Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
Equilibrium
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the message woven in these words. The wording and rhyme were excellent and conveyed the message well. We are all nature brothers in arms so to speak in our voyage through time and space. Most lovely
April 25th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the message woven in these words. The wording and rhyme were excellent and conveyed the message well. We are all nature brothers in arms so to speak in our voyage through time and space. Most lovely
April 25th, 2025 03:49
The Wings of the Seagull
RSM0812 said:
I favd a few poems today but this one is my favorite. Every line has an image. Every word evokes an emotion. What a great write.
April 23rd, 2025 06:48
RSM0812 said:
I favd a few poems today but this one is my favorite. Every line has an image. Every word evokes an emotion. What a great write.
April 23rd, 2025 06:48
Ode to the Void
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is quite thought provoking and deep in its philosophical meaning and deserves contemplation. It is withing a black hole that there is a singularity and here lies the meaning. I will be thinking about this one for a while.
April 23rd, 2025 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is quite thought provoking and deep in its philosophical meaning and deserves contemplation. It is withing a black hole that there is a singularity and here lies the meaning. I will be thinking about this one for a while.
April 23rd, 2025 05:30
Self-Immolation
sorenbarrett said:
This poem takes such a somber classical style that reads sadness and tinged with darkness. It echoes in the mind and reverberates in the soul. Most lovely
April 22nd, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
This poem takes such a somber classical style that reads sadness and tinged with darkness. It echoes in the mind and reverberates in the soul. Most lovely
April 22nd, 2025 04:57
The Wings of the Seagull
sorenbarrett said:
So many hidden feelings exposed in metaphor that remain hidden beneath the surface. So poetically said the sadness and tragedy below tranquil images painted in ink. This is a piece of art and a fave
April 21st, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
So many hidden feelings exposed in metaphor that remain hidden beneath the surface. So poetically said the sadness and tragedy below tranquil images painted in ink. This is a piece of art and a fave
April 21st, 2025 04:37
If I Cling to Pride
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning and repulsion from another. Pride prevents change and I hear this told in this work. Nicely said
April 20th, 2025 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning and repulsion from another. Pride prevents change and I hear this told in this work. Nicely said
April 20th, 2025 05:06
Water
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful and deep message. \"Nothing in the world is softer and weaker than water; But, for attacking the hard and strong, there is nothing like it! For nothing can take its place. That the weak overcomes the strong, and the soft overcomes the hard, This is something known by all, but practiced by none.\" Tao te ching. Love the poem
April 19th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful and deep message. \"Nothing in the world is softer and weaker than water; But, for attacking the hard and strong, there is nothing like it! For nothing can take its place. That the weak overcomes the strong, and the soft overcomes the hard, This is something known by all, but practiced by none.\" Tao te ching. Love the poem
April 19th, 2025 04:33
Wonder
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write that makes you ask those deeper questions, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 05:03
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write that makes you ask those deeper questions, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 05:03
Wonder
sorenbarrett said:
In this small jewel there is much that goes unseen. Deeper meaning and much to ponder. A very thought provoking poem framed in wonderful rhyme as well. A fave
April 18th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
In this small jewel there is much that goes unseen. Deeper meaning and much to ponder. A very thought provoking poem framed in wonderful rhyme as well. A fave
April 18th, 2025 04:24
Where did the enemy lurk?
Poetic Licence said:
Wounds of old now becoming the enemy, nicely written
April 17th, 2025 01:17
Poetic Licence said:
Wounds of old now becoming the enemy, nicely written
April 17th, 2025 01:17
Where did the enemy lurk?
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words. Plundered by one\'s own no deeper wound. Gunpowder does not have that power. Very nicely written
April 16th, 2025 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words. Plundered by one\'s own no deeper wound. Gunpowder does not have that power. Very nicely written
April 16th, 2025 14:22
The Distance
NafisaSB said:
and perhaps, it may come in an instant too - all the best, always
April 15th, 2025 00:02
NafisaSB said:
and perhaps, it may come in an instant too - all the best, always
April 15th, 2025 00:02
The Anatomy of a Broken Heart
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of betrayal by their own beliefs, very well expressed and written
April 14th, 2025 10:01
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of betrayal by their own beliefs, very well expressed and written
April 14th, 2025 10:01
The Anatomy of a Broken Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of betrayal not only by another but by ones own beliefs. A hard and sad read. Well worded and constructed it sends its message well
April 14th, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of betrayal not only by another but by ones own beliefs. A hard and sad read. Well worded and constructed it sends its message well
April 14th, 2025 05:10
The Distance
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever write, saying I know I will smile again but it might take a bit longer than tomorrow, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 05:16
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever write, saying I know I will smile again but it might take a bit longer than tomorrow, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 05:16
The Distance
sorenbarrett said:
The very philosophy of this is poetic or maybe the poetic nature of these words is philosophical. So nicely wrapped up in a tight package where less is more. A fave
April 9th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
The very philosophy of this is poetic or maybe the poetic nature of these words is philosophical. So nicely wrapped up in a tight package where less is more. A fave
April 9th, 2025 05:07
The Distance
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
These concise lines tell much, sometimes things may happen in an instant as in today tomorrow other times it seems like some things are infinities away.
We are finite we are infinite!
April 9th, 2025 04:10
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
These concise lines tell much, sometimes things may happen in an instant as in today tomorrow other times it seems like some things are infinities away.
We are finite we are infinite!
April 9th, 2025 04:10
Break Up, Patch Up, WhatsApp, and Life’s New Push Up
Poetic Licence said:
An emotional write realising where there was once love there is no more and it would be better for both to go there own ways, nicely written
March 30th, 2025 21:25
Poetic Licence said:
An emotional write realising where there was once love there is no more and it would be better for both to go there own ways, nicely written
March 30th, 2025 21:25
Break Up, Patch Up, WhatsApp, and Life’s New Push Up
sorenbarrett said:
And so it would make sense. Too bad that the fuel of emotion fire the flames of hate and jealousy. A wonderful write
March 30th, 2025 14:31
sorenbarrett said:
And so it would make sense. Too bad that the fuel of emotion fire the flames of hate and jealousy. A wonderful write
March 30th, 2025 14:31
The Instagram Queen
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write over coming to terms with a love lost, love can only be given not bought or sold, enjoyed the read
March 16th, 2025 10:08
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write over coming to terms with a love lost, love can only be given not bought or sold, enjoyed the read
March 16th, 2025 10:08
The Instagram Queen
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love loss and dealing with it. Love can not be bought, or sold although cheep knock offs are available, gilded images plastic replicas to impress others are for sale. A lovely write
March 16th, 2025 07:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love loss and dealing with it. Love can not be bought, or sold although cheep knock offs are available, gilded images plastic replicas to impress others are for sale. A lovely write
March 16th, 2025 07:34
I am Supposed to Be A Private Teacher
Neville said:
You have a rare talent sir, continue to nurture it and I suspect one day, perhaps when you least expect it .. it will eventually pay off .. In the meantime, I shall keep my fingers crossed .. Neville 🤞
February 10th, 2024 11:25
Neville said:
You have a rare talent sir, continue to nurture it and I suspect one day, perhaps when you least expect it .. it will eventually pay off .. In the meantime, I shall keep my fingers crossed .. Neville 🤞
February 10th, 2024 11:25
Timepiece of Gratitude: A Teachers\' Day Poem
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank so much for precious comment🙏♥️..
The students gave me a watch two days after Teacher\'s Day, in exchange for which I gave them a poem.
September 14th, 2023 03:47
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank so much for precious comment🙏♥️..
The students gave me a watch two days after Teacher\'s Day, in exchange for which I gave them a poem.
September 14th, 2023 03:47
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