Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
An Unconditional Exchange of Zero
L. B. Mek said:
a great message and so well written
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(true love is a rarity
as, true love can only blossom
in heart\'s, true to themselves
first and foremost
we all know this, but it\'s too hard
to point a finger at a mirror
\'persona\' reflection
that feels sorry for itself, and so
we merely
\'act out\' or romance scenes
like we\'ve seen on screens..
true love is rare, indeed
but even half a glass full, of love
is enough for most to treasure
for the rest of their lives...)
April 3rd, 2023 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
a great message and so well written
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(true love is a rarity
as, true love can only blossom
in heart\'s, true to themselves
first and foremost
we all know this, but it\'s too hard
to point a finger at a mirror
\'persona\' reflection
that feels sorry for itself, and so
we merely
\'act out\' or romance scenes
like we\'ve seen on screens..
true love is rare, indeed
but even half a glass full, of love
is enough for most to treasure
for the rest of their lives...)
April 3rd, 2023 05:38
Seeing into the Eyes of Mother
2781 said:
Some of the best men I know are drunks. It\'s not what goes into the man that defiles him It\'s what comes out. Good things are coming out of you, I am pleased to note.
April 3rd, 2023 04:41
2781 said:
Some of the best men I know are drunks. It\'s not what goes into the man that defiles him It\'s what comes out. Good things are coming out of you, I am pleased to note.
April 3rd, 2023 04:41
Thermosphere is Descending
L. B. Mek said:
\'wiping my *T*ears of disaster, tasting its bitter reality.
I vow to be vigilant against dishonest policies,\'
just a great, life affriming write
dear poet, thank you!
April 3rd, 2023 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'wiping my *T*ears of disaster, tasting its bitter reality.
I vow to be vigilant against dishonest policies,\'
just a great, life affriming write
dear poet, thank you!
April 3rd, 2023 04:15
Seeing into the Eyes of Mother
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank you for your kind words about my poem. Your encouragement and feedback mean a lot to me, and I appreciate the time you took to read and analyze my work. Your belief in my potential as a poet motivates me to continue writing and improving my craft.
I would love to hear more of your thoughts and suggestions on how I can make the minor tweaks to the poem to make it great. Your feedback and guidance will help me grow as a poet and reach my goals.
Thank you again for your support, and I look forward to sharing more of my poetry with you.
Best regards,
Mottakeenur Rehman
April 3rd, 2023 03:24
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank you for your kind words about my poem. Your encouragement and feedback mean a lot to me, and I appreciate the time you took to read and analyze my work. Your belief in my potential as a poet motivates me to continue writing and improving my craft.
I would love to hear more of your thoughts and suggestions on how I can make the minor tweaks to the poem to make it great. Your feedback and guidance will help me grow as a poet and reach my goals.
Thank you again for your support, and I look forward to sharing more of my poetry with you.
Best regards,
Mottakeenur Rehman
April 3rd, 2023 03:24
Seeing into the Eyes of Mother
Neville said:
your dream to become a great poet is well within the realms of possibility ..
this particular one already has the hallmark stamped on it .. a few very minor tweaks and bingo my friend you shall be there ... Neville
April 3rd, 2023 03:17
Neville said:
your dream to become a great poet is well within the realms of possibility ..
this particular one already has the hallmark stamped on it .. a few very minor tweaks and bingo my friend you shall be there ... Neville
April 3rd, 2023 03:17
Thermosphere is Descending
Neville said:
an interesting and well crafted poem .. certainly enjoyed the first time round .. furthermore, am sure it will be just as good when I re-visit it later .. Neville
April 2nd, 2023 08:29
Neville said:
an interesting and well crafted poem .. certainly enjoyed the first time round .. furthermore, am sure it will be just as good when I re-visit it later .. Neville
April 2nd, 2023 08:29
An Unconditional Exchange of Zero
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank you so much ...your comment is priceless but praiseworthy🙏❤️🙏🙂
April 2nd, 2023 00:22
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank you so much ...your comment is priceless but praiseworthy🙏❤️🙏🙂
April 2nd, 2023 00:22
An Unconditional Exchange of Zero
Doggerel Dave said:
Neatly poemed.
Agreed - there is nothing really to write about - that kind of love (there are others) can only be defined by what it is not - which, if I read you correctly, is what you have done here.
April 1st, 2023 23:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Neatly poemed.
Agreed - there is nothing really to write about - that kind of love (there are others) can only be defined by what it is not - which, if I read you correctly, is what you have done here.
April 1st, 2023 23:12
An Unconditional Exchange of Zero
Neville said:
You just nailed it .. that crazy little four letter word love 💙
April 1st, 2023 06:21
Neville said:
You just nailed it .. that crazy little four letter word love 💙
April 1st, 2023 06:21
The Sun and Moon
mvvenkataraman said:
Dear Friend, Sun and Moon are connected,
Not mere transferring of light only,
Scientifically also this is a truth dear,
Your poem is indeed superb to read,
Rhyme and rhythm are powerful,
Thanks for sharing this wonder poet!
March 31st, 2023 08:50
mvvenkataraman said:
Dear Friend, Sun and Moon are connected,
Not mere transferring of light only,
Scientifically also this is a truth dear,
Your poem is indeed superb to read,
Rhyme and rhythm are powerful,
Thanks for sharing this wonder poet!
March 31st, 2023 08:50
The Sun and Moon
Neville said:
this is probably my favouwrite Mottakeenur Rehman poem to date sir .. I am left in no doubt that Fariha Nasrin is a very much loved and lucky individual .. Neville
March 31st, 2023 03:28
Neville said:
this is probably my favouwrite Mottakeenur Rehman poem to date sir .. I am left in no doubt that Fariha Nasrin is a very much loved and lucky individual .. Neville
March 31st, 2023 03:28
Nonsensical Excuse
Neville said:
good old Masihur Rehman .. that\'s what I say sir ..
March 30th, 2023 09:13
Neville said:
good old Masihur Rehman .. that\'s what I say sir ..
March 30th, 2023 09:13
Oh My Young Brigade
Neville said:
... this reads very much like a freedom song .. I can almost feel the wind blowing through in my hair ...
March 30th, 2023 04:45
Neville said:
... this reads very much like a freedom song .. I can almost feel the wind blowing through in my hair ...
March 30th, 2023 04:45
I am a Father
Neville said:
A fine combined tribute and dedication to all good and decent fathers wherever they may be, or have been sir ..
I too am a father and soon to become a grandfather for the first time ..
Unfortunately however, not all biological or nonbiological fathers (stepfathers) even have any desire or intention of accepting and living up to the responsibilities that others might and rightly so, expect of them .. Neville
March 30th, 2023 01:32
Neville said:
A fine combined tribute and dedication to all good and decent fathers wherever they may be, or have been sir ..
I too am a father and soon to become a grandfather for the first time ..
Unfortunately however, not all biological or nonbiological fathers (stepfathers) even have any desire or intention of accepting and living up to the responsibilities that others might and rightly so, expect of them .. Neville
March 30th, 2023 01:32
The Strength of the Warrior
Neville said:
an intriguing and otherwise muchly enjoyed poem sir .. thank you for pinning it here to this page where it seems to fit perfectly ... Neville
March 29th, 2023 08:17
Neville said:
an intriguing and otherwise muchly enjoyed poem sir .. thank you for pinning it here to this page where it seems to fit perfectly ... Neville
March 29th, 2023 08:17
Faith and Tolerance
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem and for your thoughtful feedback. I\'m really glad to hear that you enjoyed it and that the use of punctuation helped to emphasize certain phrases and create a smooth flow between stanzas. I also appreciate that you noticed and appreciated the alliteration and symbols that I used. Your feedback is truly valuable to me, and I will keep it in mind as I continue to write and develop my craft. Thanks again for your support and encouragement!
March 22nd, 2023 12:54
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem and for your thoughtful feedback. I\'m really glad to hear that you enjoyed it and that the use of punctuation helped to emphasize certain phrases and create a smooth flow between stanzas. I also appreciate that you noticed and appreciated the alliteration and symbols that I used. Your feedback is truly valuable to me, and I will keep it in mind as I continue to write and develop my craft. Thanks again for your support and encouragement!
March 22nd, 2023 12:54
Faith and Tolerance
NinjaGirl said:
I really quite like this poem. I feel the use of punctuation emphasises certain phrases and helps with the flow from stanza to stanza. I like the use of alliteration and symbols.
March 22nd, 2023 12:47
NinjaGirl said:
I really quite like this poem. I feel the use of punctuation emphasises certain phrases and helps with the flow from stanza to stanza. I like the use of alliteration and symbols.
March 22nd, 2023 12:47
The Hope of Poetry
Neville said:
I like these words of yours so very much .. I am glad that I decided to trawl back in time and see where you are coming from my friend ........... Neville
February 27th, 2022 08:25
Neville said:
I like these words of yours so very much .. I am glad that I decided to trawl back in time and see where you are coming from my friend ........... Neville
February 27th, 2022 08:25
Life is Vivid
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, I lack the context to fully appreciate your write
but still, I found it an enjoyable read and that says a lot, I think..
thanks for sharing
March 18th, 2021 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, I lack the context to fully appreciate your write
but still, I found it an enjoyable read and that says a lot, I think..
thanks for sharing
March 18th, 2021 05:27
The Worship of Emptiness
FineB said:
Hi Mottakeenur,
We are sad self obsessed and selfish world only interested in putting our faith in empty meaningless sources.
A great write.
Keeo writing FineB
October 30th, 2019 11:37
FineB said:
Hi Mottakeenur,
We are sad self obsessed and selfish world only interested in putting our faith in empty meaningless sources.
A great write.
Keeo writing FineB
October 30th, 2019 11:37
The Worship of Emptiness
orchidee said:
A good write, yet I feel open and vulnerable leaving things, especially my mind, empty.
September 30th, 2019 10:51
orchidee said:
A good write, yet I feel open and vulnerable leaving things, especially my mind, empty.
September 30th, 2019 10:51
The Worship of Emptiness
Neville said:
certainly a very interesting statement...
September 30th, 2019 06:00
Neville said:
certainly a very interesting statement...
September 30th, 2019 06:00
The Worship of Emptiness
Michael Edwards said:
I find this really appealing - and intrigueing.
September 30th, 2019 04:04
Michael Edwards said:
I find this really appealing - and intrigueing.
September 30th, 2019 04:04
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