Comments received on poems by AlinaVanderson

\"A commission I thought I\'d share with you\"
kevin browne said:

You may think you have a hopeless heart, but you don\'t. I\'ll tell you why. Your anxiety is perplexing your thoughts which in your expression-able poem reveals a side of you which may contain a bowl full of saddened emotions. Regardless of any conditions a human endures there behind the cobwebs covering your heart have failed to be cleaned for a while. Unmask yourself in the reality of yourself belief. A belief is a belief so hold onto to what the beauty of your own body contains. Even though I don;t know you I still believe you are worthy of life as indeed everyone is. Clear your clouds of confusion to reveal a landscape of thought which is intrinsically beautiful that you may even declare yourself a God. Stay strong mother sister of your own heart.

January 22nd, 2019 23:40

\"A commission I thought I\'d share with you\"
psychofemale said:

lovely poem :)

January 22nd, 2019 23:14

\"Imaginary Friend\"
Sugiura Asuna said:

Love it!

November 15th, 2018 13:42

orchidee said:

You sneaked into that confessional while the priest is out, to hear naughty tales?! oohh heehee.

November 5th, 2018 12:43

Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:


What a great poem you have penned. I loved it! Don\'t stop writing. :0

September 28th, 2018 08:59

Noah said:

Very nice 😆

September 27th, 2018 11:51

\"Repetitive Nightmares\"
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Your dreams are sending you a message. Oftentimes, they are opposite of what we expect. As an example, a birth sometimes is symbolic of death and vice versa. :)

Enjoyed the words you\'ve penned.

September 25th, 2018 13:05

Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

I enjoyed the directness of the sentiment you\'ve expressed. Keep writing!

September 24th, 2018 13:30

Naeners said:

This is so raw and relatable. Good write.

September 6th, 2018 00:23

May 13
SLR said:

Your \'Words are sorrow ...line and the very last line are really profound. Good post. Lots of feeling.

May 17th, 2018 21:37

“I love you”
Lorna said:

Wonderful use of imagery Alina! I loved this one........

March 5th, 2018 15:05

Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

i really like this , very expressive :-)

January 29th, 2018 07:27

charriot789 said:

Love it. Check mine out, similar category.

January 8th, 2018 16:29

draculazy said:

The imagery is wonderful, I love this :)

January 8th, 2018 11:16

syddie said:

Bravo!! love it. tells so much.

January 8th, 2018 11:07

“Kill myself”
AlinaVanderson said:

January 3rd, 2018 21:49

“Kill myself”
clair jane said:

deep, and somehow, pretty

January 3rd, 2018 21:40

clair jane said:

As someone who suffers from may mental disorders I think this is the sad truth.

January 3rd, 2018 21:35

lostthoughts said:

Thank you for a delightful read ✌🏾

December 12th, 2017 11:46

Synesthesia said:

Nice work Alina!

Thanks for sharing this, I like the break at the end, and the repetition of Tomorrow- like a fear stalking the mind.

This line though,

Because I like the way you smell

It seems wan in here, like could be stronger... for such a powerful sense as smell, there’s nostalgia and comfort and so on

Thanks Alina,

Hope you were lucky,


December 11th, 2017 08:51

Silent Nights said:

This is a poem that describes me perfectly! Thank you for writing it!

December 6th, 2017 08:32

Tony36 said:

Great write

December 6th, 2017 08:30

Laivy37 said:

I love this poem, keep writer I find it very inspiring for people to show their feelings as well as be able to write them

December 5th, 2017 13:36

\"If I Die Today\"
Saima said:

your poems are really deep, keep this up and if you ever want someone to talk to, let me know x

December 4th, 2017 09:19

“I Can’t Sleep”
Saima said:

wonderful x

December 4th, 2017 09:18

“The Stars are Ruthless to Me”
MendedFences27 said:

More than just beautiful words, a wonderful expression of love. The personification of stars and sky, and the galaxy as a place to visit, brings your beautiful words to a higher level. yet, all the while we feel the sense of love, for whomever that may be. Loved your poem - Phil A.

December 3rd, 2017 18:45

\"If I Die Today\"
KoKoRosie said:

This is Beautiful!!
I love it. Keep writing! :)

December 3rd, 2017 12:22

“The Stars are Ruthless to Me”
Hazel Kaye said:

Beautiful words and wonderfully written :)

December 2nd, 2017 22:49