Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
Timepiece of Gratitude: A Teachers\' Day Poem
Neville said:
Back in the day, it used to be the pupils that gave an apple or some other small gift to their teacher .. How times have changed .. now kids take guns and knives into school .. I think it would be so mch nicer and overall better if they took poems for their teacher and vice versa ... maybe .. Just a few thoughts that came to me after reading this fine poem sir ... Neville
September 14th, 2023 03:21
Neville said:
Back in the day, it used to be the pupils that gave an apple or some other small gift to their teacher .. How times have changed .. now kids take guns and knives into school .. I think it would be so mch nicer and overall better if they took poems for their teacher and vice versa ... maybe .. Just a few thoughts that came to me after reading this fine poem sir ... Neville
September 14th, 2023 03:21
We Will Be on the Sun Soon
orchidee said:
We\'ll burn up before we get any distance near it!
August 25th, 2023 04:11
orchidee said:
We\'ll burn up before we get any distance near it!
August 25th, 2023 04:11
We Will Be on the Sun Soon
L. B. Mek said:
lovely, more Poet\'s in the making
Poesy lives on, and that means
we\'ve done our job as a generation...
(thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
August 25th, 2023 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
lovely, more Poet\'s in the making
Poesy lives on, and that means
we\'ve done our job as a generation...
(thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
August 25th, 2023 04:03
Rural Soul
Bella Shepard said:
Embrace your passion my friend, for it enriches the soul and strengthens the heart. Great write!
August 24th, 2023 13:45
Bella Shepard said:
Embrace your passion my friend, for it enriches the soul and strengthens the heart. Great write!
August 24th, 2023 13:45
On the Behalf of My Poetic Side
Firefall said:
Congratulations on your book. A great tribute to some of my favorite poets on the site.
August 9th, 2023 19:20
Firefall said:
Congratulations on your book. A great tribute to some of my favorite poets on the site.
August 9th, 2023 19:20
A River-Flowing Freely
Caring dove said:
A very beautiful writing )) liked reading this 🙂
August 9th, 2023 15:49
Caring dove said:
A very beautiful writing )) liked reading this 🙂
August 9th, 2023 15:49
Thank You, Dhuhibala,For Your Grace!
Bella Shepard said:
Home is truly where the heart is, and your heart does your proud in this beautiful poem my friend. To have such a refuge is a blessing. I love the pic you chose, the beauty of nature and the joy of being there in the faces of two young boys.
August 9th, 2023 14:27
Bella Shepard said:
Home is truly where the heart is, and your heart does your proud in this beautiful poem my friend. To have such a refuge is a blessing. I love the pic you chose, the beauty of nature and the joy of being there in the faces of two young boys.
August 9th, 2023 14:27
On the Behalf of My Poetic Side
Neville said:
I am well n truly honoured Mott as indeed many of us here are, or shall be ..
Mark my word, I will be sure to purchase your book in due course .. Neville
August 9th, 2023 01:54
Neville said:
I am well n truly honoured Mott as indeed many of us here are, or shall be ..
Mark my word, I will be sure to purchase your book in due course .. Neville
August 9th, 2023 01:54
In the Realm of Love
Caring dove said:
Truly lovely words 🙂 like the mention of self love that is so importantv
August 8th, 2023 14:30
Caring dove said:
Truly lovely words 🙂 like the mention of self love that is so importantv
August 8th, 2023 14:30
On the Behalf of My Poetic Side
Caring dove said:
This is lovely and beautiful )
August 8th, 2023 14:27
Caring dove said:
This is lovely and beautiful )
August 8th, 2023 14:27
On the Behalf of My Poetic Side
Bella Shepard said:
What a wonderful tribute to the poets of MPS in beautiful verse. The last two lines, priceless!
August 8th, 2023 14:21
Bella Shepard said:
What a wonderful tribute to the poets of MPS in beautiful verse. The last two lines, priceless!
August 8th, 2023 14:21
Thank You, Dhuhibala,For Your Grace!
Neville said:
how refreshing it is to see how much love and respect one has for the place of their birth and presumably their upbringing too .. quite the beautiful poetic tribute to what must surely be a rich and fertile region .. Neville
July 29th, 2023 22:48
Neville said:
how refreshing it is to see how much love and respect one has for the place of their birth and presumably their upbringing too .. quite the beautiful poetic tribute to what must surely be a rich and fertile region .. Neville
July 29th, 2023 22:48
Faith and Devotion
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful message of hope
from a heart graced by love\'s presence
thank you dear Poet, a comforting read
June 5th, 2023 01:29
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful message of hope
from a heart graced by love\'s presence
thank you dear Poet, a comforting read
June 5th, 2023 01:29
In the Realm of Love
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any theological alignment
I found this a most beautiful dedication to love\'s, ideal:
\'Where hearts dance and emotions trace,
Lovers etch their names in passion\'s fire,\'
thanks for sharing dear Poet
May 29th, 2023 02:05
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any theological alignment
I found this a most beautiful dedication to love\'s, ideal:
\'Where hearts dance and emotions trace,
Lovers etch their names in passion\'s fire,\'
thanks for sharing dear Poet
May 29th, 2023 02:05
Change is the Way of Life
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Well said and you put it all together in a cohesive impressive way the facts of life and reality, what is ours today is someone else\'s tomorrow. Kudos for this reminding poem!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 26th, 2023 09:43
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Well said and you put it all together in a cohesive impressive way the facts of life and reality, what is ours today is someone else\'s tomorrow. Kudos for this reminding poem!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 26th, 2023 09:43
Change is the Way of Life
Neville said:
many fear it .. I say embrace it .. for it is indeed, the only constant .. Neville
May 26th, 2023 01:33
Neville said:
many fear it .. I say embrace it .. for it is indeed, the only constant .. Neville
May 26th, 2023 01:33
In the Realm of Love
Neville said:
Heart and soul meltingly good sir .. each stanza perfectly formed and pinned so precisely to the page ..
top notch Mott ..... Neville :)
May 26th, 2023 01:18
Neville said:
Heart and soul meltingly good sir .. each stanza perfectly formed and pinned so precisely to the page ..
top notch Mott ..... Neville :)
May 26th, 2023 01:18
In the Realm of Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is there for all of us Mottakeenur and I am lucky enough to have love to the full.
Andy
May 26th, 2023 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is there for all of us Mottakeenur and I am lucky enough to have love to the full.
Andy
May 26th, 2023 01:16
A River-Flowing Freely
Goldfinch60 said:
Flow onto eternity Mottakeenur as My River does.
Andy
May 19th, 2023 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Flow onto eternity Mottakeenur as My River does.
Andy
May 19th, 2023 02:59
A River-Flowing Freely
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Dear Neville Sir,
Thank you for your kind words and appreciation. I\'m glad to hear that you found the experience of meandering with the river to be delightful and a welcome escape from your busy day. It\'s always wonderful when nature can provide us with moments of tranquility and respite. I\'m honored that you found my writing beautiful, and I hope it continues to bring you joy.
Wishing you more peaceful moments and enjoyable distractions.
Best regards,
Mottakeenur Rehman
May 18th, 2023 22:55
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Dear Neville Sir,
Thank you for your kind words and appreciation. I\'m glad to hear that you found the experience of meandering with the river to be delightful and a welcome escape from your busy day. It\'s always wonderful when nature can provide us with moments of tranquility and respite. I\'m honored that you found my writing beautiful, and I hope it continues to bring you joy.
Wishing you more peaceful moments and enjoyable distractions.
Best regards,
Mottakeenur Rehman
May 18th, 2023 22:55
A River-Flowing Freely
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Sir you are rhythmic ...And Your comments too..that give me the roam to wander freely like a river..Thank you Sir🙏❤️
May 18th, 2023 22:51
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Sir you are rhythmic ...And Your comments too..that give me the roam to wander freely like a river..Thank you Sir🙏❤️
May 18th, 2023 22:51
A River-Flowing Freely
Neville said:
what a pleasure it was to meander slowly with the current throughout its entire length .. and furthermore, a delightful respite and distraction from an otherwise busy day .. Beautifully penned my friend .. Neville
May 18th, 2023 22:04
Neville said:
what a pleasure it was to meander slowly with the current throughout its entire length .. and furthermore, a delightful respite and distraction from an otherwise busy day .. Beautifully penned my friend .. Neville
May 18th, 2023 22:04
We are Dying Inside ..Just the Company of Someone else Can Keep Us Alive
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Mottakeenur. May that light be forever in your life.
Andy
May 17th, 2023 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Mottakeenur. May that light be forever in your life.
Andy
May 17th, 2023 01:24
We are Dying Inside ..Just the Company of Someone else Can Keep Us Alive
Neville said:
what a lovely idea you have poemed ..
it saddens me and greatly so that so many older folk and other often undervalued, or even devalued groups find themselves alone and out in the cold .. it cost nothing to be kind does it .. Neville
May 16th, 2023 11:05
Neville said:
what a lovely idea you have poemed ..
it saddens me and greatly so that so many older folk and other often undervalued, or even devalued groups find themselves alone and out in the cold .. it cost nothing to be kind does it .. Neville
May 16th, 2023 11:05
We are Dying Inside ..Just the Company of Someone else Can Keep Us Alive
2781 said:
That\'s excellent also.
May 16th, 2023 09:19
2781 said:
That\'s excellent also.
May 16th, 2023 09:19
Equilibrium
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Hey there! Just wanted to drop a quick note to say how much I appreciate your comment on my poem. Seriously, it means a lot to me and your words always give me a boost of inspiration to keep writing. So thanks for being such an awesome friend and supporter!
May 14th, 2023 12:22
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Hey there! Just wanted to drop a quick note to say how much I appreciate your comment on my poem. Seriously, it means a lot to me and your words always give me a boost of inspiration to keep writing. So thanks for being such an awesome friend and supporter!
May 14th, 2023 12:22
Equilibrium
Neville said:
If I had composed this my friend, I would be very proud of my self .. everything about it is near perfect, including the subject matter, the meter, tone, flow, structure, alliteration etc etc and to top it all off, it looks so darned pretty on the page ... Bravo Mott :)
May 14th, 2023 05:54
Neville said:
If I had composed this my friend, I would be very proud of my self .. everything about it is near perfect, including the subject matter, the meter, tone, flow, structure, alliteration etc etc and to top it all off, it looks so darned pretty on the page ... Bravo Mott :)
May 14th, 2023 05:54
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