Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
Let\'s Go to the Heart
Poetic Licence said:
Deep meaning and thoughts, beautifully crafted in poetic form, enjoyed the read
May 29th, 2025 06:31
Poetic Licence said:
Deep meaning and thoughts, beautifully crafted in poetic form, enjoyed the read
May 29th, 2025 06:31
Let\'s Go to the Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic words woven with deep thoughts there is nothing better in poetry. This one is very beautiful and quite deep and so a fave
May 29th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic words woven with deep thoughts there is nothing better in poetry. This one is very beautiful and quite deep and so a fave
May 29th, 2025 04:40
Faith and Tolerance
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of two ingrediants often ignored or not understood in the success of any relationship especially love, nicely expressed and written
May 28th, 2025 04:21
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of two ingrediants often ignored or not understood in the success of any relationship especially love, nicely expressed and written
May 28th, 2025 04:21
Faith and Tolerance
sorenbarrett said:
So seldom spoken of yet one of the principle aspects of love often undervalued yet paramount in almost all relationships. A wonderful write
May 28th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
So seldom spoken of yet one of the principle aspects of love often undervalued yet paramount in almost all relationships. A wonderful write
May 28th, 2025 04:01
Change Is the Way of Life
sorenbarrett said:
I love the style of this poem. It speaks poetically as have all great books of wisdom Tao, Tipitaka, Tora, Vedas all poetic. A fave
May 27th, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
I love the style of this poem. It speaks poetically as have all great books of wisdom Tao, Tipitaka, Tora, Vedas all poetic. A fave
May 27th, 2025 04:47
Change Is the Way of Life
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, we are passing through change, I really like the essence of that, beautifully written with deep meaning, enjoyed the read
May 27th, 2025 02:27
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, we are passing through change, I really like the essence of that, beautifully written with deep meaning, enjoyed the read
May 27th, 2025 02:27
Change Is the Way of Life
arqios said:
I love the idea of being the road, so much to ponder on 🙏🏻🕊️
May 27th, 2025 00:46
arqios said:
I love the idea of being the road, so much to ponder on 🙏🏻🕊️
May 27th, 2025 00:46
Exclusively Ours
RSM0812 said:
Good rhyme scheme. There is wisdom and advise here. Nicely written.
May 26th, 2025 09:02
RSM0812 said:
Good rhyme scheme. There is wisdom and advise here. Nicely written.
May 26th, 2025 09:02
THE TALL BUT HOLLOW INSTITUTIONS
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write expressing the thoughts, feelings and the soul of a poet, written by a very good poet, enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 04:38
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write expressing the thoughts, feelings and the soul of a poet, written by a very good poet, enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 04:38
THE TALL BUT HOLLOW INSTITUTIONS
sorenbarrett said:
You have captured well the soul of a poet in this poem and I can feel it which is all that it takes to get a fave
May 26th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
You have captured well the soul of a poet in this poem and I can feel it which is all that it takes to get a fave
May 26th, 2025 04:05
First Love: The Awakening
sorenbarrett said:
Within lies deeper meaning that evolves throughout this poem or series of poems. Very nicely written in rhyme.
May 26th, 2025 03:29
sorenbarrett said:
Within lies deeper meaning that evolves throughout this poem or series of poems. Very nicely written in rhyme.
May 26th, 2025 03:29
First Love: The Awakening
Soman Ragavan said:
Perhaps the first love was the supernova. Later loves rekindle the flames.
“Second marriage : the triumph of hope over experience.” –Samuel Johnson (1709-1784)
“Adjustment is survival” : most true. Refusing to adjust can spell your doom. Survive today, if you want to see tomorrow.
“Adapt, yes—but transcend! …” This ties in with what I wrote just now. Adapt and refine your strategies to face what will come next.
“First love etches, second love ignites…” First love ignites, the other ones incite new flames.
“The Eternal Paradox of the Heart…” The heart is a paradox and a wonder. It beats 60 times a minute, 24 hours a day, 365 days a year, for more than 60 years. Small calculators give an overflow : they can’t figure out the total…. Add to it, the alcohol we drink, the stress, the tensions, the departures, the separations, the myriads of shocks we endure…
Soman Ragavan. 26.5.2025
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May 25th, 2025 23:54
Soman Ragavan said:
Perhaps the first love was the supernova. Later loves rekindle the flames.
“Second marriage : the triumph of hope over experience.” –Samuel Johnson (1709-1784)
“Adjustment is survival” : most true. Refusing to adjust can spell your doom. Survive today, if you want to see tomorrow.
“Adapt, yes—but transcend! …” This ties in with what I wrote just now. Adapt and refine your strategies to face what will come next.
“First love etches, second love ignites…” First love ignites, the other ones incite new flames.
“The Eternal Paradox of the Heart…” The heart is a paradox and a wonder. It beats 60 times a minute, 24 hours a day, 365 days a year, for more than 60 years. Small calculators give an overflow : they can’t figure out the total…. Add to it, the alcohol we drink, the stress, the tensions, the departures, the separations, the myriads of shocks we endure…
Soman Ragavan. 26.5.2025
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May 25th, 2025 23:54
First Love: The Awakening
sorenbarrett said:
I love the wisdom in this poem and my favorite piece is the last stanza that speaks in metaphor but ever so deeply
May 25th, 2025 11:51
sorenbarrett said:
I love the wisdom in this poem and my favorite piece is the last stanza that speaks in metaphor but ever so deeply
May 25th, 2025 11:51
Violated, Yet Unbroken (A Symphony of Scars and Light)
Poetic Licence said:
An uplifting and inspiring write , with message you can survive and will become stronger, enjoyed the read
May 25th, 2025 02:49
Poetic Licence said:
An uplifting and inspiring write , with message you can survive and will become stronger, enjoyed the read
May 25th, 2025 02:49
Violated, Yet Unbroken (A Symphony of Scars and Light)
sorenbarrett said:
The old adage What doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger comes to mind. A lovely write powerful and inspiring. Very nice
May 24th, 2025 13:32
sorenbarrett said:
The old adage What doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger comes to mind. A lovely write powerful and inspiring. Very nice
May 24th, 2025 13:32
Exclusively Ours
sorenbarrett said:
Such poetic clever wording that encompasses so much meaning. A truly lovely write and a fave
May 23rd, 2025 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
Such poetic clever wording that encompasses so much meaning. A truly lovely write and a fave
May 23rd, 2025 05:06
Exclusively Ours
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful write with such wonderful meaning, enjoyed the read
May 23rd, 2025 02:41
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful write with such wonderful meaning, enjoyed the read
May 23rd, 2025 02:41
You Are Still You, Let Her Be Herself
Poetic Licence said:
This goes deep into the inner soul and all the hidden corners, beautifully written, accepting what has happened has not changed you, so let her be the same, a wonderful read
May 22nd, 2025 04:41
Poetic Licence said:
This goes deep into the inner soul and all the hidden corners, beautifully written, accepting what has happened has not changed you, so let her be the same, a wonderful read
May 22nd, 2025 04:41
You Are Still You, Let Her Be Herself
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reaches inside and with with delicately worded fingers touches parts hidden in the dark. It washes the soul with its rain and in an idealized image it locks it away to keep it safe from scratches in a real world. Fantasy is felt to be kinder but acceptance of reality may be kinder still. A beautiful poem and a fave
May 22nd, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reaches inside and with with delicately worded fingers touches parts hidden in the dark. It washes the soul with its rain and in an idealized image it locks it away to keep it safe from scratches in a real world. Fantasy is felt to be kinder but acceptance of reality may be kinder still. A beautiful poem and a fave
May 22nd, 2025 04:32
The Landscape of Poinciana
arqios said:
An excellent poem for an excellent flowering tree. 🕊️🙏🏻
May 21st, 2025 05:33
arqios said:
An excellent poem for an excellent flowering tree. 🕊️🙏🏻
May 21st, 2025 05:33
The Landscape of Poinciana
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of one of nature\'s beautiful gifts, packed with wonderful vived imagery and lovingly described, enjoyed the read
May 21st, 2025 04:48
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of one of nature\'s beautiful gifts, packed with wonderful vived imagery and lovingly described, enjoyed the read
May 21st, 2025 04:48
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