Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
I am a Father
Neville said:
A fine combined tribute and dedication to all good and decent fathers wherever they may be, or have been sir ..
I too am a father and soon to become a grandfather for the first time ..
Unfortunately however, not all biological or nonbiological fathers (stepfathers) even have any desire or intention of accepting and living up to the responsibilities that others might and rightly so, expect of them .. Neville
March 30th, 2023 01:32
Neville said:
A fine combined tribute and dedication to all good and decent fathers wherever they may be, or have been sir ..
I too am a father and soon to become a grandfather for the first time ..
Unfortunately however, not all biological or nonbiological fathers (stepfathers) even have any desire or intention of accepting and living up to the responsibilities that others might and rightly so, expect of them .. Neville
March 30th, 2023 01:32
The Strength of the Warrior
Neville said:
an intriguing and otherwise muchly enjoyed poem sir .. thank you for pinning it here to this page where it seems to fit perfectly ... Neville
March 29th, 2023 08:17
Neville said:
an intriguing and otherwise muchly enjoyed poem sir .. thank you for pinning it here to this page where it seems to fit perfectly ... Neville
March 29th, 2023 08:17
Faith and Tolerance
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem and for your thoughtful feedback. I\'m really glad to hear that you enjoyed it and that the use of punctuation helped to emphasize certain phrases and create a smooth flow between stanzas. I also appreciate that you noticed and appreciated the alliteration and symbols that I used. Your feedback is truly valuable to me, and I will keep it in mind as I continue to write and develop my craft. Thanks again for your support and encouragement!
March 22nd, 2023 12:54
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem and for your thoughtful feedback. I\'m really glad to hear that you enjoyed it and that the use of punctuation helped to emphasize certain phrases and create a smooth flow between stanzas. I also appreciate that you noticed and appreciated the alliteration and symbols that I used. Your feedback is truly valuable to me, and I will keep it in mind as I continue to write and develop my craft. Thanks again for your support and encouragement!
March 22nd, 2023 12:54
Faith and Tolerance
NinjaGirl said:
I really quite like this poem. I feel the use of punctuation emphasises certain phrases and helps with the flow from stanza to stanza. I like the use of alliteration and symbols.
March 22nd, 2023 12:47
NinjaGirl said:
I really quite like this poem. I feel the use of punctuation emphasises certain phrases and helps with the flow from stanza to stanza. I like the use of alliteration and symbols.
March 22nd, 2023 12:47
The Hope of Poetry
Neville said:
I like these words of yours so very much .. I am glad that I decided to trawl back in time and see where you are coming from my friend ........... Neville
February 27th, 2022 08:25
Neville said:
I like these words of yours so very much .. I am glad that I decided to trawl back in time and see where you are coming from my friend ........... Neville
February 27th, 2022 08:25
Life is Vivid
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, I lack the context to fully appreciate your write
but still, I found it an enjoyable read and that says a lot, I think..
thanks for sharing
March 18th, 2021 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, I lack the context to fully appreciate your write
but still, I found it an enjoyable read and that says a lot, I think..
thanks for sharing
March 18th, 2021 05:27
The Worship of Emptiness
FineB said:
Hi Mottakeenur,
We are sad self obsessed and selfish world only interested in putting our faith in empty meaningless sources.
A great write.
Keeo writing FineB
October 30th, 2019 11:37
FineB said:
Hi Mottakeenur,
We are sad self obsessed and selfish world only interested in putting our faith in empty meaningless sources.
A great write.
Keeo writing FineB
October 30th, 2019 11:37
The Worship of Emptiness
orchidee said:
A good write, yet I feel open and vulnerable leaving things, especially my mind, empty.
September 30th, 2019 10:51
orchidee said:
A good write, yet I feel open and vulnerable leaving things, especially my mind, empty.
September 30th, 2019 10:51
The Worship of Emptiness
Neville said:
certainly a very interesting statement...
September 30th, 2019 06:00
Neville said:
certainly a very interesting statement...
September 30th, 2019 06:00
The Worship of Emptiness
Michael Edwards said:
I find this really appealing - and intrigueing.
September 30th, 2019 04:04
Michael Edwards said:
I find this really appealing - and intrigueing.
September 30th, 2019 04:04
The World of Human Being
Neville said:
this is a very moving poem indeed.. thank you for sharing it and the accompanying image...
September 28th, 2019 10:31
Neville said:
this is a very moving poem indeed.. thank you for sharing it and the accompanying image...
September 28th, 2019 10:31
Khuda Gawah
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur,
Love is beautiful! A lovely poem on the power of love!
Keep writing
FineB
May 17th, 2019 04:08
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur,
Love is beautiful! A lovely poem on the power of love!
Keep writing
FineB
May 17th, 2019 04:08
A Good Man Never Lets You Forget How Much He Loves You
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur,
A superb write.
Goodness and kindness in a good man is always appreciated especially in today\'s modern somewhat selfish world.
Keep writing FineB
February 23rd, 2019 05:25
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur,
A superb write.
Goodness and kindness in a good man is always appreciated especially in today\'s modern somewhat selfish world.
Keep writing FineB
February 23rd, 2019 05:25
Khuda Gawah
Michael Edwards said:
Some read - love the way you weave the words together.
February 13th, 2019 12:26
Michael Edwards said:
Some read - love the way you weave the words together.
February 13th, 2019 12:26
The Misery of Poor
FineB said:
A lovely and poignant poem Mottakeenur.
Thank you.
Poverty is all around us. In London, the number of people sleeping rough in the streets continues to increase
When you see people in prestigious parts of London sleeping rough you ask yourself what is this world coming to?
Keep writing Fine B
February 13th, 2019 09:37
FineB said:
A lovely and poignant poem Mottakeenur.
Thank you.
Poverty is all around us. In London, the number of people sleeping rough in the streets continues to increase
When you see people in prestigious parts of London sleeping rough you ask yourself what is this world coming to?
Keep writing Fine B
February 13th, 2019 09:37
Khuda Gawah
Neville said:
Bollywood or not, this reads like a feature length movie.. a love story of epic proportion........... Neville
February 13th, 2019 08:48
Neville said:
Bollywood or not, this reads like a feature length movie.. a love story of epic proportion........... Neville
February 13th, 2019 08:48
I Wait for You
Neville said:
Translating such a complex poem into any other language than for which it was originally intended can\'t be easy my friend.. particularly when literal translations might prove to be impossible... I think this is a very brave attempt sir. .... Neville
February 8th, 2019 12:24
Neville said:
Translating such a complex poem into any other language than for which it was originally intended can\'t be easy my friend.. particularly when literal translations might prove to be impossible... I think this is a very brave attempt sir. .... Neville
February 8th, 2019 12:24
I Wait for You
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Sir you become Guru for my poetic inspiration ..Guide by the Side~Thanks a lot for your outstanding experiment!!💕🖋👏🙏
February 7th, 2019 20:22
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Sir you become Guru for my poetic inspiration ..Guide by the Side~Thanks a lot for your outstanding experiment!!💕🖋👏🙏
February 7th, 2019 20:22
I Wait for You
Michael Edwards said:
This is a superb poem. I would suggest that poems are written to their best advantage exploiting the beauty of the language they are written in. To translate them into another language for which they were not designed whilst maintaining their integrity is, I would suggest, an almost impossible task. Well this reads so well it must be an outstanding work in it\'s mother tongue.
February 7th, 2019 14:26
Michael Edwards said:
This is a superb poem. I would suggest that poems are written to their best advantage exploiting the beauty of the language they are written in. To translate them into another language for which they were not designed whilst maintaining their integrity is, I would suggest, an almost impossible task. Well this reads so well it must be an outstanding work in it\'s mother tongue.
February 7th, 2019 14:26
I Wait for You
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Mam please say some words for my friend Safik Uz Zaman..he would like to hear from you...
February 7th, 2019 10:17
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Mam please say some words for my friend Safik Uz Zaman..he would like to hear from you...
February 7th, 2019 10:17
The Tall But Hollow Institutions
Neville said:
an interesting, presumably autobiographical tale told well.. your words captivated me throughout the journey of your learning and love for poetry.... thank you... Neville
February 7th, 2019 07:44
Neville said:
an interesting, presumably autobiographical tale told well.. your words captivated me throughout the journey of your learning and love for poetry.... thank you... Neville
February 7th, 2019 07:44
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