Comments received on poems by AlinaVanderson
\"A commission I thought I\'d share with you\"
kevin browne said:
You may think you have a hopeless heart, but you don\'t. I\'ll tell you why. Your anxiety is perplexing your thoughts which in your expression-able poem reveals a side of you which may contain a bowl full of saddened emotions. Regardless of any conditions a human endures there behind the cobwebs covering your heart have failed to be cleaned for a while. Unmask yourself in the reality of yourself belief. A belief is a belief so hold onto to what the beauty of your own body contains. Even though I don;t know you I still believe you are worthy of life as indeed everyone is. Clear your clouds of confusion to reveal a landscape of thought which is intrinsically beautiful that you may even declare yourself a God. Stay strong mother sister of your own heart.
January 22nd, 2019 23:40
kevin browne said:
You may think you have a hopeless heart, but you don\'t. I\'ll tell you why. Your anxiety is perplexing your thoughts which in your expression-able poem reveals a side of you which may contain a bowl full of saddened emotions. Regardless of any conditions a human endures there behind the cobwebs covering your heart have failed to be cleaned for a while. Unmask yourself in the reality of yourself belief. A belief is a belief so hold onto to what the beauty of your own body contains. Even though I don;t know you I still believe you are worthy of life as indeed everyone is. Clear your clouds of confusion to reveal a landscape of thought which is intrinsically beautiful that you may even declare yourself a God. Stay strong mother sister of your own heart.
January 22nd, 2019 23:40
\"A commission I thought I\'d share with you\"
psychofemale said:
lovely poem :)
January 22nd, 2019 23:14
psychofemale said:
lovely poem :)
January 22nd, 2019 23:14
\"God\"
orchidee said:
You sneaked into that confessional while the priest is out, to hear naughty tales?! oohh heehee.
November 5th, 2018 12:43
orchidee said:
You sneaked into that confessional while the priest is out, to hear naughty tales?! oohh heehee.
November 5th, 2018 12:43
\"Creep\"
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wow!
What a great poem you have penned. I loved it! Don\'t stop writing. :0
September 28th, 2018 08:59
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wow!
What a great poem you have penned. I loved it! Don\'t stop writing. :0
September 28th, 2018 08:59
\"Repetitive Nightmares\"
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your dreams are sending you a message. Oftentimes, they are opposite of what we expect. As an example, a birth sometimes is symbolic of death and vice versa. :)
Enjoyed the words you\'ve penned.
September 25th, 2018 13:05
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your dreams are sending you a message. Oftentimes, they are opposite of what we expect. As an example, a birth sometimes is symbolic of death and vice versa. :)
Enjoyed the words you\'ve penned.
September 25th, 2018 13:05
\"Whatever\"
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
I enjoyed the directness of the sentiment you\'ve expressed. Keep writing!
September 24th, 2018 13:30
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
I enjoyed the directness of the sentiment you\'ve expressed. Keep writing!
September 24th, 2018 13:30
May 13
SLR said:
Your \'Words are sorrow ...line and the very last line are really profound. Good post. Lots of feeling.
May 17th, 2018 21:37
SLR said:
Your \'Words are sorrow ...line and the very last line are really profound. Good post. Lots of feeling.
May 17th, 2018 21:37
“I love you”
Lorna said:
Wonderful use of imagery Alina! I loved this one........
March 5th, 2018 15:05
Lorna said:
Wonderful use of imagery Alina! I loved this one........
March 5th, 2018 15:05
“Balloon”
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i really like this , very expressive :-)
January 29th, 2018 07:27
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i really like this , very expressive :-)
January 29th, 2018 07:27
“Anxiety”
clair jane said:
As someone who suffers from may mental disorders I think this is the sad truth.
January 3rd, 2018 21:35
clair jane said:
As someone who suffers from may mental disorders I think this is the sad truth.
January 3rd, 2018 21:35
“Tomorrow”
Synesthesia said:
Nice work Alina!
Thanks for sharing this, I like the break at the end, and the repetition of Tomorrow- like a fear stalking the mind.
This line though,
Because I like the way you smell
It seems wan in here, like could be stronger... for such a powerful sense as smell, there’s nostalgia and comfort and so on
Thanks Alina,
Hope you were lucky,
S
December 11th, 2017 08:51
Synesthesia said:
Nice work Alina!
Thanks for sharing this, I like the break at the end, and the repetition of Tomorrow- like a fear stalking the mind.
This line though,
Because I like the way you smell
It seems wan in here, like could be stronger... for such a powerful sense as smell, there’s nostalgia and comfort and so on
Thanks Alina,
Hope you were lucky,
S
December 11th, 2017 08:51
\"Mine\"
Silent Nights said:
This is a poem that describes me perfectly! Thank you for writing it!
December 6th, 2017 08:32
Silent Nights said:
This is a poem that describes me perfectly! Thank you for writing it!
December 6th, 2017 08:32
“Free”
Laivy37 said:
I love this poem, keep writer I find it very inspiring for people to show their feelings as well as be able to write them
December 5th, 2017 13:36
Laivy37 said:
I love this poem, keep writer I find it very inspiring for people to show their feelings as well as be able to write them
December 5th, 2017 13:36
\"If I Die Today\"
Saima said:
your poems are really deep, keep this up and if you ever want someone to talk to, let me know x
December 4th, 2017 09:19
Saima said:
your poems are really deep, keep this up and if you ever want someone to talk to, let me know x
December 4th, 2017 09:19
“The Stars are Ruthless to Me”
MendedFences27 said:
More than just beautiful words, a wonderful expression of love. The personification of stars and sky, and the galaxy as a place to visit, brings your beautiful words to a higher level. yet, all the while we feel the sense of love, for whomever that may be. Loved your poem - Phil A.
December 3rd, 2017 18:45
MendedFences27 said:
More than just beautiful words, a wonderful expression of love. The personification of stars and sky, and the galaxy as a place to visit, brings your beautiful words to a higher level. yet, all the while we feel the sense of love, for whomever that may be. Loved your poem - Phil A.
December 3rd, 2017 18:45
\"If I Die Today\"
KoKoRosie said:
This is Beautiful!!
I love it. Keep writing! :)
December 3rd, 2017 12:22
KoKoRosie said:
This is Beautiful!!
I love it. Keep writing! :)
December 3rd, 2017 12:22
“The Stars are Ruthless to Me”
Hazel Kaye said:
Beautiful words and wonderfully written :)
December 2nd, 2017 22:49
Hazel Kaye said:
Beautiful words and wonderfully written :)
December 2nd, 2017 22:49
