Comments received on poems by Netashi
A stands for aesthetic
laurenroe said:
I enjoyed the personal connection that you displayed through this piece! Good work
lr
February 22nd, 2019 13:52
laurenroe said:
I enjoyed the personal connection that you displayed through this piece! Good work
lr
February 22nd, 2019 13:52
A stands for aesthetic
Chocolate said:
I like it, but as a piece I feel like it needs to be expanded on.
February 12th, 2019 20:26
Chocolate said:
I like it, but as a piece I feel like it needs to be expanded on.
February 12th, 2019 20:26
A stands for aesthetic
Fay Slimm. said:
Some adeptly crafted imagery in these engaging lines Theta - - a telling tale about youthful happenings and the changes love takes at the drop of a hat ...........I applaud that final well-rhymed couplet.
February 12th, 2019 13:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Some adeptly crafted imagery in these engaging lines Theta - - a telling tale about youthful happenings and the changes love takes at the drop of a hat ...........I applaud that final well-rhymed couplet.
February 12th, 2019 13:57
A stands for aesthetic
Netashi said:
Does anyone know which book i referenced
February 12th, 2019 13:52
Netashi said:
Does anyone know which book i referenced
February 12th, 2019 13:52
L stands for Lazy
Seek said:
Every day has its own potential archives of memorable events, not matter how mundane they may seem. Nicely done Theta!
February 12th, 2019 08:13
Seek said:
Every day has its own potential archives of memorable events, not matter how mundane they may seem. Nicely done Theta!
February 12th, 2019 08:13
L stands for Lazy
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day is filled with the magic of new adventures.
February 12th, 2019 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day is filled with the magic of new adventures.
February 12th, 2019 01:21
Gum
Goldfinch60 said:
Being with others enjoying their company is always wonderful Theta and banter is so important with each other.
February 9th, 2019 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Being with others enjoying their company is always wonderful Theta and banter is so important with each other.
February 9th, 2019 01:27
Spilled milk
Goldfinch60 said:
Anger can at times clear our minds but it is best kept restrained.
February 8th, 2019 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Anger can at times clear our minds but it is best kept restrained.
February 8th, 2019 01:27
Spilled milk
psychofemale said:
really love the way you rhyme :)
a great read really
February 7th, 2019 20:11
psychofemale said:
really love the way you rhyme :)
a great read really
February 7th, 2019 20:11
Spilled milk
Fay Slimm. said:
An engaging read and warning on what rage can taint and spoil - - spilled milk methinks has double meaning in this plain counsel to self. - I like the last couple with use of metaphor too.
February 7th, 2019 13:52
Fay Slimm. said:
An engaging read and warning on what rage can taint and spoil - - spilled milk methinks has double meaning in this plain counsel to self. - I like the last couple with use of metaphor too.
February 7th, 2019 13:52
C stands for calligraphy
Fay Slimm. said:
Sincere thanks for this cascade of reasons that a real poet has to continue writing....... a medley of feelings inside that daily demand a means of putting words on paper or screen - - your encouraging trumpet of happy encouragement made my fingers itch to begin crafting again today my friend. Into my faves with this piece for sure.
February 7th, 2019 03:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Sincere thanks for this cascade of reasons that a real poet has to continue writing....... a medley of feelings inside that daily demand a means of putting words on paper or screen - - your encouraging trumpet of happy encouragement made my fingers itch to begin crafting again today my friend. Into my faves with this piece for sure.
February 7th, 2019 03:17
P stands for practical
Goldfinch60 said:
That smile may be the saving of some people. Good positive write.
February 6th, 2019 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
That smile may be the saving of some people. Good positive write.
February 6th, 2019 01:23
P stands for practical
psychofemale said:
Such a lovely write, thank you for sharing with us all
February 5th, 2019 19:48
psychofemale said:
Such a lovely write, thank you for sharing with us all
February 5th, 2019 19:48
Forecast
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tears of angels are felt within oneself. Good write Theta.
February 5th, 2019 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tears of angels are felt within oneself. Good write Theta.
February 5th, 2019 01:40
Forecast
psychofemale said:
love the rhyme, you painted an awesome picture for your readers, i loved this last lines, so good
February 4th, 2019 22:13
psychofemale said:
love the rhyme, you painted an awesome picture for your readers, i loved this last lines, so good
February 4th, 2019 22:13
My wicked witch
Caleb.A said:
Very interesting read, oh how two emotions can coincide - Great stuff!
February 4th, 2019 18:02
Caleb.A said:
Very interesting read, oh how two emotions can coincide - Great stuff!
February 4th, 2019 18:02
Forecast
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-wrenching lament over the loss of a loved one - - a powerful set of couplets with an outstanding rhyme scheme - - well written but sad this posting Theta --
February 4th, 2019 14:49
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-wrenching lament over the loss of a loved one - - a powerful set of couplets with an outstanding rhyme scheme - - well written but sad this posting Theta --
February 4th, 2019 14:49
Meeting Lust
Neville said:
unusual and quite intriguing.. once started I was compelled to read all the way through.... N
January 31st, 2019 13:24
Neville said:
unusual and quite intriguing.. once started I was compelled to read all the way through.... N
January 31st, 2019 13:24
Birth of lust
Goldfinch60 said:
Your colleague will be filled with wonder at your words Theta.
January 31st, 2019 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Your colleague will be filled with wonder at your words Theta.
January 31st, 2019 01:57
The Lantern
Neville said:
we all need a light of one type or another, to help us along those dark paths..... N
January 30th, 2019 11:23
Neville said:
we all need a light of one type or another, to help us along those dark paths..... N
January 30th, 2019 11:23
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