Comments received on poems by Netashi



The girl that doesn\'t sleep
Netashi said:

I think i\'m more than fond of sink and angel like laughs


November 2nd, 2018 12:12

My eyes
Fay Slimm. said:

Love the title and the description of those who in your kind eyes are all beautiful . An inspiring read Theta.

October 31st, 2018 16:20

My eyes
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Such lovely and inspiring words.

Thanks for sharing. :-)

October 31st, 2018 14:22

April in October
Netashi said:

Oh also i hope everyone has a good Halloween

October 24th, 2018 11:31

Sticks of gum
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Wow! You\'ve certainly found a way to forget the past. Love this poem and I\'m elated to know your present life is much more rewarding. Thanks for sharing. :)

October 8th, 2018 16:03

Soft storm
Brycycle said:

I quite liked this poem

October 4th, 2018 15:52

Soft storm
LAWLIET said:

in the pool of consciousness

October 4th, 2018 13:24

Fragments of sorrow
chaaz said:

wow....this is just BEAUTIFUL! i loved it soo much..thanks for sharing

October 4th, 2018 07:46

Dear Theta
chaaz said:

that is beautiful...great work

October 3rd, 2018 10:26

Seasons we breath
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:


A wonderful message on life, its meaning and its seasons that are comprised of the ups and downs we all must endure.

Great poem and thanks for sharing. :)



October 2nd, 2018 14:12

Fragments of sorrow
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Yes, it is so very sad and heavy on the reader\'s heart, but you got the point across nicely.

Although dark, a great read. Don\'t stop writing! :)

October 2nd, 2018 14:06

Fragments of sorrow
MissileOfUncertainty said:

You’re right, this is really dark. It also feels raw and authentic. So thanks for sharing.

October 2nd, 2018 12:18

Real Spooky Hours
Netashi said:

Holy crap, did i just make a creeppasta/poem....I think i did.....good job me

September 28th, 2018 12:12

Morning\'s Anthem
orchidee said:

A fine write Theta. Unfortunately the day is nearly over for me. I spent most of it finding out what Carpe Diem meant. When I found out, there was not much day left to seize! doh! heehee.

September 28th, 2018 11:26

Grow
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Loved the ending. A mirror image was certainly not expected, but you\'ve done a great job with presentation.

:)

September 27th, 2018 19:31

Hacked
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Theta, I thought the comparison of the computer virus to your lost love was brilliant.

Great read! :)

September 27th, 2018 19:26

Real Spooky Hours
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Oooh, scary and rhymin!. Can\'t beat that for Halloween.

I enjoyed your poem. :)

September 25th, 2018 13:01

Grow
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah I love the title of this clever lead into the surprise last line showing a mirror tells us what we want to see. A perceptive write my friend.

September 13th, 2018 12:54

Dogs
Poetic Dan said:

Thank you so much for this, I\'ve got goosebumps all over. Your words are so true and the ending a bit sad but I\'m a self taught behaviourist helping any dog I can, because the reality is the more you understand the more you see how we are no good for them.

Thank you again this really sang to my whole soul and said carry on with your goal.

Much love and respect

September 1st, 2018 10:31

Flavor
Fay Slimm. said:

The swing between both genders in this clear reminder shows how one-sided the giving can be in a failing relationship - - sad but true this outlines much of the troubled exchanges betwixt the negative and the positive nature of opposite sexes. Thoughtfully compoased Theta.

August 29th, 2018 13:43

Flavor
Netashi said:

Any suggestions on the next topic???

August 29th, 2018 12:02

Dogs
swyndell said:

I love this, it\'s so cute, but it speaks the truth. Great write.
Jinxy~

August 27th, 2018 12:53

Time and life intertwined
Laura🌻 said:

Theta,

A wonderfully written reminder to appreciate life; especially the little things in life!
I enjoyed this write. Thank you for sharing.

~Laura~

August 24th, 2018 15:05

I heard and saw
Jim Yates said:

Super

August 23rd, 2018 15:14

Let me be....
swyndell said:

Truly beautiful, I find love poems so enchanting sometimes.

August 21st, 2018 11:27

Death of a child
swyndell said:

This poem is relatable. I\'ve had to grow up quick. My parents believe in taking up the role of someone years older at a young age. So the childhood I had , though carefree, was very brief.

August 21st, 2018 10:52

Be me
Lee Renard Caspian said:

Very relatable. Another good write :)

June 2nd, 2018 18:43

Be me
Mystery1023 said:

I love this poem. I really admire the fact that you are not afraid to express your feelings. I wish I had the courage to be me around everybody

May 22nd, 2018 10:11

Be me
Goldfinch60 said:

Just be yourself, many will try and change you but what you must realise that if they have a problem with what you do or are it is their problem, not yours. Good write.

May 18th, 2018 00:49

Be me
SLR said:

I also had very different goals for myself than my parents did. Take small steps to making your life your own. Change one or two small things at a time. After a while maybe something a little bigger. That way you\'re not shocking them with everything at once. It takes a while to make your dreams a reality but it\'s easier on you and the family/friends/well intentioned advisers. Good luck! Work hard, don\'t give up and try to understand where they\'re coming from.Great post!

May 17th, 2018 22:08

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