Comments received on poems by Netashi
Be me
Laura🌻 said:
Theta,
If it’s parents asking or telling, they do have good intentions! They worry and only want what’s best for you! I’m a parent...I can relate!
On the other hand, I’ve been a young adult with parents concerned about me! It’s frustrating!
Trust in yourself! You’ll be ok!
~Laura~
May 17th, 2018 15:50
Laura🌻 said:
Theta,
If it’s parents asking or telling, they do have good intentions! They worry and only want what’s best for you! I’m a parent...I can relate!
On the other hand, I’ve been a young adult with parents concerned about me! It’s frustrating!
Trust in yourself! You’ll be ok!
~Laura~
May 17th, 2018 15:50
Be me
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful POEM THETA and a beautiful Philosophy. My experience too \"The simple things in Life are best and cause much less strife !\" Thanks for caring and sharing ~ yours BRIAN
May 17th, 2018 13:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful POEM THETA and a beautiful Philosophy. My experience too \"The simple things in Life are best and cause much less strife !\" Thanks for caring and sharing ~ yours BRIAN
May 17th, 2018 13:37
Be me
dusk arising said:
So who\'s stopping you being you? The only answer can be - yourself. Walk away from the wrong questions that you are being asked - you dont need them do you.
But reading between the lines i feel you are a bit afraid of being you if it means casting off from all those alternative \"you\'s\".
May 17th, 2018 12:47
dusk arising said:
So who\'s stopping you being you? The only answer can be - yourself. Walk away from the wrong questions that you are being asked - you dont need them do you.
But reading between the lines i feel you are a bit afraid of being you if it means casting off from all those alternative \"you\'s\".
May 17th, 2018 12:47
Sleep time junction
Laura🌻 said:
Theta,
A great write! That’s how I feel at times! Loved this line...
“I need to make a date and spend times with my dreams”
...a gem!
~Laura~
May 11th, 2018 15:37
Laura🌻 said:
Theta,
A great write! That’s how I feel at times! Loved this line...
“I need to make a date and spend times with my dreams”
...a gem!
~Laura~
May 11th, 2018 15:37
Someone to hold
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that search for the right person can be hard but that person is out there and you will find her.
May 8th, 2018 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that search for the right person can be hard but that person is out there and you will find her.
May 8th, 2018 00:22
Someone to hold
dusk arising said:
This is great. The perpetual search and hope for all of us unsuccessful at pairing-off long term.
Good to see positive writing whilst the poetic mind is \'unattached\' to a partner rather than the \'woe is me\' tragic writings seen elsewhere.
May 7th, 2018 13:22
dusk arising said:
This is great. The perpetual search and hope for all of us unsuccessful at pairing-off long term.
Good to see positive writing whilst the poetic mind is \'unattached\' to a partner rather than the \'woe is me\' tragic writings seen elsewhere.
May 7th, 2018 13:22
A poet
Its Raskolnikov said:
A good description with interesting ways of punctuating the poem with pause
May 6th, 2018 01:14
Its Raskolnikov said:
A good description with interesting ways of punctuating the poem with pause
May 6th, 2018 01:14
A pinch of chaos
Antoinette said:
Yes! This is the poem I needed to hear right now. I know exactly what this poem is talking about that those opening lines were perfect.
May 4th, 2018 14:24
Antoinette said:
Yes! This is the poem I needed to hear right now. I know exactly what this poem is talking about that those opening lines were perfect.
May 4th, 2018 14:24
A pinch of chaos
Antoinette said:
I read the first line and I loved it. Haven\'t even read the rest yet but here I go
May 4th, 2018 14:23
Antoinette said:
I read the first line and I loved it. Haven\'t even read the rest yet but here I go
May 4th, 2018 14:23
This might not be mine
Christina8 said:
It\'s hard to be in that situation. Not knowing. Maybe give HER a sign....?
May 3rd, 2018 14:14
Christina8 said:
It\'s hard to be in that situation. Not knowing. Maybe give HER a sign....?
May 3rd, 2018 14:14
Empty but fine
Goldfinch60 said:
Boredom is a right pain so make sure that the music I listen to, the reading I do and the poems I write take me into a different world.
May 2nd, 2018 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Boredom is a right pain so make sure that the music I listen to, the reading I do and the poems I write take me into a different world.
May 2nd, 2018 00:34
Empty but fine
onepauly said:
evil is within all of us.
some more than others.
but whose to judge. evil is energy
if we work with it, it can be transformed into something more positive. discard the evil, and use its energy.
May 1st, 2018 17:28
onepauly said:
evil is within all of us.
some more than others.
but whose to judge. evil is energy
if we work with it, it can be transformed into something more positive. discard the evil, and use its energy.
May 1st, 2018 17:28
Empty but fine
lemons poetry said:
I liked that I’m bored like all the time that was good
May 1st, 2018 15:19
lemons poetry said:
I liked that I’m bored like all the time that was good
May 1st, 2018 15:19
Happiness
Fay Slimm. said:
Your rhyme describes happiness with accurate benefits Theta - - it frees and lightens our very outlook - thanks for this positive read as my last of this evening.
April 30th, 2018 16:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Your rhyme describes happiness with accurate benefits Theta - - it frees and lightens our very outlook - thanks for this positive read as my last of this evening.
April 30th, 2018 16:20
A poet
Fay Slimm. said:
You outline the reason behind the urges to write with admirable imagery Theta - - - the pen has ever been an instrument stronger than swords. Well said.
April 28th, 2018 02:32
Fay Slimm. said:
You outline the reason behind the urges to write with admirable imagery Theta - - - the pen has ever been an instrument stronger than swords. Well said.
April 28th, 2018 02:32
A poet
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks THETA
Poetry is sweeter
Than Prose
As everyone knows !
Thanks for sharing and caring
I too enjoyed the power in the phrase
A POET IS A LITERATE WARRIOR
The PEN is indeed ~ in a War of Words
Much mightier than the sword !
Yours ~ BRIAN (UK)
April 27th, 2018 17:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks THETA
Poetry is sweeter
Than Prose
As everyone knows !
Thanks for sharing and caring
I too enjoyed the power in the phrase
A POET IS A LITERATE WARRIOR
The PEN is indeed ~ in a War of Words
Much mightier than the sword !
Yours ~ BRIAN (UK)
April 27th, 2018 17:47
A poet
theseachild said:
Wow, you are so talented!!! You speak in such an artistic yet clear way, please continue on!
April 27th, 2018 16:48
theseachild said:
Wow, you are so talented!!! You speak in such an artistic yet clear way, please continue on!
April 27th, 2018 16:48
A poet
Lee Renard Caspian said:
Love the line \"a poet is a literate warrior\". Very well expressed
April 27th, 2018 13:11
Lee Renard Caspian said:
Love the line \"a poet is a literate warrior\". Very well expressed
April 27th, 2018 13:11
Welcome to life
sharda92 said:
I think it was great! I can relate to this feeling completely.
April 20th, 2018 16:19
sharda92 said:
I think it was great! I can relate to this feeling completely.
April 20th, 2018 16:19
The scholar
Lee Renard Caspian said:
Just found this poem and truly enjoyed it. Wonderfully crafted, and always good to know that there are kindred spirits out there.
April 20th, 2018 14:41
Lee Renard Caspian said:
Just found this poem and truly enjoyed it. Wonderfully crafted, and always good to know that there are kindred spirits out there.
April 20th, 2018 14:41
Blue
Lorna said:
Honest - and I sometimes think the best poetry is written when one is \"blue\"..........
January 31st, 2018 15:54
Lorna said:
Honest - and I sometimes think the best poetry is written when one is \"blue\"..........
January 31st, 2018 15:54
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