Comments received on poems by Netashi

Cloud city
Lorenz said:

I love this mercurial melody !

February 10th, 2024 14:27

Golden Scar
Kiera said:

You have cured my insomnia, but prescribed me depression. That is one powerful line! i really like it. I hope that 0.0000000001% of you comes to learn, that even though THEY weren\'t there, You decided to be there for yourself. and you are worth so much

April 13th, 2023 23:05

Cloud Watching
David Wakeling said:

I read this twice but I guess I am too dumb to know what it is about.I think its about clouds but I\'m not sure

March 21st, 2023 21:47

Blue flower red thorns
L. B. Mek said:

such a relatable read, thanks for sharing
(never nice when our feelings are not reciprocated
yet, we walk that fine line between persevering
and just being annoying, because
we can\'t just let it go, imagining
a day
when they\'ll come to recognise
our worth...)

March 17th, 2023 05:47

Haiku #03142021
orchidee said:

Good wrote Theta.

March 15th, 2021 02:51

Haiku #03082021
orchidee said:

A fine write Theta.

March 9th, 2021 02:21

Complex Simplicity
jarcher54 said:

Wonderful accounting of humdrum daily events rendered with wit and wisdom... for a youngster like you!

March 9th, 2021 01:41

Haiku #03082021
jarcher54 said:

Ha ha, I evade perfection every day! Your clever haiku proves you wrong.
Perfection is achieved! (-:

March 9th, 2021 01:37

Haiku #03072021
Goldfinch60 said:

Another good Senryu Theta.


March 8th, 2021 01:26

Haiku #03072021
FredPeyer said:

beautifully done Theta!

March 7th, 2021 15:48

Haiku #03072021
Olivia. said:

Really nice! I have never written a Haiku before! I think I have been inspired. X

March 7th, 2021 12:58

Haiku #03072021
Jerry Reynolds said:

the full moon sips
from the mountain lake

March 7th, 2021 12:22

Haiku #040121999
Goldfinch60 said:

Good Senryu.


March 7th, 2021 02:20

Haiku #040121999
Jerry Reynolds said:

blue eyes stinging from dark smoke
fireman washes face with snow

March 6th, 2021 13:08

Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Theta.


January 3rd, 2021 02:14

Complex Simplicity
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Awesome muse here written in fab rhyming wow, . I liked the line speck of dust on a rock and others . Kudos.

Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.

February 26th, 2020 08:54

Complex Simplicity
Seek said:

Your labor of love and love of your labors in producing poetry shine through. The metaphor of blinking does a commendable job of putting our place in the larger scheme of things in perspective. Enjoyed this.

January 14th, 2020 23:57

Tug of War
Nicholas Browning said:

Hey there, Theta. Been a while. Glad to see you still writing. I enjoyed the read. Some pretty heavy questions as well.

January 13th, 2020 22:34

Sister of the orchids
orchidee said:

Good write Theta. I\'m an orchid-ee! heehee.

December 31st, 2019 03:00

Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Words of wisdom in a nice array that keeps the reader occupied. Well done! :-)

September 19th, 2019 16:15

The scholar
Suresh said:

You speak it from your heart
Exposing your hidden parts
Those who find solitude in loneliness
Are seldom understood by phoniness
So well written
So well expressed

May 7th, 2019 10:54

Suresh said:

I really enjoyed the flow

April 30th, 2019 14:46

Child of the clouds
Goldfinch60 said:

Good friends are so important in our lives.

April 2nd, 2019 15:33

Child of the clouds
Fay Slimm. said:

An apt reassurance that love has many faces and friendship being one the piece offers this to a valued companion with hopes that togetherness will go on and on. Then a state of satisfaction indeed.

April 2nd, 2019 13:39

In another life
Fay Slimm. said:

A number of reasons for feeling defeated yet the read holds out hope that having now spoken things in the world of romance would do a U turn.. Thanks for your own comment too Theta - that we dont have to be sad to write about sadness.

March 27th, 2019 12:52

ztaysimple said:

Deep 😯 👍🏽

March 15th, 2019 17:35

Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Theta but I find being alone quite rewarding, being lonely is something else though.

March 15th, 2019 15:58

Nicholas Browning said:

The last two lines are quite nice.

March 15th, 2019 15:40

T stands for time
Nicholas Browning said:

I\'m not too sure what to say. A love like that is beautiful in a way, but painful all the same. Not too sure if I would want to experience something like that. I enjoyed the message.

March 12th, 2019 17:13

W stands for whiplash
Medusx said:

Oh god I\'m gonna cry.

February 25th, 2019 19:28

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