Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
I Wait for You
Michael Edwards said:
This is a superb poem. I would suggest that poems are written to their best advantage exploiting the beauty of the language they are written in. To translate them into another language for which they were not designed whilst maintaining their integrity is, I would suggest, an almost impossible task. Well this reads so well it must be an outstanding work in it\'s mother tongue.
February 7th, 2019 14:26
Michael Edwards said:
This is a superb poem. I would suggest that poems are written to their best advantage exploiting the beauty of the language they are written in. To translate them into another language for which they were not designed whilst maintaining their integrity is, I would suggest, an almost impossible task. Well this reads so well it must be an outstanding work in it\'s mother tongue.
February 7th, 2019 14:26
I Wait for You
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Mam please say some words for my friend Safik Uz Zaman..he would like to hear from you...
February 7th, 2019 10:17
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Mam please say some words for my friend Safik Uz Zaman..he would like to hear from you...
February 7th, 2019 10:17
The Tall But Hollow Institutions
Neville said:
an interesting, presumably autobiographical tale told well.. your words captivated me throughout the journey of your learning and love for poetry.... thank you... Neville
February 7th, 2019 07:44
Neville said:
an interesting, presumably autobiographical tale told well.. your words captivated me throughout the journey of your learning and love for poetry.... thank you... Neville
February 7th, 2019 07:44
The Misery of Poor
Caleb.A said:
Very well written, you have translated what to me seems like a personal struggle - great read!
February 1st, 2019 08:21
Caleb.A said:
Very well written, you have translated what to me seems like a personal struggle - great read!
February 1st, 2019 08:21
The Misery of Poor
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Sir,stay connected ...hope I will get much more appreciation from your kind heart!!
February 1st, 2019 07:59
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Sir,stay connected ...hope I will get much more appreciation from your kind heart!!
February 1st, 2019 07:59
The Misery of Poor
Michael Edwards said:
Superbly expressed - a great write.
January 29th, 2019 14:12
Michael Edwards said:
Superbly expressed - a great write.
January 29th, 2019 14:12
The Misery of Poor
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
☺Thanks a lot for your precious comment!💕🖋💖
January 29th, 2019 11:53
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
☺Thanks a lot for your precious comment!💕🖋💖
January 29th, 2019 11:53
A Good Man Never Lets You Forget How Much He Loves You
psychofemale said:
Such an intriguing write. Loved it :)
January 27th, 2019 18:15
psychofemale said:
Such an intriguing write. Loved it :)
January 27th, 2019 18:15
A Good Man Never Lets You Forget How Much He Loves You
Michael Edwards said:
great to see your pen at work again. A great read.
January 27th, 2019 07:33
Michael Edwards said:
great to see your pen at work again. A great read.
January 27th, 2019 07:33
A Good Man Never Lets You Forget How Much He Loves You
Neville said:
a good poem & true
January 27th, 2019 05:00
Neville said:
a good poem & true
January 27th, 2019 05:00
Charity Begins at Home
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a fine society and social poem, u express and describe in a very nice rich way. The scenes are interestingly focused here. Thumbs up.
April 30th, 2018 00:00
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a fine society and social poem, u express and describe in a very nice rich way. The scenes are interestingly focused here. Thumbs up.
April 30th, 2018 00:00
Sometime\'s It\'s Nice Just to Hear It Out Loud:Aai Yo Bacha
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A wonderful sentimental epic, where u show love ,appreciation so poetically and with imagery. Kudos. Loved your moony wording.
Nice to read from u again, and Pleez do review, give your thoughts as to my newest poem too.
April 17th, 2018 06:59
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A wonderful sentimental epic, where u show love ,appreciation so poetically and with imagery. Kudos. Loved your moony wording.
Nice to read from u again, and Pleez do review, give your thoughts as to my newest poem too.
April 17th, 2018 06:59
Sometime\'s It\'s Nice Just to Hear It Out Loud:Aai Yo Bacha
FineB said:
A beautiful poem Mottakeenur.
You have a way with words.
Keep writing
FineB
April 14th, 2018 05:37
FineB said:
A beautiful poem Mottakeenur.
You have a way with words.
Keep writing
FineB
April 14th, 2018 05:37
Sometime\'s It\'s Nice Just to Hear It Out Loud:Aai Yo Bacha
Michael Edwards said:
Love the flow of this and the use of language - great write Mottakeenur
April 1st, 2018 00:24
Michael Edwards said:
Love the flow of this and the use of language - great write Mottakeenur
April 1st, 2018 00:24
The World of Human Being
FineB said:
Thank you Mottankeenur.
A wonderful poem highlighting Human Nature.
Sadly mankind is not infallible.
Keep writing
FineB
March 23rd, 2018 07:10
FineB said:
Thank you Mottankeenur.
A wonderful poem highlighting Human Nature.
Sadly mankind is not infallible.
Keep writing
FineB
March 23rd, 2018 07:10
The World of Human Being
Michael Edwards said:
Missed this first time round - man has the ability to be the noblest of all beasts but why does he so often abuse it? Super work.
March 21st, 2018 04:28
Michael Edwards said:
Missed this first time round - man has the ability to be the noblest of all beasts but why does he so often abuse it? Super work.
March 21st, 2018 04:28
The World of Human Being
Lorna said:
Oh Mottakeenur - there is so much sadness in the world mostly I think from \"greed\" and \"religion\" - and it\'s nice that you still think man is the best of creatures. The photo is beautiful.......
March 19th, 2018 02:57
Lorna said:
Oh Mottakeenur - there is so much sadness in the world mostly I think from \"greed\" and \"religion\" - and it\'s nice that you still think man is the best of creatures. The photo is beautiful.......
March 19th, 2018 02:57
The Great Poetry Or the Highest Part of Life
FineB said:
Hi Mottakeenur,
Hope all is well with you?
A great poem!
Poetry is indeed a most beautful art form!
Keep writing
FineB
March 7th, 2018 08:07
FineB said:
Hi Mottakeenur,
Hope all is well with you?
A great poem!
Poetry is indeed a most beautful art form!
Keep writing
FineB
March 7th, 2018 08:07
The Tall But Hollow Institutions
Saima said:
A really powerful poem! Nice write :)
March 4th, 2018 13:39
Saima said:
A really powerful poem! Nice write :)
March 4th, 2018 13:39
The Tall But Hollow Institutions
FineB said:
Hello
Mottakeenur,
Long time no speak. A wonderful poem. Thought provoking, interesting and a brilliant good write!
Well Done!
Keep writing
Fine B
March 1st, 2018 09:54
FineB said:
Hello
Mottakeenur,
Long time no speak. A wonderful poem. Thought provoking, interesting and a brilliant good write!
Well Done!
Keep writing
Fine B
March 1st, 2018 09:54
The Tall But Hollow Institutions
Michael Edwards said:
I read this through twice such is the strength of it - a powerful write of your difficult journey and it strikes home with me - may your chosen journey continue.
February 27th, 2018 06:02
Michael Edwards said:
I read this through twice such is the strength of it - a powerful write of your difficult journey and it strikes home with me - may your chosen journey continue.
February 27th, 2018 06:02
The Tall But Hollow Institutions
Lorna said:
You have played the orchestra of our hearts Mottakeenur.......
February 27th, 2018 05:19
Lorna said:
You have played the orchestra of our hearts Mottakeenur.......
February 27th, 2018 05:19
The Great Poetry Or the Highest Part of Life
FredPeyer said:
Well written. Like the line \'I often hear the tunes of poetry\'. Poetry IS music!
February 20th, 2018 21:41
FredPeyer said:
Well written. Like the line \'I often hear the tunes of poetry\'. Poetry IS music!
February 20th, 2018 21:41
The Great Poetry Or the Highest Part of Life
Lorna said:
I love you holding the forefinger of the poetical world! Beautiful!
February 20th, 2018 11:14
Lorna said:
I love you holding the forefinger of the poetical world! Beautiful!
February 20th, 2018 11:14
The Great Poetry Or the Highest Part of Life
Caring dove said:
the ending really stood out for me ... \'\'i often hear the tunes of poetry\'\' emotions , nature can all inspire us to write down a poem .. great piece of writing !
Sometimes in the indecipherable sound of birds
Sometimes in the combination of laugh and cry
Or through the wind of mindblowing breeze,
these are my favourite lines, great expression ! truly enjoyed
February 20th, 2018 10:37
Caring dove said:
the ending really stood out for me ... \'\'i often hear the tunes of poetry\'\' emotions , nature can all inspire us to write down a poem .. great piece of writing !
Sometimes in the indecipherable sound of birds
Sometimes in the combination of laugh and cry
Or through the wind of mindblowing breeze,
these are my favourite lines, great expression ! truly enjoyed
February 20th, 2018 10:37
The Great Poetry Or the Highest Part of Life
Michael Edwards said:
Drips with poetic atmosphere - great work.
February 20th, 2018 07:02
Michael Edwards said:
Drips with poetic atmosphere - great work.
February 20th, 2018 07:02
« Return to the profile of Mottakeenur Rehman
