, 2017 19:40

TWISTED CAP
FredPeyer said:

Thanks for the memories, lasergraph! Nicely done! While I may not have the parties anymore, at least I still have my wine! :-)

October 27th, 2017 12:24

TWISTED CAP
w c said:

Here\'s to frat parties!

October 27th, 2017 11:29

TWISTED CAP
Louis Gibbs said:

Ah yes, the tipsy college days of yore. Vodka, or scotch and water was my poison of choice. Well done write, LG, brings back memories.

October 27th, 2017 09:48

TWISTED CAP
orchidee said:

A fine write laser.

October 27th, 2017 08:56

TWISTED CAP
Accidental Poet said:

aah yes, the party days of yore. May we not forget the real reason that brought us to those college doors. Great write Ed.

October 27th, 2017 08:46

SAVOR THE MOMENT
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, every moment is precious and as you say we need to savour every one of them.

October 26th, 2017 01:34

SAVOR THE MOMENT
Accidental Poet said:

This write rings so true Ed. The older we get, it seems the hour glass is more like a minute glass. Life does go by too fast it seems. Great write and insightful poem.

October 25th, 2017 18:19

SAVOR THE MOMENT
Fay Slimm. said:

Lines of true wisdom and advice will never grow mundane dear poet friend - - a fine reminder of how precious the moment and thank you for sharing your thoughts on the subject.

October 25th, 2017 15:43

SAVOR THE MOMENT
Louis Gibbs said:

Live in and savor the moment, indeed. Well penned, LG!

October 25th, 2017 15:15

SAVOR THE MOMENT
Laura🌻 said:

So wise Laser!
Your poem is very meaningful
and well penned.
It’s a reminder for me to make every day that I’m with my mom very special for her! Since my dad died, she needs more attention every day!


October 25th, 2017 15:04

SAVOR THE MOMENT
Christina8 said:

Beautiful piece of wisdom that I often lack. I will try to savor all my moments. Thanks for sharing such a great piece of poetry!

October 25th, 2017 14:24

SAVOR THE MOMENT
myself and me said:

As teen, time seems endless, at mid-age, got the sense of time but no urgent feelings. At the moment, you start to look back or only few left in front, you just realized how precious each moment could be. A poem full of wisdom.

October 25th, 2017 14:19



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