Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
Bohag
L. B. Mek said:
so informative, thank you! dear Poet
(but video is not playing for me for some reason)
April 17th, 2023 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
so informative, thank you! dear Poet
(but video is not playing for me for some reason)
April 17th, 2023 04:14
All is Well
Neville said:
I like the cut of your jib my friend .. a beautiful dreamy poem and a very mature way of looking at loss without any associated feeling of anger, resentment or bitterness .. just the way it should be .... Neville
April 14th, 2023 07:12
Neville said:
I like the cut of your jib my friend .. a beautiful dreamy poem and a very mature way of looking at loss without any associated feeling of anger, resentment or bitterness .. just the way it should be .... Neville
April 14th, 2023 07:12
All is Well
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful wording of accessible wisdom
so true, kind Poet
(although hate and mirages of vengeance
can fuel a life with endless gusto
within those arteries of our pulsing sincerity
we witness that gradual decay of our humanity
rather, it be in our best interest
to forego that charcoal warmth of rage
and find bravery, enough
to seek acceptance and resolve
steadily nurture a new appetite
for our heart\'s, true desire
a new connection, strong enough
to decimate our painful pasts...)
April 14th, 2023 02:28
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful wording of accessible wisdom
so true, kind Poet
(although hate and mirages of vengeance
can fuel a life with endless gusto
within those arteries of our pulsing sincerity
we witness that gradual decay of our humanity
rather, it be in our best interest
to forego that charcoal warmth of rage
and find bravery, enough
to seek acceptance and resolve
steadily nurture a new appetite
for our heart\'s, true desire
a new connection, strong enough
to decimate our painful pasts...)
April 14th, 2023 02:28
The Magic of the Eyes
L. B. Mek said:
simply beautiful, dear Poet
thank you! such a lovely read
April 14th, 2023 02:19
L. B. Mek said:
simply beautiful, dear Poet
thank you! such a lovely read
April 14th, 2023 02:19
Incredible India
L. B. Mek said:
\'And India has been trying to accomplish her task through social regulation of differences, on the one hand, and the spiritual recognition of unity on the other.\'
by Gurudev, Rabindranath Tagore
\'Nay, do not grieve tho’ life be full of sadness,
Dawn will not veil her splendor for your grief,
Nor spring deny their bright, appointed beauty
To lotus blossom and ashoka leaf.
Nay, do not pine, tho’ life be dark with trouble,
Time will not pause or tarry on his way;
To-day that seems so long, so strange, so bitter,
Will soon be some forgotten yesterday.
Nay, do not weep; new hopes, new dreams, new faces,
The unspent joy of all the unborn years,
Will prove your heart a traitor to its sorrow,
And make your eyes unfaithful to their tears.\'
by that Nightingale, Sarojini Naidu
(within your words, dear Poet
legacy of India\'s great minds
Prevails!)
April 14th, 2023 02:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'And India has been trying to accomplish her task through social regulation of differences, on the one hand, and the spiritual recognition of unity on the other.\'
by Gurudev, Rabindranath Tagore
\'Nay, do not grieve tho’ life be full of sadness,
Dawn will not veil her splendor for your grief,
Nor spring deny their bright, appointed beauty
To lotus blossom and ashoka leaf.
Nay, do not pine, tho’ life be dark with trouble,
Time will not pause or tarry on his way;
To-day that seems so long, so strange, so bitter,
Will soon be some forgotten yesterday.
Nay, do not weep; new hopes, new dreams, new faces,
The unspent joy of all the unborn years,
Will prove your heart a traitor to its sorrow,
And make your eyes unfaithful to their tears.\'
by that Nightingale, Sarojini Naidu
(within your words, dear Poet
legacy of India\'s great minds
Prevails!)
April 14th, 2023 02:16
All is Well
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Mottakeenur that last line is so meaningful.
Andy
April 14th, 2023 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Mottakeenur that last line is so meaningful.
Andy
April 14th, 2023 01:48
You
Neville said:
a most beautifully crafted love poem most fitting for a woman so beautiful and so very much loved ... 🤍
April 14th, 2023 01:04
Neville said:
a most beautifully crafted love poem most fitting for a woman so beautiful and so very much loved ... 🤍
April 14th, 2023 01:04
The Magic of the Eyes
Neville said:
yes, absolutely what a wonderful tribute my friend, Fariha is a very lucky woman ..
April 12th, 2023 07:06
Neville said:
yes, absolutely what a wonderful tribute my friend, Fariha is a very lucky woman ..
April 12th, 2023 07:06
Incredible India
jarcher54 said:
India is a magnificent conundrum. Your hopeful focus on its better side, the land of peace and art and tranquility and rejection of dark medieval ignorance is lovely. But like my country the USA, the currents of religious bigotry, hypernationalism, and conservative rejection of tolerance and inclusion are far too strong to gloss over. Love to all my Indian brothers and sisters. May you follow your path of love to a vision of equality and universal democracy.
April 10th, 2023 22:33
jarcher54 said:
India is a magnificent conundrum. Your hopeful focus on its better side, the land of peace and art and tranquility and rejection of dark medieval ignorance is lovely. But like my country the USA, the currents of religious bigotry, hypernationalism, and conservative rejection of tolerance and inclusion are far too strong to gloss over. Love to all my Indian brothers and sisters. May you follow your path of love to a vision of equality and universal democracy.
April 10th, 2023 22:33
Shortcut
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I wanted to remove this poem as I didnot get any comment ...but Now I got from a faithful one...That means This piece has something ...Thank you so much!❤️🙏🙏
April 10th, 2023 08:15
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I wanted to remove this poem as I didnot get any comment ...but Now I got from a faithful one...That means This piece has something ...Thank you so much!❤️🙏🙏
April 10th, 2023 08:15
Value
Neville said:
I\'m with the fella with the crimson hood and the big pointy nose 😎
April 10th, 2023 04:51
Neville said:
I\'m with the fella with the crimson hood and the big pointy nose 😎
April 10th, 2023 04:51
Shortcut
L. B. Mek said:
a great read
so well presented, dear poet
words that force us
to look within and consider
that toll
of ambition and blinkered hope..
(venerability of speed, is what warps
progress
into cyclicality\'s horror stratospheres
modernity\'s, nihilism
as precursor to humanity\'s loss of identity
like those dinosaur\'s
we\'ll soon realise, not much distance
between all conquering
and carcass, remains
it\'s all spilt sands, in but a glimpse
of a universe\'s blink...)
April 10th, 2023 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
a great read
so well presented, dear poet
words that force us
to look within and consider
that toll
of ambition and blinkered hope..
(venerability of speed, is what warps
progress
into cyclicality\'s horror stratospheres
modernity\'s, nihilism
as precursor to humanity\'s loss of identity
like those dinosaur\'s
we\'ll soon realise, not much distance
between all conquering
and carcass, remains
it\'s all spilt sands, in but a glimpse
of a universe\'s blink...)
April 10th, 2023 04:34
Let\'s Pave the Way for a Future Bright
Neville said:
a timeless song of hope .. in a tired and sad old world .. bravo dear poet ..
April 7th, 2023 05:58
Neville said:
a timeless song of hope .. in a tired and sad old world .. bravo dear poet ..
April 7th, 2023 05:58
Let\'s Pave the Way for a Future Bright
L. B. Mek said:
\'togetherness/oneness\'
a dream recognised in every language
a pulsing hope, harboured by every heart!
(a timely message, at any time!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
April 7th, 2023 02:07
L. B. Mek said:
\'togetherness/oneness\'
a dream recognised in every language
a pulsing hope, harboured by every heart!
(a timely message, at any time!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
April 7th, 2023 02:07
Let\'s Pave the Way for a Future Bright
Lorna said:
Hopeful but will it ever be.....
April 7th, 2023 01:51
Lorna said:
Hopeful but will it ever be.....
April 7th, 2023 01:51
War is Never Proper
Neville said:
this packs a hefty wallop and the kidney punch with a twist it delivers toward the end takes one\'s breath away ..
ps this is very familiar, did I dream it or have I seen it before somewhere ........... Neville
April 6th, 2023 03:55
Neville said:
this packs a hefty wallop and the kidney punch with a twist it delivers toward the end takes one\'s breath away ..
ps this is very familiar, did I dream it or have I seen it before somewhere ........... Neville
April 6th, 2023 03:55
Passion is My Fashion
Goldfinch60 said:
Love\'s rain is certainly what must bring peace to our world MR, good words.
Andy
April 6th, 2023 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Love\'s rain is certainly what must bring peace to our world MR, good words.
Andy
April 6th, 2023 00:32
Passion is My Fashion
Neville said:
reads just like a dream in the making .. :)
April 5th, 2023 04:15
Neville said:
reads just like a dream in the making .. :)
April 5th, 2023 04:15
Passion is My Fashion
Lorna said:
Love the flow and sentiments of this...........
April 5th, 2023 03:48
Lorna said:
Love the flow and sentiments of this...........
April 5th, 2023 03:48
Martyr
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I\'m honored that my tribute to India resonated with you, and I hope that you\'ll have the opportunity to visit again soon and explore more of what this amazing country has to offer.
🙂🙏🙏 I\'m so glad to hear that my poem has piqued your interest in India!
April 4th, 2023 04:51
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I\'m honored that my tribute to India resonated with you, and I hope that you\'ll have the opportunity to visit again soon and explore more of what this amazing country has to offer.
🙂🙏🙏 I\'m so glad to hear that my poem has piqued your interest in India!
April 4th, 2023 04:51
Martyr
Neville said:
Despite having visited twice to date and intending to again, I know far too little about India .. I intend to learn much more and you have whetted my appetite this very mane my friend .. a poignant and very fine tribute poemed indeed .. Neville
April 4th, 2023 04:46
Neville said:
Despite having visited twice to date and intending to again, I know far too little about India .. I intend to learn much more and you have whetted my appetite this very mane my friend .. a poignant and very fine tribute poemed indeed .. Neville
April 4th, 2023 04:46
Seeing into the Eyes of Mother
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I appreciate your perspective on judging people based on their actions rather than their vices. It\'s true that we all have our struggles and flaws, but it\'s important to focus on the good that people do and the positive qualities they possess. I\'m glad that you enjoyed my poem, and I hope that it resonated with you in some way.
April 3rd, 2023 11:01
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I appreciate your perspective on judging people based on their actions rather than their vices. It\'s true that we all have our struggles and flaws, but it\'s important to focus on the good that people do and the positive qualities they possess. I\'m glad that you enjoyed my poem, and I hope that it resonated with you in some way.
April 3rd, 2023 11:01
An Unconditional Exchange of Zero
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
thank you so much sir🙏
April 3rd, 2023 08:25
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
thank you so much sir🙏
April 3rd, 2023 08:25
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