Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman



I Wait For You
Soman Ragavan said:

Your poems are full of passions and deep feelings. You find impactful and poetic words to express them. We are captives of our heart and of relations we find ourselves into.

June 7th, 2025 04:51

I Wait For You
sorenbarrett said:

I felt the longing and loneliness in this poem where home is not home without the one that one loves. Very nicely worded in good rhyme and with a very nicely timed flow to it. This poem is emotional and a fave

June 7th, 2025 03:44

Shortcut
Poetic Licence said:

The runs at breakneck speed and people are always looking for the next short cut, we need to step back sometimes and smell the roses, a lovely passionate write, enjoyed the read

June 6th, 2025 06:45

Shortcut
Najmul Joon said:

,πŸ‘

June 6th, 2025 06:30

Shortcut
sorenbarrett said:

Lovely wording in this poem breaths passion into this poem. Very nicely done.

June 6th, 2025 05:17

Eternal Sunshine
sorenbarrett said:

This poem encompasses the known universe ( the universe we can see with out own eyes). Just as love encompasses the known person we love. A nice use of metaphor to demonstrate the extent of the love. Well done

June 5th, 2025 04:53

Eternal Sunshine
Poetic Licence said:

Spreading love around the universe, lovely read

June 5th, 2025 04:33

Eternal Sunshine
Caring dove said:

That’s beautiful )) lovely words !πŸ™‚

June 5th, 2025 01:18

The Ledger of Life
Poetic Licence said:

Beautiful write, lovely images, as the write states, it is what we leave for future generations that matters, enjoyed the read

June 4th, 2025 07:46

The Ledger of Life
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful message so often forgotten in a busy society set in wonderful wording and great images and metaphor all that could be asked of a poem a definite fave.

June 4th, 2025 05:40

The Ledger of Life
arqios said:

A compassion that breathes life and bridges livesπŸ•ŠπŸ™πŸ»

June 4th, 2025 05:32

Friendship
Najmul Joon said:

πŸ‘

June 3rd, 2025 19:21

Friendship
Reynaldo Casison said:


Nice one Motta

Poignant rhythms

June 3rd, 2025 11:15

Friendship
Tony36 said:

Great write

June 3rd, 2025 10:15

Friendship
arqios said:

Just beautiful, to not ever let goπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

June 3rd, 2025 09:08

Friendship
sorenbarrett said:

Such a wonderful view on friendship and well put as well.

June 3rd, 2025 04:05

Friendship
Poetic Licence said:

Thank you for an enjoyable read and brightening up my day

June 3rd, 2025 03:03

What Brings Tree
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice one Motta

Serene rhythms

June 2nd, 2025 16:54

What Brings Tree
Najmul Joon said:

Wow 😲

June 2nd, 2025 10:25

What Brings Tree
Poetic Licence said:

Very nicely crafted and enjoyable read, one you can read again and again and get something different out of it, enjoyed the read

June 2nd, 2025 06:00

What Brings Tree
sorenbarrett said:

A blend of message and wording makes this poem a fave for me. The last stanza in its meter and rhyme was spectacular.

June 2nd, 2025 05:11

What Brings Tree
arqios said:

Natural science is most fascinating πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

June 2nd, 2025 03:10

Let\'s Go to the Heart
arqios said:

Dreams are the colour of the mind, beautiful πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

May 29th, 2025 07:59

Let\'s Go to the Heart
Poetic Licence said:

Deep meaning and thoughts, beautifully crafted in poetic form, enjoyed the read

May 29th, 2025 06:31

Let\'s Go to the Heart
Najmul Joon said:

From baranπŸ§’

May 29th, 2025 04:49

Let\'s Go to the Heart
Najmul Joon said:

Wonderful sirπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’•πŸ’•

May 29th, 2025 04:49

Let\'s Go to the Heart
Najmul Joon said:

πŸ‘

May 29th, 2025 04:49

Let\'s Go to the Heart
sorenbarrett said:

Poetic words woven with deep thoughts there is nothing better in poetry. This one is very beautiful and quite deep and so a fave

May 29th, 2025 04:40

Faith and Tolerance
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write of two ingrediants often ignored or not understood in the success of any relationship especially love, nicely expressed and written

May 28th, 2025 04:21

Faith and Tolerance
sorenbarrett said:

So seldom spoken of yet one of the principle aspects of love often undervalued yet paramount in almost all relationships. A wonderful write

May 28th, 2025 04:01

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