Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
The World of Human Being
Michael Edwards said:
Missed this first time round - man has the ability to be the noblest of all beasts but why does he so often abuse it? Super work.
March 21st, 2018 04:28
Michael Edwards said:
Missed this first time round - man has the ability to be the noblest of all beasts but why does he so often abuse it? Super work.
March 21st, 2018 04:28
The World of Human Being
Lorna said:
Oh Mottakeenur - there is so much sadness in the world mostly I think from \"greed\" and \"religion\" - and it\'s nice that you still think man is the best of creatures. The photo is beautiful.......
March 19th, 2018 02:57
Lorna said:
Oh Mottakeenur - there is so much sadness in the world mostly I think from \"greed\" and \"religion\" - and it\'s nice that you still think man is the best of creatures. The photo is beautiful.......
March 19th, 2018 02:57
The Great Poetry Or the Highest Part of Life
FineB said:
Hi Mottakeenur,
Hope all is well with you?
A great poem!
Poetry is indeed a most beautful art form!
Keep writing
FineB
March 7th, 2018 08:07
FineB said:
Hi Mottakeenur,
Hope all is well with you?
A great poem!
Poetry is indeed a most beautful art form!
Keep writing
FineB
March 7th, 2018 08:07
The Tall But Hollow Institutions
Saima said:
A really powerful poem! Nice write :)
March 4th, 2018 13:39
Saima said:
A really powerful poem! Nice write :)
March 4th, 2018 13:39
The Tall But Hollow Institutions
FineB said:
Hello
Mottakeenur,
Long time no speak. A wonderful poem. Thought provoking, interesting and a brilliant good write!
Well Done!
Keep writing
Fine B
March 1st, 2018 09:54
FineB said:
Hello
Mottakeenur,
Long time no speak. A wonderful poem. Thought provoking, interesting and a brilliant good write!
Well Done!
Keep writing
Fine B
March 1st, 2018 09:54
The Tall But Hollow Institutions
Michael Edwards said:
I read this through twice such is the strength of it - a powerful write of your difficult journey and it strikes home with me - may your chosen journey continue.
February 27th, 2018 06:02
Michael Edwards said:
I read this through twice such is the strength of it - a powerful write of your difficult journey and it strikes home with me - may your chosen journey continue.
February 27th, 2018 06:02
The Tall But Hollow Institutions
Lorna said:
You have played the orchestra of our hearts Mottakeenur.......
February 27th, 2018 05:19
Lorna said:
You have played the orchestra of our hearts Mottakeenur.......
February 27th, 2018 05:19
The Great Poetry Or the Highest Part of Life
FredPeyer said:
Well written. Like the line \'I often hear the tunes of poetry\'. Poetry IS music!
February 20th, 2018 21:41
FredPeyer said:
Well written. Like the line \'I often hear the tunes of poetry\'. Poetry IS music!
February 20th, 2018 21:41
The Great Poetry Or the Highest Part of Life
Lorna said:
I love you holding the forefinger of the poetical world! Beautiful!
February 20th, 2018 11:14
Lorna said:
I love you holding the forefinger of the poetical world! Beautiful!
February 20th, 2018 11:14
The Great Poetry Or the Highest Part of Life
Caring dove said:
the ending really stood out for me ... \'\'i often hear the tunes of poetry\'\' emotions , nature can all inspire us to write down a poem .. great piece of writing !
Sometimes in the indecipherable sound of birds
Sometimes in the combination of laugh and cry
Or through the wind of mindblowing breeze,
these are my favourite lines, great expression ! truly enjoyed
February 20th, 2018 10:37
Caring dove said:
the ending really stood out for me ... \'\'i often hear the tunes of poetry\'\' emotions , nature can all inspire us to write down a poem .. great piece of writing !
Sometimes in the indecipherable sound of birds
Sometimes in the combination of laugh and cry
Or through the wind of mindblowing breeze,
these are my favourite lines, great expression ! truly enjoyed
February 20th, 2018 10:37
The Great Poetry Or the Highest Part of Life
Michael Edwards said:
Drips with poetic atmosphere - great work.
February 20th, 2018 07:02
Michael Edwards said:
Drips with poetic atmosphere - great work.
February 20th, 2018 07:02
Charity Begins at Home
FredPeyer said:
You said it, MR, and you said it quite well! Charity does begin at home. If more people would realize that and do something about it, all our lives would be improved.
February 18th, 2018 13:21
FredPeyer said:
You said it, MR, and you said it quite well! Charity does begin at home. If more people would realize that and do something about it, all our lives would be improved.
February 18th, 2018 13:21
Daffodil
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur,
What a stunningly beautiful poem full of incredible imagery.
An amazing write!
Keep writing
FineB
February 16th, 2018 09:46
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur,
What a stunningly beautiful poem full of incredible imagery.
An amazing write!
Keep writing
FineB
February 16th, 2018 09:46
Charity Begins at Home
Lorna said:
What a lovely lovely poem Mottakeenur. You have a wonderful heart.
February 16th, 2018 06:58
Lorna said:
What a lovely lovely poem Mottakeenur. You have a wonderful heart.
February 16th, 2018 06:58
The Analysis of Relationship
FredPeyer said:
Well written, MR! And yes, love can be simple, or very complicated!
February 15th, 2018 16:38
FredPeyer said:
Well written, MR! And yes, love can be simple, or very complicated!
February 15th, 2018 16:38
Daffodil
Seven said:
Now that poetry is natural for you, any thoughts on a play or novella? You truly have a gift, I wonder how deep the pen will write! Until then long live the poetic voice.
February 14th, 2018 23:13
Seven said:
Now that poetry is natural for you, any thoughts on a play or novella? You truly have a gift, I wonder how deep the pen will write! Until then long live the poetic voice.
February 14th, 2018 23:13
The Analysis of Relationship
Seven said:
Must agree with Lorna on the stand out lines and image that it solicits. In fact the last lines also sound like an intro to another poem!
February 14th, 2018 23:08
Seven said:
Must agree with Lorna on the stand out lines and image that it solicits. In fact the last lines also sound like an intro to another poem!
February 14th, 2018 23:08
The Analysis of Relationship
Lorna said:
Very beautiful lines: Why does the Tajmahal of dreamy land
break into the pieces of scattered dream!!
February 14th, 2018 16:59
Lorna said:
Very beautiful lines: Why does the Tajmahal of dreamy land
break into the pieces of scattered dream!!
February 14th, 2018 16:59
Daffodil
Caring dove said:
stunningly beautiful :-) :-) i loved every line , i found it so nice , how you mentioned the flowers dancing like a hip hop dance, can can dancing and the red horses. you have given those flowers a voice, a movement ... a feeling . really enjoyed reading this , such a lovely piece!
February 13th, 2018 11:20
Caring dove said:
stunningly beautiful :-) :-) i loved every line , i found it so nice , how you mentioned the flowers dancing like a hip hop dance, can can dancing and the red horses. you have given those flowers a voice, a movement ... a feeling . really enjoyed reading this , such a lovely piece!
February 13th, 2018 11:20
Like Hiruda
Lorna said:
Thank you for teaching us about Hiruda - I will go and look for him. Your poem reminds me that I feel poems are a way of throwing ourselves into space and even if no one ever reads them, they are parts of us - out there somewhere.....
February 11th, 2018 10:26
Lorna said:
Thank you for teaching us about Hiruda - I will go and look for him. Your poem reminds me that I feel poems are a way of throwing ourselves into space and even if no one ever reads them, they are parts of us - out there somewhere.....
February 11th, 2018 10:26
Like Hiruda
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thanks for your precious comment!...You can read Hiruda\'s English translation on the site \'POEM HUNTER \' ..first go to the site on net and search by Hiruda\'s full name Hiren Bhattacharyya...Thanks once again for your Kind words!!
February 11th, 2018 06:29
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thanks for your precious comment!...You can read Hiruda\'s English translation on the site \'POEM HUNTER \' ..first go to the site on net and search by Hiruda\'s full name Hiren Bhattacharyya...Thanks once again for your Kind words!!
February 11th, 2018 06:29
Like Hiruda
Michael Edwards said:
I always enjoy your postings - and you\'ve whetted my appetite for Hiruda - must see if I can find any translations although they don\'t always translate into other languages that well .
February 11th, 2018 06:19
Michael Edwards said:
I always enjoy your postings - and you\'ve whetted my appetite for Hiruda - must see if I can find any translations although they don\'t always translate into other languages that well .
February 11th, 2018 06:19
Oracle
Seven said:
Worth the wait. As Kat said you are a unique talent. As Michael said, always a joy. Alliteration without overdoing it. Internal rhymes when needed. Smooth flow and expansive vocabulary! Well done.
February 3rd, 2018 22:29
Seven said:
Worth the wait. As Kat said you are a unique talent. As Michael said, always a joy. Alliteration without overdoing it. Internal rhymes when needed. Smooth flow and expansive vocabulary! Well done.
February 3rd, 2018 22:29
Oracle
FredPeyer said:
Well written, like how you bring all the different Gods, the oracle, storms, and the Universe under one \'roof\'! I do hope you will succeed to be \'bold like CC\'!
February 3rd, 2018 13:21
FredPeyer said:
Well written, like how you bring all the different Gods, the oracle, storms, and the Universe under one \'roof\'! I do hope you will succeed to be \'bold like CC\'!
February 3rd, 2018 13:21
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