Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
The Daffodil Wars
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write of nature in all its wonderment and glory, may those daffodils keep marching, enjoyed the read
June 11th, 2025 07:09
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write of nature in all its wonderment and glory, may those daffodils keep marching, enjoyed the read
June 11th, 2025 07:09
The Daffodil Wars
sorenbarrett said:
A magnificent portrayal of nature in all its color and splendor. Written from a seasoned pen of an artist that knows how to draw the reader in and waltz them through the garden to the end with warpaint and all. Lovely wording in this poem and divided well into passages.
June 11th, 2025 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
A magnificent portrayal of nature in all its color and splendor. Written from a seasoned pen of an artist that knows how to draw the reader in and waltz them through the garden to the end with warpaint and all. Lovely wording in this poem and divided well into passages.
June 11th, 2025 06:31
The Daffodil Wars
jarcher54 said:
Turning an old image into something new is always wondrous, one of the finest ways to make poetry speak. I am moved by the power of your war paint metaphor... but don\'t underestimate old Wordsworth. His poetry was a revolution of soft power, a hue and cry that the world need not be stingy and bland and monopolized by getting and spending, all work and no play. Keep them coming! Your works are serious stuff, never trite or disappointing!
June 11th, 2025 05:02
jarcher54 said:
Turning an old image into something new is always wondrous, one of the finest ways to make poetry speak. I am moved by the power of your war paint metaphor... but don\'t underestimate old Wordsworth. His poetry was a revolution of soft power, a hue and cry that the world need not be stingy and bland and monopolized by getting and spending, all work and no play. Keep them coming! Your works are serious stuff, never trite or disappointing!
June 11th, 2025 05:02
Damnation: A Requiem for the Sacred
sorenbarrett said:
Enigmatic, prophetic it reads like a holy book. It\'s metaphors broad enough for multiple interpretations, its images strong enough to give it a very powerful feel. It is structured in verse like stanzas again giving it a most authoritative and powerful feel. Nicely done
June 10th, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
Enigmatic, prophetic it reads like a holy book. It\'s metaphors broad enough for multiple interpretations, its images strong enough to give it a very powerful feel. It is structured in verse like stanzas again giving it a most authoritative and powerful feel. Nicely done
June 10th, 2025 04:03
Damnation: A Requiem for the Sacred
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of we are getting what we deserve with our continuous lack of humanity and destruction of the planet, maybe we are all damned?!!. Enjoyed the read
June 10th, 2025 03:07
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of we are getting what we deserve with our continuous lack of humanity and destruction of the planet, maybe we are all damned?!!. Enjoyed the read
June 10th, 2025 03:07
The Scarred Lovers of Light
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a very good write and theme
June 9th, 2025 12:41
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a very good write and theme
June 9th, 2025 12:41
The Scarred Lovers of Light
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write so cleverly thought out,and a wonderful thought the moon and sun being in love, I feel it also relates to ourselves, as sometimes people can fall in love with someone they could never be with, really enjoyed the read
June 9th, 2025 04:51
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write so cleverly thought out,and a wonderful thought the moon and sun being in love, I feel it also relates to ourselves, as sometimes people can fall in love with someone they could never be with, really enjoyed the read
June 9th, 2025 04:51
The Scarred Lovers of Light
sorenbarrett said:
A cosmic Romeo and Juliet set in such great poetic style and verse. There is a cyclical feel to the meter that resembles the orbiting of the bodies. Mythical in its proportions this story has so many great lines that reflect reality as the moon reflects the sun\'s light. This truly is a poem of epic proportions and deserves a wide viewing. Loved it and a fave
June 9th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
A cosmic Romeo and Juliet set in such great poetic style and verse. There is a cyclical feel to the meter that resembles the orbiting of the bodies. Mythical in its proportions this story has so many great lines that reflect reality as the moon reflects the sun\'s light. This truly is a poem of epic proportions and deserves a wide viewing. Loved it and a fave
June 9th, 2025 04:39
In the Realm of Love
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one Motta
Poignant with loving rhythms
June 8th, 2025 19:16
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one Motta
Poignant with loving rhythms
June 8th, 2025 19:16
The Unreturned
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one Motta
Melancholy undertones yet transcendent
June 8th, 2025 18:20
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one Motta
Melancholy undertones yet transcendent
June 8th, 2025 18:20
The Unreturned
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic this poem has a solemn nature to it and the images created are absolutely marvelous. Short but powerful it is a fave
June 8th, 2025 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic this poem has a solemn nature to it and the images created are absolutely marvelous. Short but powerful it is a fave
June 8th, 2025 06:31
I Wait For You
RSM0812 said:
This is honestly one of the best poems I\'ve read in a while on this site. Great work.
June 7th, 2025 08:30
RSM0812 said:
This is honestly one of the best poems I\'ve read in a while on this site. Great work.
June 7th, 2025 08:30
I Wait For You
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write of sadness and loneliness, that they have everything they want except the one they love and home will not be complete until they returned, beautifully written
June 7th, 2025 06:35
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write of sadness and loneliness, that they have everything they want except the one they love and home will not be complete until they returned, beautifully written
June 7th, 2025 06:35
I Wait For You
Soman Ragavan said:
Your poems are full of passions and deep feelings. You find impactful and poetic words to express them. We are captives of our heart and of relations we find ourselves into.
June 7th, 2025 04:51
Soman Ragavan said:
Your poems are full of passions and deep feelings. You find impactful and poetic words to express them. We are captives of our heart and of relations we find ourselves into.
June 7th, 2025 04:51
I Wait For You
sorenbarrett said:
I felt the longing and loneliness in this poem where home is not home without the one that one loves. Very nicely worded in good rhyme and with a very nicely timed flow to it. This poem is emotional and a fave
June 7th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
I felt the longing and loneliness in this poem where home is not home without the one that one loves. Very nicely worded in good rhyme and with a very nicely timed flow to it. This poem is emotional and a fave
June 7th, 2025 03:44
Shortcut
Poetic Licence said:
The runs at breakneck speed and people are always looking for the next short cut, we need to step back sometimes and smell the roses, a lovely passionate write, enjoyed the read
June 6th, 2025 06:45
Poetic Licence said:
The runs at breakneck speed and people are always looking for the next short cut, we need to step back sometimes and smell the roses, a lovely passionate write, enjoyed the read
June 6th, 2025 06:45
Shortcut
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely wording in this poem breaths passion into this poem. Very nicely done.
June 6th, 2025 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely wording in this poem breaths passion into this poem. Very nicely done.
June 6th, 2025 05:17
Eternal Sunshine
sorenbarrett said:
This poem encompasses the known universe ( the universe we can see with out own eyes). Just as love encompasses the known person we love. A nice use of metaphor to demonstrate the extent of the love. Well done
June 5th, 2025 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
This poem encompasses the known universe ( the universe we can see with out own eyes). Just as love encompasses the known person we love. A nice use of metaphor to demonstrate the extent of the love. Well done
June 5th, 2025 04:53
Eternal Sunshine
Poetic Licence said:
Spreading love around the universe, lovely read
June 5th, 2025 04:33
Poetic Licence said:
Spreading love around the universe, lovely read
June 5th, 2025 04:33
The Ledger of Life
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful write, lovely images, as the write states, it is what we leave for future generations that matters, enjoyed the read
June 4th, 2025 07:46
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful write, lovely images, as the write states, it is what we leave for future generations that matters, enjoyed the read
June 4th, 2025 07:46
The Ledger of Life
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message so often forgotten in a busy society set in wonderful wording and great images and metaphor all that could be asked of a poem a definite fave.
June 4th, 2025 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message so often forgotten in a busy society set in wonderful wording and great images and metaphor all that could be asked of a poem a definite fave.
June 4th, 2025 05:40
The Ledger of Life
arqios said:
A compassion that breathes life and bridges lives🕊🙏🏻
June 4th, 2025 05:32
arqios said:
A compassion that breathes life and bridges lives🕊🙏🏻
June 4th, 2025 05:32
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