Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
CROCODILE TEARS
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur.
Life is full of tearful moments.
A beautiful poem.
I like the description of tears as \'beautious dew particles.\'
Keep writing
FineB
January 25th, 2018 10:00
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur.
Life is full of tearful moments.
A beautiful poem.
I like the description of tears as \'beautious dew particles.\'
Keep writing
FineB
January 25th, 2018 10:00
RHYTHM
yellowrose said:
i really do like this .. a very good piece of writing , the first line pulled me in \'\'riding ever inside a pencil \'\' interesting wording here which i very much like. that line just makes me think of how there is so much energy in words, and a pencil or pen lets us speak those words, writing for me is a way to soothe that pain , to distract from the bad , to let our emotions out and to speak what we want to say
January 21st, 2018 10:32
yellowrose said:
i really do like this .. a very good piece of writing , the first line pulled me in \'\'riding ever inside a pencil \'\' interesting wording here which i very much like. that line just makes me think of how there is so much energy in words, and a pencil or pen lets us speak those words, writing for me is a way to soothe that pain , to distract from the bad , to let our emotions out and to speak what we want to say
January 21st, 2018 10:32
THE LUIT OF DREAMY LAND
yellowrose said:
you have a lovely way with words, you really do .. this is very lovely
January 21st, 2018 10:25
yellowrose said:
you have a lovely way with words, you really do .. this is very lovely
January 21st, 2018 10:25
WE CAN ALL GROW WITH POETRY ALL THE TIME
yellowrose said:
i love this .. writing poetry is in itself an acheivement , for sure and if we acheive nothiing else in our life then poetry will always be there lol ! there are many narrow minded people out there... so true. this is a nice piece of writing . personally i sometimes feel i struggle to feel i acheive much in life but atleast i can write poetry and people like what i read, thats something anyhow
January 21st, 2018 10:23
yellowrose said:
i love this .. writing poetry is in itself an acheivement , for sure and if we acheive nothiing else in our life then poetry will always be there lol ! there are many narrow minded people out there... so true. this is a nice piece of writing . personally i sometimes feel i struggle to feel i acheive much in life but atleast i can write poetry and people like what i read, thats something anyhow
January 21st, 2018 10:23
FORESEEING
Michael Edwards said:
Another great poem - with such imaginative use of language.
January 21st, 2018 07:24
Michael Edwards said:
Another great poem - with such imaginative use of language.
January 21st, 2018 07:24
LET\'S GO TO THE HEART
yellowrose said:
i really like this ...enjoyed reading .. there is never such a thing as being too imaginative lol imagination is great ! you have talent..
January 21st, 2018 06:49
yellowrose said:
i really like this ...enjoyed reading .. there is never such a thing as being too imaginative lol imagination is great ! you have talent..
January 21st, 2018 06:49
FORESEEING
yellowrose said:
i guess maybe your mother was right lol .. your words are very beautiful .. what a lovely tender poem :-) enjoyed reading this
January 21st, 2018 06:46
yellowrose said:
i guess maybe your mother was right lol .. your words are very beautiful .. what a lovely tender poem :-) enjoyed reading this
January 21st, 2018 06:46
A BIG QUESTION
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur.
An excellent poem.
You are a good writer.
Keep writing
FineB
January 20th, 2018 15:55
FineB said:
Hello Mottakeenur.
An excellent poem.
You are a good writer.
Keep writing
FineB
January 20th, 2018 15:55
POETRY AND A SMILE OF HONESTY
Yahchanan AbiyaH said:
Easy to tell this came from a real place. Even your comments regarding this piece flow like poetry.
January 17th, 2018 14:15
Yahchanan AbiyaH said:
Easy to tell this came from a real place. Even your comments regarding this piece flow like poetry.
January 17th, 2018 14:15
A GIRL WHO LOVES POETRY MORE THAN HER LIFE
Yahchanan AbiyaH said:
I relate completely. I seek the one who loves God above everyone.
January 17th, 2018 14:13
Yahchanan AbiyaH said:
I relate completely. I seek the one who loves God above everyone.
January 17th, 2018 14:13
A BIG QUESTION
Yahchanan AbiyaH said:
Always opening up creative concepts in unique ways. The flow is natural and not over done.
January 17th, 2018 14:11
Yahchanan AbiyaH said:
Always opening up creative concepts in unique ways. The flow is natural and not over done.
January 17th, 2018 14:11
WOMAN
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is a really interestingly written poem, the concept comes through strong. I love it
January 17th, 2018 13:44
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is a really interestingly written poem, the concept comes through strong. I love it
January 17th, 2018 13:44
A BIG QUESTION
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I always expect atleast a constructive comment from you...that exhilarate my rhythm in writing!Sir,Now you become the mentor of my writing world!
January 17th, 2018 12:43
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I always expect atleast a constructive comment from you...that exhilarate my rhythm in writing!Sir,Now you become the mentor of my writing world!
January 17th, 2018 12:43
A BIG QUESTION
Michael Edwards said:
Great thought provoking piece M - I continue to admire your style.
January 17th, 2018 12:33
Michael Edwards said:
Great thought provoking piece M - I continue to admire your style.
January 17th, 2018 12:33
A GIRL WHO LOVES POETRY MORE THAN HER LIFE
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotion laden write.
January 17th, 2018 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotion laden write.
January 17th, 2018 01:57
A GIRL WHO LOVES POETRY MORE THAN HER LIFE
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thanks a lot!
January 16th, 2018 21:56
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thanks a lot!
January 16th, 2018 21:56
A GIRL WHO LOVES POETRY MORE THAN HER LIFE
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur.
What a beautiful poem. Well written and flowing powerfully with the use of words.
Keep writing
FineB
January 16th, 2018 17:50
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur.
What a beautiful poem. Well written and flowing powerfully with the use of words.
Keep writing
FineB
January 16th, 2018 17:50
A GIRL WHO LOVES POETRY MORE THAN HER LIFE
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Here the poetry expresses the meaning of separateness....though we love each other in actual sense my beloved took me apart due to misunderstanding....all this happened because she didnot understand the meaning of poetry properly..our desire is to get the cold drops of rain(hope and tranquility) but unwillingly we meet the drought (misunerstanding and hopeless)of fruad mentality(self created concept about love)
January 16th, 2018 17:04
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Here the poetry expresses the meaning of separateness....though we love each other in actual sense my beloved took me apart due to misunderstanding....all this happened because she didnot understand the meaning of poetry properly..our desire is to get the cold drops of rain(hope and tranquility) but unwillingly we meet the drought (misunerstanding and hopeless)of fruad mentality(self created concept about love)
January 16th, 2018 17:04
A GIRL WHO LOVES POETRY MORE THAN HER LIFE
Michael Edwards said:
All three of these are real gems - I\'m struggling to understand the meanings but just love the construction and use of language
January 16th, 2018 11:26
Michael Edwards said:
All three of these are real gems - I\'m struggling to understand the meanings but just love the construction and use of language
January 16th, 2018 11:26
SOME STANZAS ON POETRY AND SPONTANEITY
Aislinn Wilson said:
Your style and organization create the sense of falling or stepping to a beat. It\'s fantastic and beautiful, I\'m so glad to have been able to read it
January 15th, 2018 21:29
Aislinn Wilson said:
Your style and organization create the sense of falling or stepping to a beat. It\'s fantastic and beautiful, I\'m so glad to have been able to read it
January 15th, 2018 21:29
SOME STANZAS ON POETRY AND SPONTANEITY
Michael Edwards said:
I just love these - super elegant stanzas - congrats M
January 15th, 2018 07:37
Michael Edwards said:
I just love these - super elegant stanzas - congrats M
January 15th, 2018 07:37
ANOTHER ONE
Fay Slimm said:
Keep that ink flowing as poetry can by its power change our lives. Never give up on your dreams dear M.
January 11th, 2018 13:31
Fay Slimm said:
Keep that ink flowing as poetry can by its power change our lives. Never give up on your dreams dear M.
January 11th, 2018 13:31
ANOTHER ONE
Yahchanan AbiyaH said:
This is a great commentary on society. This is also a message to the illegally wealthy; it is better to be honest with less than dishonest with more.
January 11th, 2018 11:53
Yahchanan AbiyaH said:
This is a great commentary on society. This is also a message to the illegally wealthy; it is better to be honest with less than dishonest with more.
January 11th, 2018 11:53
ANOTHER ONE
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve read this several times and it just flows - keep writing M
January 11th, 2018 11:42
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve read this several times and it just flows - keep writing M
January 11th, 2018 11:42
ANOTHER ONE
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur for a brilliant write.
We must not give up on our dreams.
Kèep writing in 2018
Fine B
January 11th, 2018 10:55
FineB said:
Thank you Mottakeenur for a brilliant write.
We must not give up on our dreams.
Kèep writing in 2018
Fine B
January 11th, 2018 10:55
POETRY COUNTRY AND A CHILD
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
After reading your comment I would like to meet you!
January 9th, 2018 09:39
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
After reading your comment I would like to meet you!
January 9th, 2018 09:39
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