Comments received on poems by Netashi
Morning\'s Anthem
orchidee said:
A fine write Theta. Unfortunately the day is nearly over for me. I spent most of it finding out what Carpe Diem meant. When I found out, there was not much day left to seize! doh! heehee.
September 28th, 2018 11:26
orchidee said:
A fine write Theta. Unfortunately the day is nearly over for me. I spent most of it finding out what Carpe Diem meant. When I found out, there was not much day left to seize! doh! heehee.
September 28th, 2018 11:26
Grow
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah I love the title of this clever lead into the surprise last line showing a mirror tells us what we want to see. A perceptive write my friend.
September 13th, 2018 12:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah I love the title of this clever lead into the surprise last line showing a mirror tells us what we want to see. A perceptive write my friend.
September 13th, 2018 12:54
Dogs
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you so much for this, I\'ve got goosebumps all over. Your words are so true and the ending a bit sad but I\'m a self taught behaviourist helping any dog I can, because the reality is the more you understand the more you see how we are no good for them.
Thank you again this really sang to my whole soul and said carry on with your goal.
Much love and respect
September 1st, 2018 10:31
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you so much for this, I\'ve got goosebumps all over. Your words are so true and the ending a bit sad but I\'m a self taught behaviourist helping any dog I can, because the reality is the more you understand the more you see how we are no good for them.
Thank you again this really sang to my whole soul and said carry on with your goal.
Much love and respect
September 1st, 2018 10:31
Flavor
Fay Slimm. said:
The swing between both genders in this clear reminder shows how one-sided the giving can be in a failing relationship - - sad but true this outlines much of the troubled exchanges betwixt the negative and the positive nature of opposite sexes. Thoughtfully compoased Theta.
August 29th, 2018 13:43
Fay Slimm. said:
The swing between both genders in this clear reminder shows how one-sided the giving can be in a failing relationship - - sad but true this outlines much of the troubled exchanges betwixt the negative and the positive nature of opposite sexes. Thoughtfully compoased Theta.
August 29th, 2018 13:43
Dogs
swyndell said:
I love this, it\'s so cute, but it speaks the truth. Great write.
Jinxy~
August 27th, 2018 12:53
swyndell said:
I love this, it\'s so cute, but it speaks the truth. Great write.
Jinxy~
August 27th, 2018 12:53
Time and life intertwined
Laura🌻 said:
Theta,
A wonderfully written reminder to appreciate life; especially the little things in life!
I enjoyed this write. Thank you for sharing.
~Laura~
August 24th, 2018 15:05
Laura🌻 said:
Theta,
A wonderfully written reminder to appreciate life; especially the little things in life!
I enjoyed this write. Thank you for sharing.
~Laura~
August 24th, 2018 15:05
Let me be....
swyndell said:
Truly beautiful, I find love poems so enchanting sometimes.
August 21st, 2018 11:27
swyndell said:
Truly beautiful, I find love poems so enchanting sometimes.
August 21st, 2018 11:27
Death of a child
swyndell said:
This poem is relatable. I\'ve had to grow up quick. My parents believe in taking up the role of someone years older at a young age. So the childhood I had , though carefree, was very brief.
August 21st, 2018 10:52
swyndell said:
This poem is relatable. I\'ve had to grow up quick. My parents believe in taking up the role of someone years older at a young age. So the childhood I had , though carefree, was very brief.
August 21st, 2018 10:52
Be me
Mystery1023 said:
I love this poem. I really admire the fact that you are not afraid to express your feelings. I wish I had the courage to be me around everybody
May 22nd, 2018 10:11
Mystery1023 said:
I love this poem. I really admire the fact that you are not afraid to express your feelings. I wish I had the courage to be me around everybody
May 22nd, 2018 10:11
Be me
Goldfinch60 said:
Just be yourself, many will try and change you but what you must realise that if they have a problem with what you do or are it is their problem, not yours. Good write.
May 18th, 2018 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Just be yourself, many will try and change you but what you must realise that if they have a problem with what you do or are it is their problem, not yours. Good write.
May 18th, 2018 00:49
Be me
SLR said:
I also had very different goals for myself than my parents did. Take small steps to making your life your own. Change one or two small things at a time. After a while maybe something a little bigger. That way you\'re not shocking them with everything at once. It takes a while to make your dreams a reality but it\'s easier on you and the family/friends/well intentioned advisers. Good luck! Work hard, don\'t give up and try to understand where they\'re coming from.Great post!
May 17th, 2018 22:08
SLR said:
I also had very different goals for myself than my parents did. Take small steps to making your life your own. Change one or two small things at a time. After a while maybe something a little bigger. That way you\'re not shocking them with everything at once. It takes a while to make your dreams a reality but it\'s easier on you and the family/friends/well intentioned advisers. Good luck! Work hard, don\'t give up and try to understand where they\'re coming from.Great post!
May 17th, 2018 22:08
Be me
Laura🌻 said:
Theta,
If it’s parents asking or telling, they do have good intentions! They worry and only want what’s best for you! I’m a parent...I can relate!
On the other hand, I’ve been a young adult with parents concerned about me! It’s frustrating!
Trust in yourself! You’ll be ok!
~Laura~
May 17th, 2018 15:50
Laura🌻 said:
Theta,
If it’s parents asking or telling, they do have good intentions! They worry and only want what’s best for you! I’m a parent...I can relate!
On the other hand, I’ve been a young adult with parents concerned about me! It’s frustrating!
Trust in yourself! You’ll be ok!
~Laura~
May 17th, 2018 15:50
Be me
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful POEM THETA and a beautiful Philosophy. My experience too \"The simple things in Life are best and cause much less strife !\" Thanks for caring and sharing ~ yours BRIAN
May 17th, 2018 13:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful POEM THETA and a beautiful Philosophy. My experience too \"The simple things in Life are best and cause much less strife !\" Thanks for caring and sharing ~ yours BRIAN
May 17th, 2018 13:37
Be me
dusk arising said:
So who\'s stopping you being you? The only answer can be - yourself. Walk away from the wrong questions that you are being asked - you dont need them do you.
But reading between the lines i feel you are a bit afraid of being you if it means casting off from all those alternative \"you\'s\".
May 17th, 2018 12:47
dusk arising said:
So who\'s stopping you being you? The only answer can be - yourself. Walk away from the wrong questions that you are being asked - you dont need them do you.
But reading between the lines i feel you are a bit afraid of being you if it means casting off from all those alternative \"you\'s\".
May 17th, 2018 12:47
Sleep time junction
Laura🌻 said:
Theta,
A great write! That’s how I feel at times! Loved this line...
“I need to make a date and spend times with my dreams”
...a gem!
~Laura~
May 11th, 2018 15:37
Laura🌻 said:
Theta,
A great write! That’s how I feel at times! Loved this line...
“I need to make a date and spend times with my dreams”
...a gem!
~Laura~
May 11th, 2018 15:37
Someone to hold
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that search for the right person can be hard but that person is out there and you will find her.
May 8th, 2018 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that search for the right person can be hard but that person is out there and you will find her.
May 8th, 2018 00:22
Someone to hold
dusk arising said:
This is great. The perpetual search and hope for all of us unsuccessful at pairing-off long term.
Good to see positive writing whilst the poetic mind is \'unattached\' to a partner rather than the \'woe is me\' tragic writings seen elsewhere.
May 7th, 2018 13:22
dusk arising said:
This is great. The perpetual search and hope for all of us unsuccessful at pairing-off long term.
Good to see positive writing whilst the poetic mind is \'unattached\' to a partner rather than the \'woe is me\' tragic writings seen elsewhere.
May 7th, 2018 13:22
A poet
Its Raskolnikov said:
A good description with interesting ways of punctuating the poem with pause
May 6th, 2018 01:14
Its Raskolnikov said:
A good description with interesting ways of punctuating the poem with pause
May 6th, 2018 01:14
A pinch of chaos
Antoinette said:
Yes! This is the poem I needed to hear right now. I know exactly what this poem is talking about that those opening lines were perfect.
May 4th, 2018 14:24
Antoinette said:
Yes! This is the poem I needed to hear right now. I know exactly what this poem is talking about that those opening lines were perfect.
May 4th, 2018 14:24
A pinch of chaos
Antoinette said:
I read the first line and I loved it. Haven\'t even read the rest yet but here I go
May 4th, 2018 14:23
Antoinette said:
I read the first line and I loved it. Haven\'t even read the rest yet but here I go
May 4th, 2018 14:23
This might not be mine
Christina8 said:
It\'s hard to be in that situation. Not knowing. Maybe give HER a sign....?
May 3rd, 2018 14:14
Christina8 said:
It\'s hard to be in that situation. Not knowing. Maybe give HER a sign....?
May 3rd, 2018 14:14
Empty but fine
Goldfinch60 said:
Boredom is a right pain so make sure that the music I listen to, the reading I do and the poems I write take me into a different world.
May 2nd, 2018 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Boredom is a right pain so make sure that the music I listen to, the reading I do and the poems I write take me into a different world.
May 2nd, 2018 00:34
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