Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
You Wash Me Down
FineB said:
Thanks Mottakeenur.
What a super poem and a vivid way of looking at water.
Keep writing in 2018
FineB
January 5th, 2018 08:00
FineB said:
Thanks Mottakeenur.
What a super poem and a vivid way of looking at water.
Keep writing in 2018
FineB
January 5th, 2018 08:00
You Wash Me Down
Michael Edwards said:
Great write M - in fact quite a little gem.
January 5th, 2018 07:30
Michael Edwards said:
Great write M - in fact quite a little gem.
January 5th, 2018 07:30
Poetry and A Smile of Honesty
FredPeyer said:
MR, a smile can make a huge difference, and you expressed it well!
January 3rd, 2018 20:17
FredPeyer said:
MR, a smile can make a huge difference, and you expressed it well!
January 3rd, 2018 20:17
Poetry and A Smile of Honesty
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely reflective piece of work
January 3rd, 2018 05:13
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely reflective piece of work
January 3rd, 2018 05:13
Woman
Seven said:
I love the parallel usage. Even symbolically with the \"two days\" she did not see the poet. A lesson for me is that what appears to be not enough, is more than enough, to start going.
January 1st, 2018 15:46
Seven said:
I love the parallel usage. Even symbolically with the \"two days\" she did not see the poet. A lesson for me is that what appears to be not enough, is more than enough, to start going.
January 1st, 2018 15:46
Woman
Louis Gibbs said:
Sadness is a source of great poetry. Perhaps this was the lesson she was to learn from the encounter. Fine poem, M.R.
January 1st, 2018 10:01
Louis Gibbs said:
Sadness is a source of great poetry. Perhaps this was the lesson she was to learn from the encounter. Fine poem, M.R.
January 1st, 2018 10:01
The Wings of Seagull
Seven said:
Impossible to read just once. Each time through, see something new!
December 30th, 2017 13:14
Seven said:
Impossible to read just once. Each time through, see something new!
December 30th, 2017 13:14
The Wings of Seagull
Michael Edwards said:
Love the way you use the language - great stuff.
December 30th, 2017 10:13
Michael Edwards said:
Love the way you use the language - great stuff.
December 30th, 2017 10:13
The Landscape of Poenciana
Seven said:
Next level. Do you submit to magazines or contests? How do you keep doing it? Lovely to say the least. Challenging and understood all in a single stanza. Placed together to form the picture. Not enough space to continue so I will summarize with 👍
December 13th, 2017 12:20
Seven said:
Next level. Do you submit to magazines or contests? How do you keep doing it? Lovely to say the least. Challenging and understood all in a single stanza. Placed together to form the picture. Not enough space to continue so I will summarize with 👍
December 13th, 2017 12:20
The Landscape of Poenciana
Michael Edwards said:
As Kat says you have a great style and this is so evident in this lovely work.
December 13th, 2017 12:00
Michael Edwards said:
As Kat says you have a great style and this is so evident in this lovely work.
December 13th, 2017 12:00
Water
Michael Edwards said:
As simple as water and yet without water there would be no life - super work M
December 12th, 2017 11:54
Michael Edwards said:
As simple as water and yet without water there would be no life - super work M
December 12th, 2017 11:54
The Luit of Dreamy Land
FineB said:
Beautiful, mystical and enchanting.
Thank you Mottakeenur.
Keep writing
FineB
December 11th, 2017 09:49
FineB said:
Beautiful, mystical and enchanting.
Thank you Mottakeenur.
Keep writing
FineB
December 11th, 2017 09:49
Let\'s Go to the Heart
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s the work of a true poet - well done Mottakeenur
December 8th, 2017 02:38
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s the work of a true poet - well done Mottakeenur
December 8th, 2017 02:38
Let\'s Go to the Heart
Seven said:
Professional poetics, and very thoughtful. Not the work of a novice.
December 8th, 2017 01:22
Seven said:
Professional poetics, and very thoughtful. Not the work of a novice.
December 8th, 2017 01:22
Poetry is in your DNA
Michael Edwards said:
And poetry is in your DNA as well Mottakeenur
December 4th, 2017 16:08
Michael Edwards said:
And poetry is in your DNA as well Mottakeenur
December 4th, 2017 16:08
Poetry is in your DNA
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur for your beautiful poem.
Being introspective and having sensibilities gives us poets the beautiful gift to create and capture our thoughts in poetic form.
Keep writing
FineB
December 4th, 2017 15:17
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur for your beautiful poem.
Being introspective and having sensibilities gives us poets the beautiful gift to create and capture our thoughts in poetic form.
Keep writing
FineB
December 4th, 2017 15:17
Poetry is in your DNA
Saima said:
Guess whoever writes poems have a natural talent like no other person!
December 4th, 2017 09:57
Saima said:
Guess whoever writes poems have a natural talent like no other person!
December 4th, 2017 09:57
Rhythm
ForeverJesus7 said:
There is a strong message behind your poem. Good work my friend.
December 3rd, 2017 08:05
ForeverJesus7 said:
There is a strong message behind your poem. Good work my friend.
December 3rd, 2017 08:05
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