Comments received on poems by Sara Storkson



Walk of Shame
Frank Prem said:

Good for you, Sara. excellent declaration.

September 1st, 2017 05:27

Questions
myself and me said:

\"What do you do when your brain tells you that you\'re worthless?\"
Ignore it or better fire it.
I can fully understand your feelings. I was there myself and do not know when I will be there. There is no answers for now, but I am sure, soon in the future, there will be answer. Keep your figure cross.

August 29th, 2017 13:07

Questions
lasergraph said:

You seem to be shining bright enough to illuminate your way through any darkness. Good write.

August 29th, 2017 09:07

Questions
Louis Gibbs said:

A heart-felt expression with attention to form. Well done poem, Sara!

August 29th, 2017 07:47

Questions
Michael Edwards said:

Well you\'ve done okay here - a good write. You could try what I do when searching for a subject - don\'t look inward for your own experiences - search for a topic like, say, a flower bursting into bloom. Just describe in your own words the way the petals unfurl, look up to the sun, attract the bees, fade and die only to leave seeds for the cycle to renew.

Sorry I got carried away there but I guess you can follow the thinking.

Actually I think I\'ve just inspired myself :)

August 29th, 2017 00:58

When control becomes normal
Accidental Poet said:

It\'s your life to live for yourself. Stand your ground. Excellent declaration of your independence. ; )

August 27th, 2017 09:00

When control becomes normal
Candlewitch said:

dear Sara,

I can relate to this piece very well. I was in a situation like this with my family. I basically told them where to get off :) good work and congratulations on a step in the right direction!

*hugs, Cat

August 27th, 2017 08:00

Let me uncomplicate us
malubotelho said:

It is very nice the expression of love on your poetry. Delivered direct from your heart. Thanks for sharing.

August 27th, 2017 07:24

When control becomes normal
malubotelho said:

Sara, I like your writings. Strong and direct. Contemporary. I was looking to find new generation poets when I found this site so I\'m pleased to read you. Thanks also for making favorite my poem: Forbidden

August 27th, 2017 07:22

When control becomes normal
lastbadbrad6 said:

taking charge of yourselfis great more people need to feel this way instead or just living in someone elses world, very well done in writing and real life


August 27th, 2017 05:26

When control becomes normal
Sara Storkson said:

Thank you! I was going through a situation these past few years that..wasn\'t good. I got myself to a better place. It took all I had to accomplish that and get back to where I was as a writer.

August 27th, 2017 04:46

When control becomes normal
Michael Edwards said:

I\'m not a lover of bad language when it\'s used gratuitously but that certainly isn\'t the case here. That final sentence sums it up brilliantly to make a great poem even stronger. Well written Sara.

August 27th, 2017 04:37

Let me uncomplicate us
Louis Gibbs said:

You express the beauty and passion of young love extremely well, especially considering your youth. Kudos, Sara!

August 25th, 2017 11:28

Let me uncomplicate us
lasergraph said:

Great job. A full heart knows not of age, you have expressed yours well.

August 25th, 2017 07:53

Let me uncomplicate us
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write. A night to remember.

August 25th, 2017 07:43

Let me uncomplicate us
Michael Edwards said:

Pleased you did - lovely piece.

August 25th, 2017 05:08

Let me uncomplicate us
Edward Charles McDevitt said:

Beautifully written! Especially by someone so young! Good Talent!

August 25th, 2017 04:17

Let me uncomplicate us / Inner demons
dusk arising said:

Two good pieces here worth posting separately i thought, however. First one is just heavenly isn\'t it, a statement of pure romantic love well written and heartfelt by both reader and writer. Second one is all to familiar for me, i\'m usually the positive but know this struggle all too well. You express it beautifully here. Nice work.

August 24th, 2017 11:32

Unfinished
dusk arising said:

Most resoundingly YES! Many more cracks shall appear and there are many rivers to cross. We shall survive. Faith in poets like you tell me so.

August 23rd, 2017 01:56

Happiness is fleeting
FredPeyer said:

PS: Don\'t know why exactly, but somehow you brought Charles Bukowski to my mind.

August 23rd, 2017 01:04

Happiness is fleeting
FredPeyer said:

Sara, you said it all, you evoked the right feelings, used the right words. You are a great writer!
Has to go into favorites

August 23rd, 2017 01:02

Unfinished
FredPeyer said:

Wow, you are making even an old guy like me ponder.
Here are my 5 cents worth: If human nature is left as it is, sooner or later we will self-destruct.
Love CAN fix our society, BUT it may not be enough.
Sara, I love the subject matters you bring up here!

August 23rd, 2017 01:00

Untitled
FredPeyer said:

Beautifully written, and so true. How many times do we grab at straws, knowing full well it may be futile.

August 23rd, 2017 00:57

Ugh
FredPeyer said:

Very good writing, Sara.
I did say this in another comment, but I think it fits here too: The difference between a rut and a grave is depth.
When nothing changes, we have no choice but to initiate choice.

August 23rd, 2017 00:55

Happiness is fleeting
dusk arising said:

Wow compact but with excitement lust and power.... really exciting i keep reading it.

August 23rd, 2017 00:45

Happiness is fleeting
Michael Edwards said:

Commenting against another poem today I wrote \'Perfect\'. I repeat it again here \'Perfect\' and into favourites.

August 23rd, 2017 00:28

Unfinished
lasergraph said:

Great social questions, love would be enough if it came from all and replaced the hate.

August 22nd, 2017 09:23

Unfinished
Goldfinch60 said:

YES, if love comes first.

August 22nd, 2017 02:13

Untitled
burning-embers said:

Today i am old. I was young, im still young inside. When i was young outside i needed exactly what you write here, i would lose myself away from unnecessary things people expected of me. I don\'t really know how this need faded away from my life. I know that your words make me think about it. That\'s gotta be good hasn\'t it?

August 21st, 2017 19:58

Untitled
P.X. Vexxus said:

Happiness can be fleeting. A small moment that fades after the night ends, and the brisk, cool earth begins to heat once more. Or just the rush, like a furious river smashing against the bank, only to calm moments later like it never happened, leaving small traces of it\'s existence upon the boundaries of it\'s reality. Yes, I really got all of this, from your poem. Nice write. Speaks truth.

August 21st, 2017 07:48

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