Comments received on poems by Netashi
Fools gold
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Theta.
When our children or grandchildren ask what I would like for Christmas I always reply \"Your time\", time is the most precious thing that anybody can give to another.
December 13th, 2018 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Theta.
When our children or grandchildren ask what I would like for Christmas I always reply \"Your time\", time is the most precious thing that anybody can give to another.
December 13th, 2018 01:29
Fools gold
Fay Slimm. said:
The theme of the verse gives a good reason to work against materialism and I agree wholeheartedly in the worthless value of \"fools gold\" and that \"everyone needs love\" to find happiness - a fine write my friend.
December 12th, 2018 17:08
Fay Slimm. said:
The theme of the verse gives a good reason to work against materialism and I agree wholeheartedly in the worthless value of \"fools gold\" and that \"everyone needs love\" to find happiness - a fine write my friend.
December 12th, 2018 17:08
Fools gold
Michael Edwards said:
A clever construct - in fact I can see two poems here - one in bold and one in lower case. Great write Theta
December 12th, 2018 16:30
Michael Edwards said:
A clever construct - in fact I can see two poems here - one in bold and one in lower case. Great write Theta
December 12th, 2018 16:30
A state of Ash
Netashi said:
I know I\'m sorta late on writing this and I\'m not under minding the police and firefighters that saved lives. But it sorta irks me when people think sending their thoughts and prayers helps.
December 11th, 2018 13:35
Netashi said:
I know I\'m sorta late on writing this and I\'m not under minding the police and firefighters that saved lives. But it sorta irks me when people think sending their thoughts and prayers helps.
December 11th, 2018 13:35
Sugar packets
orchidee said:
Erm I put a bit of sugar in my tea (not coffee) but don\'t stir it up! I\'ve cut down from two to one teaspoon too. I only have coffee if there\'s no tea around.
December 10th, 2018 15:11
orchidee said:
Erm I put a bit of sugar in my tea (not coffee) but don\'t stir it up! I\'ve cut down from two to one teaspoon too. I only have coffee if there\'s no tea around.
December 10th, 2018 15:11
Sugar packets
Netashi said:
I might be grown up but i still don\'t like or drink coffee am I weird
December 10th, 2018 11:45
Netashi said:
I might be grown up but i still don\'t like or drink coffee am I weird
December 10th, 2018 11:45
A funeral\'s toast
Michael Edwards said:
Great sentiments elegantly expressed.-
December 6th, 2018 14:01
Michael Edwards said:
Great sentiments elegantly expressed.-
December 6th, 2018 14:01
A funeral\'s toast
Fay Slimm. said:
A wish which puts the adventure of living with no regrets into the right place at as a funeral epitaph........ well done with the positive ending too which gives a really warm feel with those final four lines. A toast to your inventive mind on a subject never easy to compose my friend. Into my faves with this post-death appeal.
December 6th, 2018 11:54
Fay Slimm. said:
A wish which puts the adventure of living with no regrets into the right place at as a funeral epitaph........ well done with the positive ending too which gives a really warm feel with those final four lines. A toast to your inventive mind on a subject never easy to compose my friend. Into my faves with this post-death appeal.
December 6th, 2018 11:54
Flawed only in mirror
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow this poems message somewhat chimes with mine in positive notes . you poetically inspire with motivating words and say in beautiful flow and rhythm which lends it eloquence. Kudos.
Pleez do review/add your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too . I like meeting new poets and their poems.
December 6th, 2018 10:27
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow this poems message somewhat chimes with mine in positive notes . you poetically inspire with motivating words and say in beautiful flow and rhythm which lends it eloquence. Kudos.
Pleez do review/add your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too . I like meeting new poets and their poems.
December 6th, 2018 10:27
Flawed only in mirror
Michael Edwards said:
Not the easiest of forms but you\'ve cracked it - enjoyed the read and congrats.
December 5th, 2018 17:12
Michael Edwards said:
Not the easiest of forms but you\'ve cracked it - enjoyed the read and congrats.
December 5th, 2018 17:12
Flawed only in mirror
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Theta, your words are tranquil and bring about a sense of relaxation in the reader. You offer such great advice in poetic form.
These lines you\'ve written, \"We are all born under the sun
Made imperfect yet still beautiful\" should make all of us appreciate a higher power.
What a wonderful write and a great learning experience. Thanks for sharing. :-)
December 5th, 2018 16:02
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Theta, your words are tranquil and bring about a sense of relaxation in the reader. You offer such great advice in poetic form.
These lines you\'ve written, \"We are all born under the sun
Made imperfect yet still beautiful\" should make all of us appreciate a higher power.
What a wonderful write and a great learning experience. Thanks for sharing. :-)
December 5th, 2018 16:02
Flawed only in mirror
Netashi said:
My final piece for my English assignment. A villanelle a quiet interesting and yet somewhat agitating write.
December 5th, 2018 12:23
Netashi said:
My final piece for my English assignment. A villanelle a quiet interesting and yet somewhat agitating write.
December 5th, 2018 12:23
The writing is on the wall
Netashi said:
An acrostic is a poem where the first letter of every sentence spells something out (For those who don\'t know).
December 4th, 2018 13:54
Netashi said:
An acrostic is a poem where the first letter of every sentence spells something out (For those who don\'t know).
December 4th, 2018 13:54
The Hunter
Fay Slimm. said:
These words bring summer to a wintery evening here Theta and when people start brewing a sip of happiness to share with others all Monday blues surely change into Friday smiles - - a delightful read.
December 3rd, 2018 17:20
Fay Slimm. said:
These words bring summer to a wintery evening here Theta and when people start brewing a sip of happiness to share with others all Monday blues surely change into Friday smiles - - a delightful read.
December 3rd, 2018 17:20
Remember
orchidee said:
How\'s those English assignments going, T? With many fine pieces like this, I hope!
November 27th, 2018 02:37
orchidee said:
How\'s those English assignments going, T? With many fine pieces like this, I hope!
November 27th, 2018 02:37
Remember
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wow! So much information packed in so few lines. Your readers will remember your words.
Nicely written haiku.
November 26th, 2018 17:53
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wow! So much information packed in so few lines. Your readers will remember your words.
Nicely written haiku.
November 26th, 2018 17:53
Warm Lullaby
Goldfinch60 said:
Those blankets within us can mean so much to others.
November 16th, 2018 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Those blankets within us can mean so much to others.
November 16th, 2018 01:41
Warm Lullaby
Laura🌻 said:
Ernie,
Such beautiful, warm, and thoughtful sentiments! There comes a time in our lives where all we want is to make others happy. We don’t mind giving of ourselves! As you so poetically stated, it makes us happy just knowing we have made someone else feel the happiness we so willingly want them to have! A super write! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
November 15th, 2018 16:13
Laura🌻 said:
Ernie,
Such beautiful, warm, and thoughtful sentiments! There comes a time in our lives where all we want is to make others happy. We don’t mind giving of ourselves! As you so poetically stated, it makes us happy just knowing we have made someone else feel the happiness we so willingly want them to have! A super write! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
November 15th, 2018 16:13
I met a Symphony
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
What beautiful words you\'ve chosen to express your love.
Thanks for sharing this lovely poem. :-)
November 13th, 2018 17:49
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
What beautiful words you\'ve chosen to express your love.
Thanks for sharing this lovely poem. :-)
November 13th, 2018 17:49
Midnight Melody
Fay Slimm. said:
A good mantra for looking at life\'s surprises and learn from them all - your words ooze wisdom when we are held by abuse to the edges my friend.
November 9th, 2018 13:15
Fay Slimm. said:
A good mantra for looking at life\'s surprises and learn from them all - your words ooze wisdom when we are held by abuse to the edges my friend.
November 9th, 2018 13:15
Destination: Freedom
Goldfinch60 said:
That freedom is there for you to take, it is ahead of you around the next corner in your life. Good write.
November 9th, 2018 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
That freedom is there for you to take, it is ahead of you around the next corner in your life. Good write.
November 9th, 2018 01:44
Destination: Freedom
she_was_torture said:
Loved the use of rhyming in your poem, it added a great effect :)
November 8th, 2018 19:50
she_was_torture said:
Loved the use of rhyming in your poem, it added a great effect :)
November 8th, 2018 19:50
My heart
orchidee said:
I sort of meant that you\'re not waiting until Thanksgiving to write/share this poem.
November 8th, 2018 02:24
orchidee said:
I sort of meant that you\'re not waiting until Thanksgiving to write/share this poem.
November 8th, 2018 02:24
My heart
orchidee said:
Ooohh love won\'t, or can\'t wait - sometimes! A fine write Theta.
November 7th, 2018 03:13
orchidee said:
Ooohh love won\'t, or can\'t wait - sometimes! A fine write Theta.
November 7th, 2018 03:13
My heart
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautiful and gentle confession of love - thank you for sharing it Theta .
November 6th, 2018 12:17
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautiful and gentle confession of love - thank you for sharing it Theta .
November 6th, 2018 12:17
My heart
Netashi said:
She has an angelic sink laugh and her favorite color is lavender
November 6th, 2018 11:46
Netashi said:
She has an angelic sink laugh and her favorite color is lavender
November 6th, 2018 11:46
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