Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
Charity Begins at Home
FredPeyer said:
You said it, MR, and you said it quite well! Charity does begin at home. If more people would realize that and do something about it, all our lives would be improved.
February 18th, 2018 13:21
FredPeyer said:
You said it, MR, and you said it quite well! Charity does begin at home. If more people would realize that and do something about it, all our lives would be improved.
February 18th, 2018 13:21
Daffodil
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur,
What a stunningly beautiful poem full of incredible imagery.
An amazing write!
Keep writing
FineB
February 16th, 2018 09:46
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur,
What a stunningly beautiful poem full of incredible imagery.
An amazing write!
Keep writing
FineB
February 16th, 2018 09:46
Charity Begins at Home
Lorna said:
What a lovely lovely poem Mottakeenur. You have a wonderful heart.
February 16th, 2018 06:58
Lorna said:
What a lovely lovely poem Mottakeenur. You have a wonderful heart.
February 16th, 2018 06:58
The Analysis of Relationship
FredPeyer said:
Well written, MR! And yes, love can be simple, or very complicated!
February 15th, 2018 16:38
FredPeyer said:
Well written, MR! And yes, love can be simple, or very complicated!
February 15th, 2018 16:38
Daffodil
Seven said:
Now that poetry is natural for you, any thoughts on a play or novella? You truly have a gift, I wonder how deep the pen will write! Until then long live the poetic voice.
February 14th, 2018 23:13
Seven said:
Now that poetry is natural for you, any thoughts on a play or novella? You truly have a gift, I wonder how deep the pen will write! Until then long live the poetic voice.
February 14th, 2018 23:13
The Analysis of Relationship
Seven said:
Must agree with Lorna on the stand out lines and image that it solicits. In fact the last lines also sound like an intro to another poem!
February 14th, 2018 23:08
Seven said:
Must agree with Lorna on the stand out lines and image that it solicits. In fact the last lines also sound like an intro to another poem!
February 14th, 2018 23:08
The Analysis of Relationship
Lorna said:
Very beautiful lines: Why does the Tajmahal of dreamy land
break into the pieces of scattered dream!!
February 14th, 2018 16:59
Lorna said:
Very beautiful lines: Why does the Tajmahal of dreamy land
break into the pieces of scattered dream!!
February 14th, 2018 16:59
Daffodil
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
stunningly beautiful :-) :-) i loved every line , i found it so nice , how you mentioned the flowers dancing like a hip hop dance, can can dancing and the red horses. you have given those flowers a voice, a movement ... a feeling . really enjoyed reading this , such a lovely piece!
February 13th, 2018 11:20
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
stunningly beautiful :-) :-) i loved every line , i found it so nice , how you mentioned the flowers dancing like a hip hop dance, can can dancing and the red horses. you have given those flowers a voice, a movement ... a feeling . really enjoyed reading this , such a lovely piece!
February 13th, 2018 11:20
Like Hiruda
Lorna said:
Thank you for teaching us about Hiruda - I will go and look for him. Your poem reminds me that I feel poems are a way of throwing ourselves into space and even if no one ever reads them, they are parts of us - out there somewhere.....
February 11th, 2018 10:26
Lorna said:
Thank you for teaching us about Hiruda - I will go and look for him. Your poem reminds me that I feel poems are a way of throwing ourselves into space and even if no one ever reads them, they are parts of us - out there somewhere.....
February 11th, 2018 10:26
Like Hiruda
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thanks for your precious comment!...You can read Hiruda\'s English translation on the site \'POEM HUNTER \' ..first go to the site on net and search by Hiruda\'s full name Hiren Bhattacharyya...Thanks once again for your Kind words!!
February 11th, 2018 06:29
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thanks for your precious comment!...You can read Hiruda\'s English translation on the site \'POEM HUNTER \' ..first go to the site on net and search by Hiruda\'s full name Hiren Bhattacharyya...Thanks once again for your Kind words!!
February 11th, 2018 06:29
Like Hiruda
Michael Edwards said:
I always enjoy your postings - and you\'ve whetted my appetite for Hiruda - must see if I can find any translations although they don\'t always translate into other languages that well .
February 11th, 2018 06:19
Michael Edwards said:
I always enjoy your postings - and you\'ve whetted my appetite for Hiruda - must see if I can find any translations although they don\'t always translate into other languages that well .
February 11th, 2018 06:19
Oracle
Seven said:
Worth the wait. As Kat said you are a unique talent. As Michael said, always a joy. Alliteration without overdoing it. Internal rhymes when needed. Smooth flow and expansive vocabulary! Well done.
February 3rd, 2018 22:29
Seven said:
Worth the wait. As Kat said you are a unique talent. As Michael said, always a joy. Alliteration without overdoing it. Internal rhymes when needed. Smooth flow and expansive vocabulary! Well done.
February 3rd, 2018 22:29
Oracle
FredPeyer said:
Well written, like how you bring all the different Gods, the oracle, storms, and the Universe under one \'roof\'! I do hope you will succeed to be \'bold like CC\'!
February 3rd, 2018 13:21
FredPeyer said:
Well written, like how you bring all the different Gods, the oracle, storms, and the Universe under one \'roof\'! I do hope you will succeed to be \'bold like CC\'!
February 3rd, 2018 13:21
No, No, I am not a Lonely Being Anymore
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur.
The world of poets is a wonderful world to belong to.
Thank you for your insight.
Lovely.
Keep writing
FineB
January 31st, 2018 04:23
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur.
The world of poets is a wonderful world to belong to.
Thank you for your insight.
Lovely.
Keep writing
FineB
January 31st, 2018 04:23
No, No, I am not a Lonely Being Anymore
Aislinn Wilson said:
Wow this was really unique construction! Strong write!
\"Pierces the crafty,greedy,exploiter and corpulent\'s stomach\"
Was by far my favourite line, though followed up so well
January 29th, 2018 13:47
Aislinn Wilson said:
Wow this was really unique construction! Strong write!
\"Pierces the crafty,greedy,exploiter and corpulent\'s stomach\"
Was by far my favourite line, though followed up so well
January 29th, 2018 13:47
No, No, I am not a Lonely Being Anymore
Michael Edwards said:
I know absolutely nothing about Eminem but I do know this is yet another fine write.
January 29th, 2018 08:38
Michael Edwards said:
I know absolutely nothing about Eminem but I do know this is yet another fine write.
January 29th, 2018 08:38
Crocodile Tears
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
interesting i like this ! i love how you have expressed yourself throughout
January 29th, 2018 07:34
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
interesting i like this ! i love how you have expressed yourself throughout
January 29th, 2018 07:34
No, No, I am not a Lonely Being Anymore
Lorna said:
Poetry is a safe place I think.........and doesn\'t hurt anyone hopefully.
January 29th, 2018 06:49
Lorna said:
Poetry is a safe place I think.........and doesn\'t hurt anyone hopefully.
January 29th, 2018 06:49
Poet Identity
FredPeyer said:
You are what you write - you write what you are!
Love this poem, MR!
January 29th, 2018 02:23
FredPeyer said:
You are what you write - you write what you are!
Love this poem, MR!
January 29th, 2018 02:23
Poet Identity
Lorna said:
Very nice! And I love that it comes to us all the way from India....... makes me feel as if I have traveled even before breakfast!
January 28th, 2018 05:42
Lorna said:
Very nice! And I love that it comes to us all the way from India....... makes me feel as if I have traveled even before breakfast!
January 28th, 2018 05:42
Poet Identity
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
well expressed :-)
January 28th, 2018 05:25
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
well expressed :-)
January 28th, 2018 05:25
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