Comments received on poems by Netashi
Complex Simplicity
jarcher54 said:
Wonderful accounting of humdrum daily events rendered with wit and wisdom... for a youngster like you!
March 9th, 2021 01:41
jarcher54 said:
Wonderful accounting of humdrum daily events rendered with wit and wisdom... for a youngster like you!
March 9th, 2021 01:41
Haiku #03082021
jarcher54 said:
Ha ha, I evade perfection every day! Your clever haiku proves you wrong.
Perfection is achieved! (-:
March 9th, 2021 01:37
jarcher54 said:
Ha ha, I evade perfection every day! Your clever haiku proves you wrong.
Perfection is achieved! (-:
March 9th, 2021 01:37
Haiku #03072021
Olivia. said:
Really nice! I have never written a Haiku before! I think I have been inspired. X
March 7th, 2021 12:58
Olivia. said:
Really nice! I have never written a Haiku before! I think I have been inspired. X
March 7th, 2021 12:58
Haiku #040121999
Jerry Reynolds said:
blue eyes stinging from dark smoke
fireman washes face with snow
March 6th, 2021 13:08
Jerry Reynolds said:
blue eyes stinging from dark smoke
fireman washes face with snow
March 6th, 2021 13:08
Complex Simplicity
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Awesome muse here written in fab rhyming wow, . I liked the line speck of dust on a rock and others . Kudos.
Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 26th, 2020 08:54
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Awesome muse here written in fab rhyming wow, . I liked the line speck of dust on a rock and others . Kudos.
Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 26th, 2020 08:54
Complex Simplicity
Seek said:
Your labor of love and love of your labors in producing poetry shine through. The metaphor of blinking does a commendable job of putting our place in the larger scheme of things in perspective. Enjoyed this.
January 14th, 2020 23:57
Seek said:
Your labor of love and love of your labors in producing poetry shine through. The metaphor of blinking does a commendable job of putting our place in the larger scheme of things in perspective. Enjoyed this.
January 14th, 2020 23:57
Tug of War
Nicholas Browning said:
Hey there, Theta. Been a while. Glad to see you still writing. I enjoyed the read. Some pretty heavy questions as well.
January 13th, 2020 22:34
Nicholas Browning said:
Hey there, Theta. Been a while. Glad to see you still writing. I enjoyed the read. Some pretty heavy questions as well.
January 13th, 2020 22:34
Sister of the orchids
orchidee said:
Good write Theta. I\'m an orchid-ee! heehee.
December 31st, 2019 03:00
orchidee said:
Good write Theta. I\'m an orchid-ee! heehee.
December 31st, 2019 03:00
Unsure
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Words of wisdom in a nice array that keeps the reader occupied. Well done! :-)
September 19th, 2019 16:15
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Words of wisdom in a nice array that keeps the reader occupied. Well done! :-)
September 19th, 2019 16:15
The scholar
Suresh said:
You speak it from your heart
Exposing your hidden parts
Those who find solitude in loneliness
Are seldom understood by phoniness
So well written
So well expressed
May 7th, 2019 10:54
Suresh said:
You speak it from your heart
Exposing your hidden parts
Those who find solitude in loneliness
Are seldom understood by phoniness
So well written
So well expressed
May 7th, 2019 10:54
Child of the clouds
Goldfinch60 said:
Good friends are so important in our lives.
April 2nd, 2019 15:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Good friends are so important in our lives.
April 2nd, 2019 15:33
Child of the clouds
Fay Slimm. said:
An apt reassurance that love has many faces and friendship being one the piece offers this to a valued companion with hopes that togetherness will go on and on. Then a state of satisfaction indeed.
April 2nd, 2019 13:39
Fay Slimm. said:
An apt reassurance that love has many faces and friendship being one the piece offers this to a valued companion with hopes that togetherness will go on and on. Then a state of satisfaction indeed.
April 2nd, 2019 13:39
In another life
Fay Slimm. said:
A number of reasons for feeling defeated yet the read holds out hope that having now spoken things in the world of romance would do a U turn.. Thanks for your own comment too Theta - that we dont have to be sad to write about sadness.
March 27th, 2019 12:52
Fay Slimm. said:
A number of reasons for feeling defeated yet the read holds out hope that having now spoken things in the world of romance would do a U turn.. Thanks for your own comment too Theta - that we dont have to be sad to write about sadness.
March 27th, 2019 12:52
Necessary
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Theta but I find being alone quite rewarding, being lonely is something else though.
March 15th, 2019 15:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Theta but I find being alone quite rewarding, being lonely is something else though.
March 15th, 2019 15:58
T stands for time
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'m not too sure what to say. A love like that is beautiful in a way, but painful all the same. Not too sure if I would want to experience something like that. I enjoyed the message.
March 12th, 2019 17:13
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'m not too sure what to say. A love like that is beautiful in a way, but painful all the same. Not too sure if I would want to experience something like that. I enjoyed the message.
March 12th, 2019 17:13
A stands for aesthetic
laurenroe said:
I enjoyed the personal connection that you displayed through this piece! Good work
lr
February 22nd, 2019 13:52
laurenroe said:
I enjoyed the personal connection that you displayed through this piece! Good work
lr
February 22nd, 2019 13:52
A stands for aesthetic
Chocolate said:
I like it, but as a piece I feel like it needs to be expanded on.
February 12th, 2019 20:26
Chocolate said:
I like it, but as a piece I feel like it needs to be expanded on.
February 12th, 2019 20:26
A stands for aesthetic
Fay Slimm. said:
Some adeptly crafted imagery in these engaging lines Theta - - a telling tale about youthful happenings and the changes love takes at the drop of a hat ...........I applaud that final well-rhymed couplet.
February 12th, 2019 13:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Some adeptly crafted imagery in these engaging lines Theta - - a telling tale about youthful happenings and the changes love takes at the drop of a hat ...........I applaud that final well-rhymed couplet.
February 12th, 2019 13:57
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