Comments received on poems by PoeticPsycho



Comatose
Syd said:

Wow! I really enjoyed this. When I first read the poem I thought it was a metaphor for a crack binge lol. Not that I have ever experienced one of those. Great write - Syd

November 30th, 2017 11:33

Orphic
Syd said:

I don\'t normally go for short poems but I like this - Syd

November 29th, 2017 10:09

Orphic
Michael Edwards said:

A powerful write - love it.

November 29th, 2017 04:08

Orphic
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:

I love that your poems all have such a big force to them, and so much meaning for a few lines. Not many can do that. I like the way your write.
i think you should name it \"orphic- it means mysterious and entrancing; beyond ordinary and understanding\"


November 29th, 2017 03:31

Abyss
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:

I could relate to this poem in so many levels, Sometimes are darkness consumes us and where we see are self on a platform of shame is where we discredit are worth and feel where we belong. I love your reading. short and to the point with a lot of feelings and emotion. Great job!

November 29th, 2017 03:18

Voice In My Head
Thegirlwhowrites said:

amazing.

November 23rd, 2017 07:04

Brown Is Beautiful
Michael Edwards said:

And ever may it be so - this is a great sensitive write and deserving of going into my favourites.

November 22nd, 2017 02:34

Los Angeles
Hoopie said:

Good wrote that could speak to alot of people man the shit deep down within that no one likes to talk about

November 17th, 2017 11:27

Colors
Hoopie said:

That\'s good bro we need to come together as Americans bro

November 17th, 2017 11:23

Colors
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

November 17th, 2017 11:20

Colors
FineB said:

Thank you PoeticPsycho for this vivid and compelling poem.
It can be read on so many different levels.
Division is society is sad on whatever basis.
Keep writing
FineB

November 17th, 2017 04:20

City Soldier
Laura🌻 said:

Concise and precise...
Learned a lot from your nine lines of poetry.
Thank you for the explanation in the author comment section! Great informative write!

November 16th, 2017 03:40

She Asked Me To Write
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 15th, 2017 11:46

She Asked Me To Write
Michael Edwards said:

Well it\'s a great shorty - as for title perhaps \'She asked me to write\' might be closer to the essence of the poem?

November 15th, 2017 05:57

For You
Goldfinch60 said:

Serenity can be found in many places, especially within the mind.

November 14th, 2017 02:26

I watched
perrypoemlover said:

Poetic psycho your poem is so sad yet very well written

November 7th, 2017 20:10

The Ghetto Child
Syd said:

Hi there PoeticPsycho, I\'m new to the site and I\'ll publishing soon. I love the poem and look forward to reading more from you - Syd

November 3rd, 2017 13:39

The Ghetto Child
MaddieJ said:

I won\'t go into a whole life story here, but I understand completely where you are coming from.... It\'s a blessing and a curse to see what you\'ve seen at so young. But you have an opportunity to get wise. Continue staying out of all the riff raff and you\'ll go places. That sounds cliche but it\'s darn true!!! Great poem by the way!

November 2nd, 2017 21:29

Los Angeles
Laura🌻 said:

Great use of metaphors to express a so, so sad reality! Nicely done PP.


October 27th, 2017 02:25

Los Angeles
FredPeyer said:

Well written, PP, and so true. And that is why I live in Hawaii with the trade winds and clean air!

October 27th, 2017 00:50

Color Doesn\'t Matter
Kimi brockley said:

Wow

October 23rd, 2017 16:23

Color Doesn\'t Matter
kevin browne said:

I love you too and I love your reflection you give in showing the interest for making it more of a better world with the racist wars taking place in every corner of the planet. I don\'t care what colour anyone\'s skin is. i look for heart, mind and soul in a person. any life is a gift from God and we must learn how to care for each and every one of those lives. I like your work here, my friend.

October 23rd, 2017 07:16

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