Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
Like Hiruda
Michael Edwards said:
I always enjoy your postings - and you\'ve whetted my appetite for Hiruda - must see if I can find any translations although they don\'t always translate into other languages that well .
February 11th, 2018 06:19
Michael Edwards said:
I always enjoy your postings - and you\'ve whetted my appetite for Hiruda - must see if I can find any translations although they don\'t always translate into other languages that well .
February 11th, 2018 06:19
Oracle
Seven said:
Worth the wait. As Kat said you are a unique talent. As Michael said, always a joy. Alliteration without overdoing it. Internal rhymes when needed. Smooth flow and expansive vocabulary! Well done.
February 3rd, 2018 22:29
Seven said:
Worth the wait. As Kat said you are a unique talent. As Michael said, always a joy. Alliteration without overdoing it. Internal rhymes when needed. Smooth flow and expansive vocabulary! Well done.
February 3rd, 2018 22:29
Oracle
FredPeyer said:
Well written, like how you bring all the different Gods, the oracle, storms, and the Universe under one \'roof\'! I do hope you will succeed to be \'bold like CC\'!
February 3rd, 2018 13:21
FredPeyer said:
Well written, like how you bring all the different Gods, the oracle, storms, and the Universe under one \'roof\'! I do hope you will succeed to be \'bold like CC\'!
February 3rd, 2018 13:21
No, No, I am not a Lonely Being Anymore
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur.
The world of poets is a wonderful world to belong to.
Thank you for your insight.
Lovely.
Keep writing
FineB
January 31st, 2018 04:23
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur.
The world of poets is a wonderful world to belong to.
Thank you for your insight.
Lovely.
Keep writing
FineB
January 31st, 2018 04:23
No, No, I am not a Lonely Being Anymore
Aislinn Wilson said:
Wow this was really unique construction! Strong write!
\"Pierces the crafty,greedy,exploiter and corpulent\'s stomach\"
Was by far my favourite line, though followed up so well
January 29th, 2018 13:47
Aislinn Wilson said:
Wow this was really unique construction! Strong write!
\"Pierces the crafty,greedy,exploiter and corpulent\'s stomach\"
Was by far my favourite line, though followed up so well
January 29th, 2018 13:47
No, No, I am not a Lonely Being Anymore
Michael Edwards said:
I know absolutely nothing about Eminem but I do know this is yet another fine write.
January 29th, 2018 08:38
Michael Edwards said:
I know absolutely nothing about Eminem but I do know this is yet another fine write.
January 29th, 2018 08:38
Crocodile Tears
Caring dove said:
interesting i like this ! i love how you have expressed yourself throughout
January 29th, 2018 07:34
Caring dove said:
interesting i like this ! i love how you have expressed yourself throughout
January 29th, 2018 07:34
No, No, I am not a Lonely Being Anymore
Lorna said:
Poetry is a safe place I think.........and doesn\'t hurt anyone hopefully.
January 29th, 2018 06:49
Lorna said:
Poetry is a safe place I think.........and doesn\'t hurt anyone hopefully.
January 29th, 2018 06:49
Poet Identity
FredPeyer said:
You are what you write - you write what you are!
Love this poem, MR!
January 29th, 2018 02:23
FredPeyer said:
You are what you write - you write what you are!
Love this poem, MR!
January 29th, 2018 02:23
Poet Identity
Lorna said:
Very nice! And I love that it comes to us all the way from India....... makes me feel as if I have traveled even before breakfast!
January 28th, 2018 05:42
Lorna said:
Very nice! And I love that it comes to us all the way from India....... makes me feel as if I have traveled even before breakfast!
January 28th, 2018 05:42
Crocodile Tears
FredPeyer said:
Well written, M, with some beautiful word choices!
January 25th, 2018 20:35
FredPeyer said:
Well written, M, with some beautiful word choices!
January 25th, 2018 20:35
Crocodile Tears
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur.
Life is full of tearful moments.
A beautiful poem.
I like the description of tears as \'beautious dew particles.\'
Keep writing
FineB
January 25th, 2018 10:00
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur.
Life is full of tearful moments.
A beautiful poem.
I like the description of tears as \'beautious dew particles.\'
Keep writing
FineB
January 25th, 2018 10:00
Rhythm
Caring dove said:
i really do like this .. a very good piece of writing , the first line pulled me in \'\'riding ever inside a pencil \'\' interesting wording here which i very much like. that line just makes me think of how there is so much energy in words, and a pencil or pen lets us speak those words, writing for me is a way to soothe that pain , to distract from the bad , to let our emotions out and to speak what we want to say
January 21st, 2018 10:32
Caring dove said:
i really do like this .. a very good piece of writing , the first line pulled me in \'\'riding ever inside a pencil \'\' interesting wording here which i very much like. that line just makes me think of how there is so much energy in words, and a pencil or pen lets us speak those words, writing for me is a way to soothe that pain , to distract from the bad , to let our emotions out and to speak what we want to say
January 21st, 2018 10:32
We Can All Grow with Poetry All The Time
Caring dove said:
i love this .. writing poetry is in itself an acheivement , for sure and if we acheive nothiing else in our life then poetry will always be there lol ! there are many narrow minded people out there... so true. this is a nice piece of writing . personally i sometimes feel i struggle to feel i acheive much in life but atleast i can write poetry and people like what i read, thats something anyhow
January 21st, 2018 10:23
Caring dove said:
i love this .. writing poetry is in itself an acheivement , for sure and if we acheive nothiing else in our life then poetry will always be there lol ! there are many narrow minded people out there... so true. this is a nice piece of writing . personally i sometimes feel i struggle to feel i acheive much in life but atleast i can write poetry and people like what i read, thats something anyhow
January 21st, 2018 10:23
Foreseeing
Michael Edwards said:
Another great poem - with such imaginative use of language.
January 21st, 2018 07:24
Michael Edwards said:
Another great poem - with such imaginative use of language.
January 21st, 2018 07:24
Let\'s Go to the Heart
Caring dove said:
i really like this ...enjoyed reading .. there is never such a thing as being too imaginative lol imagination is great ! you have talent..
January 21st, 2018 06:49
Caring dove said:
i really like this ...enjoyed reading .. there is never such a thing as being too imaginative lol imagination is great ! you have talent..
January 21st, 2018 06:49
Foreseeing
Caring dove said:
i guess maybe your mother was right lol .. your words are very beautiful .. what a lovely tender poem :-) enjoyed reading this
January 21st, 2018 06:46
Caring dove said:
i guess maybe your mother was right lol .. your words are very beautiful .. what a lovely tender poem :-) enjoyed reading this
January 21st, 2018 06:46
A Big Question
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur.
An excellent poem.
You are a good writer.
Keep writing
FineB
January 20th, 2018 15:55
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur.
An excellent poem.
You are a good writer.
Keep writing
FineB
January 20th, 2018 15:55
Poetry and A Smile of Honesty
Seven said:
Easy to tell this came from a real place. Even your comments regarding this piece flow like poetry.
January 17th, 2018 14:15
Seven said:
Easy to tell this came from a real place. Even your comments regarding this piece flow like poetry.
January 17th, 2018 14:15
A Big Question
Seven said:
Always opening up creative concepts in unique ways. The flow is natural and not over done.
January 17th, 2018 14:11
Seven said:
Always opening up creative concepts in unique ways. The flow is natural and not over done.
January 17th, 2018 14:11
Woman
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is a really interestingly written poem, the concept comes through strong. I love it
January 17th, 2018 13:44
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is a really interestingly written poem, the concept comes through strong. I love it
January 17th, 2018 13:44
A Big Question
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I always expect atleast a constructive comment from you...that exhilarate my rhythm in writing!Sir,Now you become the mentor of my writing world!
January 17th, 2018 12:43
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I always expect atleast a constructive comment from you...that exhilarate my rhythm in writing!Sir,Now you become the mentor of my writing world!
January 17th, 2018 12:43
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