Comments received on poems by pr3ttyshad0ws



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Michael Edwards said:

Normally I don\'t go for this genre of poetry and prefer works beyond the immediate self experience but I have to say that this so good - great structure and so well expressed - bravo.

March 22nd, 2018 03:49

I\'ve been
Jmcg said:

You\'ve been eating your feelings
Mine are the only thing on my plate
You\'re off your meds
and I can relate.
You\'ve been drinking too much and smoking with friends
Drinking and smoking shoved feelings down my throat
and the word friends to me is a joke
You\'ve been staying up too late
and losing your mind
I\'ve been staying up late as well
and my mind is always awake
You\'ve been losing yourself one piece at a time
I\'ll help gather your pieces up
If you\'ll help pick up mine.

November 29th, 2017 04:51

I wanted to be a ballerina
Emil Cerda said:

Eres importante, al menos para mí.

November 20th, 2017 21:48

I wanted to be a ballerina
here said:

very relatable. I like how this is a statement and it comes full circle. this feels real and not dressed up for entertainment.

November 20th, 2017 21:36

I\'m supposed to
Tony36 said:

Great write. really powerful

November 9th, 2017 13:12

I have learned
Christina8 said:

Oh goodness, you\'ve learned the opposite of what love is. Love yourself first. At least give yourself the dignity and respect you would give a stranger. Could you start with that? Good that you did this write and got it all out.

October 18th, 2017 19:01

I am woman
FredPeyer said:

Sadie, I really like this poem. Strong writing, a logical conclusion and a great last line!

September 21st, 2017 03:18

I am woman
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Love this Poem ANGEL ~ being a WOMAN is your greatest strength and asset ! You are UNTOUCHABLE. Except by those whose LOVE for You is Pure ~ True ~ Sincere ! Every Blessing ~ thinking of You ~ Praying for You ~ Your MPS Friend BRIAN

September 21st, 2017 02:32

Down
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

I WANT TO CATCH YOU SADIE AND I WILL ! This is a very sad poem from a Beautiful Young Lady of 19 ! I am praying that you will \"break free\" from the things & people that bind you and be the LOVED & LOVING Young Lady that GOD created you to be ~ AMEN ~ Brotherly Love & Hugs BRIAN XOXOX

September 20th, 2017 03:07

Down
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive write. There will be somebody there to catch you.

September 20th, 2017 02:56

The first time
dusk arising said:

LOL i really enjoyed your first time you poetic minx. You are a fine writer it\'s plain to see and i look forward to seeing more of your writing, perhaps on a variety of subjects. We shall see. A very dramatic entry into MPS site where i\'m sure all will recognise your obvious talents - i certainly welcome you. Please comment on my stuff.

September 16th, 2017 06:36

The first time
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Welcome ANGEL ~ Thanks for your first poem & FIRST TIME ! An amazing confession which made me (as a Gentleman) so sad and angry for you ! He took your most precious thing in a most unloving way ~ Just because he could ! Many MEN are like that and leave a Beautiful Young Lady felling dirty ~ deflowered and used. You conclude by asking \"How\'s that for a first time ?\" My answer would be DISGUSTING & DEGRADING & DIABOLICAL. I have been a Young Lady\'s FIRST LOVER ~ but we were in LOVE and I was very very gentle and let her call the tune. She told me it was the most Beautiful experience in her whole life ~ And that is how it should be FIRST TIME ! If this is autobiographical ~ thanks for sharing and caring. Thinking of 24/7 ~ please check my site Yours BRIAN (UK)

September 16th, 2017 04:46