Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
Crocodile Tears
FredPeyer said:
Well written, M, with some beautiful word choices!
January 25th, 2018 20:35
FredPeyer said:
Well written, M, with some beautiful word choices!
January 25th, 2018 20:35
Crocodile Tears
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur.
Life is full of tearful moments.
A beautiful poem.
I like the description of tears as \'beautious dew particles.\'
Keep writing
FineB
January 25th, 2018 10:00
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur.
Life is full of tearful moments.
A beautiful poem.
I like the description of tears as \'beautious dew particles.\'
Keep writing
FineB
January 25th, 2018 10:00
Rhythm
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i really do like this .. a very good piece of writing , the first line pulled me in \'\'riding ever inside a pencil \'\' interesting wording here which i very much like. that line just makes me think of how there is so much energy in words, and a pencil or pen lets us speak those words, writing for me is a way to soothe that pain , to distract from the bad , to let our emotions out and to speak what we want to say
January 21st, 2018 10:32
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i really do like this .. a very good piece of writing , the first line pulled me in \'\'riding ever inside a pencil \'\' interesting wording here which i very much like. that line just makes me think of how there is so much energy in words, and a pencil or pen lets us speak those words, writing for me is a way to soothe that pain , to distract from the bad , to let our emotions out and to speak what we want to say
January 21st, 2018 10:32
The Luit of Dreamy Land
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
you have a lovely way with words, you really do .. this is very lovely
January 21st, 2018 10:25
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
you have a lovely way with words, you really do .. this is very lovely
January 21st, 2018 10:25
We Can All Grow with Poetry All The Time
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i love this .. writing poetry is in itself an acheivement , for sure and if we acheive nothiing else in our life then poetry will always be there lol ! there are many narrow minded people out there... so true. this is a nice piece of writing . personally i sometimes feel i struggle to feel i acheive much in life but atleast i can write poetry and people like what i read, thats something anyhow
January 21st, 2018 10:23
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i love this .. writing poetry is in itself an acheivement , for sure and if we acheive nothiing else in our life then poetry will always be there lol ! there are many narrow minded people out there... so true. this is a nice piece of writing . personally i sometimes feel i struggle to feel i acheive much in life but atleast i can write poetry and people like what i read, thats something anyhow
January 21st, 2018 10:23
Foreseeing
Michael Edwards said:
Another great poem - with such imaginative use of language.
January 21st, 2018 07:24
Michael Edwards said:
Another great poem - with such imaginative use of language.
January 21st, 2018 07:24
Let\'s Go to the Heart
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i really like this ...enjoyed reading .. there is never such a thing as being too imaginative lol imagination is great ! you have talent..
January 21st, 2018 06:49
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i really like this ...enjoyed reading .. there is never such a thing as being too imaginative lol imagination is great ! you have talent..
January 21st, 2018 06:49
Foreseeing
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i guess maybe your mother was right lol .. your words are very beautiful .. what a lovely tender poem :-) enjoyed reading this
January 21st, 2018 06:46
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i guess maybe your mother was right lol .. your words are very beautiful .. what a lovely tender poem :-) enjoyed reading this
January 21st, 2018 06:46
A Big Question
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur.
An excellent poem.
You are a good writer.
Keep writing
FineB
January 20th, 2018 15:55
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur.
An excellent poem.
You are a good writer.
Keep writing
FineB
January 20th, 2018 15:55
Poetry and A Smile of Honesty
Seven said:
Easy to tell this came from a real place. Even your comments regarding this piece flow like poetry.
January 17th, 2018 14:15
Seven said:
Easy to tell this came from a real place. Even your comments regarding this piece flow like poetry.
January 17th, 2018 14:15
A Big Question
Seven said:
Always opening up creative concepts in unique ways. The flow is natural and not over done.
January 17th, 2018 14:11
Seven said:
Always opening up creative concepts in unique ways. The flow is natural and not over done.
January 17th, 2018 14:11
Woman
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is a really interestingly written poem, the concept comes through strong. I love it
January 17th, 2018 13:44
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is a really interestingly written poem, the concept comes through strong. I love it
January 17th, 2018 13:44
A Big Question
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I always expect atleast a constructive comment from you...that exhilarate my rhythm in writing!Sir,Now you become the mentor of my writing world!
January 17th, 2018 12:43
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I always expect atleast a constructive comment from you...that exhilarate my rhythm in writing!Sir,Now you become the mentor of my writing world!
January 17th, 2018 12:43
A Big Question
Michael Edwards said:
Great thought provoking piece M - I continue to admire your style.
January 17th, 2018 12:33
Michael Edwards said:
Great thought provoking piece M - I continue to admire your style.
January 17th, 2018 12:33
Some Stanzas on Poetry and Spontaneity
Aislinn Wilson said:
Your style and organization create the sense of falling or stepping to a beat. It\'s fantastic and beautiful, I\'m so glad to have been able to read it
January 15th, 2018 21:29
Aislinn Wilson said:
Your style and organization create the sense of falling or stepping to a beat. It\'s fantastic and beautiful, I\'m so glad to have been able to read it
January 15th, 2018 21:29
Some Stanzas on Poetry and Spontaneity
Michael Edwards said:
I just love these - super elegant stanzas - congrats M
January 15th, 2018 07:37
Michael Edwards said:
I just love these - super elegant stanzas - congrats M
January 15th, 2018 07:37
Another One
Fay Slimm. said:
Keep that ink flowing as poetry can by its power change our lives. Never give up on your dreams dear M.
January 11th, 2018 13:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Keep that ink flowing as poetry can by its power change our lives. Never give up on your dreams dear M.
January 11th, 2018 13:31
Another One
Seven said:
This is a great commentary on society. This is also a message to the illegally wealthy; it is better to be honest with less than dishonest with more.
January 11th, 2018 11:53
Seven said:
This is a great commentary on society. This is also a message to the illegally wealthy; it is better to be honest with less than dishonest with more.
January 11th, 2018 11:53
Another One
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve read this several times and it just flows - keep writing M
January 11th, 2018 11:42
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve read this several times and it just flows - keep writing M
January 11th, 2018 11:42
Another One
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur for a brilliant write.
We must not give up on our dreams.
Kèep writing in 2018
Fine B
January 11th, 2018 10:55
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur for a brilliant write.
We must not give up on our dreams.
Kèep writing in 2018
Fine B
January 11th, 2018 10:55
Love is Lovely
Seven said:
I enjoy how you can say so much without being wordy. The point is made but not over done.
January 8th, 2018 23:10
Seven said:
I enjoy how you can say so much without being wordy. The point is made but not over done.
January 8th, 2018 23:10
Let\'s Go to the Heart
Seven said:
On the re-read, this piece still carries alot of weight. The knowledge of the content shines through.
January 8th, 2018 23:06
Seven said:
On the re-read, this piece still carries alot of weight. The knowledge of the content shines through.
January 8th, 2018 23:06
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