Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman



THE WORSHIP OF EMPTINESS
orchidee said:

A good write, yet I feel open and vulnerable leaving things, especially my mind, empty.

September 30th, 2019 10:51

TOPSYTURVY SHUNT
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Certainly,πŸ˜πŸ™πŸ˜

September 30th, 2019 09:35

TOPSYTURVY SHUNT
OUTBACK said:

THE \" BANK$TER$ \" MUST = \" GO \" !

September 30th, 2019 07:17

THE WORSHIP OF EMPTINESS
Neville said:

certainly a very interesting statement...

September 30th, 2019 06:00

THE WORSHIP OF EMPTINESS
Michael Edwards said:

I find this really appealing - and intrigueing.

September 30th, 2019 04:04

THE WORLD OF HUMAN BEING
Neville said:

this is a very moving poem indeed.. thank you for sharing it and the accompanying image...

September 28th, 2019 10:31

The Misery of Poor
OUTBACK said:

2 * CURSED WORDS* - THAT - IS - THE CREATOR* & MAINTAINER* of POVERTY* & WARFARE* - AS - A -PROFITABLE* & EXPLOITIVE* - INSTITUTION* ! ( BANKER$ ) & THEIR * PROTECTORS* = ( LAWYER$ ) !!

September 28th, 2019 09:54

The Misery of Poor
Neville said:

well written...

September 28th, 2019 09:48

I Wait For You
orchidee said:

A fine write Mott.


September 28th, 2019 08:06

Khuda Gawah
FineB said:

Hello Mottakeenur,

Love is beautiful! A lovely poem on the power of love!

Keep writing
FineB

May 17th, 2019 04:08

A Good Man Never Lets You Forget How Much He Loves You
FineB said:

Hello Mottakeenur,

A superb write.

Goodness and kindness in a good man is always appreciated especially in today\'s modern somewhat selfish world.

Keep writing FineB

February 23rd, 2019 05:25

Khuda Gawah
Michael Edwards said:

Some read - love the way you weave the words together.

February 13th, 2019 12:26

Khuda Gawah
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Excellent poem!
I really like the messageπŸ’–
Have a great day!
😊✌

February 13th, 2019 10:23

The Misery of Poor
FineB said:

A lovely and poignant poem Mottakeenur.

Thank you.

Poverty is all around us. In London, the number of people sleeping rough in the streets continues to increase

When you see people in prestigious parts of London sleeping rough you ask yourself what is this world coming to?

Keep writing Fine B

February 13th, 2019 09:37

Khuda Gawah
Neville said:

Bollywood or not, this reads like a feature length movie.. a love story of epic proportion........... Neville

February 13th, 2019 08:48

MARTYR
Neville said:

I guess most people feel a similar way about their homeland.. different country, different struggles and different threats.... interesting

February 8th, 2019 17:33

I Wait For You
orchidee said:

Good write M.

February 8th, 2019 15:02

I Wait For You
Neville said:

Translating such a complex poem into any other language than for which it was originally intended can\'t be easy my friend.. particularly when literal translations might prove to be impossible... I think this is a very brave attempt sir. .... Neville

February 8th, 2019 12:24

I Wait For You
Caleb.A said:

nice write - enjoyed.

February 8th, 2019 10:33

I Wait For You
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Sir you become Guru for my poetic inspiration ..Guide by the Side~Thanks a lot for your outstanding experiment!!πŸ’•πŸ–‹πŸ‘πŸ™

February 7th, 2019 20:22

I Wait For You
Michael Edwards said:

This is a superb poem. I would suggest that poems are written to their best advantage exploiting the beauty of the language they are written in. To translate them into another language for which they were not designed whilst maintaining their integrity is, I would suggest, an almost impossible task. Well this reads so well it must be an outstanding work in it\'s mother tongue.

February 7th, 2019 14:26

I Wait For You
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Mam please say some words for my friend Safik Uz Zaman..he would like to hear from you...

February 7th, 2019 10:17

I Wait For You
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

πŸ’–πŸ’•πŸ™πŸ–‹πŸ‘

February 7th, 2019 10:04

I Wait For You
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Thanks a lot for your compliment!

February 7th, 2019 09:40

I Wait For You
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Great poem! Motakeenur
It\'s deep longing that can
be for many areas of life!
such beauty in the words.
I love it, great translation friendπŸ’–
Thank you for sharing & doing this work.
Really like your picture, intrepid, super cool...πŸ‘
Have a great evening!
😊✌

February 7th, 2019 09:27

THE TALL BUT HOLLOW INSTITUTIONS
Neville said:

an interesting, presumably autobiographical tale told well.. your words captivated me throughout the journey of your learning and love for poetry.... thank you... Neville

February 7th, 2019 07:44

The Misery of Poor
Caleb.A said:

Very well written, you have translated what to me seems like a personal struggle - great read!

February 1st, 2019 08:21

The Misery of Poor
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Sir,stay connected ...hope I will get much more appreciation from your kind heart!!

February 1st, 2019 07:59

The Misery of Poor
Diamond said:

Much respect to the heart that birthed this \"Anubhooti\"!

January 31st, 2019 13:22

The Misery of Poor
Neville said:

thoroughly enjoyed but very sad

January 31st, 2019 13:15

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