Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman



Damnation: A Requiem for the Sacred
sorenbarrett said:

Enigmatic, prophetic it reads like a holy book. It\'s metaphors broad enough for multiple interpretations, its images strong enough to give it a very powerful feel. It is structured in verse like stanzas again giving it a most authoritative and powerful feel. Nicely done

June 10th, 2025 04:03

Damnation: A Requiem for the Sacred
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of we are getting what we deserve with our continuous lack of humanity and destruction of the planet, maybe we are all damned?!!. Enjoyed the read

June 10th, 2025 03:07

The Scarred Lovers of Light
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

a very good write and theme

June 9th, 2025 12:41

The Scarred Lovers of Light
Poetic Licence said:

A wonderful write so cleverly thought out,and a wonderful thought the moon and sun being in love, I feel it also relates to ourselves, as sometimes people can fall in love with someone they could never be with, really enjoyed the read

June 9th, 2025 04:51

The Scarred Lovers of Light
sorenbarrett said:

A cosmic Romeo and Juliet set in such great poetic style and verse. There is a cyclical feel to the meter that resembles the orbiting of the bodies. Mythical in its proportions this story has so many great lines that reflect reality as the moon reflects the sun\'s light. This truly is a poem of epic proportions and deserves a wide viewing. Loved it and a fave

June 9th, 2025 04:39

In the Realm of Love
Reynaldo Casison said:


Nice one Motta

Poignant with loving rhythms

June 8th, 2025 19:16

The Unreturned
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice one Motta

Melancholy undertones yet transcendent

June 8th, 2025 18:20

The Unreturned
Poetic Licence said:

That is sad, touching and beautiful,

June 8th, 2025 07:56

The Unreturned
sorenbarrett said:

Very poetic this poem has a solemn nature to it and the images created are absolutely marvelous. Short but powerful it is a fave

June 8th, 2025 06:31

I Wait For You
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

June 7th, 2025 09:38

I Wait For You
RSM0812 said:

This is honestly one of the best poems I\'ve read in a while on this site. Great work.

June 7th, 2025 08:30

I Wait For You
Poetic Licence said:

A heartfelt write of sadness and loneliness, that they have everything they want except the one they love and home will not be complete until they returned, beautifully written

June 7th, 2025 06:35

I Wait For You
Soman Ragavan said:

Your poems are full of passions and deep feelings. You find impactful and poetic words to express them. We are captives of our heart and of relations we find ourselves into.

June 7th, 2025 04:51

I Wait For You
sorenbarrett said:

I felt the longing and loneliness in this poem where home is not home without the one that one loves. Very nicely worded in good rhyme and with a very nicely timed flow to it. This poem is emotional and a fave

June 7th, 2025 03:44

Shortcut
Poetic Licence said:

The runs at breakneck speed and people are always looking for the next short cut, we need to step back sometimes and smell the roses, a lovely passionate write, enjoyed the read

June 6th, 2025 06:45

Shortcut
Najmul Joon said:

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June 6th, 2025 06:30

Shortcut
sorenbarrett said:

Lovely wording in this poem breaths passion into this poem. Very nicely done.

June 6th, 2025 05:17

Eternal Sunshine
sorenbarrett said:

This poem encompasses the known universe ( the universe we can see with out own eyes). Just as love encompasses the known person we love. A nice use of metaphor to demonstrate the extent of the love. Well done

June 5th, 2025 04:53

Eternal Sunshine
Poetic Licence said:

Spreading love around the universe, lovely read

June 5th, 2025 04:33

Eternal Sunshine
Caring dove said:

That’s beautiful )) lovely words !πŸ™‚

June 5th, 2025 01:18

The Ledger of Life
Poetic Licence said:

Beautiful write, lovely images, as the write states, it is what we leave for future generations that matters, enjoyed the read

June 4th, 2025 07:46

The Ledger of Life
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful message so often forgotten in a busy society set in wonderful wording and great images and metaphor all that could be asked of a poem a definite fave.

June 4th, 2025 05:40

The Ledger of Life
arqios said:

A compassion that breathes life and bridges livesπŸ•ŠπŸ™πŸ»

June 4th, 2025 05:32

Friendship
Najmul Joon said:

πŸ‘

June 3rd, 2025 19:21

Friendship
Reynaldo Casison said:


Nice one Motta

Poignant rhythms

June 3rd, 2025 11:15

Friendship
Tony36 said:

Great write

June 3rd, 2025 10:15

Friendship
arqios said:

Just beautiful, to not ever let goπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

June 3rd, 2025 09:08

Friendship
sorenbarrett said:

Such a wonderful view on friendship and well put as well.

June 3rd, 2025 04:05

Friendship
Poetic Licence said:

Thank you for an enjoyable read and brightening up my day

June 3rd, 2025 03:03

What Brings Tree
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice one Motta

Serene rhythms

June 2nd, 2025 16:54

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