Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
Like & Love
sorenbarrett said:
Once again wisdom in a poem. The last two lines hit me the hardest and made the poem good to great and a fave. We all see love differently some selfish for what it does to us others for what we can do for others.
July 31st, 2025 06:01
sorenbarrett said:
Once again wisdom in a poem. The last two lines hit me the hardest and made the poem good to great and a fave. We all see love differently some selfish for what it does to us others for what we can do for others.
July 31st, 2025 06:01
How a Good Man Loves
Justina said:
The whole poem is filled with a lightness like breathing. Your poetry is truly the most emotional one I have ever read
July 27th, 2025 11:26
Justina said:
The whole poem is filled with a lightness like breathing. Your poetry is truly the most emotional one I have ever read
July 27th, 2025 11:26
The Unwritten Scripture
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write with a heart warming message, just a shame not all people see it that way, enjoyed the read
July 25th, 2025 15:46
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write with a heart warming message, just a shame not all people see it that way, enjoyed the read
July 25th, 2025 15:46
The Unwritten Scripture
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem with a marvelous message. Why is it that no one can see it? A fave
July 25th, 2025 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem with a marvelous message. Why is it that no one can see it? A fave
July 25th, 2025 14:38
Press Deeper
Damaso said:
Wow friend I really like this text one of my favorites that I read, a very brave and wise text encourages us knowing where the path is. It is very noble to find these acts. Thanks for sharing it. Kind regards
July 18th, 2025 08:47
Damaso said:
Wow friend I really like this text one of my favorites that I read, a very brave and wise text encourages us knowing where the path is. It is very noble to find these acts. Thanks for sharing it. Kind regards
July 18th, 2025 08:47
The Warrior’s Light
ElizabethMoroz said:
A rousing call for resilience and strength and beautiful rhyming structure. Very inspired Thankyou for this piece. Elizabeth
July 16th, 2025 08:11
ElizabethMoroz said:
A rousing call for resilience and strength and beautiful rhyming structure. Very inspired Thankyou for this piece. Elizabeth
July 16th, 2025 08:11
Both, and Neither
arqios said:
This tender ode feels like a heartfelt conversation with the weather; an honest confession that we crave what both nourishes and wounds us. From the first stanza’s naming of the sun to the final image of “one hand burning, one hand wet,” it captures the tension of desiring two opposing forces at once. Reminds me of a personal vent poem written decades ago, about being both and neither. Superb relatability. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 14th, 2025 22:24
arqios said:
This tender ode feels like a heartfelt conversation with the weather; an honest confession that we crave what both nourishes and wounds us. From the first stanza’s naming of the sun to the final image of “one hand burning, one hand wet,” it captures the tension of desiring two opposing forces at once. Reminds me of a personal vent poem written decades ago, about being both and neither. Superb relatability. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 14th, 2025 22:24
Both, and Neither
Poetic Licence said:
We are just pieces waiting to be moved around, enjoyed the read
July 14th, 2025 22:03
Poetic Licence said:
We are just pieces waiting to be moved around, enjoyed the read
July 14th, 2025 22:03
Both, and Neither
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful a metaphor for us as humans pawns in nature\'s game of chess. So well imaged in poetic form and nicely metered. A fave
July 14th, 2025 08:35
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful a metaphor for us as humans pawns in nature\'s game of chess. So well imaged in poetic form and nicely metered. A fave
July 14th, 2025 08:35
Hiruda\'s Bones (ii)
Poetic Licence said:
These are words from a very wise man delivered in beautiful poetic form, some wonderful lines, pleasure to read
July 11th, 2025 06:16
Poetic Licence said:
These are words from a very wise man delivered in beautiful poetic form, some wonderful lines, pleasure to read
July 11th, 2025 06:16
Hiruda\'s Bones (ii)
sorenbarrett said:
Mottakeenur this poem took me from the start. Its images are spectacular and filled with metaphor. Poetic is the term for this poem anything else diminishes it. I simply love it and the flavor it gives of a wise man from a culture different than mine but with whom I feel a kindred spirit. Simply lovely and a fave
July 11th, 2025 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
Mottakeenur this poem took me from the start. Its images are spectacular and filled with metaphor. Poetic is the term for this poem anything else diminishes it. I simply love it and the flavor it gives of a wise man from a culture different than mine but with whom I feel a kindred spirit. Simply lovely and a fave
July 11th, 2025 05:34
Hiruda\'s Bones
Poetic Licence said:
A touch of learning and education for me with this wonderful write, enjoyed the read
July 8th, 2025 08:03
Poetic Licence said:
A touch of learning and education for me with this wonderful write, enjoyed the read
July 8th, 2025 08:03
Hiruda\'s Bones
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has introduced me to some new words and a new story. Very nicely written it has great images and is a wonderful tribute earning a fave
July 8th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has introduced me to some new words and a new story. Very nicely written it has great images and is a wonderful tribute earning a fave
July 8th, 2025 04:16
The Warrior’s Light
NafisaSB said:
this is a message that resonates with me - to be brave in the darkest hour of despair, and hope things will work out
well done
July 7th, 2025 23:15
NafisaSB said:
this is a message that resonates with me - to be brave in the darkest hour of despair, and hope things will work out
well done
July 7th, 2025 23:15
The Warrior’s Light
RSM0812 said:
Great rhyme sceme with interesting imagery and verse. Nice work.
July 6th, 2025 21:23
RSM0812 said:
Great rhyme sceme with interesting imagery and verse. Nice work.
July 6th, 2025 21:23
Evergreen: The Timeless Power of Poetry
Damaso said:
A gem, my friend, excellent. It\'s impossible to stop for a breath before reading on. Heroic, I really liked it! Thanks for sharing! Cheers!
July 6th, 2025 11:37
Damaso said:
A gem, my friend, excellent. It\'s impossible to stop for a breath before reading on. Heroic, I really liked it! Thanks for sharing! Cheers!
July 6th, 2025 11:37
Oh, Valiant Brigade
arqios said:
Reading like a war hymn for the soul; stirring, defiant, and thunder-charged with purpose. It casts its subjects as elemental beings: forged in storms, lit by wildfire, unstoppable as dawn. The imagery is mythic yet personal, turning abstract virtues (truth, courage, perseverance) into sharpened steel and flame. In four escalating stanzas, it summons a call to rise, to burn, to claim destiny not with passivity but with bold, unyielding motion. The final line doesn’t just crown the brigade, it hands them the cosmos.
July 5th, 2025 07:31
arqios said:
Reading like a war hymn for the soul; stirring, defiant, and thunder-charged with purpose. It casts its subjects as elemental beings: forged in storms, lit by wildfire, unstoppable as dawn. The imagery is mythic yet personal, turning abstract virtues (truth, courage, perseverance) into sharpened steel and flame. In four escalating stanzas, it summons a call to rise, to burn, to claim destiny not with passivity but with bold, unyielding motion. The final line doesn’t just crown the brigade, it hands them the cosmos.
July 5th, 2025 07:31
Oh, Valiant Brigade
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written with enticing imagery, if you took the write to mean something else it is quite alarming, enjoyed the read
July 5th, 2025 06:00
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written with enticing imagery, if you took the write to mean something else it is quite alarming, enjoyed the read
July 5th, 2025 06:00
Oh, Valiant Brigade
sorenbarrett said:
Regardless of how you take the meaning the wording is beautiful. Whether literal or metaphoric its imagery is charming. In metaphor it is alarming. Well done and another fave
July 5th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Regardless of how you take the meaning the wording is beautiful. Whether literal or metaphoric its imagery is charming. In metaphor it is alarming. Well done and another fave
July 5th, 2025 04:10
The Warrior’s Light
arqios said:
Your noble poem is a rallying cry to inner strength and self-reliance. It urges our steadfastness in the face of darkness, reminding us that even when all else fades, our inner fire can still burn bright. Let go of what’s lost, rise unshackled, and let your spirit become its own source of light. True power, it suggests, isn’t borrowed but it’s birthed from within. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 4th, 2025 06:27
arqios said:
Your noble poem is a rallying cry to inner strength and self-reliance. It urges our steadfastness in the face of darkness, reminding us that even when all else fades, our inner fire can still burn bright. Let go of what’s lost, rise unshackled, and let your spirit become its own source of light. True power, it suggests, isn’t borrowed but it’s birthed from within. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 4th, 2025 06:27
The Warrior’s Light
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write calling for you to trust yourself and be strong, very enjoyable and positive write
July 4th, 2025 05:32
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write calling for you to trust yourself and be strong, very enjoyable and positive write
July 4th, 2025 05:32
The Warrior’s Light
sorenbarrett said:
A bold poem calling for self reliance and the strength to trust oneself. Moving and most motivating a lovely write.
July 4th, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
A bold poem calling for self reliance and the strength to trust oneself. Moving and most motivating a lovely write.
July 4th, 2025 05:03
Struggle is the Alchemy of Life
arqios said:
The misery of struggle is somehow like the bitter womb waters that surround us even before coming up for air at birth. 🕊🙏🏻
July 3rd, 2025 17:17
arqios said:
The misery of struggle is somehow like the bitter womb waters that surround us even before coming up for air at birth. 🕊🙏🏻
July 3rd, 2025 17:17
Struggle is the Alchemy of Life
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful and beautiful write some solid gold pearls of wisdom, lines that dance off the page, I raise a glass to the relentless dreamer, a pleasure to read
July 3rd, 2025 14:41
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful and beautiful write some solid gold pearls of wisdom, lines that dance off the page, I raise a glass to the relentless dreamer, a pleasure to read
July 3rd, 2025 14:41
Struggle is the Alchemy of Life
sorenbarrett said:
Mottakeenur you have done it again. A magnificent poem of wisdom set in great lines (your youth is ink spilled on the wind, Every brick claims it bears the wall alone) many others as well. Then the jewel decorated with good rhyme. But I must add that although poetry does not feed the poet it feeds others being an unselfish gift. On the impressions it leaves in others unforeseen choices are made and a world that might never have been takes shape. A definite fave
July 3rd, 2025 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
Mottakeenur you have done it again. A magnificent poem of wisdom set in great lines (your youth is ink spilled on the wind, Every brick claims it bears the wall alone) many others as well. Then the jewel decorated with good rhyme. But I must add that although poetry does not feed the poet it feeds others being an unselfish gift. On the impressions it leaves in others unforeseen choices are made and a world that might never have been takes shape. A definite fave
July 3rd, 2025 05:15
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