Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
The World of Human Being
Neville said:
this is a very moving poem indeed.. thank you for sharing it and the accompanying image...
September 28th, 2019 10:31
Neville said:
this is a very moving poem indeed.. thank you for sharing it and the accompanying image...
September 28th, 2019 10:31
Khuda Gawah
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur,
Love is beautiful! A lovely poem on the power of love!
Keep writing
FineB
May 17th, 2019 04:08
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur,
Love is beautiful! A lovely poem on the power of love!
Keep writing
FineB
May 17th, 2019 04:08
A Good Man Never Lets You Forget How Much He Loves You
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur,
A superb write.
Goodness and kindness in a good man is always appreciated especially in today\'s modern somewhat selfish world.
Keep writing FineB
February 23rd, 2019 05:25
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur,
A superb write.
Goodness and kindness in a good man is always appreciated especially in today\'s modern somewhat selfish world.
Keep writing FineB
February 23rd, 2019 05:25
Khuda Gawah
Michael Edwards said:
Some read - love the way you weave the words together.
February 13th, 2019 12:26
Michael Edwards said:
Some read - love the way you weave the words together.
February 13th, 2019 12:26
The Misery of Poor
FineB said:
A lovely and poignant poem Mottakeenur.
Thank you.
Poverty is all around us. In London, the number of people sleeping rough in the streets continues to increase
When you see people in prestigious parts of London sleeping rough you ask yourself what is this world coming to?
Keep writing Fine B
February 13th, 2019 09:37
FineB said:
A lovely and poignant poem Mottakeenur.
Thank you.
Poverty is all around us. In London, the number of people sleeping rough in the streets continues to increase
When you see people in prestigious parts of London sleeping rough you ask yourself what is this world coming to?
Keep writing Fine B
February 13th, 2019 09:37
Khuda Gawah
Neville said:
Bollywood or not, this reads like a feature length movie.. a love story of epic proportion........... Neville
February 13th, 2019 08:48
Neville said:
Bollywood or not, this reads like a feature length movie.. a love story of epic proportion........... Neville
February 13th, 2019 08:48
I Wait for You
Neville said:
Translating such a complex poem into any other language than for which it was originally intended can\'t be easy my friend.. particularly when literal translations might prove to be impossible... I think this is a very brave attempt sir. .... Neville
February 8th, 2019 12:24
Neville said:
Translating such a complex poem into any other language than for which it was originally intended can\'t be easy my friend.. particularly when literal translations might prove to be impossible... I think this is a very brave attempt sir. .... Neville
February 8th, 2019 12:24
I Wait for You
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Sir you become Guru for my poetic inspiration ..Guide by the Side~Thanks a lot for your outstanding experiment!!💕🖋👏🙏
February 7th, 2019 20:22
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Sir you become Guru for my poetic inspiration ..Guide by the Side~Thanks a lot for your outstanding experiment!!💕🖋👏🙏
February 7th, 2019 20:22
I Wait for You
Michael Edwards said:
This is a superb poem. I would suggest that poems are written to their best advantage exploiting the beauty of the language they are written in. To translate them into another language for which they were not designed whilst maintaining their integrity is, I would suggest, an almost impossible task. Well this reads so well it must be an outstanding work in it\'s mother tongue.
February 7th, 2019 14:26
Michael Edwards said:
This is a superb poem. I would suggest that poems are written to their best advantage exploiting the beauty of the language they are written in. To translate them into another language for which they were not designed whilst maintaining their integrity is, I would suggest, an almost impossible task. Well this reads so well it must be an outstanding work in it\'s mother tongue.
February 7th, 2019 14:26
I Wait for You
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Mam please say some words for my friend Safik Uz Zaman..he would like to hear from you...
February 7th, 2019 10:17
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Mam please say some words for my friend Safik Uz Zaman..he would like to hear from you...
February 7th, 2019 10:17
The Tall But Hollow Institutions
Neville said:
an interesting, presumably autobiographical tale told well.. your words captivated me throughout the journey of your learning and love for poetry.... thank you... Neville
February 7th, 2019 07:44
Neville said:
an interesting, presumably autobiographical tale told well.. your words captivated me throughout the journey of your learning and love for poetry.... thank you... Neville
February 7th, 2019 07:44
The Misery of Poor
Caleb.A said:
Very well written, you have translated what to me seems like a personal struggle - great read!
February 1st, 2019 08:21
Caleb.A said:
Very well written, you have translated what to me seems like a personal struggle - great read!
February 1st, 2019 08:21
The Misery of Poor
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Sir,stay connected ...hope I will get much more appreciation from your kind heart!!
February 1st, 2019 07:59
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Sir,stay connected ...hope I will get much more appreciation from your kind heart!!
February 1st, 2019 07:59
The Misery of Poor
Michael Edwards said:
Superbly expressed - a great write.
January 29th, 2019 14:12
Michael Edwards said:
Superbly expressed - a great write.
January 29th, 2019 14:12
The Misery of Poor
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
☺Thanks a lot for your precious comment!💕🖋💖
January 29th, 2019 11:53
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
☺Thanks a lot for your precious comment!💕🖋💖
January 29th, 2019 11:53
A Good Man Never Lets You Forget How Much He Loves You
psychofemale said:
Such an intriguing write. Loved it :)
January 27th, 2019 18:15
psychofemale said:
Such an intriguing write. Loved it :)
January 27th, 2019 18:15
A Good Man Never Lets You Forget How Much He Loves You
Michael Edwards said:
great to see your pen at work again. A great read.
January 27th, 2019 07:33
Michael Edwards said:
great to see your pen at work again. A great read.
January 27th, 2019 07:33
A Good Man Never Lets You Forget How Much He Loves You
Neville said:
a good poem & true
January 27th, 2019 05:00
Neville said:
a good poem & true
January 27th, 2019 05:00
Charity Begins at Home
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a fine society and social poem, u express and describe in a very nice rich way. The scenes are interestingly focused here. Thumbs up.
April 30th, 2018 00:00
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a fine society and social poem, u express and describe in a very nice rich way. The scenes are interestingly focused here. Thumbs up.
April 30th, 2018 00:00
Sometime\'s It\'s Nice Just to Hear It Out Loud:Aai Yo Bacha
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A wonderful sentimental epic, where u show love ,appreciation so poetically and with imagery. Kudos. Loved your moony wording.
Nice to read from u again, and Pleez do review, give your thoughts as to my newest poem too.
April 17th, 2018 06:59
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A wonderful sentimental epic, where u show love ,appreciation so poetically and with imagery. Kudos. Loved your moony wording.
Nice to read from u again, and Pleez do review, give your thoughts as to my newest poem too.
April 17th, 2018 06:59
Sometime\'s It\'s Nice Just to Hear It Out Loud:Aai Yo Bacha
FineB said:
A beautiful poem Mottakeenur.
You have a way with words.
Keep writing
FineB
April 14th, 2018 05:37
FineB said:
A beautiful poem Mottakeenur.
You have a way with words.
Keep writing
FineB
April 14th, 2018 05:37
Sometime\'s It\'s Nice Just to Hear It Out Loud:Aai Yo Bacha
Michael Edwards said:
Love the flow of this and the use of language - great write Mottakeenur
April 1st, 2018 00:24
Michael Edwards said:
Love the flow of this and the use of language - great write Mottakeenur
April 1st, 2018 00:24
The World of Human Being
FineB said:
Thank you Mottankeenur.
A wonderful poem highlighting Human Nature.
Sadly mankind is not infallible.
Keep writing
FineB
March 23rd, 2018 07:10
FineB said:
Thank you Mottankeenur.
A wonderful poem highlighting Human Nature.
Sadly mankind is not infallible.
Keep writing
FineB
March 23rd, 2018 07:10
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