Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
Voice of the Sky
sorenbarrett said:
Words of an oath in this poem. Full of vivid images it flows. Well done
May 1st, 2025 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Words of an oath in this poem. Full of vivid images it flows. Well done
May 1st, 2025 04:59
False Tears
sorenbarrett said:
A fruit once green then ripened now rots on the ground. A very sad poem, sad because it is so common. So much wasted fruit. Lovely write a fave
April 30th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
A fruit once green then ripened now rots on the ground. A very sad poem, sad because it is so common. So much wasted fruit. Lovely write a fave
April 30th, 2025 03:52
Arbor Mundi (The World Tree)
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem drew me in from beginning to end. You tell a tale which can be seen from many angles both metaphor and symbolical language. The tale of the world tree connects humanity through out its rich cultural and historical archives. Thanks for sharing your piece, much enjoyed the read!
April 28th, 2025 02:23
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem drew me in from beginning to end. You tell a tale which can be seen from many angles both metaphor and symbolical language. The tale of the world tree connects humanity through out its rich cultural and historical archives. Thanks for sharing your piece, much enjoyed the read!
April 28th, 2025 02:23
The Thermosphere is Descending
sorenbarrett said:
I have read this several times and with rereading it mellows and grows softer. It begins strong and harsh but ends in a soft acceptance. Lovely
April 27th, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
I have read this several times and with rereading it mellows and grows softer. It begins strong and harsh but ends in a soft acceptance. Lovely
April 27th, 2025 05:10
War is No Solution (Nor Was It Ever Just)
Doggerel Dave said:
A rich write. Any solutions?
April 26th, 2025 17:23
Doggerel Dave said:
A rich write. Any solutions?
April 26th, 2025 17:23
War is No Solution (Nor Was It Ever Just)
sorenbarrett said:
Such powerful words to forge nuclear peace. A most lovely write about a subject that remains unresolved despite the years, deaths and destruction.
April 26th, 2025 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
Such powerful words to forge nuclear peace. A most lovely write about a subject that remains unresolved despite the years, deaths and destruction.
April 26th, 2025 05:20
Equilibrium
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the message woven in these words. The wording and rhyme were excellent and conveyed the message well. We are all nature brothers in arms so to speak in our voyage through time and space. Most lovely
April 25th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the message woven in these words. The wording and rhyme were excellent and conveyed the message well. We are all nature brothers in arms so to speak in our voyage through time and space. Most lovely
April 25th, 2025 03:49
The Wings of the Seagull
RSM0812 said:
I favd a few poems today but this one is my favorite. Every line has an image. Every word evokes an emotion. What a great write.
April 23rd, 2025 06:48
RSM0812 said:
I favd a few poems today but this one is my favorite. Every line has an image. Every word evokes an emotion. What a great write.
April 23rd, 2025 06:48
Ode to the Void
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is quite thought provoking and deep in its philosophical meaning and deserves contemplation. It is withing a black hole that there is a singularity and here lies the meaning. I will be thinking about this one for a while.
April 23rd, 2025 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is quite thought provoking and deep in its philosophical meaning and deserves contemplation. It is withing a black hole that there is a singularity and here lies the meaning. I will be thinking about this one for a while.
April 23rd, 2025 05:30
Self-Immolation
sorenbarrett said:
This poem takes such a somber classical style that reads sadness and tinged with darkness. It echoes in the mind and reverberates in the soul. Most lovely
April 22nd, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
This poem takes such a somber classical style that reads sadness and tinged with darkness. It echoes in the mind and reverberates in the soul. Most lovely
April 22nd, 2025 04:57
The Wings of the Seagull
sorenbarrett said:
So many hidden feelings exposed in metaphor that remain hidden beneath the surface. So poetically said the sadness and tragedy below tranquil images painted in ink. This is a piece of art and a fave
April 21st, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
So many hidden feelings exposed in metaphor that remain hidden beneath the surface. So poetically said the sadness and tragedy below tranquil images painted in ink. This is a piece of art and a fave
April 21st, 2025 04:37
If I Cling to Pride
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning and repulsion from another. Pride prevents change and I hear this told in this work. Nicely said
April 20th, 2025 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning and repulsion from another. Pride prevents change and I hear this told in this work. Nicely said
April 20th, 2025 05:06
Water
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful and deep message. \"Nothing in the world is softer and weaker than water; But, for attacking the hard and strong, there is nothing like it! For nothing can take its place. That the weak overcomes the strong, and the soft overcomes the hard, This is something known by all, but practiced by none.\" Tao te ching. Love the poem
April 19th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful and deep message. \"Nothing in the world is softer and weaker than water; But, for attacking the hard and strong, there is nothing like it! For nothing can take its place. That the weak overcomes the strong, and the soft overcomes the hard, This is something known by all, but practiced by none.\" Tao te ching. Love the poem
April 19th, 2025 04:33
Wonder
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write that makes you ask those deeper questions, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 05:03
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write that makes you ask those deeper questions, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 05:03
Wonder
sorenbarrett said:
In this small jewel there is much that goes unseen. Deeper meaning and much to ponder. A very thought provoking poem framed in wonderful rhyme as well. A fave
April 18th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
In this small jewel there is much that goes unseen. Deeper meaning and much to ponder. A very thought provoking poem framed in wonderful rhyme as well. A fave
April 18th, 2025 04:24
Where did the enemy lurk?
Poetic Licence said:
Wounds of old now becoming the enemy, nicely written
April 17th, 2025 01:17
Poetic Licence said:
Wounds of old now becoming the enemy, nicely written
April 17th, 2025 01:17
Where did the enemy lurk?
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words. Plundered by one\'s own no deeper wound. Gunpowder does not have that power. Very nicely written
April 16th, 2025 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words. Plundered by one\'s own no deeper wound. Gunpowder does not have that power. Very nicely written
April 16th, 2025 14:22
The Distance
NafisaSB said:
and perhaps, it may come in an instant too - all the best, always
April 15th, 2025 00:02
NafisaSB said:
and perhaps, it may come in an instant too - all the best, always
April 15th, 2025 00:02
The Anatomy of a Broken Heart
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of betrayal by their own beliefs, very well expressed and written
April 14th, 2025 10:01
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of betrayal by their own beliefs, very well expressed and written
April 14th, 2025 10:01
The Anatomy of a Broken Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of betrayal not only by another but by ones own beliefs. A hard and sad read. Well worded and constructed it sends its message well
April 14th, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of betrayal not only by another but by ones own beliefs. A hard and sad read. Well worded and constructed it sends its message well
April 14th, 2025 05:10
The Distance
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever write, saying I know I will smile again but it might take a bit longer than tomorrow, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 05:16
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever write, saying I know I will smile again but it might take a bit longer than tomorrow, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 05:16
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