Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman



Crocodile Tears
FredPeyer said:

Well written, M, with some beautiful word choices!

January 25th, 2018 20:35

Crocodile Tears
Michael Edwards said:

A grand work M

January 25th, 2018 12:17

Crocodile Tears
FineB said:

Thank you Mottakeenur.

Life is full of tearful moments.

A beautiful poem.

I like the description of tears as \'beautious dew particles.\'

Keep writing
FineB

January 25th, 2018 10:00

Rhythm
Caring dove said:

i really do like this .. a very good piece of writing , the first line pulled me in \'\'riding ever inside a pencil \'\' interesting wording here which i very much like. that line just makes me think of how there is so much energy in words, and a pencil or pen lets us speak those words, writing for me is a way to soothe that pain , to distract from the bad , to let our emotions out and to speak what we want to say

January 21st, 2018 10:32

The Luit of Dreamy Land
Caring dove said:

you have a lovely way with words, you really do .. this is very lovely

January 21st, 2018 10:25

We Can All Grow with Poetry All The Time
Caring dove said:

i love this .. writing poetry is in itself an acheivement , for sure and if we acheive nothiing else in our life then poetry will always be there lol ! there are many narrow minded people out there... so true. this is a nice piece of writing . personally i sometimes feel i struggle to feel i acheive much in life but atleast i can write poetry and people like what i read, thats something anyhow

January 21st, 2018 10:23

Foreseeing
Lorna said:

Very inspirational! You are a force for good!

January 21st, 2018 07:34

Foreseeing
Michael Edwards said:

Another great poem - with such imaginative use of language.

January 21st, 2018 07:24

Let\'s Go to the Heart
Caring dove said:

i really like this ...enjoyed reading .. there is never such a thing as being too imaginative lol imagination is great ! you have talent..

January 21st, 2018 06:49

Foreseeing
Caring dove said:

i guess maybe your mother was right lol .. your words are very beautiful .. what a lovely tender poem :-) enjoyed reading this

January 21st, 2018 06:46

A Big Question
FineB said:

Hello Mottakeenur.

An excellent poem.

You are a good writer.

Keep writing
FineB

January 20th, 2018 15:55

Poetry and A Smile of Honesty
Seven said:

Easy to tell this came from a real place. Even your comments regarding this piece flow like poetry.

January 17th, 2018 14:15

A Big Question
Seven said:

Always opening up creative concepts in unique ways. The flow is natural and not over done.

January 17th, 2018 14:11

Woman
Aislinn Wilson said:

This is a really interestingly written poem, the concept comes through strong. I love it

January 17th, 2018 13:44

A Big Question
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

I always expect atleast a constructive comment from you...that exhilarate my rhythm in writing!Sir,Now you become the mentor of my writing world!

January 17th, 2018 12:43

A Big Question
Michael Edwards said:

Great thought provoking piece M - I continue to admire your style.

January 17th, 2018 12:33

Some Stanzas on Poetry and Spontaneity
Aislinn Wilson said:

Your style and organization create the sense of falling or stepping to a beat. It\'s fantastic and beautiful, I\'m so glad to have been able to read it

January 15th, 2018 21:29

Some Stanzas on Poetry and Spontaneity
Tony36 said:

Awesome

January 15th, 2018 09:13

Some Stanzas on Poetry and Spontaneity
Michael Edwards said:

I just love these - super elegant stanzas - congrats M

January 15th, 2018 07:37

Another One
Fay Slimm. said:

Keep that ink flowing as poetry can by its power change our lives. Never give up on your dreams dear M.

January 11th, 2018 13:31

Another One
Seven said:

This is a great commentary on society. This is also a message to the illegally wealthy; it is better to be honest with less than dishonest with more.


January 11th, 2018 11:53

Another One
Michael Edwards said:

I\'ve read this several times and it just flows - keep writing M

January 11th, 2018 11:42

Another One
FineB said:

Thank you Mottakeenur for a brilliant write.
We must not give up on our dreams.

Kèep writing in 2018
Fine B

January 11th, 2018 10:55

Love is Lovely
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Still appreciable your comment!

January 9th, 2018 09:36

The Landscape of Poenciana
Seven said:

I still love it!

January 8th, 2018 23:12

Love is Lovely
Seven said:

I enjoy how you can say so much without being wordy. The point is made but not over done.

January 8th, 2018 23:10

Let\'s Go to the Heart
Seven said:

On the re-read, this piece still carries alot of weight. The knowledge of the content shines through.

January 8th, 2018 23:06

Woman
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

I cannot but admire your comment!

January 6th, 2018 10:38

Woman
Seven said:

Even on the re-read still very compelling.

January 5th, 2018 22:21

You Wash Me Down
Seven said:

Chapbook? Until then I admire your pen.

January 5th, 2018 22:19

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