Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman



No, No, I am not a Lonely Being Anymore
FineB said:

Thank you Mottakeenur.

The world of poets is a wonderful world to belong to.

Thank you for your insight.

Lovely.
Keep writing
FineB

January 31st, 2018 04:23

No, No, I am not a Lonely Being Anymore
Saifur Rahman said:

Congratulations

January 29th, 2018 16:59

Poet Identity
Saifur Rahman said:

Nice piece of writing

January 29th, 2018 16:57

No, No, I am not a Lonely Being Anymore
Aislinn Wilson said:

Wow this was really unique construction! Strong write!

\"Pierces the crafty,greedy,exploiter and corpulent\'s stomach\"

Was by far my favourite line, though followed up so well

January 29th, 2018 13:47

No, No, I am not a Lonely Being Anymore
Michael Edwards said:

I know absolutely nothing about Eminem but I do know this is yet another fine write.

January 29th, 2018 08:38

Crocodile Tears
Caring dove said:

interesting i like this ! i love how you have expressed yourself throughout

January 29th, 2018 07:34

No, No, I am not a Lonely Being Anymore
Lorna said:

Poetry is a safe place I think.........and doesn\'t hurt anyone hopefully.

January 29th, 2018 06:49

Poet Identity
FredPeyer said:

You are what you write - you write what you are!
Love this poem, MR!

January 29th, 2018 02:23

Poet Identity
Michael Edwards said:

A tapestry of language - superb write M

January 28th, 2018 10:22

Poet Identity
Lorna said:

Very nice! And I love that it comes to us all the way from India....... makes me feel as if I have traveled even before breakfast!

January 28th, 2018 05:42

Poet Identity
Caring dove said:

well expressed :-)

January 28th, 2018 05:25

Crocodile Tears
FredPeyer said:

Well written, M, with some beautiful word choices!

January 25th, 2018 20:35

Crocodile Tears
Michael Edwards said:

A grand work M

January 25th, 2018 12:17

Crocodile Tears
FineB said:

Thank you Mottakeenur.

Life is full of tearful moments.

A beautiful poem.

I like the description of tears as \'beautious dew particles.\'

Keep writing
FineB

January 25th, 2018 10:00

Rhythm
Caring dove said:

i really do like this .. a very good piece of writing , the first line pulled me in \'\'riding ever inside a pencil \'\' interesting wording here which i very much like. that line just makes me think of how there is so much energy in words, and a pencil or pen lets us speak those words, writing for me is a way to soothe that pain , to distract from the bad , to let our emotions out and to speak what we want to say

January 21st, 2018 10:32

The Luit of Dreamy Land
Caring dove said:

you have a lovely way with words, you really do .. this is very lovely

January 21st, 2018 10:25

We Can All Grow with Poetry All The Time
Caring dove said:

i love this .. writing poetry is in itself an acheivement , for sure and if we acheive nothiing else in our life then poetry will always be there lol ! there are many narrow minded people out there... so true. this is a nice piece of writing . personally i sometimes feel i struggle to feel i acheive much in life but atleast i can write poetry and people like what i read, thats something anyhow

January 21st, 2018 10:23

Foreseeing
Lorna said:

Very inspirational! You are a force for good!

January 21st, 2018 07:34

Foreseeing
Michael Edwards said:

Another great poem - with such imaginative use of language.

January 21st, 2018 07:24

Let\'s Go to the Heart
Caring dove said:

i really like this ...enjoyed reading .. there is never such a thing as being too imaginative lol imagination is great ! you have talent..

January 21st, 2018 06:49

Foreseeing
Caring dove said:

i guess maybe your mother was right lol .. your words are very beautiful .. what a lovely tender poem :-) enjoyed reading this

January 21st, 2018 06:46

A Big Question
FineB said:

Hello Mottakeenur.

An excellent poem.

You are a good writer.

Keep writing
FineB

January 20th, 2018 15:55

Poetry and A Smile of Honesty
Seven said:

Easy to tell this came from a real place. Even your comments regarding this piece flow like poetry.

January 17th, 2018 14:15

A Big Question
Seven said:

Always opening up creative concepts in unique ways. The flow is natural and not over done.

January 17th, 2018 14:11

Woman
Aislinn Wilson said:

This is a really interestingly written poem, the concept comes through strong. I love it

January 17th, 2018 13:44

A Big Question
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

I always expect atleast a constructive comment from you...that exhilarate my rhythm in writing!Sir,Now you become the mentor of my writing world!

January 17th, 2018 12:43

A Big Question
Michael Edwards said:

Great thought provoking piece M - I continue to admire your style.

January 17th, 2018 12:33

Some Stanzas on Poetry and Spontaneity
Aislinn Wilson said:

Your style and organization create the sense of falling or stepping to a beat. It\'s fantastic and beautiful, I\'m so glad to have been able to read it

January 15th, 2018 21:29

Some Stanzas on Poetry and Spontaneity
Tony36 said:

Awesome

January 15th, 2018 09:13

Some Stanzas on Poetry and Spontaneity
Michael Edwards said:

I just love these - super elegant stanzas - congrats M

January 15th, 2018 07:37

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