Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
The Relentless Race – A Symphony of Life and Motion
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and cleverly crafted write, with many messages within the words, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 14:08
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and cleverly crafted write, with many messages within the words, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 14:08
Poet’s Introduction
RSM0812 said:
Great rhyme and rhythm. It sums up the searching of the soulful pen. My favorite today. Great write.
May 6th, 2025 15:47
RSM0812 said:
Great rhyme and rhythm. It sums up the searching of the soulful pen. My favorite today. Great write.
May 6th, 2025 15:47
The River of Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
It is so difficult to find original metaphors. Although storms and rivers are so common the use of monsoon in combination with parched banks on river of dreams and then introduce music is quite unexpected and glorious. Most lovely and a fave
May 6th, 2025 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
It is so difficult to find original metaphors. Although storms and rivers are so common the use of monsoon in combination with parched banks on river of dreams and then introduce music is quite unexpected and glorious. Most lovely and a fave
May 6th, 2025 04:36
Poet’s Introduction
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel this, I can identify with this and yes it is a pendulum of pain and power. A poem most lovely and a fave
May 5th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel this, I can identify with this and yes it is a pendulum of pain and power. A poem most lovely and a fave
May 5th, 2025 04:26
Just Another Man
sorenbarrett said:
This is a powerful poem that speaks with thunder and seems to echo down the ages. Great wording and use of metaphor as well as wonderful images lends to its power. Lovely
May 4th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
This is a powerful poem that speaks with thunder and seems to echo down the ages. Great wording and use of metaphor as well as wonderful images lends to its power. Lovely
May 4th, 2025 04:50
Far-Sightedness
sorenbarrett said:
This poem required multiple readings to get through my thick skull its full meaning. It speaks of the power of words often not perceived but present none the less. A lovely write and caution. Well done
May 3rd, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
This poem required multiple readings to get through my thick skull its full meaning. It speaks of the power of words often not perceived but present none the less. A lovely write and caution. Well done
May 3rd, 2025 04:32
Far-Sightedness
Michael Edwards said:
Your ability to stretch the language and your keen eye for descriptive verse always makes your work a pleasure to read.
May 3rd, 2025 04:28
Michael Edwards said:
Your ability to stretch the language and your keen eye for descriptive verse always makes your work a pleasure to read.
May 3rd, 2025 04:28
Life is Strange
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Unfortunately the remark has been deleted for technical issue...Sorry for this fault ..Sorenbarrett
May 2nd, 2025 05:08
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Unfortunately the remark has been deleted for technical issue...Sorry for this fault ..Sorenbarrett
May 2nd, 2025 05:08
Life is Strange
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank you for this beautiful reflection! You’ve captured exactly what I hoped these quatrains would evoke—that sense of connection between life’s fleeting moments, from its early struggles to its quiet end. It’s wonderful to hear how they resonated with you and sparked that need to weave them together. Poetry’s magic lies in how it lingers in the mind, inviting each reader to find their own meaning. Grateful for your insight!\" @Sorenbarrett
May 2nd, 2025 05:07
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank you for this beautiful reflection! You’ve captured exactly what I hoped these quatrains would evoke—that sense of connection between life’s fleeting moments, from its early struggles to its quiet end. It’s wonderful to hear how they resonated with you and sparked that need to weave them together. Poetry’s magic lies in how it lingers in the mind, inviting each reader to find their own meaning. Grateful for your insight!\" @Sorenbarrett
May 2nd, 2025 05:07
Voice of the Sky
sorenbarrett said:
Words of an oath in this poem. Full of vivid images it flows. Well done
May 1st, 2025 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Words of an oath in this poem. Full of vivid images it flows. Well done
May 1st, 2025 04:59
False Tears
sorenbarrett said:
A fruit once green then ripened now rots on the ground. A very sad poem, sad because it is so common. So much wasted fruit. Lovely write a fave
April 30th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
A fruit once green then ripened now rots on the ground. A very sad poem, sad because it is so common. So much wasted fruit. Lovely write a fave
April 30th, 2025 03:52
Arbor Mundi (The World Tree)
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem drew me in from beginning to end. You tell a tale which can be seen from many angles both metaphor and symbolical language. The tale of the world tree connects humanity through out its rich cultural and historical archives. Thanks for sharing your piece, much enjoyed the read!
April 28th, 2025 02:23
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem drew me in from beginning to end. You tell a tale which can be seen from many angles both metaphor and symbolical language. The tale of the world tree connects humanity through out its rich cultural and historical archives. Thanks for sharing your piece, much enjoyed the read!
April 28th, 2025 02:23
The Thermosphere is Descending
sorenbarrett said:
I have read this several times and with rereading it mellows and grows softer. It begins strong and harsh but ends in a soft acceptance. Lovely
April 27th, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
I have read this several times and with rereading it mellows and grows softer. It begins strong and harsh but ends in a soft acceptance. Lovely
April 27th, 2025 05:10
War is No Solution (Nor Was It Ever Just)
Doggerel Dave said:
A rich write. Any solutions?
April 26th, 2025 17:23
Doggerel Dave said:
A rich write. Any solutions?
April 26th, 2025 17:23
War is No Solution (Nor Was It Ever Just)
sorenbarrett said:
Such powerful words to forge nuclear peace. A most lovely write about a subject that remains unresolved despite the years, deaths and destruction.
April 26th, 2025 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
Such powerful words to forge nuclear peace. A most lovely write about a subject that remains unresolved despite the years, deaths and destruction.
April 26th, 2025 05:20
Equilibrium
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the message woven in these words. The wording and rhyme were excellent and conveyed the message well. We are all nature brothers in arms so to speak in our voyage through time and space. Most lovely
April 25th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the message woven in these words. The wording and rhyme were excellent and conveyed the message well. We are all nature brothers in arms so to speak in our voyage through time and space. Most lovely
April 25th, 2025 03:49
The Wings of the Seagull
RSM0812 said:
I favd a few poems today but this one is my favorite. Every line has an image. Every word evokes an emotion. What a great write.
April 23rd, 2025 06:48
RSM0812 said:
I favd a few poems today but this one is my favorite. Every line has an image. Every word evokes an emotion. What a great write.
April 23rd, 2025 06:48
Ode to the Void
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is quite thought provoking and deep in its philosophical meaning and deserves contemplation. It is withing a black hole that there is a singularity and here lies the meaning. I will be thinking about this one for a while.
April 23rd, 2025 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is quite thought provoking and deep in its philosophical meaning and deserves contemplation. It is withing a black hole that there is a singularity and here lies the meaning. I will be thinking about this one for a while.
April 23rd, 2025 05:30
Self-Immolation
sorenbarrett said:
This poem takes such a somber classical style that reads sadness and tinged with darkness. It echoes in the mind and reverberates in the soul. Most lovely
April 22nd, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
This poem takes such a somber classical style that reads sadness and tinged with darkness. It echoes in the mind and reverberates in the soul. Most lovely
April 22nd, 2025 04:57
The Wings of the Seagull
sorenbarrett said:
So many hidden feelings exposed in metaphor that remain hidden beneath the surface. So poetically said the sadness and tragedy below tranquil images painted in ink. This is a piece of art and a fave
April 21st, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
So many hidden feelings exposed in metaphor that remain hidden beneath the surface. So poetically said the sadness and tragedy below tranquil images painted in ink. This is a piece of art and a fave
April 21st, 2025 04:37
If I Cling to Pride
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning and repulsion from another. Pride prevents change and I hear this told in this work. Nicely said
April 20th, 2025 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning and repulsion from another. Pride prevents change and I hear this told in this work. Nicely said
April 20th, 2025 05:06
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