Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
Like Hiruda
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thanks for your precious comment!...You can read Hiruda\'s English translation on the site \'POEM HUNTER \' ..first go to the site on net and search by Hiruda\'s full name Hiren Bhattacharyya...Thanks once again for your Kind words!!
February 11th, 2018 06:29
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thanks for your precious comment!...You can read Hiruda\'s English translation on the site \'POEM HUNTER \' ..first go to the site on net and search by Hiruda\'s full name Hiren Bhattacharyya...Thanks once again for your Kind words!!
February 11th, 2018 06:29
Like Hiruda
Michael Edwards said:
I always enjoy your postings - and you\'ve whetted my appetite for Hiruda - must see if I can find any translations although they don\'t always translate into other languages that well .
February 11th, 2018 06:19
Michael Edwards said:
I always enjoy your postings - and you\'ve whetted my appetite for Hiruda - must see if I can find any translations although they don\'t always translate into other languages that well .
February 11th, 2018 06:19
Oracle
Seven said:
Worth the wait. As Kat said you are a unique talent. As Michael said, always a joy. Alliteration without overdoing it. Internal rhymes when needed. Smooth flow and expansive vocabulary! Well done.
February 3rd, 2018 22:29
Seven said:
Worth the wait. As Kat said you are a unique talent. As Michael said, always a joy. Alliteration without overdoing it. Internal rhymes when needed. Smooth flow and expansive vocabulary! Well done.
February 3rd, 2018 22:29
Oracle
FredPeyer said:
Well written, like how you bring all the different Gods, the oracle, storms, and the Universe under one \'roof\'! I do hope you will succeed to be \'bold like CC\'!
February 3rd, 2018 13:21
FredPeyer said:
Well written, like how you bring all the different Gods, the oracle, storms, and the Universe under one \'roof\'! I do hope you will succeed to be \'bold like CC\'!
February 3rd, 2018 13:21
No, No, I am not a Lonely Being Anymore
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur.
The world of poets is a wonderful world to belong to.
Thank you for your insight.
Lovely.
Keep writing
FineB
January 31st, 2018 04:23
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur.
The world of poets is a wonderful world to belong to.
Thank you for your insight.
Lovely.
Keep writing
FineB
January 31st, 2018 04:23
No, No, I am not a Lonely Being Anymore
Aislinn Wilson said:
Wow this was really unique construction! Strong write!
\"Pierces the crafty,greedy,exploiter and corpulent\'s stomach\"
Was by far my favourite line, though followed up so well
January 29th, 2018 13:47
Aislinn Wilson said:
Wow this was really unique construction! Strong write!
\"Pierces the crafty,greedy,exploiter and corpulent\'s stomach\"
Was by far my favourite line, though followed up so well
January 29th, 2018 13:47
No, No, I am not a Lonely Being Anymore
Michael Edwards said:
I know absolutely nothing about Eminem but I do know this is yet another fine write.
January 29th, 2018 08:38
Michael Edwards said:
I know absolutely nothing about Eminem but I do know this is yet another fine write.
January 29th, 2018 08:38
Crocodile Tears
Caring dove said:
interesting i like this ! i love how you have expressed yourself throughout
January 29th, 2018 07:34
Caring dove said:
interesting i like this ! i love how you have expressed yourself throughout
January 29th, 2018 07:34
No, No, I am not a Lonely Being Anymore
Lorna said:
Poetry is a safe place I think.........and doesn\'t hurt anyone hopefully.
January 29th, 2018 06:49
Lorna said:
Poetry is a safe place I think.........and doesn\'t hurt anyone hopefully.
January 29th, 2018 06:49
Poet Identity
FredPeyer said:
You are what you write - you write what you are!
Love this poem, MR!
January 29th, 2018 02:23
FredPeyer said:
You are what you write - you write what you are!
Love this poem, MR!
January 29th, 2018 02:23
Poet Identity
Lorna said:
Very nice! And I love that it comes to us all the way from India....... makes me feel as if I have traveled even before breakfast!
January 28th, 2018 05:42
Lorna said:
Very nice! And I love that it comes to us all the way from India....... makes me feel as if I have traveled even before breakfast!
January 28th, 2018 05:42
Crocodile Tears
FredPeyer said:
Well written, M, with some beautiful word choices!
January 25th, 2018 20:35
FredPeyer said:
Well written, M, with some beautiful word choices!
January 25th, 2018 20:35
Crocodile Tears
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur.
Life is full of tearful moments.
A beautiful poem.
I like the description of tears as \'beautious dew particles.\'
Keep writing
FineB
January 25th, 2018 10:00
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur.
Life is full of tearful moments.
A beautiful poem.
I like the description of tears as \'beautious dew particles.\'
Keep writing
FineB
January 25th, 2018 10:00
Rhythm
Caring dove said:
i really do like this .. a very good piece of writing , the first line pulled me in \'\'riding ever inside a pencil \'\' interesting wording here which i very much like. that line just makes me think of how there is so much energy in words, and a pencil or pen lets us speak those words, writing for me is a way to soothe that pain , to distract from the bad , to let our emotions out and to speak what we want to say
January 21st, 2018 10:32
Caring dove said:
i really do like this .. a very good piece of writing , the first line pulled me in \'\'riding ever inside a pencil \'\' interesting wording here which i very much like. that line just makes me think of how there is so much energy in words, and a pencil or pen lets us speak those words, writing for me is a way to soothe that pain , to distract from the bad , to let our emotions out and to speak what we want to say
January 21st, 2018 10:32
We Can All Grow with Poetry All The Time
Caring dove said:
i love this .. writing poetry is in itself an acheivement , for sure and if we acheive nothiing else in our life then poetry will always be there lol ! there are many narrow minded people out there... so true. this is a nice piece of writing . personally i sometimes feel i struggle to feel i acheive much in life but atleast i can write poetry and people like what i read, thats something anyhow
January 21st, 2018 10:23
Caring dove said:
i love this .. writing poetry is in itself an acheivement , for sure and if we acheive nothiing else in our life then poetry will always be there lol ! there are many narrow minded people out there... so true. this is a nice piece of writing . personally i sometimes feel i struggle to feel i acheive much in life but atleast i can write poetry and people like what i read, thats something anyhow
January 21st, 2018 10:23
Foreseeing
Michael Edwards said:
Another great poem - with such imaginative use of language.
January 21st, 2018 07:24
Michael Edwards said:
Another great poem - with such imaginative use of language.
January 21st, 2018 07:24
Let\'s Go to the Heart
Caring dove said:
i really like this ...enjoyed reading .. there is never such a thing as being too imaginative lol imagination is great ! you have talent..
January 21st, 2018 06:49
Caring dove said:
i really like this ...enjoyed reading .. there is never such a thing as being too imaginative lol imagination is great ! you have talent..
January 21st, 2018 06:49
Foreseeing
Caring dove said:
i guess maybe your mother was right lol .. your words are very beautiful .. what a lovely tender poem :-) enjoyed reading this
January 21st, 2018 06:46
Caring dove said:
i guess maybe your mother was right lol .. your words are very beautiful .. what a lovely tender poem :-) enjoyed reading this
January 21st, 2018 06:46
A Big Question
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur.
An excellent poem.
You are a good writer.
Keep writing
FineB
January 20th, 2018 15:55
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur.
An excellent poem.
You are a good writer.
Keep writing
FineB
January 20th, 2018 15:55
Poetry and A Smile of Honesty
Seven said:
Easy to tell this came from a real place. Even your comments regarding this piece flow like poetry.
January 17th, 2018 14:15
Seven said:
Easy to tell this came from a real place. Even your comments regarding this piece flow like poetry.
January 17th, 2018 14:15
A Big Question
Seven said:
Always opening up creative concepts in unique ways. The flow is natural and not over done.
January 17th, 2018 14:11
Seven said:
Always opening up creative concepts in unique ways. The flow is natural and not over done.
January 17th, 2018 14:11
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