Comments received on poems by Netashi
Empty but fine
onepauly said:
evil is within all of us.
some more than others.
but whose to judge. evil is energy
if we work with it, it can be transformed into something more positive. discard the evil, and use its energy.
May 1st, 2018 17:28
onepauly said:
evil is within all of us.
some more than others.
but whose to judge. evil is energy
if we work with it, it can be transformed into something more positive. discard the evil, and use its energy.
May 1st, 2018 17:28
Empty but fine
lemons poetry said:
I liked that I’m bored like all the time that was good
May 1st, 2018 15:19
lemons poetry said:
I liked that I’m bored like all the time that was good
May 1st, 2018 15:19
Happiness
Fay Slimm. said:
Your rhyme describes happiness with accurate benefits Theta - - it frees and lightens our very outlook - thanks for this positive read as my last of this evening.
April 30th, 2018 16:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Your rhyme describes happiness with accurate benefits Theta - - it frees and lightens our very outlook - thanks for this positive read as my last of this evening.
April 30th, 2018 16:20
A poet
Fay Slimm. said:
You outline the reason behind the urges to write with admirable imagery Theta - - - the pen has ever been an instrument stronger than swords. Well said.
April 28th, 2018 02:32
Fay Slimm. said:
You outline the reason behind the urges to write with admirable imagery Theta - - - the pen has ever been an instrument stronger than swords. Well said.
April 28th, 2018 02:32
A poet
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks THETA
Poetry is sweeter
Than Prose
As everyone knows !
Thanks for sharing and caring
I too enjoyed the power in the phrase
A POET IS A LITERATE WARRIOR
The PEN is indeed ~ in a War of Words
Much mightier than the sword !
Yours ~ BRIAN (UK)
April 27th, 2018 17:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks THETA
Poetry is sweeter
Than Prose
As everyone knows !
Thanks for sharing and caring
I too enjoyed the power in the phrase
A POET IS A LITERATE WARRIOR
The PEN is indeed ~ in a War of Words
Much mightier than the sword !
Yours ~ BRIAN (UK)
April 27th, 2018 17:47
A poet
theseachild said:
Wow, you are so talented!!! You speak in such an artistic yet clear way, please continue on!
April 27th, 2018 16:48
theseachild said:
Wow, you are so talented!!! You speak in such an artistic yet clear way, please continue on!
April 27th, 2018 16:48
A poet
Lee Renard Caspian said:
Love the line \"a poet is a literate warrior\". Very well expressed
April 27th, 2018 13:11
Lee Renard Caspian said:
Love the line \"a poet is a literate warrior\". Very well expressed
April 27th, 2018 13:11
Welcome to life
sharda92 said:
I think it was great! I can relate to this feeling completely.
April 20th, 2018 16:19
sharda92 said:
I think it was great! I can relate to this feeling completely.
April 20th, 2018 16:19
The scholar
Lee Renard Caspian said:
Just found this poem and truly enjoyed it. Wonderfully crafted, and always good to know that there are kindred spirits out there.
April 20th, 2018 14:41
Lee Renard Caspian said:
Just found this poem and truly enjoyed it. Wonderfully crafted, and always good to know that there are kindred spirits out there.
April 20th, 2018 14:41
Blue
Lorna said:
Honest - and I sometimes think the best poetry is written when one is \"blue\"..........
January 31st, 2018 15:54
Lorna said:
Honest - and I sometimes think the best poetry is written when one is \"blue\"..........
January 31st, 2018 15:54
The scholar
Shadowbox15 said:
Thank you for that message. I love the ending.
November 13th, 2017 13:37
Shadowbox15 said:
Thank you for that message. I love the ending.
November 13th, 2017 13:37
Mother
Laura🌻 said:
This warms my heart as a
mom and as a daughter!
At this stage of my life,
I’m my mom’s caregiver!
I do it with all my heart!
I love her dearly!
Thank you for your
beautiful write!
November 9th, 2017 17:45
Laura🌻 said:
This warms my heart as a
mom and as a daughter!
At this stage of my life,
I’m my mom’s caregiver!
I do it with all my heart!
I love her dearly!
Thank you for your
beautiful write!
November 9th, 2017 17:45
Feeling under the weather
Orialis M. Pena said:
That\'s exactly how I feel about everything!
Great rhymes too!
Most of my poems are free verse because I can\'t really make one word rhyme with another. ^_^\'
November 8th, 2017 17:09
Orialis M. Pena said:
That\'s exactly how I feel about everything!
Great rhymes too!
Most of my poems are free verse because I can\'t really make one word rhyme with another. ^_^\'
November 8th, 2017 17:09
Mr. Miss
Orialis M. Pena said:
I believe a lot of people could relate to this poem, myself included.
Very good job!
I\'ll be sure to read your other poems!
November 8th, 2017 16:59
Orialis M. Pena said:
I believe a lot of people could relate to this poem, myself included.
Very good job!
I\'ll be sure to read your other poems!
November 8th, 2017 16:59
My worst enemy
Carmine Branco said:
We are closed is monads and we are prisoners of ourselves. So true. I can identify myself so much. Well done.
November 7th, 2017 13:40
Carmine Branco said:
We are closed is monads and we are prisoners of ourselves. So true. I can identify myself so much. Well done.
November 7th, 2017 13:40
My worst enemy
FredPeyer said:
Great subject, well written, like the structure and the use of different sized lines. Good job, Ernie!
November 7th, 2017 12:49
FredPeyer said:
Great subject, well written, like the structure and the use of different sized lines. Good job, Ernie!
November 7th, 2017 12:49
My heart to you
SorrowfullyHappy said:
this is a very beautiful write keep up the great work
November 6th, 2017 12:23
SorrowfullyHappy said:
this is a very beautiful write keep up the great work
November 6th, 2017 12:23
My heart to you
Netashi said:
Was gonna save it for valentines day but i\'m impatient so yeah lol
November 6th, 2017 12:22
Netashi said:
Was gonna save it for valentines day but i\'m impatient so yeah lol
November 6th, 2017 12:22
Simple Dreams
SorrowfullyHappy said:
great write I loved it till the end keep up the great work
November 1st, 2017 13:47
SorrowfullyHappy said:
great write I loved it till the end keep up the great work
November 1st, 2017 13:47
Feeling under the weather
Alex Arnot said:
Very genuine and steady rhythm. Glad you\'re feeling better!
October 31st, 2017 13:35
Alex Arnot said:
Very genuine and steady rhythm. Glad you\'re feeling better!
October 31st, 2017 13:35
I\'m scared
Netashi said:
I would tell her but I don\'t know how to, we have known each other for a while so i feel its better that we be friends
October 30th, 2017 11:22
Netashi said:
I would tell her but I don\'t know how to, we have known each other for a while so i feel its better that we be friends
October 30th, 2017 11:22
I\'m scared
Christina8 said:
This is beautiful. Show her this! It\'s amazing. Everything a girl wants. A wonderful write!
October 28th, 2017 18:10
Christina8 said:
This is beautiful. Show her this! It\'s amazing. Everything a girl wants. A wonderful write!
October 28th, 2017 18:10
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